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It can be seen that the author has great ambitions, so I am also prepared to use relatively strict standards to evaluate this book Let me praise it first. The author has a very rich imagination, good creativity, and a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage. The emotional aspect is quite touching, and he has his own way of controlling the characters. What follows may not be so pleasant. Just like the closing remarks, the author wants to say a lot. The plot is very twists and turns. It can be seen that the author has tried his best to write this book well. But that's the problem. The author wants to say too much, and there are many plot twists before and after. I have already mentioned it in the previous article. In the following article, the protagonist acts as if he doesn't know, making the protagonist sometimes look like a fool with a particularly bad memory. Furthermore, most of the reversals are concentrated in the last 100,000 words, or even the last 50,000 words. The final boss appears too late, and the sense of presence in the early stage is too low, resulting in a sense of separation and confusion in the context. It can be seen that the author is indeed better at describing characters, whether it is character or emotion. So in the early stage, when he focused more on foreshadowing and emotional portrayal of characters, I really felt that the writing was very good. In the later stage, when he focused more on plot portrayal, his writing power obviously could not keep up with his thinking. (Forgive me, in my humble opinion, it is best to end this article when Zhuang Qiu knows that this is the game world and the battle between monsters. Or if there is a small reversal here according to the author's grasp of the character, a creative, exciting and relatively safe book will be completed. There are gains and losses, right? Of course, the content inside the parentheses has some meaning to guide writing, and the author can just ignore it) Although these shortcomings have somewhat reduced my perception, in fact, these can be overcome with writing experience. I always believe that the author's creativity is the most irreplaceable wealth, so I gave it four stars, which is considered an encouragement. Author, keep up the good work

Full marks. This book is really profound. Many people will be dissuaded by the beginning, but the plot behind it is actually really exciting. Reality and illusion, man and nature, race and race. The author only described these, He didn't explain it, just simply described it. Real and realistic. All manipulated despair, cause and effect, gratitude and hatred, right and wrong, reality and illusion. It's enough to make people think. The whole book is emotionally delicate, but the plot line is even more prominent. You can feel the desperate struggle of the characters in the plot, and you can also feel their persistence. Fate plays tricks on people. The world itself is not simply determined by right or wrong. The relationship between the protagonists has never been about who licks whom, and Zhuang Qiu is not a dog licker. His love is a pure emotion, so much so that it later turned into an obsession in such a plot cycle. So it's really not a licking of a dog. Stop saying that. I really feel for him. His love is not humble, but despair and caution in the long cycle of plot. Some people always say that he is not sober enough and is a licker. But when did this kind of love become dog-licking?

This book gave me the impression that it kept reversing, reversing and reversing. I thought it was a very cliché plot, but it is not! ! When I encountered the first reversal, it attracted me. After that, I thought the plot would go as I imagined, but it suddenly caught me off guard. Oh my God, I was thinking at the time, this setting is so awesome. Hahahahahahahahahaha, after watching it all, I feel that every character is well portrayed and very vivid. The character who was relatively annoying in the early stage will unlock his life experience and the following story in the later stage. You will find that you can't hate him, and you will even feel that it is natural. The author writes the emotions very delicately. Moreover, there are many contradictions in this novel, between humans and animals, humans and nature, etc. For those who often read popular novels, this novel is very eye-catching. In short, I highly recommend reading it. After all, his reversal will surprise you, but the rating is so low. I hope the rating will be higher in the future! Yes! October 31, 2024

It looks good, but overall it focuses more on the story than the romance? Can you comment like this? (Anjing) Next is the barrier to summary. If you still resolutely step into the trap after seeing the warning, you don't need to laugh at me. I'll tell you. You may mind: I summed up the cp keywords in one sentence to my relatives and friends. My relatives and friends were devastated in despair, so I beat them to death (good children should not imitate this). It has a lot of words but not much romance plot. Brothers who want to happily consume CP should remember to leave. The story is well written, and the ending is not unfinished that is rarely seen. The sub-CP is there, and the main CP is Crematorium, but not interesting (hey) if you come here because of liver pain, you can, but don't have high expectations. If you don't mind the above, come and see it, please. It's really beautiful. You see, I've been chasing the products all day long, right? Uh-huh, huh-huh? Please

