I Asked You to Work During the Summer Vacation, but You Demolished the Cave?

This is quite good, it may be a little rough at the beginning, but it doesn't break down when the world view unfolds in chapter 250. It's very good. The heroine's portrayal is also very good. For me, it's better than many high-scoring novels I've read. It keeps me reading. There are many books above 9.3 That I can't stand. This kind of novel seems to be more to my taste. [Like] [Like] [Like] Why is it so vicious after writing three hundred chapters? Is it interesting for you to either write the heroine to death or resuscitate her once and for all? It was so infuriating that I gave up the book.

Children, I have tried the poison for you. It looks good. If you like simulations, you can come and have a look. It is also more perfect than opening a harem love line. There are not a lot of harems like other simulation novels, and there are always only one or two female protagonists. Although there is one flaw, it is the part where the ex-girlfriend said she hated the male protagonist and said that he had tainted her perfect life, which was criticized by subsequent readers. However, his ex-girlfriend has indeed done a lot of things to contribute to the human race in the future. The male protagonist has never forgiven her, but he has not targeted her. The plot is also relatively novel, Ps (I don't take the money, this is my true opinion)

My sister-in-law is very comfortable, there is no pilling at all, and it does not cover my feet. It is also very clean after washing. The quality is very good. It is consistent with the seller's description. The children especially like to eat it. The pattern is very good, the fabric is comfortable, and the size is standard. I bought it. The quality is very good. It is consistent with the seller's description. The children especially like it. Eat, the fit is very good, the fabric is comfortable, the size is standard, the cup does not stick and lasts for a long time, the orange color is more white, the hair is very smooth after washing and the hair is not oily, the screen is clear and runs smoothly, sensitive skin can use it without any pressure, the grip is comfortable and does not hurt the gums, I will put a few books every time I cook, I am very satisfied

This kind of novel is my favorite type. It is humorous, crushing, not verbose, if you can't beat it, it will be ④. Next time the simulation can be destroyed with a wave of your hand, cool writing, multi-universe elements, the end of technology is to cultivate immortality hahahaha

I finished reading 216 chapters in one go. Overall, it was good. I barely managed to get a second heroine until this point. I can skip the relationship aspect. Basically, I wrote about the growth of strength and the simulation of the main content. The general content is that I didn't travel to an outrageous world. It started from the same world. The low-level world and the intermediate world are the same world, and the high-level world is the world 1,000 years in the future from the main world. Catacombs are mainly a test from heaven and earth to a civilization. After passing it, there will be great benefits for recovery. If you fail, the planet will explode or become a Death Star. This is also the general introduction of Chapter 216 I read.

First. The plot design is excellent. The story begins with a seemingly ordinary event and gradually reveals one mystery after another, making people want to stop. Every twist and turn is a surprise, and every ending is thought-provoking. This tight rhythm and suspenseful setting made me feel like I was in a world full of fantasy. Secondly, the author's portrayal of human nature is profound. Through the psychological description of the protagonist, he shows the complexity and contradiction of human nature. The protagonist has both a kind and brave side and a weak and selfish side. This true portrayal of humanity gave me a deeper understanding and empathy for people. In addition, a unique interpretation of life is provided. The author reveals the true meaning and value of life through careful observation of various social phenomena and life details. These insights gave me a new perspective on life and inspired my thoughts and expectations for the future. Overall, this is a novel worth reading again and again.

I don't know why the rating is so low, but in my opinion, this book is quite good-looking and the content is remarkable. Although there are some small poisonous points and a lot of typos, the overall content is still good. I can recommend it.

The fighting chicken in the simulation is good. I finished reading it in one sitting. Come on! Simulated protagonist: I have been walking on thin ice in this life. Do you think I can make it to the other side in this life? Emulator, start

Comparing it with other books, I think it is just average. The whole process is very depressing, and there is no excitement or expectation. Which book should you compare it to? The starting point ~ (Millennium Rewind) This book is a simulation. The starting point is to travel through a thousand years after falling asleep, and use the scientific and technological knowledge of the thousand years later to give back to the modern age. Modern technology will develop for another thousand years, and then travel back to the thousand years later. Then use the learned knowledge to feed back to the modern era, controllable nuclear fusion, curvature navigation, and quantum immortality, step by step to save the earth that was destroyed by an unknown powerful civilization. . . . And this book is like a first-level crayfish,,, a full-level crayfish,,, not interesting. The readers have no intuitive feeling about the power of magic, martial arts, and martial gods. Reading fantasy is like going to see a Chinese doctor for a fever. Chinese medicine: imbalance of yin and yang, invasion of evil fire. Modern technology: Bacterial and viral infections The immune system raises the body's temperature to create an environment suitable for immune cells. . . . . .

