Under One Person, Trinity Junior Junior Uncle

It's pretty good, and the previous content is also very consistent with the setting of the original work. Unfortunately, I don't like to read the heroine's emotional line. And the protagonist has not cultivated his mind, Can't be honest Without a sincere heart, it is impossible not to deceive Heaven and oneself. He also has no intention to practice, just like Yang Guo in the early days of The Legend of the Condor Heroes. The author definitely has not understood this system in reality. Even if you have to practice this kind of thing in all seasons, it requires great perseverance. For example, if you are asked to study math problems day and night regardless of spring, summer, autumn, or winter, how would you react? Can you persist? This is the meaning of cultivating the mind. And if you are in this state, how can you care about the red and pink skulls on your way to practice? All I saw were people. Also The author was too blunt when it came to the heroine's emotional line, which made the protagonist seem to be unable to walk when he saw a beautiful woman. Do you call this dual cultivation of life and life? I don't know if you really understand this thing when you write about the dual cultivation of life or life, or if you started writing fan fiction after reading one person's or blogger's explanation. Cultivation of the mind means cultivating yourself back to your original appearance as a child. That is to say, they cannot perceive what is beautiful, ugly, good and evil. In this kind of practice, there are no emotions or desires, but pure intention. You can go through deep meditation yourself and see if you have any thoughts about desires, beauties and handsome men in this state. In essence, it is still lust and impurity. The cultivation of the mind has not been done well. Otherwise, it is pure appreciation of beautiful things. How can I feel uneasy or shy because of my open heart? This is basically a common problem when writing about the same person. Everyone treats it as fiction and forgets that it is based on reality. Compared to others, you at least still maintain a superficial respect for the original work, but the actual core has changed. Of course, I am more realistic, otherwise who would care whether novels or works are true and logical? If I really want to see something logical and true, why not just look at the origin of Dao Master's Qi Ti. What novel are you reading?

How can I put it this way? The writing is really good, the writing style is calm and solid, and the plot is well designed. After reading so many fans, I really recommend this book. It won't be too "really cool" like other Golden Finger fans, but it's also a step-by-step path to invincibility. The interactions between each character and event are also very good, and some celebrities and major events in history are also interspersed to increase the interest without overly affecting the overall story. I just want people to continue reading. (Representing only personal views) In summary, it looks great! Love watching! Author quick update [laughs]

A super innovative fanfic that uses another perspective and another timeline to add to the story. It mainly tells the story of the Republic of China period. It's really good! How can I put it this way? I really put a lot of effort into this novel. After all, it is my first book. While making readers like it, I also tried my best to make the logic self-consistent and make the cool points keep appearing. Although the protagonist will be the strongest in the end, there will still be many dissatisfactions. After all, no one's life can be without regrets. It is not a cool article, but the protagonist's life events are still very smooth. Everyone can like it!

This book is truly the best fan fiction I have ever read. There are battle experiences and fireworks. Although the writing is not as good as everyone else's, many details such as foreshadowing are handled well. In particular, some of the characters that only exist in the Past are more fleshed-out in them, rather than just a few words in the original work. The gentle and elegant Lu Ren, the heroic Wulu King Kong, and the two brothers who are gentle and casual and take good care of the male protagonist. There are many more characters that I won't list here one by one, but in short, full marks. Also, the updates are too slow. I hope you can update them five times a day [laughing] [laughing]

This book is really good-looking. It is the best fanfic about one person that I have ever read. Although I don't know why the rating is not high, I think it will definitely become popular in the future. Come on, the author [sending my heart]. However, I saw that the author said that writing in modern times is almost over, so I would like to ask, author, if you can write a little more in modern times. I want to see Xi Yuan's daily life after arriving in modern times, as well as many modern plots [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's a rare masterpiece written by one person and one person. It's so enjoyable to watch that I can't stop watching it. The protagonists of this book are the Trinity Clan and the Tang Clan. The timeline spans the story from the Republic of China to the Anti-Japanese War, and has just reached the founding of the People's Republic of China. Whether it's the storyline design or the fighting scenes, they are all very exciting. Whether it is the rendering of feelings about family and country or the description of various emotions, they are all very delicate. The growth of the protagonist's psychological journey and the desire to make up for regrets but some things are unstoppable are very attractive. I read it in one sitting and recommend it.

