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It's really good-looking. I like Xiao Linye's character very much. I can't quite describe it. It has daily life. Daily life is good. Daily life is the most comfortable. There is also a plot. Xiao Linye is also very good, but not the kind of cheater. He is the kind who has been honed in countless high-risk tasks and life-and-death gaps. It came out... I really admire Xiao Linye. A graduated college student wore it while looking at recruitment and thinking about his next life plan (still curious about how he wore it. It couldn't be a terrorist attack [Petrochemical]). The time-travel start is at the root, but he can create a reputation (notoriety is also a name), which is really amazing. To be honest, I quite like the reason why Xiao Linye blooms a kaleidoscope... The writing style is very smooth and flowing, and the setting is very novel. I feel that the setting and writing style are quite good. If no one reads it, it must be because there is no publicity...? The author and teacher are also very nice... So I beg you to come and check it out. Uh-huh, and the teacher's writing style is really to my liking. It's that kind of light feeling. That kind of thing has passed. When I recall it, I will just say "Ah, so it was like that at the beginning." Dai Xiaolinye's perspective actually makes me want to cry (I've already cried at my low point of tears, ugh) Now Xiaolinye can have a warm home, it's so good [crying] The final ending is that after everything is settled, it will be warm and cozy and just live a normal life [Sending Hearts]

Needless to say, the five-star review (hehe) is really well written! Kobayashi Ye should win the best Oscar and the best undercover award in the ninja world [shy][smile] When I read this novel, it reminded me of "Answer Naruto". Unfortunately, that book ended too quickly and was too sloppy, and the main character's emotional line was hard for me to explain in one sentence. QAQ Come on! Always believe in you! Xiao Linye is so cool! The undercover leader of the ninja world! I hope Xiao Linye can go better and better! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] (Even if the world is dilapidated, decayed and messy, and you have struggled painfully in the abyss, you still have light and hope. Even if you are covered in dirt, the unwillingness and faith in your heart are still insisting on you going on. Please fly high with your wishes! Fly! Fly! May your future be smooth and happy - a small note to Xiao Linye. Jpg)

It's a very warm daily article. By the way, the overall feeling for me is that it's more of a male-oriented article than a female-produced article, which is more gentle, but I quite like this. The main character is very gentle and I like it very much Some people say that they can't take it in. In fact, you can try reading this book from another perspective, and look at the unusual daily life of a man named Yamashiro Lin Ye, or Lin Ye's ninja life. It's quite interesting (it's also possible that I'm born unable to take on the role of any protagonist, regardless of gender, I always feel that they are them, and I am me. When I read the novel, I am just reading their lives and stories)

It's a very good book, but it's a little rushed, with a lot of unfilled holes, and bugs (well, I didn't see the common problems). The writing is smooth, the setting is novel, and the story is interesting. I raised children throughout the whole process and made many dreams come true. The characters in the original book are very restored. Under the interference of the protagonist, everyone understands love and grows healthier. The image of the protagonist is very well created, and the early pain Bitter and numb, in the later period, he showed his love without hesitation like an old father. The two "hims" were redeeming each other, and he and the characters in Naruto were also redeeming each other. (The part where I saw my parents in a world where everything was fine was really good, a bitter and cautious feeling. The natural connection between mother and child is indelible, I even think my mother has recognized him! The extra chapter has also been completed, giving people a feeling of wanting to stop talking, leaving readers with unlimited room for imagination. /The author's attempt to use a short extra story to complete the story and supplement the settings was obviously not very successful, and he dug a few more holes for readers to fill in with their brains? . . (The system settings are an interesting pitfall. Although the extra chapter really failed to meet expectations (there are many problems, but I still won't change the rating)

Great looking fanfic! It was a little confusing when I looked at it earlier because Lin Ye hid a lot of things, and there was also some confusion about the names between Lin Ye and Lin Xiaoye. There is no dull part in the middle, it is completely captivating and can be read in one sitting. Those who have not read the original work may be a little confused, but it does not affect reading. It cleared up a lot of regrets and caused a lot of troubles. Whether it's the family interactions on the Hokage side or the heroes on the modern side, they are all written very well. Especially the extras, they are so exciting. The meaning is still not finished. Ps: The intellectual protagonist, Lin Ye, is so astringent.