Family members, this novel is a treasure, you won't lose money by investing in it‼ ️ When I first read the synopsis, I thought it was a bit funny, but I was quite interested in the person who works silently and occasionally goes crazy and attacks✖️who looks gentle but is actually yandere and suffers from such a problem. Clicking in, I found that it is not all lighthearted and funny. The author also said in the ending that he wanted to write something deeper. The conflicts between races can indeed be seen. They are interlocking and deeply embedded. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good. The image of each character is quite distinct and three-dimensional. The feelings between the protagonists are so delicately portrayed. I praise the author! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] At first I thought the protagonist was an NPC in the novel, but later I found out that it was a game that had to be shut down. This really surprised me, and the extra chapter also revealed some preludes to the main plot. When I am so moved, it can be regarded as having a beginning and an end, and I don't think anything is weird anymore. In addition, I always feel that the ending is a bit rushed. The word count of this novel can actually be one million words, or 800,000 at worst, hahahaha😂 But to be honest, in the middle, Zhuang Qiu possessed the demon king and devoted himself to cultivation. I almost thought I was in a male-channeled immortality novel without cp. I went out to look at the tags and found that there was no double male protagonist tag, so I thought it was a scam profile. (PS: Quietly, I feel that this novel by the author is likely to be remade many years later. It is actually very interesting, so I'll give it a try, just in case~)

It's been a long time since I've read a book continuously. I always read another book halfway through. But I have been reading this book for the past few days and finally finished it today. Their story is a whole world to me. I think the author wrote something particularly well, "When a character has his own consciousness, he is not just a paper person, but a real person who gives his own meaning." This feeling has been there from the beginning. Zhuang Qiu knows that he is in the plot, but he does not regard this world as a child's play. He knew it was nothing, but he was living in the present moment. "Zhuang Qiu" in the real world also said that he is stronger than his creator. I was also deeply touched when I saw this. I have experienced so much with Zhuang Qiu, from feeling sorry for Zhuang Qiu to admiring Zhuang Qiu. On the other hand, this sentence is also equivalent to an acknowledgment that Zhuang Qiu, as a created character, has gained equal attention in the real world by himself. By analogy, who can rule whom in these two worlds? People living in them are deducing on their own. Since the game left the server, the two worlds have become equal to each other. So after the ending, apart from feeling sad, I believe they will continue to write their stories in their own world, but we readers will have to look away and cannot continue to watch them. There is also the issue of who is superior between Zhuang Qiu and Ji Qingning. The author and I have the same point of view. As long as two people love each other, being superior or inferior is just a process of flirting. Fighting fiercely to be the attacker does not look like lovers, but more like fighting for a man's territory [laughing and crying] No one is born to be weaker than others, to be inferior to others for love, and to compete for the dignity of a man. But if you only want to enjoy yourself and suppress the feelings of your partner, then this kind of love is mixed with selfishness. At first I just read it as an ordinary book, but the more I read, the more surprised I became. It's hard to find books with this kind of perspective in today's environment, so I found one It's a pity that I saw this book on the homepage recommendation a few days ago, and found that the author completed it all at once. If it were updated slowly, maybe there would be more readers and more opportunities for discussion. Thank you to the author for devoting such a good book to letting readers take a trip into Zhuang Qiu's world. May they live as long as heaven and earth and be prosperous for the rest of their lives. 🌸

Compared with the brainless novel, it touches people's hearts and is very imaginative. It is not particularly routine and template-like development. The relationship between Zhuang Qiu and Ji Qingning is like the raindrops in the plum rain season in the south of the Yangtze River. The description of the natural good and evil desires of human beings and the brave questioning of Zhuang Qiu's world make people feel that they are brought into a rich world view to think about Zhuang Qiu's continuous awareness of the ups and downs of his own self. On the life journey of exploring the proposition of "I am me, and I want to be me", Zhuang Qiu was very painful but always held on to his faith. After the experience, he was so open-minded. This is because he strived for a broader understanding after the sad decision, and found his own acceptance and tolerance in the world of immortality. The ins and outs of the characters are clear and distinctive, and the details are sharp.

Really, the previous description made me cry non-stop. It was really uncomfortable to have no sense of existence. Everything I did at that time was obviously that the distance had become closer and the relationship had become better, but it was forgotten again and again, and even became the credit of others. It's true😭😭😭 Maybe from God's perspective, Zhuang Qiu is not worthy, but love is so uncontrollable. There is also Lu Xuan. I always hated the way he spoke condescendingly. Zhuang Qiu didn't know it, but he spoke as if he was showing off. Later, when his identity was revealed, he understood. No wonder he is so special.

