I Was an Immortal in the Wei Dynasty, and the Dignitaries Prepared Gifts to Climb the Gates.

It's very nice, but I hope it doesn't lead to a conflict between the master and the disciple. It would be better if there is a sense of distance between the disciple and the master. The master is not like the master, and the disciple is not like the disciple. It always feels a bit weird. Thank you for the little suggestion, but it still looks good. Come on.

He is a nouveau riche, but my evaluation is that he is not as good as the wealthy people in the Middle East.

Not bad, not bad. I like this type of novel. It's not as fun to be an immortal and establish a sect in a low-martial world. However, the protagonist's starting point is a bit low. Wouldn't it be better to replace the sect leader of a hidden sect with an immortal who has descended from the fairy world?

I like reading this book, and I also like the ancient protagonist who is an immortal and pretends to be an immortal by himself. I strongly suggest that the protagonist first cultivates immortality himself, recruits disciples, teaches ancient martial arts, and practices martial arts first. For example, he first creates some martial arts similar to the world of wind and cloud for his disciples to learn. We are mortals. We should first develop the martial arts, let all the people practice martial arts, and improve the level of this ancient world. Finally, there will be a resurgence of spiritual energy, and the ancients will slowly absorb the spiritual energy. After passing on the immortal cultivation techniques, let the ancient martial arts sects be established first. Where is the author?

It's okay, but I hope, the author, that you write more about men and women in a more balanced way. The high-end ones you write now are mostly about women. Two of the protagonist's three apprentices are women, and the one who ranks first in the competition is also a woman. Just feel like that.

If you don't want to cheat, don't open it so much. ,

The author is great, the princess and Nangong Xue can be accepted as Taoist companions There is nothing. I don't see any changes in this book's fairy tale to the mortal world, and the plot is not rigorous. For example, the Wei State has an outer sect similar to martial arts, but these few people can defeat an army of hundreds of thousands, which makes people laugh to death. Even the leader of the clan kills 10,000 people each time in the golden elixir stage, and has to replenish his spiritual energy after several times. There is also Wei Jianguo, who only has one city. As soon as the country is founded, others rush to join him. This is the biggest pitfall. Wei is a subordinate of the immortals and has no benefits. Why do the aristocratic families support Li Guo? It is impossible for Jin to subjugate without great power during its rise.

To be honest, in this category of ancient immortality cultivation, it is already written very well.

Wow, it looks great! 🔥

Very nice, I like this type

Not bad, keep up the good work

It's still very ok, just don't finish it quickly.

Come on author, I'm waiting for your next book.

Damn, she still looks good.

Super pretty and very imaginative

I can do it alone

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Okay, nice looking

I like this type

The setting is novel and beautiful

Very good, good luck to the author

A very good book about cultivating immortals

Four stars for encouragement.

The beginning is okay, just watched it

I haven't written enough. Let's go to Three Thousand Small Worlds and Thousand Big Worlds [laughs]

There are some differences, because what I want is immortality, not the way of heaven. I can have a Taoist companion, not a monk.

No, bro, you are so wet, so fast [covers face]

Very good, worth recommending, the plot is not draggy

It's ok. It's very beautiful, and the control in many aspects is pretty good. However, there are too few characters. Is it finished in less than 100 pictures?

Very beautiful. Thank you to the author for allowing me to read such a beautiful book.