The writing is very good, but there are too many emotional scenes [face covering] The author could write less about the relationship with the heroine, and more would be nice To be honest, author, if you didn't write about marriage, the rating of this book would definitely be very high. Really, people nowadays don't like to read about family affairs. If you can't write it, you can stop and think about how to write it. As long as your book is updated, I will follow it to the end [face covering]

This novel is one of the best in my opinion, and it only represents one person. Maybe I just like this novel, and I feel that it has no other shortcomings except that it is a little short. Also, will the author continue to extend into the original plot, that is, Zhang Chulan's part? What I am worried about now is this. There are many authors who only talk about the first part, and then generally fail to get to the original plot.

Nine points out of ten are excellent. It has a good grasp of experience. It does not have the feeling of a running account like other peers. Most of the time, it will not pretend to be profound about things that are unfamiliar to me. Even if there is content that touches unfamiliar places, it is very authentic. At least I don't understand it even if I say it. I will listen to questions when I have questions. Generally speaking, it is very easy to understand. Complicating simple things is not my ability, but making complex things simple is my ability. At least what I'm watching now doesn't have any logic or plot breakdown. At least I can understand most of the motivations for the protagonist's actions. To sum up, I can understand why he does what he does. Gentlemen, I have always been curious about this thing!

It's a rare one-person fanfic. It's one of the highest-quality one-person fanfics in Tomato. It's very good-looking. Although it's a bit boring in the middle, overall it's still very exciting. Xi Yuan and Lu Huizhong's love story is also very moving. The ending of giving up the ascension is simply amazing [Like][Like][Like] It also makes up for a lot of regrets. It is like a one-person prequel and there is less interaction with the protagonist group. It would be great if the Trinity Gate really has such a long history. The author also respects the character of the original characters. In many places, he insists on his own ideas even if he is scolded by readers. It is worth reading [Like] [Like] [Like]

Now I have read more than 60 chapters. I went there. Why is it so good? This book was recommended to me a long time ago, but I have the habit of reading books. I just opened it yesterday and read it. I was so excited. I completely like this rhythm. Whether it is the single heroine Aunt Lu, I see that there are Some people comment on paragraphs that are toxic or poorly written, etc. I don't think so. I look forward to continuing writing in this style. The fact that the author appears so frequently shows that he takes readers' opinions very seriously. I hope he will continue writing and not be a eunuch. I hope that when the author sees some people saying that they are interesting to read or think that something you wrote is not good, he will not change his rhythm and ideas of writing the book too much. If you want to say that some people don't like it, some people will like it. Everyone has their own content that they like to read. It is impossible to serve everyone well. If your ideas are modified too much by other people's suggestions, you may win over some readers, but you will also lose some readers.

The story is long, the characterization is very specific, and it focuses on the process of character description and emotional foreshadowing. The protagonist's behavior is consistent with the character, and other plot characters have not been deformed. Following small things can change the irreversible path of the general trend, and even the most exhausted human resources cannot buck the trend. Secondly, the experience between Xi Yuan and the master was quite touching. I did shed tears. I had experienced parting and death, and I really felt the same. The only thing that makes me feel frivolous is the love between Xi Yuan and his wife. The kind of love at first sight, no resonance, the kind of love at first sight, not very sympathetic. Overall, this is a rare good book, one of the few that does not fast forward and stops slowly, not bad, not bad.

I have been chasing it for a long time, and I have been chasing it for a long time. After I finished it, I kept chasing it. Xi Yuan's character design at the beginning of this book was not that good. I felt that it was quite disconnected when I first met Lu Huizhong. But as I read along, I saw Xi Yuan's growth, his growth as an ordinary person, how he treats others, and the character's personality is also relatively fresh. Ming, as of now, it is still a very good book. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but I think it is very troublesome and powerful to write out the story line and plot of the novel, so I give it five stars to support it. Keep writing, don't write too much, and update it in a timely manner. This book will definitely do well. @

It's really the best fanfic I've ever read. It has its own ideas, and there aren't many emotional scenes, but the fighting and plot are really unique.

