HP: Teacher Tom, Please Call Me Student Chen!

The setting and world view are really good. This book should be published as a separate book. There is no need to follow HP's plot line. Moreover, there are so many private settings. Basically, I use a structure, and then all my own things are included. It is a pity to write it as a fanfic. The ideas and settings are really awesome. Western fantasy is not very popular on Tomato. Again, it is a pity to put it in HP fanfic.

This setting, reasonable enough, is enough to open a single book. It is really a source of love. Magic, only magic cannot be let down

Transform Harry Potter from a fairy tale world into an extremely real world. This is one of the top three Harry Potter fanfics I have read. I hope the author can finish it.

It's quite possible. It doesn't stick to the plot of the original novel, but broadens the world view, and the characters are not collapsed. What's even better is that the author obviously has his own relatively complete and interesting thinking about magic. However, although there are many words, the storyline is still too small. It basically only revolves around regaining the other half of the soul. The life at Hogwarts that I most expected only occupies a small part of the chapter. Those who have not read the original work may feel confused and require a certain threshold, so it is more suitable for reading as a side story [eating melon] In my opinion, the subsequent plot in which the protagonist helps Harry to take the main line is no less than the previous plot in which the protagonist pursues magic. In the later period, the perspective of the protagonist is gradually separated, but the protagonist realizes more after crossing that boundary, and the plot is as long as tea. After so much foreshadowing, I don't feel much reluctance, but only feel confused.

This score is too low. Do all good books have such low scores? [What] is very, very good. I have just finished reading Harry's Year 1. The story is not cliche, and the various forces are fighting each other. The protagonist is the object of the struggle between the two parties and makes a comeback. There are a lot of foreshadowings. It is very awesome.

The content is okay, but if you search for HP letters on Tomato, there are too many female videos. Usually when I see a book title with letters in it, I usually don't click on it.

After all, I still didn't read this book, but I think the elements of this big stick magic wand can be used to write a book "Azkaban Freshman: Resident Evil". Get a baseball bat and swing it hard at whatever it is in the head. "Fainted"! The louder the sound, the higher the probability of coma.

The plot is compact and quite thoughtful, but it's a little far from the HP main line, but it's quite interesting.

It looks okay, but why has it been serialized for so long and hasn't been divided yet?

It looked pretty good, but I realized that Explosion was borrowed from the Blood Cross omg

This author has a unique understanding of the Harry Potter world. Based on the original JK Rowling, the world line has been expanded. He has his own new understanding and insights into the so-called origin of magic. There are just some flaws in the story and plot.

Opening up the magical world from a whole new perspective.

The last few chapters have been fantastic. A larger magical world is written based on the background of Harry Potter.

The content is really good٩(๑^o^๑)۶

The magician has great imagination

Hello, do you have a friend named Peter Ma? Hahaha!

Other than a few typos and stuff, it's a pretty good book.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

A lot of OOC, stable updates, and not too many poisonous points

Super cool, looking forward to Jack's new adventures

It looks good. Most of them nowadays are the same. The perspective is very novel. Please don't abandon the article.

The text description is very smooth and has a unique insight into the formation of magic. Very good book. As long as the ending is stable, that's all.

It's very beautiful. It does deviate from the main line of HP a lot. It draws on the content and world view of Blood Cross. It's well written.

Well written, this is really good for an elder.

The angle is novel and has its own setting.

Good-looking, interesting, and the setting is very bold

It's been a long time since I've read an HP book in one sitting. It's well written, novel, and interesting. Although it has flaws, the content is really good.