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A fan of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. This is my first time watching this kind of fanfic, and I have a very good impression. The heroine is strong and well versed in the art of running around, and is not a thigh-hugging style (although she did have the desire to please the thigh-hugging when she first knew Han Li from her hometown, but she is not that kind of person after all. She has an independent and enterprising personality, and a strong will to live forever, and she has been working hard to strengthen herself). Han Li doesn't make many appearances, and the article's perspective follows the heroine. The two are actually Taoist couples, so they will definitely get along sometimes, but the process of the heroine's own fighting and escalation is more exciting and exciting. It's still very similar to my impression of Han Laomo in the early stage. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist does not focus on falling in love at all. They are both people who seek immortality and seek immortality. Basically, there is no emotional pull, it just comes naturally. I'm looking forward to the "running combination" between the two of them in the later stage of "fighting if you can beat them, running away if you can't beat them" [laughing and crying]

This book is going to be popular, so I listened to it. My thoughts after listening to it: It can be said that it beats 99% of Tomato, male channel, fantasy and immortality novels of the same type. If people who particularly like fantasy and immortality novels really finish reading it, I believe 99% of them will stay and read it. Hmm... If you want to say there's nothing outstanding about this book, it doesn't. But it can also be said that it shines everywhere! This book does not suffer from the same stupid mistakes and poisonous points. The protagonist is calm, sober, fruitful, perseverant, honest, brave, and occasionally naughty. It can be said that the author has vividly enriched the image of a flesh-and-blood protagonist. He is not blindly evil, nor is he inexplicably nosy. The plot is extremely smooth, and the main plot is not delayed or confusing. On the contrary, if you listen to the whole process, you can't stop, it is very satisfying and enjoyable. The following is a verbose point You will find that the protagonist is not influenced by any bullshit view of good and evil, he is my way, You will find that the protagonist has nothing to do before he fights. If there is a problem, just do it. If there is no problem, let's keep the same. You will find that the protagonist is extremely cautious, confirms the price before taking action, does not care about transactions, does not suffer losses, and knows how to measure and be general. You will find that the protagonist has no curiosity after the fight. The first thing he does is pack up and run away, and then reap the rewards afterwards. You will find that the protagonist is not greedy, but dares to fight. After a series of waiting, the author has finally understood all the taboos and lightning protection points of male fantasy fairy tales.

I have never read Mortals' Cultivation of Immortality, and I have no interest in CP. Although this book has a male protagonist, it suits my taste. Personally, I used to feel disgusted when I saw a female protagonist meet a male protagonist. The main reason is that the female protagonist is originally good, but the male protagonist who appears has to be stronger than the female protagonist, or there is something to suppress the female protagonist, or the author has to make the female protagonist do some mindless behavior to promote the relationship between the two, and it is even obvious that some large plots are specifically designed to pave the way for the relationship, and so on. The same goes for watching male videos, I don't like emotional lines either. In short, I am the iron-blooded controller. The protagonist can be a growth type, but I will not accept someone who grows up with her but overwhelms her. This article does not have the above problems. I read it in one go and it was a pleasure. Opportunity and hard work are mixed together. If you get the opportunity, you will quickly absorb the precipitation and turn it into strength. I like this. The hook is very suitable. It is a type of auxiliary that requires the heroine's active efforts to be useful, but the effect is not too small. It lays the foundation for the heroine to practice faster and stronger than others. However, the heroine's desperate search for opportunities makes people feel that the heroine will not be useless without this trick. There is also a small but modulating interaction with the male protagonist. It is very dull, but inexplicably sweet, and there is a feeling of like-mindedness and common progress. (Of course, the above are my feelings as a person who has never read the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. I am purely evaluating the Cultivation of Immortality.) Finally, regarding some comments, I would like to say that there is really no need for the protagonist to be so beautiful that people want to get close but dare not get close to her. You can tell from the author's writing that he is not someone who places special emphasis on appearance description. If you want to read this kind of thing, you can read the heartthrob novels, there are many of them. (Ps. I will also read it, not discriminating against this kind of article) Please don't ask for such beautiful heroines who are everywhere in the article that I finally found, which doesn't feel like a fast-food Internet article. Really, please. I just like the clear eyes of the heroine and her tenacity from the inside out! In addition, the heroine is also a beautiful girl with bright eyes and white teeth. Why do we keep saying that she is not so beautiful that no one can compare to her. Author, as long as you keep updating, I will always support you~