Overall, it's pretty good. The rating of 7.6 Is somewhat underestimated, and it could be higher. It's very suitable for reading in one go during vacation. I saw a book friend wrote a relatively long book review. It was very pertinent and I agree with most of the points. There are some bugs in the plot. What impressed me most were Du Qi and Zhuang Qiu. I remembered where I had seen them before but couldn't remember who they were later. This is a bit contradictory. As the author said in his closing remarks, it was probably because it was the first time he wrote a plot-oriented novel. There were too many things that he wanted to express in the text. In the end, he was reluctant to take it back. I feel that there are still many points that can be written more. It's a pity that Lu Xuan and Shenyin are a couple (or is it Shenyin × Lu Xuan?). Their fate is about to end and they are separated in the mainland. Why don't they meet here? (My heart: Don't be like this...) There is no role for Shenyin in the last few chapters, which is a pity and should be written more. The final plot of the story starts from the starting point. I hope there will be less regrets this time and there will not be a second human-monster war. Thank you very much to the author for writing this article.

Not bad, the plot is rich and colorful, Zhuang Qiu's life experience is a bit sadistic, there are also forgotten sacrifices, and the sadness of being ignored, but in the end it has a happy ending, which is pretty good. The supporting characters are all a bit miserable, and none of them are he. The pair of Hong Qing and Yu Hanxiao are full of helplessness due to fate, which is a bit sad. Master and Lu Xuan can actually be regarded as OE. Who knows what will happen in the future? After all, humans and monsters coexist peacefully. The author's world view is quite grand and novel, but some parts are not fully explained. Maybe it's because I read it quickly. After reading it, I felt a little lost. Overall, I feel good. I also hope that Ziqiu and Qingning can be happy together.

[Eat Melon][Eat Melon][Eat Melon] Sure enough, the finished book is a joy to read. Even though I watched it in one sitting, I still regret it As for this book, I won't spoil it. The sense of logic is quite strong. This is a type of book that I like very much, but I wouldn't want to read it again because it's too intrusive and unfriendly to me [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua] When reading a book, if it's too stuck, I'll take it in a little bit. It's too difficult to make a play [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

I don't know why the rating is so low, it's really beautiful. I stayed up late to catch up to the ending, feeling a little disappointed. Following the determined Zhuang Qiu, the best ending came little by little. People and things along the way were blown away like a breeze. Uncle Qinghong, Shenyin, Mo Ran and Lu Xuan... Although there were regrets along the way and no constant companions, they all found their final destination. It's hard to say whether it's good or bad, just like the water ripples caused by the drizzle on the lake, or the green leaves rustling in the breeze.

The plot is compact and the plot is rigorous. This is the only book I can almost finish on Tomato. Because of the plot, I often ignore the imperfections of the characters. For example, Ji Qingning is in a wheelchair, but I forget it because of the plot and treat him as a normal person. It is not as good as Zhuang Qiu is a skeleton. If Ji Qingning hadn't mentioned it before, I would not have regarded him as a skeleton. I think the most worthwhile thing about this book is that Lu Xuan was the original protagonist. The author did not weaken Lu Xuan or write Lu Xuan into a bad character because of Zhuang Qiu's awakening. For example, Lu Xuan can understand Zhuang Qiu's words and like it, and he can enter that space with Zhuang Qiu. This is the aura he should have as the original protagonist. Lu Xuan also slowly awakens (not really, but he wants to gain powerful power). Although he is a late villain, I don't find him annoying. (The above only represents my personal views)

After reading it, I actually have a lot of regrets in the book. To be honest, I didn't like Lu Xuan very much from the beginning. There is no reason, I just don't like it. It can be said that I hate it. Why can he be so heartless, indifferent to everything, and so taken for granted and unreasonable? Noisy, but at the end of watching it, I suddenly felt a little relieved. Maybe he and Master were destined not to be together. Maybe I didn't actually feel sorry for Lu Xuan, I felt sorry for Shenyin. There was no way he just liked Lu Xuan but was hurt so deeply. It would have been better if he hadn't met Lu Xuan. . .

After reading the introduction, I thought it was just a cliché story, but I didn't expect the world view to be so vast! Wuwu Tomato actually has such a good book. Apart from the feeling that Ji's feelings for the protagonist are a bit abrupt, the plot is really smooth and keeps twisting and turning! Nice! Love watching! I really love this kind of group portrait, it feels like reading a previous book, it's not just about romance! Everyone is not mean, they are full-bodied and have different standpoints. There is no pure good or evil. The character creation is really successful!

It's very interesting, it's a complete story. By the way, everyone in the comment section likes the junior brother very much, but isn't this the character of a naughty kid with middle school disease? I hate him when he doesn't explode. It's not that he's outrageous, I just don't understand why everyone likes him.

