Outrageous, There Is Something Wrong with This Pet Shop!

"Teacher is cooking, who is going to watch?" With doting smiles on their faces, seven handsome elites from all walks of life put down their hands and worked. Big brother: "The negotiation is cancelled. I'll go and see it." Second brother: "The meeting is cancelled. I'll go and see it." Third brother: "The flight is cancelled, I'll go see it." Fourth brother: "The operation is suspended. I'll go and see it." Fifth Brother: "The experiment is suspended. I'll go and see it." Sixth Brother: "The expedition is cancelled. I'll go and see it." Brother Qi: "The flight is cancelled, I'll go see it." [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Love is just one word, I only say it once, you know I will only express it with actions

To be honest, it's almost the same as the Super God Pet Shop, they both look good.

It's okay, but it's a bit like a harem novel. There seems to be no female protagonist.

It is recommended to give the protagonist two bug pets, Uchiha Tom and Senju Jerry.

It's great, but I think it's a bit awkward to start a war with the angel tribe later [laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Ordinary, evil, dangerous, extraordinary, monarch, disaster, world destruction, extreme How can I put it? The writing is quite interesting, but the rhythm is not very good. It feels like the author focuses on making money by opening a store and selling goods. In fact, what readers like to read about opening a store or farming is the reaction. Too many characters will inevitably lead to wordiness and repetition. A little expansion of each pet is not enough. If you have the ability, it will become a competitive article later. The description revolves around the teaming and training of pets. It is easy to write things apart if there is a hammer here and a stick here and there. I'm looking for a pet article with multiple stitches, preferably one like Yu-Gi-Oh! A special thing that combines super-volume synchrony to explode the sky.

Innocent little shopkeeper

I'm a native dog and I like to watch

It's still pretty good.

Real and objective evaluation

It's okay, it's more interesting in the early stage.

How do you know the level of the pet?

The pace is pretty good, it would be better if the macro worldview could be improved.

The protagonist has to rely on himself to improve his strength, but there is invincibility in the store. Some items are available for emergencies. I quite like this kind of store opening flow.

It's a bit like a super pet shop

Not bad, very pretty

New idea, very nice

Not bad, very pretty.

Really generous

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

It's beautiful, I love watching it, and I watch it every day.

Very good, a cool article

The subject matter is very good, very beautiful

So great, so great, so beautiful💁

What is the hierarchy

The author is very good

Actually it's pretty good

Not bad, very pretty

It's just that the boss ordered dishes

So pretty, so pretty