My Substitute Daoist Partner Is Too Good at Flirting, and My Ice-Cold Senior Sister Is Panicking

This is art. Although there are many shortcomings, such as the attitude of the male protagonist before and after, and the character may jump left and right, this is a twisted art. The author is addicted to his own world and cannot extricate himself, so that readers can also enjoy this feeling of transcending the world. This is art

Very familiar 😢 I like this I hope the author will write out the distortion and conflict between the sisters, and make the male protagonist not so useless, okay? I hope that the male protagonist can choose what he wants without hesitation, but at the same time have a sense of pulling and twisting. Come on, author!!!

I think it looks good, don't pull it, just break it off. …No, if you don't pull, you won't be able to watch anymore. You'd better keep pulling [cover your face] [cover your face] [cover your face] [cover your face] [cover your face]

The inner emotions of the characters are described very delicately, but the male protagonist's character is too indecisive, making constant decisions and hesitating.

It's just a little poisonous in the front, a little poisonous in the middle, and a little poisonous in the back 😘 …The harm~~will last indefinitely

Look at how many mistakes you have made. Do you fight with your left hand and your right brain? When it is corrected, I will add the remaining one. Of course, if you don't care, I can't help it.

The author's description of the emotions between the characters is so perfect!! Whether it is the pull between the sister and the male protagonist at the beginning, to the awakening of the "incompetent sister" later, and the emotional changes of the male protagonist throughout all of this, it is all immersive!! 👍👍👍👍

This kind of pure novel is still too rare at present. I actually really hope for two female protagonists, and I also really like my sister. After all, no one wants to see such a tragic ending. Let me give you a five-star review first.

The author has been completely immersed in his art and no longer knows what the universe is.

Awesome, so novel, hiss Alas, what did you write for senior sister? Okay, I know why the score is low in the later part. It was good in the first part, but the senior sister didn't handle it well in the second part, and it was even worse when it came to the Xuantian Sword Sect, which made the readers uncomfortable, so the score was low. The author already wanted to make the protagonist an "evil" person. I originally wanted to see Su Miaohan and her sister get back together completely, but I didn't expect to use this method. Having said that, of course the author can have his own ideas. The first part is really good. Maybe it's because the subject matter is too new. Personally, I still can't accept that the protagonist has become like this. The senior sister and Miaohan are also different. The cold senior sister mentioned in the novel's introduction is gone.