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It looks good. I hope the author can write more ~ This is a true story about a strong female character. I may have just started writing it, but the heroine was a little sloppy (I read that many people in the comments were running away because of this, and I don't know if I can change it or fix it). Later, starting from changing the map, you can see that the writing becomes more and more natural and smooth, and the rhythm of the plot is well controlled. It is so good that I can't stop. The Feng Aotian-style female protagonist Kuku upgrades to fight monsters and win over handsome men. It's so cool. , This is a novel that grown-up women should read. The most important thing is that the heroine does not feel aggrieved, does not lick men, and does not tolerate anger. Whether it is their relatives, friends, or elders and servants, they do not look down on the heroine in traditional plots. The cricket heroine is not worthy of the men, the yin and yang of the heroine is capricious, or makes small moves to break them up. This is not because our heroine's baby is strong, whether they are with the heroine because of profit or other things. At least we readers can read it comfortably, and the author is also very friendly to the women in the text. It is not like that kind of fairy tale that is too confusing (the male protagonist is outside and the female protagonist is inside). Many powerful family heads are women. This is the real fairy tale that respects the strong (not the male)... I hope that the female protagonist will become more and more powerful in the future. Even if she recruits a handsome man (there can be someone stronger than the female protagonist), but don't let the female protagonist be a lowly person to praise his bad feet, otherwise I really want to criticize that bitch guy for finding a way to die... And the latest story about a handsome boy who is pregnant with the heroine's child, who is undoubtedly the biological mother, instantly opened up our new thinking. In this case, then all men will give birth to babies. Hahahaha, think about it. It's a bunch of men. If everyone wants to give birth to the heroine, then it's not a sow, let's give birth to a boy... In short, in a word, it is a good article, I love reading it, I will update more, I love it a lot!

To be honest, the subject matter of this book is very good and very novel. The author's writing is not very bad, but there are a few places that bounced back and forth between my faults, which is to say that it is a bit unreasonable and a bit boring. But most of them are well written. At first, I thought it was just an ordinary, simple and mindless sweet story, where the heroine and her male protagonists were making love. After I watched it, I realized that it was not a brainless one. The heroine herself was very powerful. Although sometimes I am a little brainless and a little arrogant. But he is the kind of subject I like. That is to say, because I have read many fairy tales before, the heroine met many excellent male protagonists along the way, but they were all coy, and in the end, only one male protagonist was given to be together. Why can't we have more male protagonists? Yes, after reading this article, I still like the female protagonist who is not bad at herself. When the male protagonist encounters the excellence of the female protagonist, he will fall under her pomegranate skirt. It's a subject I like very much, but there are some parts where the writing is a bit mindless and arrogant, which sometimes makes me have the urge to watch it.

A great book that I sincerely recommend. I came here with the intention of giving it a try. The result was so good that I read it in a whole day! The three officials are upright, and there are all kinds of things you like. The heroine becomes stronger step by step and has a strong sense of immersion! The further you go, the more exciting it becomes! ! !

It's good to watch, the heroine has more than 1v, and it's well written. The woman is strong and the man is weak. There is one thing that personally bothers me. Why is it that when a friend or relative is injured, the first priority is not to save people but to vent to the enemy? After saving people, can't you take revenge? I don't understand but I respect it.

This book is quite good, it is about a real strong woman, not about a spoiled wife. The male protagonists are just weak in front of the female protagonist, but they are very strong in the eyes of others. Strong women, cultivating immortals, polyandry, boys [laughing evilly]

The heroine is super invincible and generous! ! That's so generous, I really want to be her friend [laughs][laughs] It would be great to have a friend who can immediately save me from fire and water when I am in trouble, without asking me for anything in return, share the treasure with me as soon as he has it, and who also knows everything about me! ! Those great masters are so good at teaching their disciples, hahaha, but there are not many good grandsons, granddaughters, sons, and daughters of great masters. They are all stumbling blocks for the heroine on her way to promotion. The chief dean of the college she joined is no less generous. The elder of the college and his son have done many evil things, and everyone knows it, but it has nothing to do with her being high-minded. The promotion of the heroine is always uneven, sometimes she is promoted to Golden Elixir, then Nascent Soul, then Golden Elixir, and now Nascent Soul. The mountain road here has eighteen bends~

The heroine is very strong and fits the setting of a female character! ! ! In comparison, the male protagonist looks soft and lovable! ! The heroine doesn't treat herself badly. She eats meat when she should. She doesn't have any sense of delicateness like a little white flower, and her boyfriend is extremely powerful! ! The focus is on boys. The heroine will have her own child later~

Why is the rating so low? I think the writing is very good, it just has the flavor of an orthodox female cultivating immortality, and it is the flavor of an orthodox strong female cultivating immortality. I like the character of the heroine very much, she is not entangled, she becomes stronger when she is strong, and she has various talents. The male protagonists also have their own characteristics. I like her very much.

The plot is super good, not bad at all, and every doubtful point is narrated. I applied for a side story to give Huaihuai a good ending. The baby has been suffering all the time, and he was the only one who sacrificed in the end [crying][crying][crying][crying]

Reading along the way, the author's rhythm is still good, and there is not much problem in establishing the character. But the only problem is in the expression and the connection with the previous plot. If this type of problem is corrected, this book will definitely be able to get a 9 points. I hope the author will work hard.

The content of this book is unique and the subject matter is very interesting. There is a time-traveling woman, a strong man, Mei, and the man who gave birth to her child. I really couldn't get enough of it! I like it. I hope the author will update it as soon as possible. I stayed up until midnight last night to catch up!

It's really beautiful and the heroine is very strong. This is a strong female novel. I'm just curious about the man the heroine slept with in the first chapter.

It's really good-looking. The heroine is refreshing, can solve everything, and has a smart mind. I really like the heroine. She keeps growing and growing, and the ending is good. Everyone is together. I feel a little uncomfortable. For example, the heroine's mother doesn't know how long she has to live. Every time, her daughter saves her. It feels a bit weak, but overall it is good. It's better to fight with multiple female protagonists to use your brain. It's also pretty good-looking

The writing is good (๑>◡<๑)👍🏻. If you want to know when the ending will be, it would be best if there is a side story. If the clear soup is too watery, when can I eat some meat? Is it okay to drink some broth?

It's quite good-looking. The heroine is very powerful. The setting is quite ruthless. She doesn't hesitate to kill. No one she offends runs away. She is also very decisive. The male protagonists feel a bit like it. Overall, it is a big female protagonist with a growth line and a relatively small emotional line. However, the heroine has always been very powerful and there is nothing sadistic. The author's writing style has some minor flaws, but I still like it. Recommended

Come on! Very nice, but a little lacking. The gold finger is too big. Friends who want to relieve stress, don't miss it.

In this great novel, anyone who harms the heroine will die very quickly, and the harm will not be successful. It's so exciting, the writing, plot and emotions are great. The only failure was my favorite Gong Qinghuai, the most beautiful man in the whole story. From the beginning, I was thinking about his most delicious meat, but in the end, the heroine didn't even eat him. He also transformed into the god of heaven, and it was impossible to be with the heroine! After the heroine defeated the ultimate boss, she took the ultimate boss out of this world and returned to Blue Star... Let the ultimate boss transform into heaven and replace Gong Qinghuai with the heroine [crying] Too cruel! This is be [cry][cry][cry] I suddenly discovered that the most beautiful man incarnates in heaven and watches his beloved woman with other men. Isn't it just as cruel as the Little Mermaid turned into bubbles and his eternal soul in the sky watching his beloved prince with other women? This is "Son of the Sea". Maybe I wasn't that sad when I was little when I was watching "Son of the Sea", but now that I'm older and watching "Son of the Sea", I'm really sad [crying][crying][crying] If you don't eat the most beautiful man, and let him die, it is a fatal injury in the 1 female n male novel. Be should be marked because I won't read it after reading the introduction and don't want to feel sad. It's so sad right now, so I deducted one star for this. [Cry][cry][cry]

After looking at the homepage, I discovered that I had also read Rouse's previous book on cultivating immortals (Ye Linglong)! ! It's been sitting well on my bookshelf, and the plot of this new book is really interesting! ! It's particularly beautiful, it's a strong female character, and the foreshadowing is also very shocking! It's just a side story! ! ! Why did it end? There's not enough to watch TT. I also want to read the story of Qin Shu and her partners (x)! There is still hope for Qinghuai to realize his dream in the extra story! Oh yes! Almost forgot! Long Ming hasn't been served yet! ! ! This is the person who accompanies Shushu from beginning to end.

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The eldest heroine studies immortal literature, and the heroine becomes stronger very quickly. Compared with her, the male protagonists seem a bit weak, so they are basically protected by her. Moreover, there are not many descriptions of the male protagonist, and they may all be written around the female protagonist. The whole novel has the flavor of an ancient fairy tale, with a compact plot, but the early plot is not dramatic enough, has a high repetition rate, is unattractive, and some details are not very good, so I almost couldn't stick with it. After Xue Ziling came out in the later stage, the plot became smoother and the story became exciting. It was very attractive and I finished reading it in one go. The author's language is humorous, and there is a twist later on, so overall it's good. It's just that Gong Qinghuai has some regrets...

I think it's super good-looking. There's no jump in one page, it's the middle level of cultivation. The names of people will be messed up. Although they're written out of order, you can see that it doesn't affect your reading when you read them. Come on, author! Keep up the good work! If there are not too many mistakes, this book should be rated 9.2 Or above!

I finally finished reading it after working overtime [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face] To be honest, I personally like this book very much. It is about strong women. The subject matter is novel. The heroine is decisive in doing things in it. She has a clear distinction between love and hate. She is not like White Lotus and will never leave any trouble for herself.

It's very interesting to watch, the plot twists and turns, and at the same time, my mood was as ups and downs as your plot. It's super good, and it's also the only novel about cultivating immortals that I've finished reading. Super beautiful, I like the author very much [shy][shy][shy][adoration][adoration][adoration] But is the last little master Yuan Xin? ? ?

How to put it this way, this book is generally well written, but the author's writing style may still be insufficient and needs more practice. There are some lack of details in the middle, and the end ends too quickly. The beginning is better written, but this story should probably be used as a reference. I seem to have read a similar cultivation novel (male) before, and many of the plots in the middle are very similar. The rest of the story is a bit sloppy but still okay. Overall, it's pretty good. Basically, I would rate it around nine out of 10. I hope the author will work harder. [Like][Like]

The female protagonist is free-spirited and tenacious, the male protagonists are all stunning, the storyline is pretty good, and the twist of the big BOSS is quite big. I didn't expect that, people's hearts are really hard to guess [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

A different novel about cultivating immortals. It's very interesting. The heroine is decisive in doing things. Not the Holy Mother. The heroine's harem shed tears at the ending of Gong Qinghuai. The others are wonderful. I highly recommend it. Welcome to read it. The complete version of the novel about cultivating immortals.

It looks good [I learned it] [I learned it], but there are a lot of mistakes and it's a bit confusing and I can't pick it up! I hope the author will be more careful when reviewing and approving next time [cover face][cover face][cover face]

This book is the only one I have written about cultivating immortality and having multiple male protagonists. I am short of words and can't say anything better about it, but it is really good to read [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's pretty cool, a bit like a sex-changing male video

It's beautiful. It's definitely an excellent work by a female cultivator.