Zone Zero: the Legendary Cave Thief [Pilot]

Pilot Writer, give it a five-star rating. After all, some of it is pretty good, so don't stop it.

It's quite creative, the writing is pretty good, there's no poisonous point (I didn't see it anyway), and Titanfall 2 itself is pretty popular. It's a popular game after all, and the author really writes it well.

The plot is rigorous (I don't even remember that the smart pistol has 18 bullets, I always thought it was 12), reasonable, smooth, exciting, and clearly explained (you can put the explanation after the original text, instead of replying one by one in the comments). The early world view is a bit of a stalemate, but considering that some people may not understand it, it is still said. And, you must still have a manuscript, so spit it out! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Titanfall is rare, but unfortunately the heat is also difficult to watch. [Laughing][laughing]

A book that combines Titanfall 2 and Zone Zero is considered a new development. Generally speaking, there are no regrets. The writing is young and the structure is a bit confusing, but it is still a good book. After all, there will always be people who imagine that you can use mechas in Zone Zero. In the later stages, I wrote it a bit too fast, neglected a lot of content, and the combat power collapsed. I hope that after the author's writing improves, he can continue to write a new chapter or rewrite it. After all, this is the first pioneering new book that combines the two without much difference. Finally, I wish the author to write his most satisfying work. "Moderately worth a visit"

The two IPs of Zero Zone and Titanfall are really good together. I hope the author will not stop updating them! [Like][Like][Like]

Personally, I think this book is good, and I am a little curious about the plot behind it. I hope it doesn't collapse later.

It doesn't matter if updates are slow! [Blows a kiss] You have to remember that you have an unfinished book! [Smile]

This book is still very good, and it can be regarded as one of the few Titanfall fanfics. The overall quality is still quite high, but I hope the author can give more scenes to the protagonist. There is no need to give too much ink to the original plot, which will look particularly boring.

Where can I find someone who can play TTF2 and Zero Zone for you?

Very good, the plot is also great. My suggestion is to let the protagonist have the dragon bone cannon of Undertale. If the author doesn't understand, watch the animation of Undertale and pick the one with ink sans and fatal error sans.

It's really well written. Not many people write about Titanfall nowadays.

The main character is a bit awkward, but the author writes it very well.

Good luck to the author for the high school entrance exam. Oh my god, the author's writing skills are so good in the third grade of junior high school. Now that I look at myself, well, I'm useless. Good luck to the author for the high school entrance exam. I wish you success in the exam. Come on, go for it! ! !

I was able to write like this when I was in the third grade of junior high school. I can only say that there is no shortage of geniuses in this green space.

Very good book Also please pay more attention to The author expressed that 2000 fans cosplayed with Ai Lian [laughing evilly]

This is a good novel for those who like Titanfall and Zone Zero.

The subject matter of Titanfall alone is very attractive, and the quality is also online.

The writing style of the third grade of junior high school is also the "qualification of the emperor"! Five points of spiritual treasures in the world: Xuanhuang, the supreme being of heaven and earth. This book is an innate treasure that can evolve with the author. Although it is only a mysterious treasure at the moment, it might be possible to cultivate and refine it carefully in the future to create a supreme being in the fan world! Fellow Taoists, I wish the author good luck in overcoming the tribulation, and we are eagerly awaiting the birth of the Supreme Being [laughing evilly]

You can see the outline of this kind of article at a glance. Send the manuscript over and I will revise it for you [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The writing is very good. Congratulations on the success of your book. I hope you can become more experienced. Happy New Year's Eve.

It feels like Mi Huyou has finally become a human being, and this fan author is also very powerful, turning Mi Huyou into MiHoYo!

Very interesting, give the author a big boost (ง•̀_•́)ง

Personally, I think this is the best Zetsu Zone Zero fanfic I have ever seen, and I hope I can keep writing about it.

I finally found a Juzu Zero fanfic that I can read [Blow Kiss]

It looks good, but the author may be short of razor blades at home [laughter]

As a rope maker, I still like it very much, and I hope the author can finish it.

Beautiful, but few words

This book is okay, I give it a five

Suitable for my taste.