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It's very, very good-looking and very innovative. As for this book, even though I knew very early on that Ying Fuxin was the biggest villain and had done many, many wrong things, which was very irritating, the strange thing in the comment section is that there are always second-rate friends saying that they hate this character but can't hate it, and love it but can't fall in love with it. I was confused until I saw the truth Regarding those tragedies, especially the one involving Master, I can only say one thing: "It's a combination of circumstances and unpredictable." The coping mentality is indeed a relatively extreme egoism, but the kindness of others is too warm. Plus what this character has been through and his character. I can understand why some readers say that this character is very three-dimensional, independent and distinct. I still hate him a little, but there are only some unspeakable emotions in my heart. The novelty of the story is very good. It is very novel in a cookie-cutter website like Tomato. It is very beautiful and interlocking! It's not too brain-burning, it looks fun and interesting! Good review! A masterpiece! