My Honkai: Star Rail: I Really Am Not Akivili

For the author who is greatly confused, perhaps the world can be developed along the dream, and the train crew's real-life feedback will be followed, but the relationship between Qiong and Qiong will not be exposed, only the relationship between development, so that the real feedback will remain mysterious between the pioneering forces, the civilization affected by Qiong, and the pioneering star gods, so that the train crew can feel that Akiwili is still alive, and move forward along the path of Qiong, and wait for the main line to be updated. Join in the fun, and continue to go back and forth after it is over. The civilization affected by the dome can be in various worlds, but it needs to be localized and cannot overshadow the star iron. As for the pioneering star god, it is enough to make the civilization affected by the dome think he is the pioneering star god. If you continue to follow the main line of the star iron, this can only be handled this way, otherwise the subsequent excitement will not be available and it will not be fun. 😂😂[laughing]

How can I put it? The imagination is very big, and the subject matter is also quite rare. MC plus Star Railway, but the author can practice his writing skills. At first, the impression was a bit uncomfortable, too divisive. At the same time, I also hope that this book will get better and better as it gets written.

Okay, okay, it's quite good-looking, and many of the jokes in it are well integrated. But I feel that entering a place like a copy is a bit too abrupt. It was like a star entering the dusk, so sudden. I hope it will be better written later.

Not bad. This point has not been deducted yet. It may be changed later. I am not opposed to a small number of emotional lines, but I am more opposed to emotional lines that are too long and poorly written. There is a kind of forced rhythm beauty.

This novel is quite good. It intersperses various settings with the original game plot, and it doesn't seem so abrupt and weird. I hope it can continue and don't stop updating. I really like reading fan fiction, but now many of them are interrupted halfway through writing or simply disappear. I hope this book will not follow the footsteps of the former. Come on ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧

It's beautiful, especially the mirror sequence, and be sure not to stop updating it! The only shortcoming is that there are too few words. I can only say that I feel sorry for my sister-in-law 😏

The story about Kage-ryu and the words Zaimu Shangqiong said to Kage-ryu really showed the author's writing style. It was really well written.

The ingredients are complicated but the control is good. It's a fanfic worth reading.

Very good, I really like the sentence in it: Playing with cubes Hey [note]

It looks good, but it feels messy