[Hidden occupation] [Growth flow] [Daily] [Multiple women are not vases] [Pet development] [Sub-occupation] [City building] [Later national war]
"The story begins when I was dragged to the bottom of the cliff by Xiyue..." Qingye raised her hand and gently stroked the plush ears of the long-haired beast girl in her arms, speaking half in memory and half with emotion.
Beside him, all the women turned their gazes to Xiyue, some were envious, some were grateful, some were convinced, but most of all they were happy.
"Don't tell me, don't tell me! The master is too bad!" Xiyue tried to change the subject by acting coquettishly, >m<.
Qingye smiled hoarsely, his eyes swept across the faces of the girls, and then stopped on a girl dressed as a bunny girl with long red hair: "Then... How about I tell you the story of Bai Luo, who raised his fingertips to destroy the demon general for me?"
Bai Luo's face instantly turned red with embarrassment, and as soon as he opened his mouth, his two cute tiger teeth were exposed: "You perverted uncle! I don't allow you to tell this matter!!!"
"This..." Qingye was helpless and looked at Sister Yu on the other side, who had long gray hair reaching her waist and was wearing a stunning short coat, but her face was expressionless.
"Then how about... Tell everyone the story of Ming Nai trying to attack me in the middle of the night?"
Ming Nai's beautiful eyes narrowed, and the tip of her tongue gently traced her dry lips: "Sisters, it's rare that the master didn't go to fight monsters and upgrade today, so don't waste time, let's come together!"
As soon as he finished speaking, a purple-haired loli emerged from nowhere: "A group start, right!? I'll follow you in seconds with just one click!!!"
Qing Ye (･д･): "No?! Didn't you say you wanted to listen to a bedtime story? Wait a minute!"
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Reader comments
I think the others are pretty good and watchable. It's hard to like the point of creating a trumpet, and the protagonist can recognize the two female protagonists, why can't the female protagonist recognize the male protagonist? Why do you need to use a trumpet to face the people in the studio again? It was too late for them to hide the protagonist! And I looked back and found no reason to support this hidden identity. This is an absolute poisonous point. Might as well use this to create villains or something. Moreover, online game writing may lack innovation and good writing style, but it will definitely not lack word count or excitement. This hidden identity that has no reason to support really affects the perception. It will be much better if you go through it quickly or change it. However, going through it quickly may affect the overall article. If you want to pursue better, it is recommended to change this paragraph. And this is not a personal opinion, many readers are reacting to this issue. @Can't have enough @Lingye can't have enough @Lingye can't have enough
I read it silently for a long time, and my first impression of this novel was very much like that of a novel from more than ten years ago, with an indescribable sense of simplicity.
This novel is suitable for readers who are slow to read. Readers who are satisfied with the three chapters may be dissuaded from reading it. However, old bookworms who read online games generally care more about the subsequent plot and logic.
The author is indeed a new writer, and the early plot is quite regular and not very fast. It can also be regarded as getting familiar with the writing process, and it becomes much smoother as it goes on.
There are many shining points, and the author knows that he will make changes quickly after listening to opinions. He has laid out a large worldview framework in the game, the data of equipment and wild monsters are very reasonable, and some characters with other game characteristics will appear around the protagonist from time to time (currently there are battle mages, necromancers from DNF, and even Shiranui from Onmyoji).
The disadvantage is that the control of perspective is not very good and needs to be improved. It is recommended to learn more from other authors! Secondly, the update is too slow. Two chapters a day is not enough.
Finally, hurry up and code! Take out the remaining pets quickly! It's time for the girls in the studio to push too! I want to see the harem having fun together! ! !
First of all, giving a four-star rating shows that I have no ill intentions. Secondly, I would like to ask what the mask used in more than 60 chapters is for. If it is as you said, creating a character to bring girls, then it has perfectly stepped on the major poisonous point of the mask trend, so I will quietly leave without disturbing you. [Exploration]
It looks great, but didn't you see that there are multiple heroines in the back? If yes, I love you even more
I'll give it 4 stars first because I haven't finished reading it yet and I've seen a lot of people have big opinions on the name. I personally think it can be regarded as a nickname or something like that. This book is considered very good among the online games I've read. I'll continue my review after I finish reading it.
On Tomato is a rare and excellent game article. The setting and content are relatively novel. However, it may be very difficult to make money on Tomato. I hope the author can persevere. In the end, the outline will be published even if the update is discontinued.
It's okay, keep up the good work
Finished reading, added to bookshelf, like it
I can barely see it, okay?
