[Two male protagonists/cultivation/next year/redemption]
The sickly prince who is plagued by bad luck × the aloof and arrogant immortal king who is violent and fearful of society
Song Ci'an, the eleventh prince of the Shang Kingdom, has been plagued by bad luck since he was sixteen years old. He coughed up blood as usual, so he voluntarily cut off the world of mortals and entered the Piaomiao Sect to practice.
Because of his "dull" qualifications, he was rejected by the elders of the peaks, and finally fell into the sect's most bizarre sect, the Immortal Wangyou——
The strange immortal king who wears a silver-patterned mask all year round and has only said three sentences in three hundred years.
The daily life of the master's disciple:
"Ci'an, look at this move!"
"Master, that is a Mahayana move..."
"Ci'an, we need to advance to the Yuanying realm tomorrow!"
"Master, disciples should still build the foundation..."
"Ci'an, fuck him!"
"I'll risk my life just to have fun with you!!"
Gradually they discovered:
• There is a seal hidden in the apprentice's "stupidity"
• Master's "irritability" can only be seen when he is drunk.
• And royalty! It was actually a conspiracy that had been planned for hundreds of years...
[The world kissed me with pain, and I finally heard the sound of bamboo shoots breaking through the ground in the thunderstorm]
"Master, are you teasing me out of pity or use?"
A sneer came from under the silver-patterned mask: "Guess, why did I stick to the green lantern for three hundred years?"
*Two people abandoned by the world become each other's trump card
*Master's online teaching: How to transform all the little figures in the picture book into disciples
*The progress of the sickly disciple's blackening: 1% (but the Gu said he was lying)
Reader comments
"About my family, the fearful immortal king and the sickly prince tamed each other"
——Comment on "Deep in the Clouds"
Keywords: Two-way redemption · Abnormal master and apprentice in the world of cultivation · Suspense, sweetness and abuse intertwined
1. Character design: When the "socially fearful master" picks up a "sick but gentle wolf cub"
Wangyou Immortal Lord Mu Ranshan can be called the best anti-routine master in the world of cultivation——
• Teaching: To learn this trick, a teacher must first fall in love
• Hobby: Reading drawing books to learn postures (oh no, moves)
• Daily: Knock the boss on the head (Ci'an! Learn more!)
And the prince who is proficient in all kinds of music, chess, calligraphy and painting:
"On National Policy" challenged the Confucian scholars and became the true "spokesperson" of the Master.
The skill of ink painting can only be reduced to drawing a notebook for the master? !
2. Plot: The narrative rhythm of sugar and knife
Tip: Prepare tissues (for wiping saliva and tears)
3. Core: "De-Marynization" of salvation
Song Ci'an: Redemption? What redemption? Isn't it Master who flirts with me every day?
Wangyouxianjun: What is salvation? I have voluntarily remained single for three hundred years... (Song Cian: Master, please let go of my hand!)
4. Suitable for readers
✓ The sober party who are fed up with the "overbearing immortal falls in love with me" routine
✓ Centrists who like "Er Ha and His White Cat Master" but think it is too cruel
✓ Irresistible setting control for the "beautiful, powerful and miserable" combination
Regarding the ending, it may disappoint some readers, so I would like to make some quibbles here:
1. About the power setting: This story is not a traditional upgrade flow. In the end, Song Ci'an failed to become a peerless strong man, but chose to protect his master in another way - to protect his master with gentle companionship instead of force. In my opinion, what the master who is the number one in the fairy world needs is not a stronger protector, but a caring person who knows both cold and hot.
2. Regarding the growth line: Song Ci'an's transformation from persistence to strength to understanding the "power of softness" is his most important growth. The daily routine of making wine and growing flowers in the extra chapter is exactly the proof that he finally understands his master's heart.
3. Regarding the relationship model: I always believe that true emotional bonds should not be defined by the level of cultivation. The mutual understanding between two hearts is sometimes more precious than the matching of strength.
I apologize if some arrangements disappoint you.
Thank you again for reading. I will continue to work hard to create better stories to reunite with you.
First of all, it is quite rare to write about the master and apprentice from the perspective of the main story, that is, from the perspective of the master and the apprentice, but secondly, the description from the perspective of the master is scary in society but really cute in the heart. I have only read the first ten chapters so far. The theme is quite novel, cultivating immortality + semi-strategy, and the author's writing style is also very good. That's all for now, and I'll comment later when I see it.