@ ANT ya hey The author is very good-looking, but can he make the protagonist the most beautiful woman in the book, the most gorgeous one among all the beauties? I would like to write a paragraph to describe the beauty of the protagonist in detail. For example, I can give you an example of crescent eyebrows, a pair of eyes that are very smart, as if there is mist, blurred and moving, beautiful red lips, loose black hair, unparalleled beauty, and unparalleled grace. The body is full of fragrance, making people want to get close but can't bear to get close. The smile is bright and bright, ethereal and friendly, making people feel like a spring breeze, and the moving brilliance can eclipse the sun and the moon.

It is a very hard-core fairy tale, unlike other fan fictions like "Second Heaven, Second Earth, Second Explosion", you can calm down and watch, the characters are well described, but I am not sure if the author has read the original work, he should be watching the anime. The description of the environment is slightly insufficient, and the details of the fighting can be more vivid. To make the characters have a three-dimensional sense, some small humor can be added in the middle, which makes it more interesting to read. It is recommended that the author add some of his own settings in the later stage. The focus of fan fiction is imagination and description. I could also write more psychological descriptions, but the author's logic should be good, and the writing is very real, making people feel that this is a vivid world. I suggest that after reading this book, you can open another book about cultivating immortals. Personally, I hope it will still be a heroine. Overall, it is good. Support [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] @ ANT ya hey I highly recommend an article on cultivating immortality written by an author, you can learn from it. @ Lemon tea sour ya! "Mortals cultivate immortality, but immortal lolita"

Jie Jie Jie, we need stronger men and stronger women. I hope that in the Xutian Temple, Kunwu Mountain, and the spiritual realm, the heroine's cultivation will be impressive, and she can be domineering and protect her husband in the place where Old Demon Han feels aggrieved [angry][angry][angry][angry] Jiang Tianzun has arrived~Little Hanzi is waiting to pick him up~

A rare female fandom fan, I recently watched the anime and really enjoyed it. The heroine is not a lover but is devoted to the Tao. It's very similar to anime Korea's idea. He devoted himself to cultivation, and his relationship with the male protagonist, whom he met at a young age, led to him cultivating immortality together. The heroine is not the kind of person who knows how to take advantage of the plot, and the fights are also very powerful. Very well written. Looking forward to the end.

It's very beautiful. It's not a weak heroine. I think it's well written. It's a bit similar to the style of a big heroine. She lives in the same village as Han Li. The cp should be Han Li. The heroine has a good personality. She doesn't have too much characterization and doesn't need to rely on men. She's very sober. This is the first female comic book I've read. There are really few female comic strips. I like it very much. It is unfolded from the perspective of the heroine, with two powerful characters, and the protagonist's character is not broken. It is not the kind of exciting story that lasts for seconds. The plot really feels calm and delicate, and there is no talk of competing with the protagonist for opportunities. It feels like pursuing her own path. The heroine has a tough character. If Han Li had another woman, although he would feel uncomfortable in his heart, he would still choose himself. Tao, when I saw the article, I felt that it was really well-written. It was not limited to love. It was not about romance, but it just felt like it was really lacking. I finished reading it in one go. Please update it ten times a day. I also talked about the appearance of the heroine. I think this is quite good. Although it is not a stunning beauty, it is above average. Why should an ordinary person with no background be so beautiful? Are you going to be a furnace for others? Or do you want to compete with other heroines? This civilization has not said that there will be any situations such as female competition, and there is no intelligence reduction. The phenomenon of popular literature, I feel it is better than most of the novels written by men. Currently, this mortal fanfic ranks first in my heart. For me, it feels like 9.4 And above

Such a beautiful fanfic, fortunately it has been added to the bookshelf. The author will continue to update it. It's okay, we will cheer you on. I'm looking for connections to move the book out, but why is it blocked? What's going on? Has it been reported?

