The Outcast, Little Martial Uncle of Trinity One

It's pretty good, and the previous content is also very consistent with the setting of the original work. Unfortunately, I don't like to read the heroine's emotional line. And the protagonist has not cultivated his mind, Can't be honest Without a sincere heart, it is impossible not to deceive Heaven and oneself. He also has no intention to practice, just like Yang Guo in the early days of The Legend of the Condor Heroes. The author definitely has not understood this system in reality. Even if you have to practice this kind of thing in all seasons, it requires great perseverance. For example, if you are asked to study math problems day and night regardless of spring, summer, autumn, or winter, how would you react? Can you persist? This is the meaning of cultivating the mind. And if you are in this state, how can you care about the red and pink skulls on your way to practice? All I saw were people. Also The author was too blunt when it came to the heroine's emotional line, which made the protagonist seem to be unable to walk when he saw a beautiful woman. Do you call this dual cultivation of life and life? I don't know if you really understand this thing when you write about the dual cultivation of life or life, or if you started writing fan fiction after reading one person's or blogger's explanation. Cultivation of the mind means cultivating yourself back to your original appearance as a child. That is to say, they cannot perceive what is beautiful, ugly, good and evil. In this kind of practice, there are no emotions or desires, but pure intention. You can go through deep meditation yourself and see if you have any thoughts about desires, beauties and handsome men in this state. In essence, it is still lust and impurity. The cultivation of the mind has not been done well. Otherwise, it is pure appreciation of beautiful things. How can I feel uneasy or shy because of my open heart? This is basically a common problem when writing about the same person. Everyone treats it as fiction and forgets that it is based on reality. Compared to others, you at least still maintain a superficial respect for the original work, but the actual core has changed. Of course, I am more realistic, otherwise who would care whether novels or works are true and logical? If I really want to see something logical and true, why not just look at the origin of Dao Master's Qi Ti. What novel are you reading?

How can I put it this way? The writing is really good, the writing style is calm and solid, and the plot is well designed. After reading so many fans, I really recommend this book. It won't be too "really cool" like other Golden Finger fans, but it's also a step-by-step path to invincibility. The interactions between each character and event are also very good, and some celebrities and major events in history are also interspersed to increase the interest without overly affecting the overall story. I just want people to continue reading. (Representing only personal views) In summary, it looks great! Love watching! Author quick update [laughs]

A super innovative fanfic that uses another perspective and another timeline to add to the story. It mainly tells the story of the Republic of China period. It's really good! How can I put it this way? I really put a lot of effort into this novel. After all, it is my first book. While making readers like it, I also tried my best to make the logic self-consistent and make the cool points keep appearing. Although the protagonist will be the strongest in the end, there will still be many dissatisfactions. After all, no one's life can be without regrets. It is not a cool article, but the protagonist's life events are still very smooth. Everyone can like it!

This book is truly the best fan fiction I have ever read. There are battle experiences and fireworks. Although the writing is not as good as everyone else's, many details such as foreshadowing are handled well. In particular, some of the characters that only exist in the Past are more fleshed-out in them, rather than just a few words in the original work. The gentle and elegant Lu Ren, the heroic Wulu King Kong, and the two brothers who are gentle and casual and take good care of the male protagonist. There are many more characters that I won't list here one by one, but in short, full marks. Also, the updates are too slow. I hope you can update them five times a day [laughing] [laughing]

This book is really good-looking. It is the best fanfic about one person that I have ever read. Although I don't know why the rating is not high, I think it will definitely become popular in the future. Come on, the author [sending my heart]. However, I saw that the author said that writing in modern times is almost over, so I would like to ask, author, if you can write a little more in modern times. I want to see Xi Yuan's daily life after arriving in modern times, as well as many modern plots [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's a rare one-person fanfic. It's one of the highest-quality one-person fanfics in Tomato. It's very good-looking. Although it's a bit boring in the middle, overall it's still very exciting. Xi Yuan and Lu Huizhong's love story is also very moving. The ending of giving up the ascension is simply amazing 👍👍👍 It also makes up for a lot of regrets. It is like a one-person prequel and there is less interaction with the protagonist group. It would be great if the Trinity Gate really has such a long history. The author also respects the character of the original characters. In many places, he insists on his own ideas even if he is scolded by readers. It is worth reading 👍 👍 👍

It's a rare masterpiece written by one person and one person. It's so enjoyable to watch that I can't stop watching it. The protagonists of this book are the Trinity Clan and the Tang Clan. The timeline spans the story from the Republic of China to the Anti-Japanese War, and has just reached the founding of the People's Republic of China. Whether it's the storyline design or the fighting scenes, they are all very exciting. Whether it is the rendering of feelings about family and country or the description of various emotions, they are all very delicate. The growth of the protagonist's psychological journey and the desire to make up for regrets but some things are unstoppable are very attractive. I read it in one sitting and recommend it.

This novel is one of the best in my opinion, and it only represents one person. Maybe I just like this novel, and I feel that it has no other shortcomings except that it is a little short. Also, will the author continue to extend into the original plot, that is, Zhang Chulan's part? What I am worried about now is this. There are many authors who only talk about the first part, and then generally fail to get to the original plot.

The writing is very good, but there are too many emotional scenes 🤦 The author could write less about the relationship with the heroine, and more would be nice To be honest, author, if you didn't write about marriage, the rating of this book would definitely be very high. Really, people nowadays don't like to read about family affairs. If you can't write it, you can stop and think about how to write it. As long as your book is updated, I will follow it to the end 🤦

Nine points out of ten are excellent. It has a good grasp of experience. It does not have the feeling of a running account like other peers. Most of the time, it will not pretend to be profound about things that are unfamiliar to me. Even if there is content that touches unfamiliar places, it is very authentic. At least I don't understand it even if I say it. I will listen to questions when I have questions. Generally speaking, it is very easy to understand. Complicating simple things is not my ability, but making complex things simple is my ability. At least what I'm watching now doesn't have any logic or plot breakdown. At least I can understand most of the motivations for the protagonist's actions. To sum up, I can understand why he does what he does. Gentlemen, I have always been curious about this thing!