I haven't seen enough. The outline is enough. But judging from the levels of combat power I have seen before, well... I haven't left the novice village yet. There are also levels in the starry sky that are divided into four major stages. There are thirty stages for the lower three, middle three, high school, and ten stages for the top level. After that, there is the main god level. The top level is the Creator. After leaving the universe, there are various stages one after another. I have to say that the author's novel reminds me of a one-two-minute dream I had a few years ago. The background is the starry sky and the stars. In front of me is a bloody continent with no living beings. There is only one person who only kills. In the dream, I am there as soon as I open my eyes. I see it right in front of me, but I can't get close. There are bones at my feet. Only the face is a helmet. Only the red light of the eyes is left. Under the seat is a throne, made of all kinds of bones. I can't see if I opened my mouth, but there is a sound. It was like it was told to me. It only said, "Your death will bring you new life." Then I woke up and looked at my watch. Less than three minutes had passed. But the concept of time in the dream told me that I had spent centuries or even epochs in it. Time passed very quickly, but I could sense that I didn't dream after that. Although it was short-lived, my memory was profound.

It's so vivid, I feel like my language proficiency and imagination have improved, and I can also play jokes, the content is new, the plot is full of emotions, it describes the joys and sorrows of the world, the feeling of first love, the sadness of not being able to love, and the smoothness after understanding everything.

The plot of finding the heroine Li Ruoxi was so good that I didn't find the heroine until the finale! Great, brothers, go and see, you can't let me be poisoned alone!

The structure of this book is quite clear, and the plot is well handled, but the rating is not 9.0. Someone in the comment area said that a heroine jumped out of a simulation, so he gave it two stars [facepalm]. Is this the type of novel that does not meet his expectations? Anyway, cheers, author.

I should have read the comments earlier, but why are you so deceptive? If you have any problems, you don't tell me earlier, and yet they all give you five stars. It pisses me off so much that I'll give it five stars too.

The writing is great. It is currently the most popular and best-written tomato simulation novel. It took me two or three days to read it all. At first, I thought that this setting would definitely collapse because the simulation consumes too few resources and is too easy to obtain. The protagonist's level of advancement is so fast that the author may not be able to hold it down because of insufficient writing power. I didn't expect it to be well written, one map within another. And the simulation article is not completely started from scratch. The middle part of the simulation is entered with cultivation level, and the six most recent top simulation worlds are written, which are divided into six categories of maps: cultivation, tradition, fantasy, etc. The framework is well done. At present, I have written about the plot in the world of cultivating immortals. The characterization of the protagonist, the master, is quite profound, and it may have left some foreshadowing. And there are no major pain points in the whole text, so it's quite enjoyable to read. At first, I felt that the introduction to the work could attract people to read it, but the title of the book was a bit abstract. It is recommended that the author think carefully about how to choose a name that will be more attractive. You can refer to these two book titles "The Sims, Eventually Becoming the Supreme Martial Ancestor" and "The Road to the Martial Ancestor: A Legend Beginning with Simulation", and it will feel better than yours. I think the update speed needs to be improved. Three chapters a day is not enough to read. I guess I have to keep reading. Overall, this book is relatively good among simulation texts. There are no big logical problems. Whether it is the plot, map or character creation, it is generally pretty good. At present, simulation writing is not yet mainstream in Tomato, but I feel that this type is still great in fast-paced cool writing. If you like watching simulations or cool articles, you can give it a try. If you can't stop, you'll be done with it.

The female channel is a bit unbelievable in terms of martial arts, and romance accounts for the most part. Anyway, it looks pretty good. There are women inside the simulation, and there are women outside. You say it's a harem, but I watched it for a long time, and in reality, I fell in love with an ex-girlfriend. It's quite funny. Anyway, it doesn't look right at first glance. There is also time confusion. Although the simulator will be like this in the later stage, this is the first novel I have seen that is messed up like this. Maybe it is because my brain is not good, but it is very uncomfortable to watch later.

