Kissing the Substitute by Mistake, the Cold Fairy Turned Black

This is art. Although there are many shortcomings, such as the attitude of the male protagonist before and after, and the character may jump left and right, this is a twisted art. The author is addicted to his own world and cannot extricate himself, so that readers can also enjoy this feeling of transcending the world. This is art

Very familiar [crying] I like this I hope the author will write out the distortion and conflict between the sisters, and make the male protagonist not so useless, okay? I hope that the male protagonist can choose what he wants without hesitation, but at the same time have a sense of pulling and twisting. Come on, author! ! !

I think it looks good, don't pull it, just break it off. ……………No, if you don't pull, you won't be able to watch anymore. You'd better keep pulling [cover your face] [cover your face] [cover your face] [cover your face] [cover your face]

The inner emotions of the characters are described very delicately, but the male protagonist's character is too indecisive, making constant decisions and hesitating.

Look at how many mistakes you have made. Do you fight with your left hand and your right brain? When it is corrected, I will add the remaining one. Of course, if you don't care, I can't help it.

The author's description of the emotions between the characters is so perfect!! Whether it is the pull between the sister and the male protagonist at the beginning, to the awakening of the "incompetent sister" later, and the emotional changes of the male protagonist throughout all of this, it is all immersive! ! [Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's just a little poisonous in the front, a little poisonous in the middle, and a little poisonous in the back [blowing kiss] …The harm~~will last indefinitely

The author has been completely immersed in his art and no longer knows what the universe is.

This kind of pure novel is still too rare at present. I actually really hope for two female protagonists, and I also really like my sister. After all, no one wants to see such a tragic ending. Let me give you a five-star review first.

The description of the inner twist of the male protagonist is very delicate. I feel that the author has completely written out the feeling of forbidden love. Book friends who like this kind of novel will go directly to it. The rating is low but it is good to read. Hey, the first thing that attracted me to this book was Miaohan's boldness and weirdness. The male protagonist's sense of morality was broken by Miaohan step by step. After the introduction, I thought Miaohan was not afraid of anything. The subsequent part where the male protagonist and Miaohan were caught cheating and were imprisoned was also very well written. Miaohan was actually feeling very sad inside, but it was really baffling for the author to dig a hole. I think it would have been better for the author to just write about Su Qingge's indifference and ruthlessness, and then by chance, Chu went to the God of Thunder to understand the will of the God of Thunder and elope with Miaohan, so that he could continue the introduction, but the author preferred to It was written that Su Qingge was deeply in love with Chu. From this moment on, I felt that I was no longer controlled by the author's initial thoughts. Then Miaohan inexplicably said that loving someone is not about possession and then left this paragraph in order to write that the male protagonist accepts Qingge, but this is not and Are there any conflicts in the characters before you? I think the relationship between Chu and Miaohan should be deeper after that time in the dungeon. I even thought that Chu won the first place in the martial arts competition and announced that Miaohan would become his fiancée, but I didn't expect that it was Qingge who set up a trap. This article does not have the kind of scene I expected where the younger sister fights for love. Instead, the younger sister takes the initiative to let go. So just don't write that sentence in your introduction. Sister, I will snatch away your Taoist companion! Now I have to accept that master. It would be too formal to write it like this. I hope the author can find the feeling he had when he first started writing this article. I hope the author's writing will get better and better, his ratings will get higher and higher, and he will receive more gifts.

Awesome, so novel, hiss Alas, what did you write for senior sister? Okay, I know why the score is low in the later part. It was good in the first part, but the senior sister didn't handle it well in the second part, and it was even worse when it came to the Xuantian Sword Sect, which made the readers uncomfortable, so the score was low. The author already wanted to make the protagonist an "evil" person. I originally wanted to see Su Miaohan and her sister get back together completely, but I didn't expect to use this method. Having said that, of course the author can have his own ideas. The first part is really good. Maybe it's because the subject matter is too new. Personally, I still can't accept that the protagonist has become like this. The senior sister and Miaohan are also different. The cold senior sister mentioned in the novel's introduction is gone.

It's very similar to "Sister Kiss". I don't know if the author has read it.

Male Protagonist: Little Chef Man Also, what the hell is your timeline like earlier? It was said that I came here several days ago, and then there was a chapter that suddenly said that I came yesterday. Did I travel through time?

What I want is this twisted feeling. The author's writing is so touching. I hope it will be more twisted later [Sending my heart]

[Like] [Like] [Like] Yes, the characters portrayed are quite profound.

It's simple, it's a bit toxic in the front, but it's okay in the back.

What did the male protagonist do to the senior and junior sisters [laughing]

Let me put it bluntly, this is a work of art that is difficult for ordinary people to understand [laughing]

I just want that tingling feeling in my heart! (ㆆᴗㆆ)💡

I think it's pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

It's cool, I suggest you come to Shura Field more often.

It made me burst into tears as an uncle who was extremely lonely deep inside his heart. It was written into my heart.

It's fun to write to the author, and it's fun to read to me too [cover face][cover face][cover face]

It's a little awkward. I felt a little bit offended in some places when I first read it. But the emotional scenes are good and harmless. The author seems to be a newbie. I'd like to support it with five stars. Hiss, no, it doesn't feel right, it's a bit novel

The plot is very novel, unique, and very flavorful. This kind of twist is what you need. Come on, author.

Very well written, really great

This plot is so awesome. Like it very much. Very exciting. After writing, the author continues writing.

Yes, the psychological description is delicate and pays attention to the relationship between characters. [Laugh]

Very pretty

Be nice to senior sister🥺