The three views of the master and the disciple are really upright, and the relationship is long-lasting. The two of them slowly got along with each other from the beginning, and finally reached a very good match. As long as the master makes a look, expression, and movement, the apprentice will know and understand what the master wants to express. The society is afraid that the master is a "translator" for the apprentice, well [note] but why is the update interrupted? When will the author return, Qiuqiu does not want to be a eunuch [face covering]
Wish: Happy New Year
Very nice, I don't know why the score is so low. Generally speaking, the author's writing style is very good, and many of his descriptions have a poetic charm. It is a very thoughtful work. The plot is smooth, there is no bloody plot, there are no unnecessary misunderstandings, the master is super protective of the shortcomings, the whole battle is at the ceiling, it is social fear, a bit dull, but it is a free way, so everything follows your heart, fight if you are unhappy, kiss if you like it, even in the early stage of the attack when the boy is still in love and has a crush and dare not confess, the straight ball goes up, and there is a bit of fishing, in short, it is very good. The apprentice likes the master very much. Although there was a slight conflict with the master over the issue of swordsmanship, in fact, they both love each other very much, but there was a misunderstanding about emotions. Both cuties shed tears of grievance, but the problem is not big. On the contrary, this part is very delicious, and they reconciled within a few chapters. The proportion of this part is very small, but it is not enough for me. In short, it is almost safe to eat. All the revenge that should be avenged has been avenged, and those who framed the male protagonist have been killed. There is no plot that the master and the apprentice turned against each other. They ran to the young lovers in both directions. There was no separation of life and death. The young lovers held hands and never left each other in times of crisis. The total weight is super sweet [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]
The three views are very upright, and the relationship flows smoothly. As for the plot, I read it too quickly, and I felt that I missed a lot of details and didn't fully understand it. The apprentice is really ill-fated, either getting hurt or on the way to getting hurt. Also, the master is always written as "Wangyouxianjun" in the article. Why not just use the master's original name? I haven't quite remembered the master's name after reading dozens of chapters. Finally... I feel that the author is really suitable for writing ancient style novels. The writing style is excellent and it doesn't look funny at all. For someone like me who has always only read ancient novels, I am immediately ecstatic [sending my heart]
Update soon, why is it so beautiful, what should I do if it is so beautiful, I like Master, Master, I am happy with you,
Good-looking, love to watch, like
The author's writing style is very good, I think it will be popular, squat
This is a very good book, with profound writing, accurate vocabulary, and three-dimensional characters. It is suitable for old bookworms to read when they are short of books, because the writing style is more elegant, the routines are relatively novel, and it is niche but high-quality. It was a book that I had added to my recommended bookshelf before, but I just read it now, and now I really want to go back and slap myself in the face. .
Not bad, Master is super cute☺I want to steal it
🥺🥺It's beautiful, keep up the good work Da Dalu [Adoration]
Okay, okay, good, good [shy][shy]
Excellent writing and complete story
I feel like the water is flowing as I read it. I like this feeling very much.
This is my first time encountering a novel about social horror and character design. The author has greatly optimized the writing style in the first part. It's quite nice.
It's well written, the story is interesting, the writing is also very good, the emotional line is very sweet, there are no misunderstandings, I hope there will be a side story of Kong Ming
Great writing!
How come so few people have read this book?
The author's writing style is delicate and textured, so you need to be patient to read it.
It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
The writing is very good, recommended! ╮(‵▽′)╭
It's very interesting. I don't know why but I feel like the final chapter is almost boring.
The author's writing style is really good! Master and Ci'an are so sweet!
The plot is fascinating, the vocabulary is beautiful, and it has a sense of pictures. I really want to wear the book haha
"About my family, the fearful immortal king and the sickly prince tamed each other" ——Comment on "Deep in the Clouds" Keywords: Two-way redemption · Abnormal master and apprentice in the world of cultivation · Suspense, sweetness and abuse intertwined 1. Character design: When the "socially fearful master" picks up a "sick but gentle wolf cub" Wangyou Immortal Lord Mu Ranshan can be called the best anti-routine master in the world of cultivation—— • Teaching: To learn this trick, a teacher must first fall in love • Hobby: Reading drawing books to learn postures (oh no, moves) • Daily: Knock the boss on the head (Ci'an! Learn more!) And the prince who is proficient in all kinds of music, chess, calligraphy and painting: "On National Policy" challenged the Confucian scholars and became the true "spokesperson" of the Master. The skill of ink painting can only be reduced to drawing a notebook for the master? ! 2. Plot: The narrative rhythm of sugar and knife Tip: Prepare tissues (for wiping saliva and tears) 3. Core: "De-Marynization" of salvation Song Ci'an: Redemption? What redemption? Isn't it Master who flirts with me every day? Wangyouxianjun: What is salvation? I have voluntarily remained single for three hundred years... (Song Cian: Master, please let go of my hand!) 4. Suitable for readers ✓ The sober party who are fed up with the "overbearing immortal falls in love with me" routine ✓ Centrists who like "Er Ha and His White Cat Master" but think it is too cruel ✓ Irresistible setting control for the "beautiful, powerful and miserable" combination Regarding the ending, it may disappoint some readers, so I would like to make some quibbles here: 1. About the power setting: This story is not a traditional upgrade flow. In the end, Song Ci'an failed to become a peerless strong man, but chose to protect his master in another way - to protect his master with gentle companionship instead of force. In my opinion, what the master who is the number one in the fairy world needs is not a stronger protector, but a caring person who knows both cold and hot. 2. Regarding the growth line: Song Ci'an's transformation from persistence to strength to understanding the "power of softness" is his most important growth. The daily routine of making wine and growing flowers in the extra chapter is exactly the proof that he finally understands his master's heart. 3. Regarding the relationship model: I always believe that true emotional bonds should not be defined by the level of cultivation. The mutual understanding between two hearts is sometimes more precious than the matching of strength. I apologize if some arrangements disappoint you. Thank you again for reading. I will continue to work hard to create better stories to reunite with you.