To be honest, this is the best Naruto fanfic I have seen in the past 3 years. Unlike the cool plots of other fanfics, the delicate writing style and plot make people more immersed in the world of this book. Pay attention to this book. The character of the protagonist gradually matures as he grows up with San Xiaozhi and Lin Xiaoye. Except for the unrealistic sensitivity of people in the earth world to extraordinary powers, all the characters in this book are in line with my impression when I first watched Naruto. There are no conspiracy theories, no control over everything, no invincibility, no long stories of intrigues, only the heartwarming story of Lin Ye in the mountain city. Haha~(￣▽￣~)~Good-looking [love][love][love]

It's very nice. The score is low. But when I saw the author writing about visiting shrines in Japan, I knew the score wouldn't be high. I can only say that the author may not have noticed that in her writing, she has a sense of belonging and expectation for life in Japan.

There are so many good-looking Naruto novels that are so warm and relaxing, and even fewer that are so good-looking. And there is also the element of parallel world, I really like it! [Crying][blowing kiss]

It's super good-looking and has a happy ending. No matter which world it is, it's great that Naruto and Sasuke didn't experience so much pain. Jiraiya also got a happy ending even though he appeared rarely. I hope there will be a sequel about Naruto becoming the Hokage and Sasuke After the conversation with Itachi, it would be better if Lin Ye could be persecuted. Lin Ye also had a dark history when he played Ah Fei. He also had to be ridiculed. That's all. I hope that for the sake of the five-star praise, the author will definitely fulfill my wish [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It is a path that I have never imagined, but the main plot is very smooth and interesting, and the writing style is easy to read and makes people feel warm... Even if there is any unexpected knife, it will be a dull and inconspicuous pain. But! Watch out for this guy's last few chapters and extras! The bright big knife, the white knife goes in, the red knife comes out, I can't stop and it hurts my heart (falling to the ground) But very fragrant. . Really nice. . . (Poor words) Anyway, Boss, when will you release the next Boss, I will follow you forever. .

Nice! Very interesting setting! The rhythm of getting along is very comfortable, and the protagonist has quite a charming personality ~ It's a good story about raising a cub. Due to the arrival of the protagonist, the world of Naruto has not seen major changes for the time being, but it is very interesting at the moment, really! I'm stuck, the protagonist can complement the anime! I'm so looking forward to Brother Tuzi breaking through the defense! The protagonist is indeed very successful as an undercover agent [laughing evilly] He has already gone undercover to play Akatsuki again. It's interesting and interesting~

One of the best Naruto fanfics I have seen on Tomato so far. It can definitely be regarded as a top-notch work on this platform. The writing style is delicate and gentle, making daily life warm and fun. After reading the entire book, the main text does not deviate from the main line of the original work, but it also has its own unique development direction. The only drawback is that the word order of the article is a bit confusing, and you need to read back and forth carefully to understand the flow of the passage. The protagonist is not a good/bad guy in the traditional sense. This book adopts a more realistic approach to define the protagonist's position, depicting an involuntary character image, enriching the character's personality and making it more three-dimensional: The protagonist is not only the "uncle" of Sasuke and Naruto, but also the notorious "Inu" of the Anbu, a member of the rebellious ninja organization "Akatsuki", and one of the mysterious masked men who started the Fourth Ninja War. The protagonist is multi-faceted and "hypocritical", but he is also a miserable man who sheds tears because there is someone in the world who truly understands and accepts him. Also, while I was reading the book, I had thought about the movie viewing style of this book, but I didn't expect that the author would actually write the sequel! Finally, just reading the article, I said, the feeling brought by it is real, I really recommend this book! Nice! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Nice! This book is among Tomato's Naruto fanfics, and it's very in line with my taste, and it's also quite imaginative. I like the author's writing techniques very much. The author's words don't make me tired, and there are no superfluous plots. It is funny in reasonable places and serious in reasonable places. It uses simple and short sentences to vividly depict a flesh-and-blood person. The description of family affection in it is my favorite. It is also very interesting that everyone recognizes each other as elder brother and younger brother. Mission: Impossible made me unable to stop. Fortunately, I finished it in one go. I don't dare to think about how uncomfortable it would be for me to stop at a certain point in the series. Maybe the story written by the author is not that amazing, but it is definitely a good work, and it is the result of spending a lot of thought and continuous polishing. I really like the protagonist and the author's writing. I really hope the author will continue to produce.

