Ruins of Utopia

(The following contains spoilers Great book! I have been searching on Tomato for a long time and almost all I have seen are those with no logical plot and low IQ. Although the rating is low, this one is really good-looking (Tomato really has no discernment). Here are the reasons why I like this book. First, character creation. The He Ye described by the author is real. She can be cool, embarrassed, or scared. She is like a real living person, without the flatness of most novel protagonists, and everything she does after encountering danger is calm, rational (?) But humane. For example, a lot of points are used to save Quan Miaoyin. She is not cold, nor is she the "Madonna" that many readers hate. She is really a girl with a very charming personality [love]. At the same time, this book is in line with my understanding of group portraits. I originally thought that the crazy female Quan Miaoyin had the highlight moment of holding a dagger with chopsticks, and the boss-like Turin who was like Yun Danfengqing would be very embarrassed and almost died when he entered Valerie's dream. Each character is a unique existence, and the supporting characters who are not the protagonist are not created just to promote the development of the plot. They are flesh and blood people. Secondly, the plot is unexpected and breaks the rules. When I saw Turin running in the rift of time and space for two years and forgetting two new teammates when he came out, when I saw Ke Yu building the "Cage Plan" for ten years, and the abyss Lewis and others were in was actually Ke Yu's body, I was so surprised that someone could write such words. The plot development is very exciting, not to mention the exquisite wording and vivid descriptions. The author's literary background is really profound. P. S. Why is this book rated so low? It is obviously much better than some books with scores above 9. Also, I was really sad when I saw Chapter 85. I will definitely follow Shanjiuzhuan Platform [crying]

After reading the prequel, I immediately went to read the sequel. It can be said that it is one of the few works that I have written in foreign countries that contains English and Chinese. The sequel recycled a lot of foreshadowing, and the author's excellent creative ability and writing skills can be seen from the meticulous logic and smooth plot connection. The protagonist's growth process does not have the brainless excitement of opening the Golden Finger, but the layers of hardships in escaping from death make her character more able to withstand the torture of a long plot. There is no big bking for the whole game, just an ordinary person who racks his brains and keeps his feet on the ground, and occasionally fights with some luck. The group portrait is not a fixed teammate mode. The protagonist will randomly act with new characters, but the appearance of these supporting characters is not a "tool" to promote the development of the plot. The story line of each supporting character is very clear, and everyone's feelings are so clear. Their behavior is not a bridge built for a certain purpose, but their character will do such a thing. I am grateful to the author for allowing me to glimpse into another world.

The teacher's writing style is very good, but I personally feel that there are some minor flaws in the plot. Although the first copy has 80 chapters, I still feel that some places are a bit rushed (?) I don't know how to describe it, hahahaha, but I usually imagine a map in my mind when reading a book. If it is infinite streaming, it will be like many small maps. Judging Whether a book is good or not depends on the coherence and completeness of the map. After reading the first copy, I felt that the coherence was slightly less. However, there is a prequel to this book that I have not read, so in terms of understanding the setting, it may have an impact on the coherence. But I really feel that this book is also an eye-catching novel on Tomato! Next, I will talk about some things that I personally think can be improved, but it is from the aspect of [female-friendliness]. Maybe not so many people care about it, but I think it is a very important scoring link for female-channeled novels. I saw that the introduction of the prequel also mentioned related issues, and the teacher has also improved it, so I boldly make some suggestions. I hope the author and teacher can adopt them as appropriate: 1. The male-female ratio is 50-50. Since it is a non-CP novel, I am looking forward to it. I hope that more excellent and powerful female partners will be added in the future. At present, in terms of descriptions of female and male supporting characters, I feel that there are more descriptions of Turin and Keyu Zhongjia (single copy), but in fact, changing Zhongjia, Keyu and others to women will not affect the plot. In other words, I hope the author can give priority to setting them as women when creating the characters. Either they want to see lesbians, or they want to see more diverse female portrayals. For example, the short story of Quan Shen is very good. I like this character very much. 2. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I think it's a bit unacceptable that this is mixed in with this. . . Although it doesn't state that there is CP, I really don't want to see BL elements in female videos Nvwu (wipe away tears), because generally speaking the most important thing about Nvwu is the shaping of the heroine. . . Secondly, whether they are creating a guide supporting character or a lesbian supporting character, in addition to their role in promoting the plot, they may have a little ambiguous relationship with the heroine. Of course, this depends on the author, but I just gave an example here (personally, I don't want to see any ambiguous contact, hahaha, I only want to see female mutual aid) , but if this supporting character is a gay man, then the role of this character is only to promote the plot (such as joining the protagonist group or being on the villain's side). In addition, his connection with the heroine can be said to be minimal, and his setting is meaningless (because unless the author wants to write for him, it is a completely replaceable setting). . . Because no matter what, the lowest demand of a female protagonist is to see the portrayal of the female protagonist, and the second is to see the female protagonist, not the male portrayal. If you want to watch this category, just go to the next few channels to watch it, but you can't even watch it. After talking for so long, I don't know what I am expressing. In short, it is not recommended to include BL elements in the female protagonist or even the BG. I haven't thought of anything else yet. I wish the author and teacher's popularity will increase!

