
Naruto: I Went All Out Just to Check In
火影:为了打卡我也是拼了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 456k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- 谁家暗部退休再就业是高中生啊Alternate title on Fanqie
More by this author
In booklists 29
Explore more →Naruto Stories With Two Male Leads!!!
Looking for books similar to Naruto: Kakashi Is All Restraint Until He Flirts, Then Runs Off. Naruto stories with two male leads!!!!
Naruto + Everyone's Favorite. Please Recommend Some 🥺🥺
New Naruto Fanfic With Excellent Writing That Takes the Original Story in Fresh Directions
Are there any new Naruto fanfics on Tomato Novel with fresh, unusual, surprising content, smooth prose, and substance? Don't bother recommending anything under 300,000 characters. Fellow readers suffering from a reading slump, please help me out!
Bring on Some High-Quality Recommendations
Seriously looking for recommendations. Give me some high-quality, fantastic novels.
Which Fanfic Is the Most Stunning? I Want One That Sticks With Me After I Finish It
Looking for High-Quality Naruto Stories
Naruto Stories Where Everyone Has a One-Sided Crush on the Male Protagonist
Looking for books similar to "I Became Itachi’s Older Brother and the Hokage’s Favorite".
Naruto Has No Masterpieces Left. Fight Me.
Naruto Male Lead, No CP, but Surprisingly Shippable
I'm looking for books like "Naruto: Wrong Gender, Poor Madara". No flirting with women.
Naruto!!! Male-Male Romance!!!
Looking for books like "Naruto: I’ll See Them All Off Before I’m Done".
I've Read Every Kind of Naruto Fic. Any Recommendations to Save Me?
The Current Naruto Roleplay Trend Has No Masterpieces. Prove Me Wrong!
Misunderstandings and Fake Angst, with Beautiful but Tragic Characters
Looking for books similar to How Do I Survive Around Conan When I Keep Coughing Up Blood? A tragic, beautiful, strong protagonist who's misunderstood, abused, experimented on, and has psychological issues, but whose own perspective on things is actually great.
Naruto: Male Protagonist, No Romance
Looking for Naruto Fics with Two Male Leads
Looking for stories like Naruto: When Cursed Speech Meets Double Kamui. I only want stories with two male leads 🥺🥺🥺 Thanks!
Looking for Naruto Fanfiction With an Original Male Protagonist, No CP or a Male-Male Couple
I'd like something like "Naruto: The Gender's Wrong, Madara's in for a Rough Time". Good writing is all I ask; I'm not picky. (I'm new to Fanqie, so please recommend something!)
Naruto Series
Looking for books similar to "Naruto: The Shadow Assassin of the Nara Clan".
Please Recommend Naruto Fanfiction! No Harem! No Female Lead Would Be Best!
An original protagonist, and no harem!! Or, preferably, a male protagonist who focuses entirely on his career with no female lead. Thank you!!
Naruto: Becoming Madara's Older or Younger Brother
Naruto: Underrated Gems
Looking for Naruto Fanfiction: The Protagonist Should Be at Least a Jonin from the Start. No Recommendations by Juan Jie, Please
Naruto Only, With Smart Characters. No One Piece or Other Series, Please
Any High-Quality Naruto Transmigration Stories or Stories About Playing a Hokage Character
Naruto.
Naruto Fanfiction, Anything as Long as It’s Good
Naruto is so good! Please recommend some. I'm out of books to read!
Reader comments 56
Translated by Google Translate





































































































It's really good-looking. I like Xiao Linye's character very much. I can't quite describe it. It has daily life. Daily life is good. Daily life is the most comfortable. There is also a plot. Xiao Linye is also very good, but not the kind of cheater. He is the kind who has been honed in countless high-risk tasks and life-and-death gaps. It came out... I really admire Xiao Linye. A graduated college student wore it while looking at recruitment and thinking about his next life plan (still curious about how he wore it. It couldn't be a terrorist attack [Petrochemical]). The time-travel start is at the root, but he can create a reputation (notoriety is also a name), which is really amazing. To be honest, I quite like the reason why Xiao Linye blooms a kaleidoscope... The writing style is very smooth and flowing, and the setting is very novel. I feel that the setting and writing style are quite good. If no one reads it, it must be because there is no publicity...? The author and teacher are also very nice... So I beg you to come and check it out. Uh-huh, and the teacher's writing style is really to my liking. It's that kind of light feeling. That kind of thing has passed. When I recall it, I will just say "Ah, so it was like that at the beginning." Dai Xiaolinye's perspective actually makes me want to cry (I've already cried at my low point of tears, ugh) Now Xiaolinye can have a warm home, it's so good 😢 The final ending is that after everything is settled, it will be warm and cozy and just live a normal life 💕
Needless to say, the five-star review (hehe) is really well written! Kobayashi Ye should win the best Oscar and the best undercover award in the ninja world 😳[smile] When I read this novel, it reminded me of "Answer Naruto". Unfortunately, that book ended too quickly and was too sloppy, and the main character's emotional line was hard for me to explain in one sentence. QAQ Come on! Always believe in you! Xiao Linye is so cool! The undercover leader of the ninja world! I hope Xiao Linye can go better and better! 💕💕💕 (Even if the world is dilapidated, decayed and messy, and you have struggled painfully in the abyss, you still have light and hope. Even if you are covered in dirt, the unwillingness and faith in your heart are still insisting on you going on. Please fly high with your wishes! Fly! Fly! May your future be smooth and happy - a small note to Xiao Linye. Jpg)
I don't know about other people, but I have a strong sense of immersion, or it's one of the few stories where I can read it from the perspective of the protagonist. I feel inexplicably sad. The protagonist can't go back to his world. He has gone crazy after so many experiences. After all, I still don't like time travel. It's not much different from being abducted by human traffickers. After reading the title and synopsis, I thought it was a nonsensical joke, but I didn't expect it to be a daily drama-oriented story. It was heartwarming but also had the numbness of being in despair. The protagonist said not to interfere, but in action, he used his own way to save them (Naruto, Sasuke, himself in the parallel world - Xiaoye, Xiangling... ) But no matter what, he couldn't save himself. Those past things that were never written in the article [I almost cried]. I saw the protagonist repeatedly emphasizing and affirming that he is a "mountain city and forest leaf", and also sarcastically saying that he was the one to do the psychological tests and the results would only be "poor or very good"... It's really sad because of the traces left by time travel.