It's very novel. It's the best Naruto fanfic I've heard in a while. If you feel the routine is old, you can give it a try. The overall feeling is very comfortable [like] (certified from 10,000 hours)

A book that surprised me very much. It was like a hidden book. I originally looked at the title and thought it would focus on school in the real world, but it turned out that there is also a suspense area, and it goes back and forth in both directions. There are relatively few characters that are written backwards, or they are very OOC, but the harmony here is really eye-catching. There are even movie theaters. The growth of the characters is also very well written. Xiaoye and his classmates have obviously grown up from high school students. Lin Ye is a very gentle person and very reliable. The previous pain has passed, and life is so good now. The super working man can finally rest. (Also, narcissus are wonderful!)

It's a very good Naruto novel, but there isn't enough of it. We should put the author in a dark room and force him to update it!

The author's writing is really great. To be honest, this book is the first Naruto fanfic I have read. I didn't expect it to end so soon, and I don't know what to say. I can only say that I'm a little regretful and confused. But I will still wish the author great blessings and everyone who likes this novel. Everyone has their own dreams and ideas. In my eyes, they are all living people! Their stories are still going on, but we have to exit, leaving this piece of sky to them, and live a wonderful life... I have said so much before I know it, and I don't know what to say. In short, this book is really wonderful [sending my heart][sending my heart][crying][crying]

This book is super nice! Highly recommended! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Even if you don't read it, please give it a good review before leaving Q_Q) I came across this book by accident while browsing for recommendations. I was attracted to it by the title at first (actually, another reason is that I am attracted to it when I read Naruto-themed novels). First let's talk about the content. The story line is more everyday. The protagonist graduates from college and travels through Naruto. He appears in the Roots at the beginning. After escaping from the Roots, he becomes the evil dog of ANBU and becomes notorious (at least he is famous). He adopts Naruto, Sasuke and Karin, and has a close relationship with the early boss. Whenever Xiaoye checks in on important events in the Hokage, it will appear on her 17-year-old self. The article contains both fighting scenes and daily descriptions. There are descriptions of two worlds, with rigorous plot and strong logic. (Sorry for my poor ability to summarize. If you want to know what to do after the funeral, I suggest you read the book directly) The author's writing style is very good, the flow is long and flowing, the setting is also very novel, the description is detailed and vivid, and it is very comfortable to read. My favorite description is when Xiaoye opened the kaleidoscope, and my favorite sentence is "But Naruto's uncle killed Naruto's third generation grandfather", which makes people feel a little sad when reading it. Daily life is very warm, and the characters written by the author also have their own personalities, such as the little Taiyang Naruto who believes in his uncle at all times, the little dinosaur Sasuke who knows something, and the caring little home expert Karin. Or maybe they are people from another world, such as Wang Chao, a close friend with accurate intuition, a professional police officer, and the kind and warm Granny Shenmu. They all have the power to warm people's hearts. (I can't describe it a bit, but when I watch it, I feel a power that directly points to people's hearts) The author is very nice. He reads readers' comments carefully and responds quickly. You must keep writing! Big cheers for the author! I hope it can give everyone a good ending in the end. So, why does such a wonderful novel have such a low rating? ? ? You've all seen this, click on the cover to read this book (This is my first time writing a book review, so please forgive me if there is anything I didn't write well) I can only say that it is very exciting. I have read it back and forth several times. I hope the author can write a book about Naruto in the future [laughing]

The writing is really good. At the beginning, I was attracted by the daily direction of the plot, and later on, "Narcissus is so cute." Now I see Lin Ye has become so vivid and lively. He is no longer the indifferent kid before. Lin Ye has a concern for him, as if he has roots in this world. Lin Ye, described by the author, is infinitely charming. Both people in the book and readers outside the book are unconsciously attracted to him. I like everything about him, whether it is his inner tolerance and gentleness towards his relatives or his outer mysterious power. And it seems that he will always stand behind everyone as an indestructible backing to protect them! Finally, the author, please do your best to update [please update][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's nice to read, like the book "Answer the Hokage" But I like this one better Can there be no heroine? ヽ(*ﾟｰﾟ*)ﾉ Come on, author, write about the Fourth War (ノ^o^)ノ

I read it a long time ago, and today I suddenly have free time to write a review for those who haven't read it. It's actually quite good, but it would be better if I delete the embarrassing ones. - A review by someone who has never read Naruto.