This is my first time watching a female fandom fanfic, it's quite interesting! I don't like to see mortals stealing Han Li's chance. The heroine of this article has her own opportunities and her own path! The heroine is well-characterized, with a firm mind, clear goals, and alertness and prudence. The male protagonist Han Li hopes that his character will not be too bad. He is also committed to immortality and will never get tired of his emotions, so he should not have too many emotional scenes. Compared with ordinary people who put interest first, this article seems to be a little more humane. If the article is well written, you can find your own way. By the way, I also reviewed the general plot of Mortal, which was quite good.

I read the comments before reading it. Many people said that marrying Han Li was a trap. I didn't like this setting at first, but there are really not many good-looking mortal fics. After reading it, I didn't feel that it was surprising. It was very suitable for my taste, and I almost missed it. You shouldn't accept other women, right? But I still hope that I can save Xin Ruyin.

The best fan of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. If you don't like your personal opinions, don't comment.

Okay, this is the first book I've seen in which the protagonist and Han Li don't have intrigues, which is good. They become Taoist lovers, which is quite interesting.

The writing style and characters are very nice, and the relationship between the protagonist and Han Paopao is natural and not abrupt. I will continue to work hard and try to write a Paopao husband and wife duo [Blow Kiss]

It's good-looking, there's not much romance content, it's just a childhood sweetheart, the two of them are more serious types, and they won't seem boring. The main plot is more about the heroine practicing seriously and becoming stronger along the way, which is very good! [Praise]

The writing is quite good, but I don't really like being involved with Lao Han. We are close to each other, so there is no need to go further unless you can accept Lao Han's constant confidante.

Why was it blocked? Please follow up.

The author will update soon. I'm a fan of Han Xianzun, and I'm also a fan of yours. It's pretty cool [laughing] Come on, author! He came here with five stars [full] [full] [full]

Your writing is really good. Although I have not read the original book, I think your book really hooks me. I will keep urging you to read more✨ ("\(●-●) \ / 0\ \ ( )" \__T__/

It's the first time I've seen a fanfic about Mortal Cultivation of Immortality in Persimmon. It's okay, but the description isn't detailed enough? Perhaps. In the novel, Han Paopao is said to be unclean. I hope the male and female protagonists are both clean.

Score a high score. Very nice. It was the first time I saw real ordinary people cultivating immortality. Many mortals who cultivated immortality in the past ended up with the blood of people from the upper world, and the entire history of the hard work of the rich second generation. This book is really about ordinary people moving forward in the world of immortality through their own perseverance, luck and courage. It talks about the underworld and the world of immortality. It's really vivid. Big fists are the last word.

Damn it, what's going on? Why did it suddenly break out?

The last time I saw a good-looking mortal fan, it was Senior Brother Luo Hongluo... [Laughs] This one is really not boring at all. It would be better if you don't practice double cultivation with Mr. Han.

The writing is still very good, but just like the original work, it is a bit out of date in terms of fun, but it is too inexplicable that the book has been banned.

It's good. I never read stories about female protagonists. Open Close. I hesitated a few times but came back to read it. The transitions of various plots are very smooth, there are cheats, but not too much. It is a single-function cheat. I hope it won't be sealed and I want to catch up to the end. Or send it on another platform. I'll follow you there.

It wasn't very attractive at the beginning, but the novel is getting better and better, and there are no logical flaws. The most valuable thing is that the male and female protagonists are both growth-oriented. I am looking forward to how the female protagonist will behave in the plot of Xutian Temple, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists (*´ｽv)

I've read a lot of mortal fan fiction, and this one is pretty good, but why was it blocked?

It's quite interesting. This is the first time I've seen a fanfic about a mortal cultivating immortality. I've been banned. Does any fellow Taoist know the group number?

It's pretty good. I haven't read The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality, but I still really like the novels about cultivating immortals. It's just that there are CPs. I've read too many without CPs, and I'm a bit tired of it.

I stayed up late and read Chapter 120. I feel that it is of a very high standard among mortal fans. I hope the author will keep updating it and keep writing if it is unfinished.