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My writing ability is very strong. You can tell after just two paragraphs that it is a good article. You can read it and be deeply attracted by it. It is a good article and a good story. The description of the environment is very exciting, not exaggerated, and perfectly sets off the storyline and portrays the characters. I highly recommend it!

At first, I came here for the label of single female protagonist, but when I opened it, I found that it was the author's new book. Ah Shui can be the heroine, right? It's okay, it's okay, it's okay qwq If Ah Shui were the heroine, I feel that the emotional line in this book would be much better. Originally, the emotional scenes would have been natural, and it would have just been enough to gradually reflect the heroine's position in the hero's heart. For example, the male protagonist goes shopping and sees a hair tie. He subconsciously thinks of the female protagonist and thinks it suits her well, so he buys it, etc. This time the male protagonist and Ah Shui are very good, and the interaction is very natural. Please author, Ah Shui smells so good. It is perfect to be the female protagonist. QAQ

The image of Ah Shui is so well described. I really like this. The author should update it soon. After writing for so long, I have enough experience points to evolve into a three-shift beast. Could it be that I accidentally ate the Immutable Stone [what]

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's attack on Huaguoshan One sentence said by 108 Monkeys: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your Brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

I really recommend it. The plot is delicate and deep, but Lao Ye is too lazy and always slacks off [hit hard]. Generally speaking, the protagonist is smart, decisive, and daring to fight. But if Lao Ye kills my baby Ah Shui, I don't mind running from the border. All in all, it's really very interesting to watch (I can't guarantee that everyone's taste is the same as mine). I hope Lao Ye will continue to work hard and create new glory, but at the same time, I also hope that there will be no thunderstorms in the future. Otherwise I will give you rave reviews [makes a face]

To be honest, I have never read the author's previous books, but the meaning between the lines is really strong. The protagonist is laid out and the plot is also smoothly backwards. The heroine is not a traditional heroine, but a friendship between life and death. Unlike others, I actually did not see a lot of tenderness between the male and female protagonists in the previous plots, and some only It is a hard-working man who is devoted to the truth but unwilling to live alone. He survives by chance and embraces the fate of a hard-working man. The male protagonist grows up step by step. It is really smooth. I have never felt so comfortable. When this book is finished, I will take a look at the author's previous works. I think it is also a good book.

It's good to watch, but there is one shortcoming that is not a shortcoming: the main plot in the early stage revolves around Ah Shui, Fengcheng, Soldier and Xin. Unlike the plot in the plot, each blood door in the plot has little connection with the previous plot, so I can completely put aside the previous plot, leave a pretty good impression, and turn my attention to the current plot. In the story of Blood Gate, this is the advantage of Infinite Flow. When looking at this book, readers need to slowly become familiar with each person and the intricate interpersonal relationships and positions behind them. This requires readers to have a lot of patience to read. In this way, the early plot seems like an officialdom, but ignores the pleasure of martial arts, human relationships, and detailed character descriptions.

Answer seriously, it is a very good book, especially since I am also writing a book myself, so I understand how valuable this kind of quality is, and I admire it very much. When writing a book, generally speaking, you can only say good afternoon to ensure quality and quantity. This author is so awesome, so write slowly. I have used this book as a reference book. It is both literary and entertaining. Please remember the author of 🔥 is not a eunuch.

Brother, your writing skills are really getting better and better. From Zhao Yi to Jin Buhuan to Ning Qiushui and now Wen Chaosheng, there has really been a significant improvement in the plot line and the characterization of the characters [send heart] [send heart] Uh, but don't let the end be unfinished, and don't be like Jin Bu Huan who cut it in half before it was finished [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] Nice looking meow meow meow

It's beautiful and comfortable to watch. If someone hadn't mentioned Ning Qiushui in the comment section, I wouldn't have thought of him as the author of "The Strange House". Look!

Nowadays, I read a lot of fast-paced online articles, and this kind of subject matter really shines for me. At present, in this section of Novice Village, it can be said that the characters are closely connected, the story structure is compact, and it is really enjoyable to watch, and the two of them are so close to each other [sending my heart] However, I have also read many books with wonderful beginnings. I hope the author can lay out more foreshadowing, or let some later characters temporarily appear, etc. Otherwise, it may be a bit boring when changing maps in the novice village [Thoughts] Anyway, cheers for the author! This book is particularly to my liking, and it has the potential to become a masterpiece [Sending my heart]

It's a first-rate, flavorful book, and the author should be a veteran in re-skinning. The descriptions of environmental scenes and characterizations are natural and distinct, the plot is advanced smoothly, and the clues buried are also very organized and not deliberate. The writing is so fluent, the skills are so solid, and it's all a matter of hard work. In addition, the dialogue of this character is written so comfortably, and the atmosphere of the world and the atmosphere of fireworks are all in it. I don't know why the score is so low. Shouldn't this kind of martial arts novel have a wide audience?

