Star Rain Falls on the Cold River

Currently following the latest chapter, I personally feel that the male protagonist is particularly likable. He is thoughtful, not lewd, and low-key. He is dedicated to achieving his goals, and occasionally helps people in difficulty. I feel that as he grows older, he will definitely become a very old devil in the future. Very attractive

If nothing else, the emotional writing of this book is truly first-rate.

I haven't had such a good time reading it recently. I stayed up late to read it. It's well written. I think it's the author's first time writing it. There are some minor issues. It's already good on Tomato. First of all, every time I open a map, it's like playing a game. Missions are automatically triggered when you arrive. It feels too mechanical. Moreover, the protagonist automatically receives missions. Some small sub-plots should not be mentioned in a sentence or two. For example, if you don't move, Sending letters and conveying news has nothing to do with the main plot, so use something else. The second author likes to use flashbacks and interludes. The first chapter is fine. Starting from more than 400 chapters, for those who read quickly, it is easy to get confused. You have to read the previous chapters carefully. Others are just small flaws in my personal opinion, not a big problem. The most important thing is that one update a day is too few. I hope I can write more.

Not bad. Although it is traditional, if it is written well, it will still look good. It is rare to see such a positive protagonist, but the previous performance was too naive. Maybe he is used to seeing those who are decisive and evil, and he is a little uncomfortable with it. But when you bring the protagonist's living environment as a child (except for the initial difficulties, he did not meet any bad people, he is as naive as a contemporary college student who has not been out of society, and does not think so much), his behavior feels quite normal. I hope I won't be a eunuch or a bad guy,

He is a rare decent male protagonist. I support him.

The protagonist looks a bit like the anime version of Old Devil Han

It feels like the best mortal person I have ever seen cultivating immortality. However, I feel that the progress of multiple female protagonists is slow, and only a few have a tendency to date.

It's okay. The plot progresses slowly. It's not a regular cool novel. The character portrayal is okay. The protagonist never knows what the poisonous effect is. I guess it's because the author is afraid that it will be difficult to write emotional scenes later, right? [What] [What]

The Story of Xuedi Wa's Cultivation to Immortality

This is a novel that suits my taste. I still like the male protagonist to have a positive image. Those who are both good and evil would be boring after reading dozens of chapters as a cool novel.

It is a very traditional slow-paced article! Is it necessary to insert some stories from passers-by from time to time to ease the daily plot? From the front, it looks like the kind of person who walks around the world and then goes to a local teahouse and listens to people telling stories. It's quite interesting.

Yes, I agree with you. Keep up the good work.

Very well written I hope it can continue like this Big cheers for the author (☆▽☆)

The plane of the protagonist's mother will not be similar to the spiritual world in the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Right now, the protagonist is still developing in the human world. I hope the author will give the protagonist some opportunities to improve his spiritual roots, and then the blood can evolve or something to become an awesome physique, which will help the protagonist to improve his body shape.

In today's fast-paced world, it's rare to see such eloquent and delicate writing. It's very beautiful.

Very good, the writing is delicate and worth recommending [Like]

It's so beautiful. It's not the kind of mindless and cool writing. It's very in-depth and awesome.

After watching it for a while, I thought it was okay. The plot is not cliche. The most important thing is that the characters are not brainless and have vivid personalities.

Really beautiful, well written

As a mortal fan, I personally feel that the content of the first volume in Muyun City can be summarized by the song "Return Date", while the content of the second volume is "Young Extraordinary" [Shy]

So beautiful. The more you look at it, the better it looks This book is really good. The coherent plot is linked one by one.

Yoxi, I haven't read such a good article in a long time. Lin Fanchongchongchong.

The protagonist has a positive outlook on life and the overall story has a clear logic. Although some plots are very sad, they are also memorable. Come on, author!

It's really a classic fantasy fairy tale. Although the plot is currently single, the emotions are sincere.

The author will surely become popular if he persists

This writing style is much better than those books with 8 or 9 points, but why are the ratings and popularity so low? I hope the author can update it well.

So the heroine is Liu?

It's good to watch and binge-watch the drama.

Very nice, okay

Very nice, good luck to the author!