Computer Access to Ancient Times: Live Streaming of the Start of the Star Dome Railway

Deducted 1 star. There are too many dialogues in the game plot and too few reactions from the ancients. We have all played the game, so there is no need to repeat too much about the plot. I read this novel just to see how the ancients reacted. The one next door has more in this aspect. Next, let's see how the plot of your arrival at Xianzhou is polished [rolls eyes]

Write more about the reactions of the ancients. The plot of the game can be simplified. Looking at your article, there are actually many places where the reactions of the ancients can be inserted. I hope to rewrite the plot of "Drinking the Moon and Opening the Sea". The other books have all been briefly touched upon.

It's so hard, I can actually follow the basics at the same time, it's so fun [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly], this book is also good, the plot is faster, but the interaction is less I have one thing to say. Indeed, there are too many sentences in the plot. How many people have not watched the plot? Do you need so much original plot? It is almost word for word. It feels like it is omitted, but it is still too much. It is better to write more interactions [face covering]

The ancestor is dead, you are the third senior I have seen

It is already a better book about Star Iron Live. I have read four books in this genre and only this one has been added to my collection. The reason is that this part of Danshu is written by only this author. Star Iron has many thought-provoking plots. Compared with other articles, it starts to play inexplicably and everyone just watches it and sighs about the beauty. This kind of meaning is more reasonable. There are also some historical figures who guessed the direction of Star Iron's story, which I find very novel. It makes me feel that these historical figures are not just talking nonsense about Ababa Ababa, but they are also thinking with flesh and blood. The details written by the author are very interesting to me. I feel that the author is indeed careful in writing and his writing skills are very good. Please support it.

Is the author trying to make a fortune and send out all the inventory as soon as possible? Author, you are so prolific, I'm afraid😱Publish more😝

Finally, I saw an ancient person reacting normally. I should get high marks for giving up describing the protagonist.

The subject matter is good. It mainly describes the reactions of various historical figures. Most of them are quite good. There are only two points that dissuade me from it. One is that the protagonist is completely a tool and there is no plot. The other is that the system's broadcast content has too many jokes and has instilled a lot of nouns in the ancients that they are currently unable to infer and understand (such as the professional terms of Beng Sanli). There is a feeling that a little kid can't understand the expression and makes random jokes.

A very good novel. It is not broadcast live in the form of a game. The effect is more reasonable and not turn-based. Even the excessiveness when doing side tasks is described in a reasonable way. It seems to depict the Collapsed Star Railroad as a normal world rather than a game [shy]. For people with this kind of obsessive-compulsive disorder, it is very comfortable and feels very reasonable. I believe this novel will definitely achieve a good result [love] [love] [love] [love]

It's great. You don't have to write too fast. It's good to write down all the memory points of us players and have more reactions from the ancients. Now the other two are jumping too fast and they are almost like a plot line.

You can write some pvs, short stories, etc. There is so much private life that I can't stand it anymore. [Petrochemical]

If nothing else, just rush into a fight and use the game skills instead of yelling the voice of the game skills. Use the game skills to apply the actions and give you five stars.

The overall plot is good, the reaction of the ancients is a bit stereotyped, and the update speed is also good. However, some plots are relatively watery and can be sped up appropriately. There are almost 200 pictures and the fairy boat has not yet walked out. But this is good. At least you don't have to worry about writing too fast later and it will collapse directly. It is good to keep it like this. It will be better if you can write about hot topics, so don't stop updating!

It's okay. I also want to watch Ruan Mei's pv and plot, so that they can understand the gap between geniuses. Has the level dropped? Ruan Mei, I didn't feel "satisfied" after watching the plot of Zhenli. Instead, I felt that this was it, that it was over? In it, the ancients did not understand the concept of truth at all, and there is no contrast between the gap between "genius and mediocrity". You can even add Confucius' feelings about education at the end of the truth. (Obviously there is a lot to write about, but I have been talking about Ruan Mei's genius and the ruthlessness of genius. The truth heals the mediocre. The contrast between the truth and the screws and Ruan Mei is also very well written) In addition, the previous plot of Yu Kong was also anticlimactic. The various complex emotions of Yu Kong were not expressed. They were released and ended with just one sentence from the ancients. I was confused and panicked while watching it. I can take Ruan Mui's plot as if you are in a hurry to drive Pinoconi, and I'm quite willing to continue watching it, but let's change it. I'll look at the subsequent plot later and I'll revise the rating.

I will write about other games later, so I won't read them. I will come back when I return to the main story.

