Demonic Immortal

! It's very, very nice. Everyone has written a lot of comments praising the male protagonist. I would like to praise the female protagonist here. This is one of the very few articles that can portray the heroine so vividly, rather than as a tool. I want to find a article with this kind of perspective of the heroine. I also hope that the author will keep it up in the future. As long as the heroine does not become a blood-sucking bag and a tool for giving away experience like other articles, the emotional line of this article will really hold up! ! !

It looks good, but it feels very dark, and I can't describe it. It's really too dark, not half-black, and it's based on self-interest. It's really based on self-interest, so it looks very dark. I can't describe the feeling anyway. (Perhaps my personal opinion is different, because I feel that I prefer to read a little sweet text, so I may not be comfortable with it. That's probably it. Anyway, I think it's possible. Maybe I'm just not interested.) This is just my personal opinion. Those who like to read sweet texts may not be suitable to read [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] But it's still highly recommended to watch I saw that the plot and character descriptions were very good. Except for the feeling that the relationship history of the male and female protagonists is a little bit toxic, there are no other problems.

It looks good, the plot is very good, not clichéd, and the writing is good. I just don't know why no one watched it [face covering]. Actually, I didn't have any expectations before I clicked on it, because the connection between dark novels and single female protagonists was unexpected (all the dark novels I read before were without female protagonists), but the author's writing is unexpectedly good. If nothing else, the latest female character (surnamed Lu) is the female protagonist? The characters are pretty good, and the author is also capable of writing emotional dramas. , Worth a look.

The book is good, but the love between the single heroine and the heroine should not be seen. The final intersection with the heroine in chapter 300 is to trick the heroine to death. After that, there are at least more than 50 chapters to see the heroine again, more than 100 chapters to develop feelings for the heroine, and then the heroine officially confirms the relationship in chapter 200, so she has to practice the art of forgetting love. Forget it, and then wait for 5 or 6 ten chapters to fall in love completely, and then it should be gone [facepalm]. Anyway, I feel that I can't wait until that time. It's too boring. The plot is really interesting. There is nothing to say. It's just not suitable for a single female protagonist reader like me. Sorry [facepalm] [facepalm] [facepalm]. Looking at the current plot, I don't know how to see the beginning of a relationship. Please work harder, the author. If you write after the relationship line, if you can remember it, just give me a message. If you haven't seen it, forget it. As long as you are not reading this book through a single female protagonist, I think it should be to your taste [send heart][send heart][send heart]

How to say It sounds a little weird at first. But the later chapters became more exciting, and when he got to more than 100 pictures, he made up for the earlier ones. Really, this novel is generally very good, very detailed, really good details, but the update is too slow. Then recommend more recommendations. This book will make it better. And this detail is too detailed, I hope it won't be unfinished. Overall very good. It's just that the updates are getting slower and slower, and it feels a bit... Really, I can only describe it in one sentence. It's really detailed. As a low-level person, he can take one step at a time and think about everything. Generally speaking, I hope the author will update it soon. Sometimes one a day, sometimes two a day, it really makes me anxious. I can't sleep well at night, it's really uncomfortable. Hope to work harder! Dear authors or book friends, can you recommend this book? This author is so lazy. One page a day makes me uncomfortable even when I sleep. Look forward to the stars and the moon every day. Just waiting for you to update a chapter. It's not enough to watch at all. Could you please recommend this book? It's really good. When you have free time, please generate electricity for love. Alas today

It's okay. It looks okay so far. Keep it up. I won't say too much about the plot and characters. If this princess is really the heroine, it would be really ugly. In the early stage, the two of them can be said to be fighting to the death. If they can still be together forcibly, it will be really speechless. In the early stage, the two people are really incompatible and fighting to the death. If they can still be together, it is really poisonous.

Among all the newly released books at this stage, I think it is the best. I have been a bookworm for many years. I can't stand books that are not rich in details and information about the world. I can't stand books that are not exciting and cannot understand people's words. I sincerely recommend this book. I hope it will be a big hit and the author will make a lot of money. This book will become a god sooner or later

I followed it step by step. Although I read it every once in a while, it is really beautiful. The male protagonist is a demon, but he is a righteous person, the method of the devil, and the righteous identity. The male protagonist has excellent understanding, wisdom as deep as the ocean, and can calculate everyone in the world with his step-by-step plan. The male protagonist has feelings, but the one he loves most is always the mother in his heart. The male protagonist does not seek immortality, love, or career, but only seeks to resurrect his mother who was killed by him. "Mom, please protect me one more time. My child will definitely be a good person next time." [Laughing and crying] [Laughing and crying]

I read Chapter 205 in two days. It is a good book and the killing is decisive. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist's strategies are often far-fetched, but it is not a big problem. Generally speaking, this book is acceptable on Tomato. It should be thrown into the bookshelf next time. It may be 26 years before I read it again.

The small words are very strong, borrowing from various famous scenes, but they are always inseparable from the aura of the protagonist and the shortcomings of chaos and disorder. In the era of invincible splicing, it is already very good [Punch Out] [Punch Out] [Punch Out]

After reading the introduction and looking at the character of the male protagonist, I thought it was indeed a one-woman novel [face-covering], but after carefully reading the comments, it turned out to be a pseudo-harem [face-covering]. Although it is a side story, it is the end of the whole novel! Fortunately, I thought about reading the comments again, otherwise I would have had a myocardial infarction! I read the comments and said that the side story used a clone to take in two women. If you don't mind the single woman, you can continue, and if you mind, you can avoid the lightning [eat melon]. Just a reminder! Make your own decisions. It's a pity that this novel has nothing to do with me. I don't understand why the author wrote it like this. It's a novel about a single female protagonist. Maybe the author's understanding of a single female protagonist is different from mine!