My ex-girlfriend was fine. There was no irony in the breakup. It was good to break up peacefully because our paths were different.

I haven't read it since I saw Xiuxian. It's just a matryoshka novel, but it's really fun. The author is very talented. I think every time I open a novel in a simulated world and improve the settings, the results will definitely be better. It's quite interesting.

As a 1000-hour bookworm, I think it's a little bit toxic, but overall it's okay. The character reconstruction is also okay. Others may have some opinions about the ex-girlfriend, but it's okay. The world view of this book seems a bit big. I don't know what level the author has written. I would like to give you some encouragement first.

There are actually a lot of bad points in the early stage, especially the protagonist's attitude and mentality, but overall the author has a clear sense of third person when writing, and there will be no bugs or lags due to problems with the protagonist's brain and IQ. It got better in the later stages, and I felt like I got better and better as I watched it. The line with the demon brother was also pretty good. Although there was a lot of criticism about reconciling with the ex-girlfriend, I personally felt that it was completely acceptable, because the breakup was originally due to ignorance and lack of opinion. After arriving at the Tianjiao training camp, I still wanted to become stronger and go back to protect the male protagonist. However, due to the crossing of the male protagonist's timeline, the male protagonist lost his perspective (supporting reconciliation, as for whether it can be done depends on the author's writing, it doesn't have much impact). I can only say that this book is quite comfortable to read in one breath, and it will get better after being stabbed twice, but it is not suitable for more rigorous readers. To be honest, the combat power level and talent are a bit broken, but it is not a big problem [take a closer look]

It would be nice if there was a single female protagonist. The emotional writing is quite good.

It was okay. The combat power was severely suppressed in the mid-term, which made me laugh out loud, but it has been corrected later (although it is still a little stressful)

Five stars. I don't know why the rating is so low. It's very beautiful and enjoyable. It's not overwhelming.

Update… When you update, subtle flaws and warts will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. Let the author read to me: I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I won't play games or socialize. I will burst into words, life and death. I take pleasure in coding, and I am worthy of my readers, my youth, and my future. I am the keyboard in the dark, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet: the fire that resists the cold, the light at dawn. I dedicate my life and glory to coding, tonight and every night. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship!

Really, I am an old bookworm. I have read many novels for so long and have not finished them. This novel you wrote is really great. Keep up the hard work. The author is great. You must finish it! It must be perfect! Come on, come on, come on

Forehead. . . . It's okay. The only bad point is that the ex-girlfriend has been cleared. The eldest heroine's early photos are a bit perfect, and she looks like Bai Yueguang. The second heroine has been getting along day and night for tens of thousands of years, and their relationship is just okay. Now when they come to Juexian Continent, they just default to the devil, and they are targeted too much. If it weren't for the underground cave problem, it feels like they will fight to the death. Overall, it's pretty good. The poisonous points are acceptable. I threw my brain away. I still can't put it down after reading it. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but considering that you update three times a day, I'll give it one more star. I hope the author will work hard and get a 9.0 Rating. I hope it won't be too early or I will curse.

It really gets more and more interesting later on, and it's worth recommending. The one about the Dark Demon made me very sad. Two people were together for tens of thousands of years, then died, and then met again after being reborn. That feeling of loneliness for thousands of years, oh my. . . . This time, maybe we can make it to the end. Xiao Heizi retreats, it is worth watching.

Although the ex-girlfriend was a bit poisonous, at least she got it; the other ones were a bit flawed, but at least they were a little bit good; tomatoes can't be considered gold in shit; but it's enough for Lao Ba

Write more about simulation content and less about reality. Your simulation content is very interesting, but the reality is more realistic. . . . . . . . One,,,,,,. . . . . . . ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Do you think I can become a high-quality commentator without any guidance? I'll make you some Sunday prayers, no prayers, no prayers. I want to be a quality comment, I want to be a quality comment\jjdbdhxjjdbshdjdjjdhdhdbdhhdhdhdhjxhcj

It's really okay. I've read 100 chapters and plan to continue reading. And you also wrote two songs, which I listen to now and they are also very good. If you are not an author, you really know how to write songs. The contents of the simulator. Taking the first world as one, the second simulated world is based on the first simulated world. I don't know how many years have passed, and then the current world is developed in the second world. Now it feels like Nanfu has a reincarnation system, and then it keeps adding points to become stronger and save the world. I haven't watched the third one yet, so I'll take a look first.