It's a pity that Zhuang didn't counterattack once. This is the first time I stand on the opposite side [face covering] Overall, it's pretty good. The author's writing is super good. Jimei guys, hurry up! ! ! !

Nice! At first, when I looked at the introduction and name, I thought it was just a little abstract sweet article. Originally, he came here to see Ji Qingning counterattack Zhuang Qiu. The plot twist at the end was so interesting that I watched it intermittently for three or four days. What left a deep impression was the part where the affiliated sect as hostages fought back against the monsters during the battle with the monsters. In addition, the character Qinghong really has a lot of flaws. The person who has an emotional connection with her is Zhuang Qiu himself, but from the perspective of Zhuang Qiu, as readers, this character is really hard to like. In the early stage, he killed the Holy Son out of revenge. Just kill him. Later, he fell in love with him and regretted killing him. It is difficult to understand. Her early character design was like being surrounded by thousands of flowers without even a leaf touching her body. I fell in love when I met Yu Hanxiao, a beautiful and upright enemy. Does that mean she has some conscience? Later, he turned against the protagonist again and again. When I participated in the human-animal hybrid experiment, I couldn't see this shining point again. He also gave up his original plan to kill his enemies for the sake of Yu Hanxiao (referring to letting Yu Xilong die at the hands of Yu Hanxiao). If you hadn't persisted in surviving to seek revenge, wouldn't you have killed Yu Hanxiao just to make Yu Xilong grief-stricken? For the sake of a dead man, I missed the opportunity to cause pain to my enemy. The various rebellions that followed can be understood as the fact that people have different paths and do not work together. But this character makes people angry. It's the kind of person who stands opposite to the protagonist time and time again. The protagonist still has to worry about their past relationship, and it's hard to be unhappy with her by saying bad things to her. The character design at the beginning is quite good, but as you get to the back, you feel that this character is not as free and easy as it seems on the surface, and is even a bit petty.

Tomato's own original work is Shili's gold rush, but each one he moved looks better than the other one [face covering]

The author's writing style in shaping the characters is a little lacking, but the story is very interesting. It grew a lot later in the writing. It was only when I continued to read Shenyin's Past that I felt that the main line became clear, and I started to fill in the holes. Shenyin's Past began to look good. If you can't stand it, hang on! A clear world view and sweet love can only begin from Shenyin's past [shy][shy][shy]

It feels like there are three versions of Zhuang Qiu's character. The first version is before death, the second version is after resurrection, and the third version is after returning to the original body and losing amnesia. I prefer the first version of his character.

Why is it only 7.5? In Tomato, this book can be 9.9. It has twists, foreshadowing, and pitfalls. Every character is a protagonist and has his own story line. Each character has a heart-wrenching experience and his own reasons. The protagonist is constantly growing, and the supporting characters are also growing. I hope there will be more and more books like this. Thank you to the author for bringing us such an excellent work. I wish the author will get better and better, and the characters in the book will also get better and better in another world...

The writing is pretty good, but it feels a bit flat. The objective recommendation here is that it is complete after all, and the content is not boring, so it is worth reading. If you have not found the kind of article that you particularly like, then you can also read this article. Of course, there will be people who particularly like this article. Um. If you want to watch it, it is best to wait for a free time and finish it directly instead of reading it intermittently. For this book, I personally think that this kind of viewing experience will be better.

Finally finished reading. I really liked Zhuang Qiu at the beginning, until he was the Demon Lord, he was okay, but after his resurrection, it felt like his character fell apart.

I think this book is more than 7.5 Points. Too few people pay attention to it. The characters and plots are very exciting. I am a person who easily abandons writing, but I didn't when I read this book. I hope this book will become popular.

The works of the boss are very good. I started to watch the works of the boss from the villain's rebirth. It was really refreshing to watch it in one go. However, after finishing it, I just felt lonely and felt empty in my heart. Here I wish Xiaozhuang Xiaojihe and the beauty ✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎!

Zhuang Qiu×Ji Qingning I feel very sad.

The article is very interesting and the quality is good. I found another treasure in Tomato.

It's quite good to read. It's rare to see such thoughtful novels. There aren't many emotional scenes, but it's quite good to read. The book isn't particularly long, so it's easy to keep reading. The long novel Cultivation to Immortality that I read before couldn't be finished halfway through.

Nice looking, emotional line, well, how can I put it, I prefer those with long mouths The characters are really well-described, and so is the plot.