It's okay, it's a good grass
Keep up the good work! Be optimistic about the author! It might be better if the protagonist was less dazed! Not very well shaped
Real life looks good, I want to see it after my identity is exposed
Very interesting, logically rigorous, and content consistent with
It's okay. Does the author have multiple heroines?
It's really beautiful, come on
The content is pretty good, I'm looking forward to the plot
It's okay. It's pretty good. That's why it's so deserted. Come on, author.
It's very good to watch, come on author
Quite to my liking
I am a goblin, I like to watch
Like praise
Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this [smile]
It's okay, but it belongs to a new author, and some expressions are too conscious.
Will this game be integrated with reality later?
Fortunately, there is nothing sinister about it, but when can I reveal my identity?
It's very interesting, good luck to the author
Not bad, I haven't seen anything disgusting about me yet
I can only say that it was okay, but the identity of the protagonist was not revealed until the last chapter. Also updates are too slow.
It feels pretty good-looking
It feels like I've traveled back in time to when I first started reading the novel.
I think the others are pretty good and watchable. It's hard to like the point of creating a trumpet, and the protagonist can recognize the two female protagonists, why can't the female protagonist recognize the male protagonist? Why do you need to use a trumpet to face the people in the studio again? It was too late for them to hide the protagonist! And I looked back and found no reason to support this hidden identity. This is an absolute poisonous point. Might as well use this to create villains or something. Moreover, online game writing may lack innovation and good writing style, but it will definitely not lack word count or excitement. This hidden identity that has no reason to support really affects the perception. It will be much better if you go through it quickly or change it. However, going through it quickly may affect the overall article. If you want to pursue better, it is recommended to change this paragraph. And this is not a personal opinion, many readers are reacting to this issue. @Can't have enough @Lingye can't have enough @Lingye can't have enough
I read it silently for a long time, and my first impression of this novel was very much like that of a novel from more than ten years ago, with an indescribable sense of simplicity. This novel is suitable for readers who are slow to read. Readers who are satisfied with the three chapters may be dissuaded from reading it. However, old bookworms who read online games generally care more about the subsequent plot and logic. The author is indeed a new writer, and the early plot is quite regular and not very fast. It can also be regarded as getting familiar with the writing process, and it becomes much smoother as it goes on. There are many shining points, and the author knows that he will make changes quickly after listening to opinions. He has laid out a large worldview framework in the game, the data of equipment and wild monsters are very reasonable, and some characters with other game characteristics will appear around the protagonist from time to time (currently there are battle mages, necromancers from DNF, and even Shiranui from Onmyoji). The disadvantage is that the control of perspective is not very good and needs to be improved. It is recommended to learn more from other authors! Secondly, the update is too slow. Two chapters a day is not enough. Finally, hurry up and code! Take out the remaining pets quickly! It's time for the girls in the studio to push too! I want to see the harem having fun together! ! !
First of all, giving a four-star rating shows that I have no ill intentions. Secondly, I would like to ask what the mask used in more than 60 chapters is for. If it is as you said, creating a character to bring girls, then it has perfectly stepped on the major poisonous point of the mask trend, so I will quietly leave without disturbing you. [Exploration]
It looks great, but didn't you see that there are multiple heroines in the back? If yes, I love you even more
I'll give it 4 stars first because I haven't finished reading it yet and I've seen a lot of people have big opinions on the name. I personally think it can be regarded as a nickname or something like that. This book is considered very good among the online games I've read. I'll continue my review after I finish reading it.
On Tomato is a rare and excellent game article. The setting and content are relatively novel. However, it may be very difficult to make money on Tomato. I hope the author can persevere. In the end, the outline will be published even if the update is discontinued.
It's okay, keep up the good work
Finished reading, added to bookshelf, like it
I can barely see it, okay?
It's okay, it's a good grass
Keep up the good work! Be optimistic about the author! It might be better if the protagonist was less dazed! Not very well shaped
Real life looks good, I want to see it after my identity is exposed
Very interesting, logically rigorous, and content consistent with
It's okay. Does the author have multiple heroines?
It's really beautiful, come on
The content is pretty good, I'm looking forward to the plot
It's okay. It's pretty good. That's why it's so deserted. Come on, author.
It's very good to watch, come on author
Quite to my liking
I am a goblin, I like to watch
Like praise
Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this [smile]
It's okay, but it belongs to a new author, and some expressions are too conscious.
Will this game be integrated with reality later?
Fortunately, there is nothing sinister about it, but when can I reveal my identity?
It's very interesting, good luck to the author
Not bad, I haven't seen anything disgusting about me yet
I can only say that it was okay, but the identity of the protagonist was not revealed until the last chapter. Also updates are too slow.
It feels pretty good-looking
It feels like I've traveled back in time to when I first started reading the novel.