The story is truly unique, and the character of Chao Sheng is very interesting. The most distinctive point is: a drop of water is reciprocated by a spring. An old hunting couple kindly took Chao Sheng in for one night, and Chao Sheng searched for the couple's traces of their son. Xiaohong, the violinist, gave Chaosheng a bowl of braised pork, and Chaosheng got rid of the evil head for her. The old dog just gave his meal to Chaosheng, and he called it "Master Dog"... He snuck into the night with the wind, moistening things silently. There is also the description of the female characters, which I think is the most powerful. Ah Shui's decisiveness in killing and the way he treats people are very distinctive. As the story progresses, it can be seen that Ah Shui gradually lowers his guard against strangers. What a great book.

To be honest, this book is very good in terms of martial arts. The author's writing style is not what many cool novels have. It is delicate but not complicated. The protagonist seems to be a bit like Ning Qiushui.

The writing is really good. The main plot, characters, and background come out slowly and advance steadily. To be honest, I didn't read the author's last book, but I read the latest chapter in one breath and it was really addictive.

The author's writing style cannot be overemphasized. I was originally looking forward to the second part of the Ghost House, but this new work is also good. It is a slow-burn type, with delicate writing and full characterization of the characters. I look forward to the author's updates [crazy][crazy]

The writing is very similar to that of Xue Zhong and Jian Lai. It is somewhere between the two. It is not as literary as Jian Lai but has a touch of Jin Yong. I feel that if the world view and background of the story are grand enough and the characters are more delicate, it will definitely be a better book than the books before Ye Lai.

First time writing a book review (mild spoiler warning) For the first time in a long time, I read a novel that I couldn't stop reading from beginning to end. The pace is slow but not procrastinating, the plot is connected one by one, the characters are well-developed, and there will be no sudden mention of a name that makes people unable to remember who it is. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is not clearly stated, but the growing relationship between the two can be seen in the subtleties. However, this also makes the male protagonist's confession seem a little abrupt later, but it is innocuous. It does not belong to the sweet feeling of industrial sugar, but the sweetness after savoring it carefully. I have been reading Zhao Yi since the first one. Ye Lai's writing style is trustworthy. I hope this novel's self-challenge can end perfectly [Like]

After watching ten pictures, I feel that the male protagonist is so miserable, (●｀･(ｴ)･´●) However, the writing is very good and the plot progresses very steadily. I like the character of the heroine who is so handsome.

It's beautiful, all the descriptions are top-notch, and the characters are well controlled and fleshed out. But the problem I think (personal opinion) is that the protagonist cherishes his life and takes it very seriously. From a refugee with no food and clothing to becoming a Qi national, it was difficult at the beginning. After living a miserable life, he got better. After seeing the letters between Ah Shui and Zhang Orion, he began to delve into the secret. I feel that there was a lack of transition that made him make up his mind. I know that he wanted to see if they were dead or alive, give them an explanation, and find the culprit to seek justice. I feel about myself! ! ! (Emphasis added) There is still a lack of things that are excessive. Others are perfect, perfect, really perfect @ I have saved three to four hundred of them but haven't read them yet. Now that I have read more than 200 chapters, I feel that the final boss of the main plot is already coming. Combined with what King Qi said before, King Pingshan and himself are both pawns, the academy's reaction to Fengcheng, and the introduction to Xiang Tianwen. The final boss of the book's title should be Shentian Palace. King Qi and King Pingshan didn't want to be chess pieces. When King Qi knew that King Pingshan was related to Fengcheng, he didn't continue to pursue it. He couldn't kill the people who could share the pressure. But if that's all, it can only be said to be average. @ Do you think what I said is right? Of course I haven't seen the back yet.

The author has taken the character description to a new level, especially the emotional lines, which are more delicate. I have to say that I have grasped it. I have been chasing Guishe in real time since I read Zhao Yi's book, and now it seems that I will catch up in real time again in this book. I was a little confused when I first started reading the first chapter, but after reading it, I felt... I can't get enough of it. I really like Wen Chaosheng and Ah Shui. They are really interesting. I am a person who has a hard time taking off the filter. So as long as the plot of this book is not too outrageous in the later stage and the characters are not broken, especially the protagonist, if I have plans to publish a book in the future, I will definitely buy this book [Note]

I can only say that the writing is so beautiful, and I hope Ah Shui is the female protagonist. Both the character design and the interaction with the male protagonist are great.