Following this from the first book! You are worth it! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen a lot of women's unlimited flow. I really like the group portraits. It's not that I'm crazy about Goldfinger, but I can really see our Ono making progress! I hope Ono can regain his memory, keep moving forward, and explore new ruins (◦˙▽˙◦)

It can be said to be a fresh and refined article in Tomato. The book shortage after more than half a year is finally saved. The writing style is very delicate and humorous at the same time. It penetrates people's hearts. There is always a point that makes people moved and has the motivation to keep reading. So far, it can be seen that the author has carefully crafted every character, especially the protagonist, who has grasped the boundary between ordinary and extraordinary very skillfully, without making people feel aggrieved or too smooth or fake. From the first part to the current copy, the content is very substantial, the plot has ups and downs, and some places are really immersive, making me feel worried for the protagonist. Obviously this book is very exciting, not even a little bit better than those chronicle-like novels, but the popularity still doesn't rise (Tomato is looking for a scolding, isn't it?). This is a very exciting and fascinating novel in my eyes. I hope this novel will be popular and I will always support you. I don't know what I said after talking so much, and I can't describe my inner feelings in words. In short, the author is very good, and the novel is also very good (this is my first time writing a long review. If any language offends me, I apologize in advance)

This book is really super good. Don't miss it if you pass by. I will write a note at the beginning to recommend everyone to read it. I read this book after reading the first part overnight. It continues the style of the first part. It is recommended to read this book after reading the prequel part. The connection will be smoother. The first copy has about 80 chapters, and the pace feels a bit slow. Mainly because I felt a little sleepy while watching it, but the plot is very exciting and I want to go to sleep after reading it. Then the author said that this copy will end in about 80 chapters and I suddenly woke up (bushi). The author's writing style is really good, and it seems to be a very comfortable writing style. And this kind of writing feels like a balance between all the forces. The setting of the force value of each character is quite mind-boggling, haha. The author has a good grasp of it, and the author has been looking at and correcting the problems such as "words that humiliate women" that someone mentioned in the first part. And I really like this kind of plot setting where everyone has highlights, shortcomings and advantages. I feel that as soon as some characters appear, people are curious about the source of their abilities, past experiences and so on, and the sense of story is very strong. Currently, I am chasing the female protagonist to practice body training. I am looking forward to the heroine becoming stronger. Watching the heroine grow up step by step, I feel like "it is not easy for us to go this way..." Haha.

I like it very much, a rare treasure. The writing is fluent. It was very good in the first part, but it is still improving in the second part. My Wife is My God (Confirmation. JPG). There are many analogies with vivid images and strange angles, which are very relatable to people. The plots are intertwined. The wife has a great imagination and can express it very accurately. There is no sense of fragmentation where the imagination exists independently. The logic is rigorous and the emotions can be controlled freely. Even if the heroine is currently in a poor mental state, I feel that the wife is handling it very restrainedly. She is not just crazy or so crazy that she can't stop herself. I love the heroine very much. She has gone through a difficult journey and has grown up while still retaining some valuable qualities. The other characters also have their own character arcs. They are carefully crafted characters, each with their own charm, and they are not just flat tools. Summary: You will definitely not lose money if you enter the pit, and you may even make a profit. The only trouble is that when I encounter immortals, I can't eat enough food and grass, and it's easy to be short of literature. It's really a happy trouble (spread your hands).

I don't believe the Tomato ratings anymore. I followed this one after reading the previous one. It is far better than many high-scoring novels. The rhythm is tight, the plot development is attractive, and many settings are also very creative. It's fun to read and I hope the author will read more.