Personally I think it's good, and there's nothing to misinterpret the plot. It's pretty good, but it has to be a little slower [please take a closer look] It was okay before War of Mirage, but it's a pity that the author of War of Mirage added too many private goods. Let's talk about Lao Yang's pseudo-black hole first: The pseudo-black hole is a product of power. Its essence is to create a gravitational singularity, thereby producing something similar to a black hole. It has the same event horizon as a black hole, in which time will be infinitely stretched. In every moment inside, the outside world will pass for a long time. During the Xilin period, Lao Yang used it to trap Xilin to delay time. In the final chapter, Yaya also used this trick to trap Kevin and delay it (even though Kevin was trapped voluntarily). Let's talk about Huanwu. Huanwu and the protagonist group entered Jianmu one after another (Jianmu has its own world and independent space. Xianzhou's space folding technology was obtained from studying Jianmu). Huanwu used Jianmu's power of creation and regeneration to shape a body for himself, and connected it with Jianmu to have unlimited regeneration ability (Huanwu at this time is destruction + fertility + star core). Here, the author used the simulated black hole as a wormhole to directly transport everyone and Huanwu away (not to mention whether Huanwu, as the enhanced version of the messenger, would be transported away by the small wormhole), wouldn't the connection between Huanwu and Jianmu be broken? Then there is Huanhu's falling stars. Judging from the text and animation performance, Huanhu directly made two meteorites of the same size out of thin air and collided with each other, not pulling down a satellite. Finally, because of the characteristics of fertility, Huanlong is very difficult to deal with, so Jingyuan uses himself as a bait to attract Huanlong's attention to him, using Huanlong's aesthetics of destruction (each extermination king has his own aesthetics of destruction, Huanlong is to trigger civil strife in civilization and cause it to destroy itself. One likes to drill holes and explode the core of the earth, and another likes to Light the sun and watch the burning glass), when Huanwu transformed himself, Dan Heng took action, using immortal power to cut off the connection between Huanwu and Jianmu, and then Jingyuan used Shenjun to strike the final blow, destroying Fengfu's body. At this point, Huanwu's chaos came to an end (because Huanwu was afraid of death, he ran away with two harsh words). I hope that the author will not change too much in the following plots and add too many private goods. If you encounter a plot that you don't understand, you can still read the plot analysis of the big guys [Sending Hearts]

If Xianzhou does not have a demonic body, would the hunter be born in Xianzhou? If there is no bottom-line hunting energy, how can Xianzhou develop? Who can afford the countless caves and trillions of people in a single fairy boat? If there is a shortage of resources and the fairy boat has to be obtained from outside, then who is the fertile creature now? If Xianzhou digests it internally and the resources are exhausted, it will end up with people cannibalizing people (physics), then will the people being eaten resist? Even if you have the means to suppress it, will I throw myself into the embrace of nothingness or destruction in despair? Um? Look in my eyes

It was okay, although a little watery. I hope there will be more ancient people and the updates will be more stable and better! Come on! ! ! Don't stop updating! ! !

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Don't bring personal feelings into it, that's why I deducted one point

It looks good, but it feels like it lacks scenes that shocked the ancients, such as combat power settings. After all, this is the highlight.

OK OK. The only drawback is that there is too little interaction with the historical audience. Of course, this tests the author's skills. Where is the point of interaction? How can the character's personality be ooc within a reasonable range? The author needs to think more about how to balance the trade-offs. However, if you really don't understand, don't interact blindly, lest any shortcomings be magnified and tortured.

I'll give it five stars. It looks good and the emotional expression is not overly exaggerated. But when will the Star God PV be scheduled? It's impossible for the protagonist to live through the plot all day long, right? Okay, I did watch the PV, but it was a bit short.

What happened to the author Xianzhou? That background was sent by Ying Zheng to find immortality.

@ Salty Fish Can I release Bengsan after FGO is released?

Beng Tie is very interesting, but I will write about other things later. I hope to write back to Beng Tie

The most important reason why I give this book a good review is that it contains a lot of updates. It is updated every day, basically three or four chapters! There's nothing too bad about the character design, it's really well written.

It's okay. It's a pretty pure live broadcast. There aren't a lot of subjective feelings and the protagonist comes out to express his opinions. The rhythm of the plot of the live broadcast content is also well grasped.

Really good Some main storylines and character personal tasks are tied together You can also write For example, Yanqing's companions met Jingliu

When are you going to write about other games? I'm already looking forward to it [please update][top post]