They Say I'm Love-Struck, So Who's in My Bed?

It looks good. I hope the author can write more ~ This is a true story about a strong female character. I may have just started writing it, but the heroine was a little sloppy (I read that many people in the comments were running away because of this, and I don't know if I can change it or fix it). Later, starting from changing the map, you can see that the writing becomes more and more natural and smooth, and the rhythm of the plot is well controlled. It is so good that I can't stop. The Feng Aotian-style female protagonist Kuku upgrades to fight monsters and win over handsome men. It's so cool. , This is a novel that grown-up women should read. The most important thing is that the heroine does not feel aggrieved, does not lick men, and does not tolerate anger. Whether it is their relatives, friends, or elders and servants, they do not look down on the heroine in traditional plots. The cricket heroine is not worthy of the men, the yin and yang of the heroine is capricious, or makes small moves to break them up. This is not because our heroine's baby is strong, whether they are with the heroine because of profit or other things. At least we readers can read it comfortably, and the author is also very friendly to the women in the text. It is not like that kind of fairy tale that is too confusing (the male protagonist is outside and the female protagonist is inside). Many powerful family heads are women. This is the real fairy tale that respects the strong (not the male)... I hope that the female protagonist will become more and more powerful in the future. Even if she recruits a handsome man (there can be someone stronger than the female protagonist), but don't let the female protagonist be a lowly person to praise his bad feet, otherwise I really want to criticize that bitch guy for finding a way to die... And the latest story about a handsome boy who is pregnant with the heroine's child, who is undoubtedly the biological mother, instantly opened up our new thinking. In this case, then all men will give birth to babies. Hahahaha, think about it. It's a bunch of men. If everyone wants to give birth to the heroine, then it's not a sow, let's give birth to a boy... In short, in a word, it is a good article, I love reading it, I will update more, I love it a lot!

To be honest, the subject matter of this book is very good and very novel. The author's writing is not very bad, but there are a few places that bounced back and forth between my faults, which is to say that it is a bit unreasonable and a bit boring. But most of them are well written. At first, I thought it was just an ordinary, simple and mindless sweet story, where the heroine and her male protagonists were making love. After I watched it, I realized that it was not a brainless one. The heroine herself was very powerful. Although sometimes I am a little brainless and a little arrogant. But he is the kind of subject I like. That is to say, because I have read many fairy tales before, the heroine met many excellent male protagonists along the way, but they were all coy, and in the end, only one male protagonist was given to be together. Why can't we have more male protagonists? Yes, after reading this article, I still like the female protagonist who is not bad at herself. When the male protagonist encounters the excellence of the female protagonist, he will fall under her pomegranate skirt. It's a subject I like very much, but there are some parts where the writing is a bit mindless and arrogant, which sometimes makes me have the urge to watch it.

A great book that I sincerely recommend. I came here with the intention of giving it a try. The result was so good that I read it in a whole day! The three officials are upright, and there are all kinds of things you like. The heroine becomes stronger step by step and has a strong sense of immersion! The further you go, the more exciting it becomes! ! !

It's good to watch, the heroine has more than 1v, and it's well written. The woman is strong and the man is weak. There is one thing that personally bothers me. Why is it that when a friend or relative is injured, the first priority is not to save people but to vent to the enemy? After saving people, can't you take revenge? I don't understand but I respect it.

This book is quite good, it is about a real strong woman, not about a spoiled wife. The male protagonists are just weak in front of the female protagonist, but they are very strong in the eyes of others. Strong women, cultivating immortals, polyandry, boys [laughing evilly]

The heroine is super invincible and generous! ! That's so generous, I really want to be her friend [laughs][laughs] It would be great to have a friend who can immediately save me from fire and water when I am in trouble, without asking me for anything in return, share the treasure with me as soon as he has it, and who also knows everything about me! ! Those great masters are so good at teaching their disciples, hahaha, but there are not many good grandsons, granddaughters, sons, and daughters of great masters. They are all stumbling blocks for the heroine on her way to promotion. The chief dean of the college she joined is no less generous. The elder of the college and his son have done many evil things, and everyone knows it, but it has nothing to do with her being high-minded. The promotion of the heroine is always uneven, sometimes she is promoted to Golden Elixir, then Nascent Soul, then Golden Elixir, and now Nascent Soul. The mountain road here has eighteen bends~

The heroine is very strong and fits the setting of a female character! ! ! In comparison, the male protagonist looks soft and lovable! ! The heroine doesn't treat herself badly. She eats meat when she should. She doesn't have any sense of delicateness like a little white flower, and her boyfriend is extremely powerful! ! The focus is on boys. The heroine will have her own child later~

Why is the rating so low? I think the writing is very good, it just has the flavor of an orthodox female cultivating immortality, and it is the flavor of an orthodox strong female cultivating immortality. I like the character of the heroine very much, she is not entangled, she becomes stronger when she is strong, and she has various talents. The male protagonists also have their own characteristics. I like her very much.

The plot is super good, not bad at all, and every doubtful point is narrated. I applied for a side story to give Huaihuai a good ending. The baby has been suffering all the time, and he was the only one who sacrificed in the end [crying][crying][crying][crying]

Reading along the way, the author's rhythm is still good, and there is not much problem in establishing the character. But the only problem is in the expression and the connection with the previous plot. If this type of problem is corrected, this book will definitely be able to get a 9 points. I hope the author will work hard.