[Travel + Redemption + Non-female competition + Love + HE]
(The heroine who is both flexible and capable of playing straight and straight vs. The male protagonist who is paranoid and inconsistent but beautiful and miserable)
Zhu Ruan has seen people who were sentenced to death because their hosts failed in their mission to travel through time.
But I have never seen the host live and die, and die and live again. Hey, I have seen something today.
The heroine was inexplicably bound to the system on her way to breakfast to fulfill the original owner's wish.
At the beginning of Tianbeng, Zhu Ru'an was killed as soon as he came up.
"Are you mistaken? This is not the case in the Easter Tournament." A host who had been raped many times was already numb.
Therefore, in order to let her dear host complete the task, the system found another way
Another task added! After conquering the Ancient Demon Lord, let him lead him.
"Are you sure you want to take me flying instead of letting me fly?"
"If this Demon Lord's thoughts can kill people, I'm afraid I'll be dead."
Zhu Ru'an always believed that she gave the Demon Lord the concentric poison and he spared her life. Secretly, I don't know how many times I have bowed to the old man Tong Xin Gu.
It wasn't until later that Zhu Ru'an discovered that people already had the antidote to Tongxin Gu.
One night, Yu Chiyuan patted the bed and said, "Madam, it's late at night, it's time to rest."
"Tell my mother that I am not a coward!"
(Imaginary world, purely fictional)
Reader comments
It's really good-looking, super good-looking. Every time Yu Chiyuan secretly competes with each other, he feels very happy. He really loves Zhu Ru'an. When Zhu Ru'an's soul is gone, he would rather search all over the world to find her. After Yu Chiyang and the Emperor of Heaven died together, Zhu Ru'an really burst into tears when she read the part of the letter. There is a big heroine behind Zhu Ru'an. She was scared at first, but she forced herself to grow up, hoping that every girl can grow into her own big heroine. The position of the Demon King has returned to Zhu Ru'an's hands. She has the ability to take care of it very well, and the backend is super sweet! [Blowing kiss]
Nice! ! ! ! !
"I like whatever my wife looks like."
On a starry night, drink all night long in the Demon Realm.
The cause of the first encounter in the void realm finally had its effect.
They don't care about status, as long as they are with each other, and as long as they are with her, they are the best.
Just for one person, to protect the common people.
"An'an, guard the demon world for me..." Yuchiyan's voice lingered in her ears.
This girl wants to be safe and happy
It's like a child who has never received a gift. By chance, someone comes and gives him a gift.
He didn't want it, and he didn't dare to ask for it, but the man kept forcing him to accept it.
When he tried to accept it and opened the gift box, he found that the box was empty.
Although he already had the antidote to Tongxin Gu, he still tried every means to convince himself to keep her by his side.
"I enter the world of mortals just to meet someone. When they leave, I will leave too. I will leave no dust behind."
She thought about how to answer this question, "Ordinary people probably work at sunrise and rest at sunset. Sometimes they will worry about their livelihood, but they will also be happy for a long time because they get something they like."
I have finished reading another book~ Zundu is a good book. It is very suitable for people who like to read short stories. It only has more than 70 chapters. The story is also very interesting, sweet and very reassuring~[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]Hehe. Everyone who likes to read sweet stories, please read it quickly. I don't know if Ru'an returned to reality in the end. Did you give birth to children? I'm sure all the babies are as good-looking as their parents! [Love] [Love] Hehe~ It's over [Love] Thank you for your hard work, the author [laughing] Come on, look forward to better articles [Like] [Like] [Love] [Like] [Like] 2025.2.25 00.29
There are a bit few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists, and they are officially together towards the end (Chapter 56). The male protagonist definitely liked the female protagonist the moment she died, but the female protagonist came to the realization a little late. There is a bit of a bit of abuse. The male and female protagonists each died once, but they came back to life in about two chapters. The heroine's character is quite good, and the male protagonist treats the female protagonist well. After the male protagonist dies, the female protagonist becomes the demon king. She keeps looking for the male protagonist until she gets married. In the end, the female protagonist marries the male protagonist [laughing]. Overall, it's okay. It's not abusive. It can be sweeter.
