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For the author who is greatly confused, perhaps the world can be developed along the dream, and the train crew's real-life feedback will be followed, but the relationship between Qiong and Qiong will not be exposed, only the relationship between development, so that the real feedback will remain mysterious between the pioneering forces, the civilization affected by Qiong, and the pioneering star gods, so that the train crew can feel that Akiwili is still alive, and move forward along the path of Qiong, and wait for the main line to be updated. Join in the fun, and continue to go back and forth after it is over. The civilization affected by the dome can be in various worlds, but it needs to be localized and cannot overshadow the star iron. As for the pioneering star god, it is enough to make the civilization affected by the dome think he is the pioneering star god. If you continue to follow the main line of the star iron, this can only be handled this way, otherwise the subsequent excitement will not be available and it will not be fun. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing]

How can I put it? The imagination is very big, and the subject matter is also quite rare. MC plus Star Railway, but the author can practice his writing skills. At first, the impression was a bit uncomfortable, too divisive. At the same time, I also hope that this book will get better and better as it gets written.

Not bad. This point has not been deducted yet. It may be changed later. I am not opposed to a small number of emotional lines, but I am more opposed to emotional lines that are too long and poorly written. There is a kind of forced rhythm beauty.

Okay, okay, it's quite good-looking, and many of the jokes in it are well integrated. But I feel that entering a place like a copy is a bit too abrupt. It was like a star entering the dusk, so sudden. I hope it will be better written later.

The story about Kage-ryu and the words Zaimu Shangqiong said to Kage-ryu really showed the author's writing style. It was really well written.

It's beautiful, especially the mirror sequence, and be sure not to stop updating it! The only shortcoming is that there are too few words. I can only say that I feel sorry for my sister-in-law [laughing evilly]

This novel is quite good. It intersperses various settings with the original game plot, and it doesn't seem so abrupt and weird. I hope it can continue and don't stop updating. I really like reading fan fiction, but now many of them are interrupted halfway through writing or simply disappear. I hope this book will not follow the footsteps of the former. Come on ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧

Very good, I really like the sentence in it: Playing with cubes Hey [note]

The ingredients are complicated but the control is good. It's a fanfic worth reading.

Come on, is anyone watching?

Good job, a lot of jokes, but he is a genius if he can combine so many jokes.

It looks good, but it feels messy

At least so far, I have seen three protagonists, one in the past, one in the present, and one from the future. This is a very exciting novel, right? Author

Beautiful, really fun.

The imagination is very interesting, with elements of epilepsy but not deliberately artificial. The most important thing is that the author has his own original plot and it does not appear to be disconnected from Beng Tie's original plot. I just don't understand why the rating is so low?

Congratulations, GoDian's mental state has successfully captured a reader's 5 stars.

It's good, but there's no female protagonist?

The content is very interesting, I really enjoyed reading it

Holy shit, yes, guys.

Pretty good, just a little less

This author really makes me happy

Good luck (make up a number)

A good book, not bad

I haven't heard such weird stuff in a long time. The more I like it, the more I want to hear it.

It's so joyful. It's very interesting. It's not just seen in the starry sky. Some chapters are more abstract, but it's very funny.

Good! Good! Good! It has a lot of imagination and other shortcomings can be completely ignored. Having been short of books for so long, it turns out I am lacking this kind of book.

It's good-looking, and it's considered to be in the first echelon among star iron writers.

It has deep thoughts and many jokes. It is not blindly bound to the original plot of a single line. It is advanced with multiple timelines. It is very interesting.

A bit toxic, but okay. It can be seen that the author writes very seriously, and I enjoyed reading it.

Good, very charming, good-looking, love watching it