Good book. There are not many books that alternate between the second dimension and the third dimension and are written very naturally. The ideas are very novel, but I always feel that I am missing something. . . As for the nanny, the nanny's child, and what happened before the protagonist traveled through time, I didn't see it. . Is it because my brain automatically filters it? Overall, it's a bit confusing, but it looks good.

It's really super pretty! ! ! It narrates a lot of not-so-mundane daily life in a plain way. The text is really warm. Many blunt knives are revealed inadvertently. It feels like the mutual redemption of Lin Ye and Lin Xiaoye! I really like the feeling of sadness that lingers vaguely between these words. The main thing is that he is handsome when he should be handsome, but he is also very warm in daily life, and his golden fingers are not obtrusive. What a fairy!

It's absolutely beautiful, both the writing style and the character settings are great. The story situations always have heavy topics, but the author's humorous language can really make people laugh. It's been a long time since I've seen Lin Ye's sense of intelligence in Qie's fanfics. Who can understand a novel about a protagonist who knows things like a god➕cunning rabbit's three holes➕cold➕has a soft heart➕three views are right and doesn't mess with love➕talks about people when he sees them, and talks about ghosts when he sees them! This is a group-like novel. At first, I was not quite able to accept Xiao Ye, and felt like a dove occupying a magpie's nest. But later, I was slowly moved by Xiao Ye! Without Xiao Ye, there would be no Lin Ye behind. After realizing this, I was really moved by the author's arrangement of a past me to save my future me. The setting of my future self being healed by the past made me burst into tears. In this novel, I really like that the author did not use various vivid adjectives to describe each character. The actions he did and the words he said were straightforward and real, simple and reasonable. Compared with the accumulation of gorgeous words, these plain actions moved me more, allowing me to imagine those vivid characters in my mind. It's great. From time to time, the readers are given a handful of sweets and sometimes they are stabbed with a knife. The sweetness and the knife are both very reasonable, which makes me, a middle-value believer, very angry. It's a pity that this book has so few readers and its rating is only about seven points. What a pity! So pretty woo woo woo

The best among the best, why is it only a few minutes past seven? The protagonist goes out of his way. Very well written from beginning to end. It's not bad either. I also mean reading the original plots in fan fiction and finding a small amount of original plots from a large number of aided plots. That's not the case at all in this fanfic. A rare product There is no cheating on the protagonist, nor is the protagonist tortured. Nor did the protagonist watch helplessly as nothing could change in the plot. There are also many original plots. Recommended to take a look.

It's good to read. This article is really interesting. I don't know why the rating is low. Is it because tomatoes only have a place for complete work? Anyway, author Sai Gao!

Good-looking, no cp, the protagonist is beautiful and strong, Mission Impossible, the strength of the plug-in is OK, not too exaggerated, the learning ability is superb, raising cubs, calculating, undercover, has saved many people, including himself, and has become the light of many people.

It's very good. When I first started watching it, I thought I couldn't get into it. There was a huge fall right after the single. I really like the works written in large letters and the imagination is very good. Watching Lin Ye take care of the children is really exciting. I also like the interaction between Lin Xiaoye and Lin Ye. I like the heartwarming plot and everyone is a good baby. I have enjoyed watching it these past few days. Wuhu٩(๑^o^๑)۶

It's pretty good. I don't know how to rate it. I like it very much. I like the character of the protagonist.

Hey, teacher, I've fallen into a trap, and my hot girl can finally eat something fresh. Super invincible and delicious [crying] [learned] Alas, in short, the plot is very good, the children are well raised, the protagonist has no CP, but he can mess around Although I don't eat it, this rice is really delicious hehe (ºº ) And Lin Ye, think carefully about yourself and how you will live in the future! You need to be well [almost crying] Although I am a knife maniac hehe [laughing evilly]