9.1 Points. It's a short article. I think it's pretty good. There's nothing terrible about it. If you're bored, everyone can read it.
But the author, I want to give you some of my opinions and suggestions.
First of all, regarding the relationship between the male and female protagonists, I think you haven't laid the foundation very well.
Even if you came back with some reasons, I feel like I didn't set the stage well, and I feel like the male protagonist suddenly fell in love with the female protagonist so deeply.
I think you can write more of the early plot to foreshadow their relationship, otherwise it will just feel a bit abrupt later on.
Then maybe it's because the author is a novice,
I feel that the plot of this book is not particularly exciting and exciting.
Of course, it's still very good for a novice author, but I feel that the plot is a little watered down. I can't tell. This may just be a feeling. The author can try to change it.
Originally, this book had no flaws or flaws, nor any diction. It felt very good. The author could work hard on the two aspects I just mentioned, and he would definitely write better.
It's really good-looking, the only drawback is that it's not finished [crying][crying][crying]
Okay, come on, come on, it looks good
"I'm probably crazy..." This sentence contains a lot of gold. Yuchinie's love is passionate and sincere. There is no love at first sight, just pure heartbeat. Didn't skip a chapter! ! !
Zhu Ru'an & Yu Chiyan
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
So pretty! ! A sweet little couple must have a good time [full]
Although it is short, it is very beautiful
perfect
There is no mistaking the green tea plot
It can be entered without being abused
The protagonist has a great relationship, has no love rivals, and the plot is interesting and engaging.
It's good to watch, but it's too short. I finished it in a few hours [crying] [crying] [crying] sweet article
Very interesting, the plot is not draggy
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Super pretty
Good looking, good ending
Very good, just a little short
Woo hoo hoo, it looks good. Saving thousands of lives for one person [crying] [crying] [crying]
2025.2.11
Complete book
OK
Madam, Madam, is so beautiful [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Both the male and female protagonists are very good.
After so many lifetimes of bonding, the one thing that remains unchanged is their relationship. It's so good. Both of them have been waiting so hard to find each other. This kind of relationship is really rare.
It's very nice. It's a short cookie.
It's very well written. Both male and female protagonists have mouths. It's very beautiful. Big boost for the author.
Who knows? It's really beautiful, and the author's writing in capital letters is not abusive.
Super beautiful, the author is very detailed
Except it's a little short, but I think it looks pretty [top post]
Good-looking, not cruel, no white lotus, and the ending is perfect
It's so beautiful, sweet and beautiful, and there are some sad parts in the middle that made me cry.
It's good-looking, and the author's character creation is very successful. I also want to see Wu and Zi's wedding!
It's really good-looking, super good-looking. Every time Yu Chiyuan secretly competes with each other, he feels very happy. He really loves Zhu Ru'an. When Zhu Ru'an's soul is gone, he would rather search all over the world to find her. After Yu Chiyang and the Emperor of Heaven died together, Zhu Ru'an really burst into tears when she read the part of the letter. There is a big heroine behind Zhu Ru'an. She was scared at first, but she forced herself to grow up, hoping that every girl can grow into her own big heroine. The position of the Demon King has returned to Zhu Ru'an's hands. She has the ability to take care of it very well, and the backend is super sweet! [Blowing kiss]
Nice! ! ! ! ! "I like whatever my wife looks like." On a starry night, drink all night long in the Demon Realm. The cause of the first encounter in the void realm finally had its effect. They don't care about status, as long as they are with each other, and as long as they are with her, they are the best. Just for one person, to protect the common people. "An'an, guard the demon world for me..." Yuchiyan's voice lingered in her ears. This girl wants to be safe and happy It's like a child who has never received a gift. By chance, someone comes and gives him a gift. He didn't want it, and he didn't dare to ask for it, but the man kept forcing him to accept it. When he tried to accept it and opened the gift box, he found that the box was empty. Although he already had the antidote to Tongxin Gu, he still tried every means to convince himself to keep her by his side. "I enter the world of mortals just to meet someone. When they leave, I will leave too. I will leave no dust behind." She thought about how to answer this question, "Ordinary people probably work at sunrise and rest at sunset. Sometimes they will worry about their livelihood, but they will also be happy for a long time because they get something they like."
