The Struggle of a Humble Fox

It can be seen that he has solid experience and writing skills. The writing style may have something to do with personal habits, but the translation issue does make it a bit awkward to read. It's awkward, but this book is still very much in line with my taste, whether it's the plot or the characters. If the translation of the writing could be improved, it would be really great. In addition, the author can ask everyone to comment on the book at the end of the chapter. Because this book has too few comments and no score, it is difficult for readers to find it. The more people who read it, the more perfect suggestions they can provide to the author.

It looks great. I love to read it. Please update it quickly!!!

As a 10-year-old bookworm, this book is good to read. It focuses on daily life but adds some writing. The little fox is very cute and the content of the story is not too bad. The horses, saints, queens and princesses I met at the beginning are all good people, so it is quite smooth along the way. I have not read the author's first seven books, but this book can be used as a good practice. I have already seen the author's response to the popularity of the next book. I would like to make a few suggestions. 1: The novel should be divided into paragraphs. There are many paragraphs in the front with a lot of words. If they are not divided into paragraphs, it will greatly affect the viewing experience. Maybe the author is typing on a computer and it feels fine on a computer screen. But when it is put on a mobile phone, it is all densely packed with words. So I hope the author can do a good job of segmenting it so that the reader's perception can be better. 2: Character names This one is really hard to wash🤦You can't be lazy on this one!! Saint, fake saint, princess, king, maid, queen. Think of the name when you write the outline. Only having a name can stimulate the reader's imagination! How can there be a second female lead named Queen? And even if it is an honorific title, I think it should be Fairy Lord or Empress. Although this title is used in many novels, it is really not vulgar. This is what readers like us. 3: Skills and species descriptions. These two are super contrasting. Your skills are well written, such as those sprints in the early stage. There is also what is called Dual Skills or what kind of exercises. There are a lot of them below that I can't understand. To put it bluntly, it is to keep the Holy Demon in balance and then transform. It doesn't need to be so complicated. You can use the lines of the game characters or classical Chinese, such as the Way of Balance in LOL or the Yuan Ge of Pesticide: Which one is the real me. In this way, you can know the effect of the exercises at a glance. I have read more than 30 chapters and will continue to follow. I hope that the author's writing will get better and better. Give me a wonderful story. Come on👏

This is a very interesting fantasy novel. The book integrates popular elements such as sexual transformation, systems, and immortality to build a novel world view and meet the reading needs of diverse themes. The protagonist's setting is unique, and the plot is very dramatic when he is caught at the beginning, quickly catching the eye. The author's writing style is fluent, and he can cleverly integrate elements such as cute pets and light-hearted girls, so that the story has both the exciting and exciting plot of cultivating immortals and upgrading, as well as the relaxed and sweet daily life. The overall story is cruelty-free and refreshing, and is suitable for readers who like relaxed fantasy novels.

I haven't read a few chapters, but I feel a very familiar feeling when I read it, just like reading the copywriting of a movie. Did the author want to make a movie from the beginning (bushi)? I have already watched it with the original soundtrack of the movie, and I have a better feeling. (Continuing to follow up) 25.4.25

Overall, it's okay, but there are a few problems. One is that the language has a very serious translation accent, which will look awkward to readers. The other is that the direction of cultivation in this world is a bit vague. Sometimes it is fantasy and sometimes it becomes Western fantasy. The two directions are uncertain, and it may be a combination of east and west. This is a problem that has been discovered so far. I hope it will be improved in the future. I'm optimistic about the author [please update] Overall it's very good, especially if you don't have a translation accent! No translation accent! It's really, really awkward 😢 It's a female channel. The writing isn't very good, but it's mid-to-upper-level, and the world view isn't broken. Those who like watching little foxes can watch it. Don't raise books now, raise supplies now. It is recommended not to use your brain too much, just watch it without thinking.

Hahaha, at first I remember this book had a rating of 9. 🤦

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I think it's pretty good, although the third perspective is a little dizzying

So far, it looks okay