1. Generally speaking, the early stage looks very good, with a little bit of a sword feel. 2. There were too many people asking for riddles in the early days. There were adults everywhere who knew this surname. I thought it was because the adults above had magical powers. Ordinary people would be spied on by adults when they mentioned this surname. It was okay to mention it casually. I used to watch movies like Digging and I liked it, but this is the first one because The Riddler made me feel bored, but the later ones will definitely get better. 3. The creation of the villain! The making of a villain! The author feels that the decent setting is good, but the NPCs like the teacher and the severed hand are too heavy. Many NPCs are equivalent to intelligence or force patches, which are not three-dimensional, and the villains are all bad. If there are no normal people, they are pure bad. The NPC feeling is too heavy, and they are all evil bad guys who have a way to die. 4. Sister Shui writes too much when she is drinking and buying wine for her. She cannot rely on drinking here every day. . Does anyone understand how I feel? 5. I also hope that Sister Shui will be patched up in the future, and that the emotional line will not be awkward in the future. 6. There is also the issue of combat power. The male protagonist is able to achieve this kind of cross-level combat because of the death of Lord Gou. With the Zoujian Pavilion system, he is completely conceptual. He can cross levels as much as he wants. I hope he doesn't collapse too quickly. Don't tell me that the male protagonist is low-level and his combat power is reasonable. The male protagonist's combat power matches his level. Yes, the great fighting master killed three fighting kings by himself in an extremely angry state, relying on his secret knowledge. When the male protagonist reaches the Dou King, the author will kill the female protagonist again. Should the male protagonist directly cross the ranks to kill the Dou King? 7. The quality of the book is sure to be read by millions in the future. It will become one of Tomato's masterpieces if it does not collapse in the middle and later stages. I hope the work will get better and better.

It's not a big deal to give it four and a half stars. There are many advantages. It is very comfortable to read. The writing is subtle and natural. The descriptions of various skills and life details are very immersive. The plot seems to be good so far. I really like this method of opening the map bit by bit. The emotional line seems to be very good so far. She can always make me smile when I am ambiguous. The character of the heroine is really to my liking. The other people's characters are also stable and stable without making mistakes. Wise people have wisdom in the Machiavellian part, but I won't say too much. There are also shortcomings, that is, the feeling of cultivation is too cheap, and human life is not valuable. Occasionally it gives people the feeling of a grass-stage performance, which is very dramatic. After 2,000 pages, the real impression is the daily interaction between the male and female protagonists. The other scenes, whether it is searching for objects or practicing, are smooth and too bland. The same is true at the beginning of the second chapter. The map transfer is a bit hasty, and there is a sense of fragmentation like using teleportation. Without the interaction of the heroine, there is no other interesting point except for the occasional foreshadowing, which makes it look dull. After reading it for a few hours, I feel that the layout is a bit small, but the writing is good, and I look forward to the follow-up.

Like! I feel like there are a lot of secrets. I hope Ah Shui is the heroine [laughs] I really like their interaction [please savor it] It's so beautiful [crying][crying][crying] It's definitely the best-looking novel with a single female protagonist I've ever read. The emotional line is super invincible and natural. Every interaction after the confession made me twist into a maggot on the bed. In fact, it was like this before the confession. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The best book on the Internet at present, unlike those about cultivating immortals, all of them are geniuses who can counterattack without thinking every time, the ideas are very clear, the grievances and grievances are clear, the NPCs are also intelligent, and there are some shadows of structures and mortals cultivating immortals, but it does not rely purely on fighting and focusing on cultivation to maintain the plot. The protagonist's aura is not heavy, and there are not many women and one protagonist. It would be better if it was not a time-travel drama. Well! The main reason is that most of the time-travel plots are invincible in the later stages, with big killings, and there is no such thing as capsizing in the ditch and almost dying. It is interesting to watch. I haven't finished it yet. The previous part is okay so far, haha, keep going...!

The plot is pretty good, the protagonist has a high IQ But I really don't like the writing style of this book. Ye Lai seems to particularly like to use short sentences to create an ancient aesthetic (especially in the early stages), but I think it is really uncomfortable to read. The author should not fall into the dead end of writing. There is a feeling of going too far and not doing enough. The training system is a bit like that of The First Immortal of Swordsmanship, and the plot layout is very similar to Jianlai, but not so obscure. Ye Lai especially likes to use Spring and Autumn writing style in this book, but I think this is very inappropriate in a novel with a clear main line. Just like reading comprehension, different people have different appropriate understandings, but in your novel (if it is to promote the plot) there can only be one understanding, which is very inappropriate. This book isn't very chivalrous, but its quick travel is the best I've ever seen. It's very smooth and not awkward. Overall, it's a good book (just not too mature), come on at night!

I haven't watched it for a week, thinking I had saved it long enough to start it, but I ended up watching it all at once, and I'm back to waiting for updates. Fortunately, there is no rough and violent reading, and there is no attitude towards reading online articles in the past. It seems like I am back in the summer vacation of junior high school. I went to the bookstore to rent a novel by Mr. Gu Long. I quickly wiped the sweat from my forehead with the back of my hand, for fear of missing a more exciting plot. Every word is like taking a sip of millet porridge, letting the warm millet slide through the teeth and mouth. After swallowing, you have to smack it again to get the last trace of sweetness.

"Fat Chang" is beautiful, Ah Shui is cute and sassy, ​​and the protagonist is calm and decisive. It is a novel that I have rarely updated in the past two years [Cool]

I have been reading Ye Lai's books and have finished all the books. The new book is also tied. So far, I am looking forward to the follow-up. I hope the main plot will not stretch my hips. There are too many characters appearing in the early stage, which makes it a bit chaotic. It should improve once the main plot is opened. Looking forward to a big bang [laughs] It looks good, it looks good, this reading time is more convincing.