Well, there are a lot of riddles at the beginning of each copy, which is not very attractive to me, but once I read a few chapters, the atmosphere gradually builds up, the characters become more three-dimensional, and the smooth text and dialogue will start to make me want to stop. The setting and plot have a unique and eerie beauty. The reading process is like the reader wiping out pieces of antique artifacts in the fog. There is a strong sense of dusty history that has accumulated over time but is unknown to others. Although the settings of the characters are all modern and fashionable, they have to fight against "ruins and aliens" that look shabby and ancient. How can it not be considered cute in contrast~

It's very exciting. The style of some places is a bit like Doomsday Paradise. It's quite interesting and the plot is also exciting. It's not the kind of slobbery novel, which is quite rare. It's also not a cool novel that starts with a big bang. I like this kind of growth-oriented female protagonist. But there are also shortcomings. There is no main line. The background of the heroine's story is not clearly explained. There are too many omissions that make the reader a little confused, as if this is not a complete novel but the second part of the novel. Finally, the update is a bit slow. Isn't the author a fool?

The No. 1 Female channel for unlimited streaming. The world view and dungeon design are very unique. There are no routines and it's all about the details. The IQ of all the members is online, the protagonist relies on reasoning and details to survive, and the plot is also a twist in the story. It's an unpopular subject but written with care. Friends who like "Sweeping Garbage" with full details and explosive imagination will like it. ... The heroine is really cute. She is a normal person who loves to complain. She has a cute duality. It is so satisfying to see her getting stronger step by step (aunt face)

Come on, my dear, you write well, and you must keep on finishing it. I previously followed a book with a 7.2 Rating, but the author couldn't stop updating it because the rating was too low. But now, although the book has been discontinued, it still has a rating of 9.0 Or so. You must keep on finishing a good book. There will always be a day when more people will see your strength. [Sending my heart]

After reading the first copy, I ran to read the prequel! Personally, I think it is a very mature style of writing. It is relatively rare to have a large group of statues standing up. The dungeon location often appears in Infinite Stream, but it is not cliché at all [Send Heart] The heroine has a natural character, and the overall storyline and writing quality are very high. I am particularly looking forward to the complete story. I hope the author can continue to persevere! ! !

This book is really good to read and very appetizing! I love this so much. I almost had an orgasm when I saw the climax. The heroine grows and changes with the plot, and her tastes match each other. I feel like I can secretly play cp/cd by myself. In fact, I feel that Tomato will like this style. It can't be because she is the heroine. I think the ratings of many writing about this kind of scary and mysterious growth-type protagonist are not too low. What's wrong with you Tomato? How do you target others? What is the scoring criteria for tomatoes? Have you seen many books that have high reader ratings but low book reviews? And the plot isn't bad, right? Also, please update soon!

I rarely rate a book that has not yet been completed, and I rarely rate a book that I think is good-looking but has no characters or plot that I can complain about. I usually just silently give a five-star recommendation if I think it is good-looking, unless there are too many bad characters in the plot that I can't help but want to talk about. But I want to give a review first to encourage the author. This is also the first time I learned about this book that there is a way to reward people by reading advertisements. I have always just read the articles, let alone giving rewards. It's very well written. As a reader, I like it very much. Please continue to write more. As a searcher, I will try my best to continue to generate electricity for love [blowing kiss]

I read through the prequels in one go, and the second one is even more fascinating than the first! The protagonist He Ye's character is still quite cute, but it's much better than the first one where he didn't know anything and was always making mistakes (?). There are obviously many quick-response moves, and he can be regarded as an old man with gradually increasing instincts. The copy is also interesting, and there are only a few books that can be written by Infinite Streaming. Those, no matter how many, it depends on the creativity of the author. The first book on the train is very novel (sorry that there is no comment on that book). Logically speaking, most of the hospital backgrounds in this book will be relatively old-fashioned, but with the addition of NPC perspectives that can be changed, it is more interesting and attractive! Will continue to read, good luck to the author!

Super super super super beautiful! Boss, keep writing! Damn 🍅Why aren't you pushing [crying] I saw a lot of articles by excellent authors that no one read, what happened? Fortunately, I know how to dig for gold hahaha. The author really writes better and better! Recently, I stayed up late at night to watch this one that had some horror elements. It almost scared me. The ghosts were a bit too scary for me... (Yes, I am so timid) and the tragedy of Baby He Ye (come on, He Ye, you are getting stronger and stronger! You can already be judged by others) It is B+ and has not been upgraded! But I feel that it is unlikely to upgrade, because the code name will be changed when upgrading. Hahaha, I look forward to the day when you can legitimately have a code name ending in a herringbone.) 🤔 This long nonsense of mine is a bit too much, uh, I need to be calmer...

