HP: the Consequences of Being a Heartthrob Without Knowing It

I can't describe the beauty of this novel in words, but Tom's suffocating and sticky love, Harry's paranoid and forbearing love, and Draco's arrogant and stubborn heartbeat, together create a life that is unique to Travers.

Super beautiful, but I feel sorry for you Yas. Out of dependence on my best friend, I chose Slytherin, the same house as him. I met a not so good person the first time I had a heartbeat. I like freedom and Quidditch, but I was imprisoned for a year and missed the Quidditch match. Sai, and was suffering from a curse and had to face the torture of time. When he woke up again, although he met a good friend, his friend had amnesia and died. This is the timeline of the knife meeting, but he didn't know. I think Yas's feelings for Xiao Fu should be. Yas: I don't want you to love me, I want you to respect me. "I want the mountains, the sea, and freedom." After all, what could be wrong with someone who wants to be free?

God, this is the most beautiful HP fanfic I have ever read. Tom Riddle is breathtakingly handsome. The author writes more about forced love. I want to see more interactions between Sith and Tom.

You may not know it, but I can tell at a glance that Yas and I are a real official match! Yas, baby, baby!💋💋💋💋💋

The character of the male protagonist is good, but the plot is a bit sadistic. I am reincarnated and no one around me knows me... In fact, Riddle still loves the protagonist, but it is more possessive and paranoid. It belongs to the only pure land in the heart and is redemption. Once it is gone, he will go crazy.

The relationship between the male protagonist and Riddle is quite good, but the pace of the novel is too fast and the plot is not obvious, and the characters' personalities are not very clear. In fact, I think the setting of this book is quite interesting and I can write a medium-length novel.

This book has a very clever setting, which is the time magic contained in the bloodline of the protagonist. It cleverly solves the age span between Snape, Tom, Harry, Sirius, Draco, etc., And the transition is relatively natural. It will not say that there is any age difference or anything else. The timeline of this book is not based on the original, but it is very compact, and it implements the label of heartthrob very well. Most of the outstanding people in the book will fall in love with Yas, except for what I mentioned above. There are also Gemini and Cedric who are both in love with Yas. They don't have many cars, but they love a lot. The similarity between Harry and Tom is their desire for exclusivity towards Yas. Sirius's love to the end is a kind of relief. Draco's love is special, single-minded and patient, giving all special exceptions to Yas. Cedric is amazed by Yas and impressed by his personality charm. The Gemini is because Yas is different from other people. Yas is interesting and special to them, attracting them. Snape is a kind of caring, dependent, and protective love. He is willing to do many things for Yas. He doesn't care about death, resistance, concealment, etc. He only cares about Yas. Yas is a thread that holds him, and Yas is also to Tom. In this way, Tom changed for Yas. Rather than saying that Yas saved him, it was love and warmth that saved him, and this all came from Yas. Yas was salvation for all of them. Both Tom and Harry hated that the bright moon was not shining alone on me. , Snape and Sirius are the ones who hate to let the bright moon hang high in the sky, Draco hates that the bright moon hangs high in the sky and does not shine on me alone, there are too many people around Yas, the second generation devil, savior, Gryffindor's former outstanding student, and the dean of Slytherin. ···Draco is too insignificant in it, and Yas's love for him is too little, so he is jealous, sad, and wronged... He hates that the bright moon hangs high and does not shine on me. Their feelings are too delicate and difficult to summarize, so they are particularly attractive. Of course, this book is not all good. The shortcomings are too many typos and confusing paragraphs. The rest is good.

The timeline is confusing, for Yas to meet them...

Beautiful (♥∀♥)! It's been a long time since I've seen such an interesting HP fan novel. The author, please don't give up! ! (It doesn't matter if the updates are slower, after all, writing requires inspiration)

I've finished it. I've finished it. I feel so mixed. But it's so beautiful. I feel like I can't get out. But the author, I want to see a side story between the twins and the protagonist. Please~ [Blow a kiss]

The setting of this book is quite interesting, I like it very much. But to be honest, there are many grammatical errors. In many places, the subject is missing or the word order is reversed. In some places, there are grammatical errors or sentence fragmentation errors. The reading is not very smooth, so I can only give 4 stars.

It's really beautiful. To be honest, I don't know why this book is only rated 7 points, but I think it should be worth 9 points. It's really beautiful. I'm not the author, but this is the second time I've read it. I beg you, can you write a few more extras? It's really great. I really recommend you to watch it. It's great. It's really beautiful. I've been watching it continuously these past few days, at night, during the day, and at noon. Really beautiful Very, very beautiful

Really nice to look at. It probably tells the story of the widow of a particularly awesome family who grew up with Tom and then fell in love with them in various time and space. Anyway, I really like it, even though I'm halfway through watching it! Of course they were all at Hallwarts.

It's so beautiful. I'm so excited when I watch CP. Yasi really feels like CP with everyone. Don't stop updating it. It's so well written [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

I love Yas so much, so beautiful [Adoration]

Nice! ! ! I really like the character design of Yas, the writing style is exquisite and full of emotions.

It looks good, but there are too few of them. Have you considered writing a spin-off? Please [cry]

Baby Yas's character design is really plump, and the emotional lines are handled very well. It's really beautiful ヽ(爱´∀'爱)ノ

This is so beautiful

It looks good, but now I have no idea who the male protagonist is... Yasi finally has a good ending...

I love this kind of article so much, I hope the author will not give up, otherwise I will really cry to death [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Watch it carefully, watch it carefully, mainly hope that Tom can be with the protagonist

I swiped it twice with one phone and four times with two phones 😓😓sos. It's so beautiful. I didn't expect to come back and swipe it again. I can't say anything nice. I only have countless words that are so beautiful. You know [crying] [crying] [admiration]

I really love Yas, the character setting is very unique, the protagonist travels through time, it feels very good [Adoration][Adoration][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

Thank you to the author for writing!

Big cheers for the author!

Great writing in big letters, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

It's so exciting. The magic setting is really exciting.

I like it very much. This is the first time I see someone who can still kiss after the war. I really like it [blowing kiss]

I personally think this book has a strong sense of pull. The characters are also quite fleshed out. And I really enjoyed reading this book. [Send heart][Love][Love]