The most interesting one, from the ignorance of the protagonist when he was a child, to the grief of his master's death when he was a boy, to becoming famous in the world in his youth, to serving the country wholeheartedly in his middle age, to the current Immortal Hengqu. I started reading it when I was 25 years old. I read the only book with three accounts. I read it on my tablet when I got it, and on my mobile phone when I got it. I was still in high school when I saw that Mi Er had drawn the Trinity Chapter. There are many novels in the same Trinity sect, either finished or discontinued, or even written in a completely different way. Only this one by the author still maintains the original intention. The writing is getting better and better, the characters are created, and some past events from the past are written more and more delicately. I haven't read it for a long time. When I saw this cover again, I was filled with emotions and memories came to my heart. This gave me the most perfect ending for the regret I had when I read Under One Person. Alas, when I got emotional, I had a lot to say. In short, with the highest respect, I would like to give five stars to Hengqu Immortal

Rotten Tomatoes is a rare fanfic under one person. The writing is really good. The most difficult thing for one person to let go of is the Trinity Sect. In my opinion, Trinity's exercises have more of a feeling of cultivating immortals. Five-star praise. I hope to see more ingenuity from the author.

Mr. Qingfeng's portrayal in this book is so flavorful. After reading it several times, I am still moved by the interaction between grandfather and grandson at the beginning. Very graphic, high-quality, high-quality.

Not bad, not bad, it suits my taste. I personally feel a little embarrassed in terms of emotional development, but overall it has flaws. I just don't know what the plot will be like in the future. It would be great if I can maintain the current level [laughing and crying]

How can I put it? The plot is more realistic than the normal humanistic novels under one person. It is not too exaggerated like other ones where the life reaches the full level all at once. Fortunately, this one has the kind of layering that slowly adds up to the excitement.

It's very good. Although I skipped reading and just watched the key plot, the early stage is a bit boring and the progress is slow. From the middle and late stages, the plot becomes familiar, but the progress is slow but very reasonable. I make friends with heroes from all walks of life and travel around. The writing is good, the plot is reasonable, there is cause and effect and logic, it is good to watch.

The writing is very good. It is the only novel I have read in the past year. The flaws are not hidden. The score of 7.9 Is much lower. It satisfies my fantasy of the three reverse lives. The plain writing style creates an extraordinary story. If you want to read a fanfic under one person, this is a very good choice.

This book is the one that most follows the core settings of the original work among all the fanfics I have seen so far. Unlike other fans who either borrow a shell and jump out of the original work to directly cultivate immortality, or they only have powerful techniques. Completely forgetting that the original work has been telling us that only life is fundamental. No matter how powerful the Eight Wonders are, they are just techniques. It has been so long since the Jiashen Rebellion. Why are the founders of the Eight Wonders who are still alive still hiding in Tibet? It is not because they do not dare to come out because of insufficient cultivation.

Bad relationship scene, but other than that it's pretty good.

I've read Chapter 360. Although it does not have as much understanding of Taoist culture as the original work, it is really good about the interaction between people, that is, the cultivation of one's nature and mind. The original characters currently appear in the older generation, and they are still young, and no inappropriate characters have been found yet. The author can write his own book with such writing power. For the time being, less than 8 points is too low.

It's 10 out of 10 or even 90 out of 10 good-looking. I'm not going to talk nonsense. You can read this book as the original. Although the time-travel plot is old-fashioned, it is different from other cool novels in human skin. The logic is clear and the emotions are delicate. It can be seen that it is the author's true feelings. Moreover, there is nothing to say about the fighting and plot. There is no need to worry about HE. Basically, the BE in the original work has been redeemed by the protagonist. Now it is about to enter the modern chapter. I also hope that the author will continue to work hard👏🏻 [laughs]

It looks good. Keep writing. It's quite interesting. It's much better than those who pretend to be one-person fanfics and end up writing cool stories.

Although this is the author's first book, it is not difficult to see from the lines that the author's writing style is still quite skillful. It can be said to be the best one-person novel in Tomato. It is very enjoyable to read. The protagonist is triple invincible. I feel very happy, and I look forward to how the Jiashen Rebellion will unfold after having the protagonist. Looking forward to what kind of story the elderly protagonist will have in the modern era. I just found out why it's only 8 points now? I have read a lot of Under One Man fanfics, at least five or six, but none of them attracted me. If there was a quality rating, I would give it a high score of 9.5.

I may be considered a veteran reader of this novel. I have added it to my bookshelf since he first started writing it. This book is really good, the content is also good, and it is worth reading. However, the ending is a bit rushed, but in other aspects it is still good. Worth recommending.

This is the best fanfic I have read so far.

It is a rare and logical book about the same person. It is not embarrassing to read, and the development of the influences in the middle is explained very clearly. Although there is only a short section where the protagonist is not very likable, overall it is very good in terms of detailed explanation of the exercises and fighting. The section about beating the little devil is quite enjoyable, but I feel that Lu Ren should be saved. The previous part about the fictional master is still very good and interesting.