The History of the Humble Fox's Struggle

It can be seen that he has solid experience and writing skills. The writing style may have something to do with personal habits, but the translation issue does make it a bit awkward to read. It's awkward, but this book is still very much in line with my taste, whether it's the plot or the characters. If the translation of the writing could be improved, it would be really great. In addition, the author can ask everyone to comment on the book at the end of the chapter. Because this book has too few comments and no score, it is difficult for readers to find it. The more people who read it, the more perfect suggestions they can provide to the author.

It looks great. I love to read it. Please update it quickly! ! !

As a bookworm for 10 years, this book is beautiful A bit more about cultivating immortals in the daily world. The little fox is very cute and there is nothing sinister about the story. The horses, saints, queens and princesses we meet from the beginning are all good people, so the whole journey is fairly smooth. I haven't read the author's first seven books, but this book can be used as a good practice. I have already seen the response to the popularity of the author's next book. A few comments on the same topic 1: The novel must be divided into paragraphs. There are many paragraphs in the front that have a lot of words. If not divided into paragraphs, it will greatly affect the viewing experience. Maybe the author is typing on a computer and it feels fine on the computer screen, but when it is put on a mobile phone, it is densely packed with words. So I hope the author can do a good job in segmenting so that the reader's perception will be better. 2: Character name: This one really doesn't work [covers face] You can't be lazy with this one! ! Saint, Fake Saint, Princess, King, Maid, Queen. Think of the name when you write the outline. Having a name can stimulate the reader's imagination more! How can there be a second female lead named Queen? And even if it is an honorific title, I think it should be Immortal Lord or Empress. Although this title is used in many novels, it is really not vulgar. This is what we readers prefer. 3: Skills and species descriptions. These two are super contrasting. Your skills are very well written, such as those sprints in the early stage. The names and the skill descriptions below are very brief. It can be done in two lines. It is very comfortable to look at. But what about your beasts? There are a lot of descriptions below. There are also a lot of them called Dual Skills or what kind of skills. I can't understand a lot of them. To put it bluntly, the Holy Demon needs to maintain balance and then transform. It doesn't need to be so complicated. You can use the lines of the game characters or classical Chinese. For example, LOL's Way of Balance or Pesticide's Yuan Ge: Which one is the real me? This way you can know the effect of the technique at a glance. I have read more than 30 chapters so far and I will continue to follow. I hope to see the author's writing become better and better in the future. Give me a wonderful story. Come on👏

This is a very interesting fantasy novel. The book integrates popular elements such as sexual transformation, systems, and immortality to build a novel world view and meet the reading needs of diverse themes. The protagonist's setting is unique, and the plot is very dramatic when he is caught at the beginning, quickly catching the eye. The author's writing style is fluent, and he can cleverly integrate elements such as cute pets and light-hearted girls, so that the story has both the exciting and exciting plot of cultivating immortals and upgrading, as well as the relaxed and sweet daily life. The overall story is cruelty-free and refreshing, and is suitable for readers who like relaxed fantasy novels.

After reading a few chapters, I felt a very familiar feeling, like reading the copywriting of a movie. Did the author want to make a movie from the beginning (bushi) I have already watched it with the original soundtrack of the movie, and I feel better about it, (continuing to follow up) 25.4.25

Overall, it's okay, but there are a few problems. One is that the language has a very serious translation accent, which will look awkward to readers. The other is that the direction of cultivation in this world is a bit vague. Sometimes it is fantasy and sometimes it becomes Western fantasy. The two directions are uncertain, and it may be a combination of east and west. This is a problem that has been discovered so far. I hope it will be improved in the future. Be optimistic about the author [please update] Overall it's pretty good, especially if you don't have a translation accent! No translation accent! It's really, really awkward [crying] It's a female channel. The writing isn't very good, but it's mid-to-upper-level. The world view isn't broken. Those who like watching little foxes can watch it. Don't raise books now, raise supplies now. It is recommended not to use your brain too much, just watch it without thinking.

So far, it looks okay

Hahaha, at first I remember this book had a rating of 9. [Face covering]

I think it's pretty good, although the third perspective is a little dizzying

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The writing style feels like a narrator's way of unlocking the book, and the most intuitive thing is that it's a third-person perspective, which feels like a drama.

It's a good read. I'd love to read it. I recommend it. But some of the plots in the front are a bit confusing and segmented, but it's still very good. I give the author a huge 5-star support [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

Looks good, but feels weird for no reason

I hope it's Qingbai (friend)

I like the Queen, May

It looks good, I love watching it, I don't know why it's not popular

It's worth appreciating, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up writing.

It feels okay. I just watched it for a long time, and I don't even know who the other heroine is. I came here just to picture the little fox. I like fox novels.

It's so beautiful, I hope to add Li Hongwang in Hongzhong.

Very good novel that made my hinges spin A brief introduction to the novel *System flow *Western fantasy background *Foxes, lots of foxes *Lily ＊Translation accent writing style ＊Suitable for children, swearing and other content are coded ＊Please remove your brain before watching *Global sea level rise --Comments on this book (personal opinions, no other opinions) The translation style is very impressive, very good The reason why this book is said to be of the Western fantasy genre is because it is translated in a translation style, so it is classified as a Western fantasy. However, the classification of cultivation levels is Chinese style, which makes it feel a bit fragmented.

Cute cute cute

Content writing is okay

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Except for the weird middle name, there seems to be no other problem now. I like it very much. I just hope it won't break.

I just realized that after watching it for so long, I still haven't given a positive review. Overall, it's pretty good.

The story is interesting, it just reminds me of the days when I was eating raw meat in a machine

Come on, it's well written and the story is interesting. I feel like the way of describing it should be changed.

It's nice and durable, a little healing.

I think it looks good [love]

This book is like a treasure in heaven [Adored]