Fire Phoenix *********

It gives people the feeling that you are telling a story. You don't write the key points. You just write directly about Ye Cunxin.

There are too many things that describe the inner world. I only wrote one paragraph for each exercise. I read a few chapters about the description of Ye Cunxin cheering herself up, and then repeated many, many paragraphs. [Facepalm] I always feel that when Ye Cunxin is reborn, the first priority should be to avoid the sacrifices made before, and then think about the battle with Lei Zhan. I always feel like something is not quite right. Sorry, please give me an objective review.