It looks great, old man. The settings of the dungeon and monsters are very interesting. The main character is so cute that I want to put her in my pocket (not that she is very delicate. Although her power level is average now, her brain is very good). The supporting characters are all flesh and blood. If I could put it in my pocket, I would have guessed that there are not many people left in this book.

Very very very beautiful! The world view is very grand, and many of the props and ability settings are very interesting. The author's language is serious but humorous, and the heroine is a slowly growing type. Although she is an ordinary person in the early stage (the ability is not her own), she has strong mental resistance and is not annoying. The backlash makes people feel immersed in the story. The heroine has never done anything stupid. If it were me, I would not do better than her. It's just that the author stopped updating [crying] When will he update again? I really like it. I read both books at once. In the last copy, the heroine finally became a boss in the eyes of others (she was always a rookie in the eyes of others) and then disappeared. Do you know how many holes you have dug and left unfilled? Come back soon Does anyone recommend to me similar novels with a grand world view, copies, and novel settings? We want this kind of description of men and women with no difference. We don't want the kind of description with typical characteristics of men and women. We are all normal people. We should distinguish by ability rather than gender.

A very interesting world view. It can be regarded as a sequel to the previous book. It still maintains He Ye's positioning of the brain, and I really like the decryption part written. I just feel that the heroine is a little too trusting in others in the early stage. The prequel has not been completed yet. Let's see if there are any additional settings. But the people I believe in are all good people. I don't know if there is any reason for amnesia. I look forward to killing everyone after the heroine's illness is cured! It's just hot and cool, looking forward to turning red!

It's very interesting, the heroine is interesting, has a high IQ, and has great skills. The characters in the book are very three-dimensional, not flat, the plot is novel, the writing is good, it's not mindless, everyone, come and see, there are too few people.

Nice! This is the second season. The new copy is more terrifying and scary than the previous season, but the heroine is still growing up! A very powerful heroine. Although I think the recent heroines are a little too miserable, I feel that she will become stronger after going through this! Come on, author! I'm so curious about all your ideas! ! ! It's really scary and weird! ! ! Support you! Although it's a little difficult to catch up, recently I've been able to insist on coming to Tomato to sign in every day just to see He Ye [blowing kiss]

I know why there are so few readers. From my personal point of view, putting aside the problems of different hobbies and only reading interesting articles and not liking to use my brain, etc.: The description is too detailed, every scene, every action and even every second of thought is so detailed that it is impossible to describe everything clearly and completely. Filling in a lot of pictures without continuing to tell the story will only make people lose patience, and at the same time, the things described will lose their priority. , The author likes to use a lot of words to materialize the abstract and absurd scenes in your mind, and even uses several pages to write an egg. My breath was indeed lifted, but if I don't let it go, I will be suffocated to death... There are many descriptions that have no great significance to the logic of the story and can be deleted completely. By the way, it's God, not God. Female videos are a woman's world. Of course, there are many advantages, the imagination is great, the number of insults to women is significantly reduced compared to the first part, the female characters are well portrayed, logical and the scenes are large, the plot is long, the description is immersive, the story is bizarre and attractive, and the heroine is more concretely portrayed than the first part... Anyway, come on, author, update it quickly. This copy is already very long. It would be too procrastinating to write any more. The frequent changes of perspectives are annoying. Please stop writing nonsense.

I discovered Tomato's good book "Walk Through the Sand", and I read the prequel. I felt that the part in the prequel to Kingdom of God was very impressive and had a lot to write about. Female channels need this kind of writing. It's a pity that I suddenly found out that the author stopped updating this book when I saw it.

I came across a recommendation on the homepage yesterday and read it in one sitting. This is an excellent work, with good writing and a wonderful setting. This book is a lot better than the previous one, and the writing skills have improved a lot. The author is very good. It is the first time I try to write an online article and write about such a grand and complex world view. Moreover, the subject matter is still niche in female channels. In fact, this book is quite popular among QD male channels. I feel that it was a pity that I was rejected by QD. Sometimes when I look at the writing style, I think of the writing style of Far Eyes and Foxtails. The style of painting is like Far Eyes and the weird descriptions are like Foxtails. The author can read their novels. Although I have been discontinued for a year, the urge to write novels and write down the world in my mind will always be there. I believe that the author will continue to finish it. Author, you have platinum funding, go for it.

