Xingtie's Live Broadcast Connects to Ancient Times, and the Flowing Fire Knife Cries About the Ancestral Dragon

The following are some suggestions from personal reviews, for individuals only. It is a very good popular novel, because this kind of novel actually tells the truth. It itself records the development of the game "Star Rail" and the public response it brought. For me, this is a novel that reviews the plot. But for some people, this novel may be just garbage. My opinion about this novel is that if the Awakening of Fate is added later, we can actually have Guan Gong fight Qin Qiong, let each dynasty compete with each other, or have a chat group between each dynasty. Or there are no "Star Rail" traversers at the drop-off point. The time traveler asked the time traveler to do some popular science. After all, the causes and consequences must be improved. After all, the fun part of this kind of novel is the feeling of city people watching country bumpkins, or the feeling of the mastermind playing tricks on others, and the feeling of being disillusioned and making up for regrets. As for the protagonist and the like, just make it the beginning of the article. As long as everyone enjoys watching it, the protagonist and the like are actually not that important. Anyway, this is the plot that everyone is watching. Unfortunately, it would have been better if the author wrote about Star Iron in a normal technological multiverse. After all, I really want to see the story of the Death Elementary School who was happily targeted and danced back and forth on the edge of death, the Immortal Abundance Gin and the Great Intelligent Wisdom Vodka, who fell in love and killed each other. Or Fujimaru Ritsuka, the savior who uses the [Scepter]. After all, I really want to see the comic book world that combines "Star Railroad" with other world views. Of course, it's not the kind of primitive universe where all the heavens and worlds are cultivating immortals.

Well! The current second book is about the ancient people watching Star Rail. I think it's okay. In fact, it's like going through the plot again. I won't talk about the advantages, but let's talk about the disadvantages. ①The plot actually goes by too fast. It can be written in more detail. At least half of the two chapters are plot and half are feedback from ancient people. ② The feedback from the ancients is too stupid, and in fact, I feel that it doesn't look like the ancients at all. The feedback from the ancients is actually too poorly written (to put it bluntly, there is no ancient style. In the early stage, I felt that the ancients were very pig-headed, and in the middle and late stages they were very templated) In conclusion, it seems that it is a poorly written piece of assembly line movie watching at present, but it is the second article about ancient movie watching stars and irons, and it can still be chewed. I hope the author can improve it in the future (it is a victory to write the fairy boat well) [Assembly-line movie viewing: refers to templated writing, cookie-cutter movie viewing, and movie viewing articles that do not include original content] (PS: For viewing articles that write original content, you can refer to Qidian's [Public Execution Begins from the Dumb King]) [Poor writing style: The two shortcomings mentioned above are the two shortcomings mentioned above, because the copywriting of Star Iron cannot be counted, and the writing style can only be based on the grasp of the plot of the movie and the feedback from ancient people] (PS: Many 9-point movie viewing articles on this site are very good in terms of grasp of the plot and feedback from the movie. For example, the one next door who wrote about Star Iron starting from Sha Jin has won the game if the plot is more detailed and the characters are not OOC) PS: Although articles such as movie watching/question answering are ridiculed by many authors and readers for not requiring brains and writing skills, it is still a bit difficult to control the plot of the movie and provide feedback. After all, readers come here for two points. If you write these two, you will basically get 9 points and above, and if you write one well, you will get more than 8 points.

I went there. For seedlings of the same type, as long as they can continue to work normally, I will definitely support them [Admiration]

More than 80% of it is the game plot. I feel like after playing the game again, a lot is missing. What is [what] behind this?

The author has at least finished updating Xianzhou [crying]. The book next door also updated a piece of shit by chance. You must not stop updating [face covering]

Come on, the other one is already half dead.

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually, It was raining lightly in the gray sky outside. Why was my vision blurry? I don't know if it was because I was crying or because I was too old. It might be both. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Who am I looking down on in these few chapters? The author, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, get up and update, young people, don't be ignorant, rat tail juice! Author, who are you? The Guinness record is typing 807 letters per minute. According to each Chinese character requiring six letters, you can type about 134 words per minute. Since you are not a holder, we will calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you eat a lot of food every day It takes about two hours, another 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, one hour to exercise, two hours to get inspired, and another hour to be in a daze, and you should have nine hours to type. You should have 435,780 words. Calculating 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 217 chapters, but you only put so much content every day. What's going on? To be honest, is it a deduction? The donkeys in the production team don't dare to take such a break. The author quickly got up and coded!

Come on, apart from Grandmaster, you are the second book I have read about watching movies and collapsing iron. I hope the author can have his own rhythm, fast and detailed, fine and fast. Although those ancients may not fit the character, I hope that the parts about watching movies and being shocked can be written better.

Come on, author, I'm really looking forward to their reaction when they see the form of Danheng Longzun.

Hello, I finally found a book with so many scenes of Dan Heng. It's still like the ancients who watched movies and fell into disgrace. Please don't do it. I'll wait for you to write about Dan Heng's opening to the sea [Blow a kiss]

Come on, author, don't stop updating. After the founder is gone, only you and another seedling will be left.

My favorite episode when I was a kid [Adoration]

The Cut Next Door is the only one I've read so far.

What about the plot of Simulator😭😭😭I mean... It's the first time I played the plot of Simulator. I can't miss anything...

It's okay, I'm really looking forward to what it will be like when destiny comes to reality. [Eat melon]

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Finally found another book of this type. Come on, don't stop updating.

Come on, keep updating, I haven't seen this kind of article updated to Xianzhou [Chigua]

Qin Shihuang is the one with the most severe fandom in history, because the kindness of Zhong Long will never end in this life [crying][crying][crying]

When to arrive at Xianzhou

Can you tell me about the sword in Su Shang's hand? That's Xuanyuan Sword

I really like this kind of subject matter, but I have been looking for two books for a long time, and one is newly published by the author.

It's a good read. There are several chapters every day. If you keep it for a long time, you can watch the world grow old.

Come on, don't cheat, at least write to Xianzhou

Five stars will be given first, and I will tweet to you when I write to Xianzhou

Come on! I finally found this book "The Eunuch"

It feels okay. It would be more fun if the Star Dome Railway would be integrated with ancient times. I guess Qin Shihuang must have followed the Fengrao path [eating melon]

Yes, after searching for so long, I finally found a similar book.

Come on author, we will always be your strongest support. [Praise]

You can come up with some high-burning secondary creations, so that you can also introduce the various forces in the universe. Looking forward to Luofu, don't stop updating, author, this is my last wave!

It's quite interesting. This idea is so interesting. I watched it all at once, but it's just too little. [Laughter] [laughter] [laughter]