“The story begins when Xiyue dragged me to the bottom of a cliff...” Qingye gently stroked the fluffy ears of the white-haired beast girl in his arms and began, sounding both nostalgic and wistful.
Beside him, all the women turned to look at Xiyue. Their eyes held envy, gratitude, and trust, but above all, relief.
“No telling! No telling! Master, you're so mean!” Xiyue tried to change the subject with a coquettish plea. >m<.
Qingye laughed helplessly. His gaze swept over the women, then settled on a girl with red hair dressed as a bunny girl. “Well... how about I tell the story of how Bai Luo lifted a finger to wipe out a Demon General for my sake?”
Bai Luo's face instantly turned crimson. The moment she opened her mouth, two adorable little fangs showed. “You perverted old man! I won't let you tell anyone about that!!!”
“Hmm...” Qingye said helplessly, then looked toward a mature beauty with waist-length gray-white hair, dressed in a daring crop top and wearing a blank expression.
“Then... how about I tell everyone the story of how Mingnai tried to ambush me in the middle of the night?”
Mingnai narrowed her beautiful eyes and lightly ran her tongue over her dry lips. “Sisters, it's rare for Master to skip grinding levels today, so let's not waste the opportunity. All together!”
As soon as she finished speaking, a purple-haired little girl appeared out of nowhere. “Starting a raid, huh!? I'm in with one click!!!”
Qingye (･д･): “Wait, what?! Weren't we supposed to hear a bedtime story? Hey, wait! I %@#...”
Hidden class + growth-focused + everyday life + multiple heroines who aren't window dressing + pet raising + secondary professions + city building + late-game national war
I think the others are pretty good and watchable. It's hard to like the point of creating a trumpet, and the protagonist can recognize the two female protagonists, why can't the female protagonist recognize the male protagonist? Why do you need to use a trumpet to face the people in the studio again? It was too late for them to hide the protagonist! And I looked back and found no reason to support this hidden identity. This is an absolute poisonous point. Might as well use this to create villains or something. Moreover, online game writing may lack innovation and good writing style, but it will definitely not lack word count or excitement. This hidden identity that has no reason to support really affects the perception. It will be much better if you go through it quickly or change it. However, going through it quickly may affect the overall article. If you want to pursue better, it is recommended to change this paragraph. And this is not a personal opinion, many readers are reacting to this issue. @Can't have enough @Lingye can't have enough @Lingye can't have enough
I read it silently for a long time, and my first impression of this novel was very much like that of a novel from more than ten years ago, with an indescribable sense of simplicity. This novel is suitable for readers who are slow to read. Readers who are satisfied with the three chapters may be dissuaded from reading it. However, old bookworms who read online games generally care more about the subsequent plot and logic. The author is indeed a new writer, and the early plot is quite regular and not very fast. It can also be regarded as getting familiar with the writing process, and it becomes much smoother as it goes on. There are many shining points, and the author knows that he will make changes quickly after listening to opinions. He has laid out a large worldview framework in the game, the data of equipment and wild monsters are very reasonable, and some characters with other game characteristics will appear around the protagonist from time to time (currently there are battle mages, necromancers from DNF, and even Shiranui from Onmyoji). The disadvantage is that the control of perspective is not very good and needs to be improved. It is recommended to learn more from other authors! Secondly, the update is too slow. Two chapters a day is not enough. Finally, hurry up and code! Take out the remaining pets quickly! It's time for the girls in the studio to push too! I want to see the harem having fun together!!!
First of all, giving a four-star rating shows that I have no ill intentions. Secondly, I would like to ask what the mask used in more than 60 chapters is for. If it is as you said, creating a character to bring girls, then it has perfectly stepped on the major poisonous point of the mask trend, so I will quietly leave without disturbing you. 🧐
Real life looks good, I want to see it after my identity is exposed
I'll give it 4 stars first because I haven't finished reading it yet and I've seen a lot of people have big opinions on the name. I personally think it can be regarded as a nickname or something like that. This book is considered very good among the online games I've read. I'll continue my review after I finish reading it.
It looks great, but didn't you see that there are multiple heroines in the back? If yes, I love you even more
On Tomato is a rare and excellent game article. The setting and content are relatively novel. However, it may be very difficult to make money on Tomato. I hope the author can persevere. In the end, the outline will be published even if the update is discontinued.
It's okay, it's a good grass
Very interesting, logically rigorous, and content consistent with
I can barely see it, okay?