I watched the second part after watching the first part overnight. I have rarely seen such an interesting worldview after entering the infinite flow pit. The author's imagination and writing skills are very attractive. Although it is a bit reluctant, I hope I can continue writing! Looking forward to seeing the end of this story. In addition, I would like to give you a suggestion, plan the outline well, it will be a pity if some foreshadowing is not recycled [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

This is a prequel from Shanjiu (the prequel does not affect viewing) The day before yesterday, I finished reading the first large-scale dungeon at school using a spare computer. My favorite character is Quan Miaoyin, who is inhabited by gods and derailed from ordinary people's lives. I look forward to seeing this young lady show up again later. What I like about the setting of this dungeon is that different identity perspectives lead to different information acquisition. One link after another, nurses and doctors correspond to caregivers and mental patients. Unfortunately, the popularity is not very high. It feels like a pity that it has been buried, go, go, go! Give me 8 points!

I really like these two novels. After reading this one and seeing the latest serialization, I went to follow the previous one. It was really enjoyable to read it in one go. The story of the three core people in the first copy of the previous work is very well written and delicate. The girl at the front desk is also a person who struggles to be happy. The ex-boyfriend also hates her for not loving me. In the end He said he was willing to raise that puppy. In the end, the gambler was a bad person, but he was trapped in the dungeon and did not do any evil. He actively gave up everything. They are BOSS, and it is their fate to be terminated by the protagonist. But whenever I want to find a bad person, I find that hateful people must have pity. This is a place I like very much. In the second dungeon, Sky City, the setting of another world does not seem to be unfolded. I am even looking forward to whether he will meet Strangely, in this film, only He Ye's return to the city after completing the hospital dungeon to learn about Dr. Gu's suicide seems to be a foreshadowing. This makes me look forward to it very much. It feels like a larger narrative. I beg the author to insist on writing it and keep updating it at this level. No matter what, I will follow this work to the end. Then there is a little personal question of mine. Of course, I don't want to change the author's internal direction. There seems to be a lot of narrative about "membrane" in the previous work, but this one is more about special items, which makes me feel a little disconnected. But it's okay because I followed He Ye who lost his memory and walked into this world. So I will understand what she comes into contact with, and He Ye's growth in this film. I am also very happy to see it happen, especially her "revenge" on Ah Xi in this ghost movie dungeon. My idea is to kill him in the dungeon. He has become the core BOSS anyway, but she wants him to be a human being. Hahahaha, I have a kind-hearted yandere feeling even if I am crazy, because I said at the beginning that I will save you, even if I turn you into a monster, I will save you. As for the pain you have suffered, it has become Just like a dog, this is what you deserve for doing these things. It feels so good. And later, when you face the greedy Mo, who describes him as a hamster, the high-ranking people treat him like an animal. He is so powerful and inspiring. I hope He Ye can live up to the code name ending with a herringbone and become a strong man soon, and then open the more advanced dungeons later, about the secrets of another world, and yes, there are Yeshan and Fox, because she is a believer in Yeshan. , Then there may be stories about this bond, and now there is a Quan Miaoyin and another god who possesses people... All these are not narrated, I like every copy and every story in it, and I have said so much without knowing it. In the end, I hope this work can be successful, because I can really see the author's hard work, seriousness and devotion, which can be felt. In addition to expressing my love, I also want to encourage the author to keep writing, because I have read many novels of this type that ended hastily because the platform kept asking for rectification or not providing traffic, etc. The previous work was also restarted due to poor traffic. I hope the author can write a He Ye series. I really like it. Sometimes encountering a book is a fate. I hope that those of us readers who like this book can have a longer fate with this book. Finally, I wish the author good health, happiness and more updates! I'm really too verbose haha

Very beautiful! ! The author's writing is good, the storyline is also very good, and the customized characters are written very naturally. The most important thing is that the author has improved. In the first part, he even used degrading words to curse people, but in the second part, he didn't!

I just read the beginning and found out there is a prequel, so I read the prequel first. The author's setting of the world, imagination, and writing style are all good, but maybe because the structure is large and the foreshadowing is long, many people don't have the patience to read on. Copies of this book will be added as soon as they are adjusted, and the pace is faster. I hope more people will read and comment, and the author will continue to write.