It's a very warm daily article. By the way, the overall feeling for me is that it's more of a male-oriented article than a female-produced article, which is more gentle, but I quite like this. The main character is very gentle and I like it very much Some people say that they can't take it in. In fact, you can try reading this book from another perspective, and look at the unusual daily life of a man named Yamashiro Lin Ye, or Lin Ye's ninja life. It's quite interesting (it's also possible that I'm born unable to take on the role of any protagonist, regardless of gender, I always feel that they are them, and I am me. When I read the novel, I am just reading their lives and stories)
It's a very good book, but it's a little rushed, with a lot of unfilled holes, and bugs (well, I didn't see the common problems). The writing is smooth, the setting is novel, and the story is interesting. I raised children throughout the whole process and made many dreams come true. The characters in the original book are very restored. Under the interference of the protagonist, everyone understands love and grows healthier. The image of the protagonist is very well created, and the early pain Bitter and numb, in the later period, he showed his love without hesitation like an old father. The two "hims" were redeeming each other, and he and the characters in Naruto were also redeeming each other. (The part where I saw my parents in a world where everything was fine was really good, a bitter and cautious feeling. The natural connection between mother and child is indelible, I even think my mother has recognized him! The extra chapter has also been completed, giving people a feeling of wanting to stop talking, leaving readers with unlimited room for imagination. /The author's attempt to use a short extra story to complete the story and supplement the settings was obviously not very successful, and he dug a few more holes for readers to fill in with their brains? . . (The system settings are an interesting pitfall. Although the extra chapter really failed to meet expectations (there are many problems, but I still won't change the rating)
Great looking fanfic! It was a little confusing when I looked at it earlier because Lin Ye hid a lot of things, and there was also some confusion about the names between Lin Ye and Lin Xiaoye. There is no dull part in the middle, it is completely captivating and can be read in one sitting. Those who have not read the original work may be a little confused, but it does not affect reading. It cleared up a lot of regrets and caused a lot of troubles. Whether it's the family interactions on the Hokage side or the heroes on the modern side, they are all written very well. Especially the extras, they are so exciting. The meaning is still not finished. Ps: The intellectual protagonist, Lin Ye, is so astringent.
To be honest, this is the best Naruto fanfic I have seen in the past 3 years. Unlike the cool plots of other fanfics, the delicate writing style and plot make people more immersed in the world of this book. Pay attention to this book. The character of the protagonist gradually matures as he grows up with San Xiaozhi and Lin Xiaoye. Except for the unrealistic sensitivity of people in the earth world to extraordinary powers, all the characters in this book are in line with my impression when I first watched Naruto. There are no conspiracy theories, no control over everything, no invincibility, no long stories of intrigues, only the heartwarming story of Lin Ye in the mountain city. Haha~( ̄▽ ̄~)~Good-looking ❤️❤️❤️
It's very nice. The score is low. But when I saw the author writing about visiting shrines in Japan, I knew the score wouldn't be high. I can only say that the author may not have noticed that in her writing, she has a sense of belonging and expectation for life in Japan.
There are so many good-looking Naruto novels that are so warm and relaxing, and even fewer that are so good-looking. And there is also the element of parallel world, I really like it! 😢😘
Nice! This book is among Tomato's Naruto fanfics, and it's very in line with my taste, and it's also quite imaginative. I like the author's writing techniques very much. The author's words don't make me tired, and there are no superfluous plots. It is funny in reasonable places and serious in reasonable places. It uses simple and short sentences to vividly depict a flesh-and-blood person. The description of family affection in it is my favorite. It is also very interesting that everyone recognizes each other as elder brother and younger brother. Mission: Impossible made me unable to stop. Fortunately, I finished it in one go. I don't dare to think about how uncomfortable it would be for me to stop at a certain point in the series. Maybe the story written by the author is not that amazing, but it is definitely a good work, and it is the result of spending a lot of thought and continuous polishing. I really like the protagonist and the author's writing. I really hope the author will continue to produce.