I have finished reading another book~ Zundu is a good book. It is very suitable for people who like to read short stories. It only has more than 70 chapters. The story is also very interesting, sweet and very reassuring~[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]Hehe. Everyone who likes to read sweet stories, please read it quickly. I don't know if Ru'an returned to reality in the end. Did you give birth to children? I'm sure all the babies are as good-looking as their parents! [Love] [Love] Hehe~ It's over [Love] Thank you for your hard work, the author [laughing] Come on, look forward to better articles [Like] [Like] [Love] [Like] [Like] 2025.2.25 00.29
There are a bit few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists, and they are officially together towards the end (Chapter 56). The male protagonist definitely liked the female protagonist the moment she died, but the female protagonist came to the realization a little late. There is a bit of a bit of abuse. The male and female protagonists each died once, but they came back to life in about two chapters. The heroine's character is quite good, and the male protagonist treats the female protagonist well. After the male protagonist dies, the female protagonist becomes the demon king. She keeps looking for the male protagonist until she gets married. In the end, the female protagonist marries the male protagonist [laughing]. Overall, it's okay. It's not abusive. It can be sweeter.
9.1 Points. It's a short article. I think it's pretty good. There's nothing terrible about it. If you're bored, everyone can read it. But the author, I want to give you some of my opinions and suggestions. First of all, regarding the relationship between the male and female protagonists, I think you haven't laid the foundation very well. Even if you came back with some reasons, I feel like I didn't set the stage well, and I feel like the male protagonist suddenly fell in love with the female protagonist so deeply. I think you can write more of the early plot to foreshadow their relationship, otherwise it will just feel a bit abrupt later on. Then maybe it's because the author is a novice, I feel that the plot of this book is not particularly exciting and exciting. Of course, it's still very good for a novice author, but I feel that the plot is a little watered down. I can't tell. This may just be a feeling. The author can try to change it. Originally, this book had no flaws or flaws, nor any diction. It felt very good. The author could work hard on the two aspects I just mentioned, and he would definitely write better.
It's really good-looking, the only drawback is that it's not finished [crying][crying][crying]
Okay, come on, come on, it looks good
"I'm probably crazy..." This sentence contains a lot of gold. Yuchinie's love is passionate and sincere. There is no love at first sight, just pure heartbeat. Didn't skip a chapter! ! !
Zhu Ru'an & Yu Chiyan
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
So pretty! ! A sweet little couple must have a good time [full]
Although it is short, it is very beautiful perfect There is no mistaking the green tea plot It can be entered without being abused
The protagonist has a great relationship, has no love rivals, and the plot is interesting and engaging.
It's good to watch, but it's too short. I finished it in a few hours [crying] [crying] [crying] sweet article
Very interesting, the plot is not draggy
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Super pretty
Good looking, good ending
Very good, just a little short
Woo hoo hoo, it looks good. Saving thousands of lives for one person [crying] [crying] [crying]
2025.2.11 Complete book OK
Madam, Madam, is so beautiful [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Both the male and female protagonists are very good. After so many lifetimes of bonding, the one thing that remains unchanged is their relationship. It's so good. Both of them have been waiting so hard to find each other. This kind of relationship is really rare.
It's very nice. It's a short cookie.
It's very well written. Both male and female protagonists have mouths. It's very beautiful. Big boost for the author.
Who knows? It's really beautiful, and the author's writing in capital letters is not abusive.
Super beautiful, the author is very detailed
Except it's a little short, but I think it looks pretty [top post]
Good-looking, not cruel, no white lotus, and the ending is perfect
It's so beautiful, sweet and beautiful, and there are some sad parts in the middle that made me cry.
It's good-looking, and the author's character creation is very successful. I also want to see Wu and Zi's wedding!