The writing is very good, the plot is reasonable, the logic is rigorous, no faults can be found, and the character creation is very successful. Each character is in line with his own personality. The narrative is flowing and fascinating. I finished reading it without knowing it. Finally, I wish the author great inspiration and good health, and continue to create wonderful stories.

It's good-looking, and it depicts the intrigues in the world of immortality. There's no pretense here, and the protagonist is very smart and takes every step of the way. It doesn't follow the usual way of writing Tomato, I even think he shouldn't appear in Tomato. I don't know why the results are not good, but I will continue to watch it as long as he updates it.

It's a god among gods. It's very to my liking. It's basically what I imagined cultivating an immortal to be, but it might be a little crueler. I've read one before that was more entertaining, not as dark as this one. Fang Jue is purely for himself in the novel, but occasionally a few paragraphs can describe Fang Lao Mo's love for Xiao Bai, Nangong Ming, Qing Yuan, and Gu Jianxian around him. I can accept that Lu Xiaoyou fell in love with Lao Mo due to love charm and other reasons, but dividing Lao Lu into several parts may be a poisonous point in my opinion (not that the writing is bad, it's just that I don't like it). In the novel, Fang Lao Mo's improvement in realm feels like a natural progression. I don't know if this is appropriate. What I loved about this novel was the vivid descriptions of the environment. I can visualize it in my mind. The rhythm of the plot is fascinating and basically interlocking. There is no delay or hydrology. It was quite difficult for Fang Jue to come all the way (of course, among the immortal novels I have read, he should be regarded as a cool male protagonist, but he has some brains, because the male protagonist in the last immortal novel I read was really miserable).

This isn't the author's first time writing. The writing is sophisticated and the plot is not cliché. Come on. In the later period, there were too many clones of Lu Wuyou and the description was a bit confusing. If there is an opportunity, they should be given code names to distinguish them.

The writing is very good, but the handling of small details is a bit rough, but as long as it is not analyzed sentence by sentence like a famous book, it will not affect the reading. The big details are handled very well, such as the sect's physical process. It's the kind of book that feels cool and comfortable.

So far it's pretty good, the subject matter is very special, especially the author's setting about the male and female protagonists falling in love and killing each other is very special. The male protagonist's character design is very different from many of the male videos I've watched, and the male protagonist is not invincible, he is a growth-oriented, scheming, and shady person! It's not a mindless love story, nor does it have the heart of a holy mother. Come on, the author, and look forward to the follow-up content! I really like it. I hope this work won't be too watery or unfinished! Come on [like]

I have seen too many comfortable, awesome starts, formulaic nonsense literature. There are so many good lives. If you don't like it, just practice more. Recommended viewing

A small suggestion: I think it's better not to have a heroine or anything like that, and there can be more supporting heroines; I see that the protagonist's interests come first, and he shows the right way in the sect; he can build a force; I think there is still no distinction between good and evil characters, what is useful should be used, look at the problem from the standpoint, the butt determines the head, and don't judge by winning or losing. 0. Actually, I want to see characters who are both good and evil~ 1. The kind of character who has a strong sense of justice, never gives in, sticks to his own principles, and would rather be broken than destroyed~ 2. The kind of character who is depraved, sinking, evil and evil in his heart~ 3. The kind of innocent character who is well protected by the sect- 3. The kind of character with great contrast~ 4. The kind of character who has no plans left, meets his opponents, and will meet good talents~ 5. That kind of very mysterious and unknown character, similar to Tiandao and a race from another world~ 6. The kind of character who comes from a well-established family, is graceful, noble, speaks elegantly, behaves well, and has outstanding temperament~ 7. The kind of person who is hard-working, extremely talented, and someone who is helped by noble people~ Wait... In short: each has its own characteristics

First of all, I feel that the foreshadowing and setting in the early stage are very attractive to me. Some people may think that the three views are not correct, but I feel that the setting is very consistent with human nature. Since God forbids it, then I will break the spirit of this God. When the high-grade spiritual root that I finally plundered in the early stage is broken, there is a feeling that something that was hard to get is gone, which is a bit depressing.

The writing style is a bit abstract, so you should be careful when listening to this book. It is not suitable for beginners with poor understanding ability. Some of the passages are quite interesting. The "encrypted quantum communication technology" throughout the book is impressive. A slight problem is that some sentence patterns include questions and transitions that are a little too frequent. If you say a few more sentences, the listening and reading may be a little difficult. Generally speaking, it is one of the best among recent ancient fantasy novels about immortality.

I like it very much. I always like this villain. Other villain novels have brilliant words and don't have that immersive feeling. The description of this scene is particularly good.

It's nice to read, and you can tell that the author has carefully polished it. It may not be a good immortality novel at the moment, but it's definitely worth spending time to read. I know that the author is very tired of updating, so it's not appropriate to rush for more, but I really don't have enough to watch, and I still want to see the male and female protagonists facing off against each other.

The writing of the novel is quite good, and the description of the heroine is also good. It's just too dark, and the protagonist does whatever it takes to achieve his goal. . A pretty good dark novel. But it's not good for today's novels to be too dark.

It looks good, I love watching it, and I want to watch it again. Ha Jiming, hurry up and give me more! ! ! Just like to see this.

I just love this fresh male and female lead, I like watching their rivalry [like][like][like]

It's very beautiful. It's much more exciting than what I've seen before.

It's really good. Gou is a genius with understanding. He has the idea of ​​​​working alone and cultivating his own power. All the preliminary preparations have been made.

It's pretty good, but the plot is a bit messy and the process isn't very organized, but it's really good

Yes, the content is considered a very good immortality article on Tomato. The pace is very fast and the pitfalls are basically filled in. It is very good!