First of all, it is quite rare to write about the master and apprentice from the perspective of the main story, that is, from the perspective of the master and the apprentice, but secondly, the description from the perspective of the master is scary in society but really cute in the heart. I have only read the first ten chapters so far. The theme is quite novel, cultivating immortality + semi-strategy, and the author's writing style is also very good. That's all for now, and I'll comment later when I see it. The three views of the master and the disciple are really upright, and the relationship is long-lasting. The two of them slowly got along with each other from the beginning, and finally reached a very good match. As long as the master makes a look, expression, and movement, the apprentice will know and understand what the master wants to express. The society is afraid that the master is a "translator" for the apprentice, well [note] but why is the update interrupted? When will the author return, Qiuqiu does not want to be a eunuch [face covering] Wish: Happy New Year
Very nice, I don't know why the score is so low. Generally speaking, the author's writing style is very good, and many of his descriptions have a poetic charm. It is a very thoughtful work. The plot is smooth, there is no bloody plot, there are no unnecessary misunderstandings, the master is super protective of the shortcomings, the whole battle is at the ceiling, it is social fear, a bit dull, but it is a free way, so everything follows your heart, fight if you are unhappy, kiss if you like it, even in the early stage of the attack when the boy is still in love and has a crush and dare not confess, the straight ball goes up, and there is a bit of fishing, in short, it is very good. The apprentice likes the master very much. Although there was a slight conflict with the master over the issue of swordsmanship, in fact, they both love each other very much, but there was a misunderstanding about emotions. Both cuties shed tears of grievance, but the problem is not big. On the contrary, this part is very delicious, and they reconciled within a few chapters. The proportion of this part is very small, but it is not enough for me. In short, it is almost safe to eat. All the revenge that should be avenged has been avenged, and those who framed the male protagonist have been killed. There is no plot that the master and the apprentice turned against each other. They ran to the young lovers in both directions. There was no separation of life and death. The young lovers held hands and never left each other in times of crisis. The total weight is super sweet [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]
The three views are very upright, and the relationship flows smoothly. As for the plot, I read it too quickly, and I felt that I missed a lot of details and didn't fully understand it. The apprentice is really ill-fated, either getting hurt or on the way to getting hurt. Also, the master is always written as "Wangyouxianjun" in the article. Why not just use the master's original name? I haven't quite remembered the master's name after reading dozens of chapters. Finally... I feel that the author is really suitable for writing ancient style novels. The writing style is excellent and it doesn't look funny at all. For someone like me who has always only read ancient novels, I am immediately ecstatic [sending my heart]
Update soon, why is it so beautiful, what should I do if it is so beautiful, I like Master, Master, I am happy with you,
Good-looking, love to watch, like
The author's writing style is very good, I think it will be popular, squat
This is a very good book, with profound writing, accurate vocabulary, and three-dimensional characters. It is suitable for old bookworms to read when they are short of books, because the writing style is more elegant, the routines are relatively novel, and it is niche but high-quality. It was a book that I had added to my recommended bookshelf before, but I just read it now, and now I really want to go back and slap myself in the face. .
Not bad, Master is super cute☺I want to steal it
🥺🥺It's beautiful, keep up the good work Da Dalu [Adoration]
Okay, okay, good, good [shy][shy]
Excellent writing and complete story
I feel like the water is flowing as I read it. I like this feeling very much.
This is my first time encountering a novel about social horror and character design. The author has greatly optimized the writing style in the first part. It's quite nice.
It's well written, the story is interesting, the writing is also very good, the emotional line is very sweet, there are no misunderstandings, I hope there will be a side story of Kong Ming
Great writing!
How come so few people have read this book?
The author's writing style is delicate and textured, so you need to be patient to read it.
It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
The writing is very good, recommended! ╮(‵▽′)╭
It's very interesting. I don't know why but I feel like the final chapter is almost boring.
The author's writing style is really good! Master and Ci'an are so sweet!
The plot is fascinating, the vocabulary is beautiful, and it has a sense of pictures. I really want to wear the book haha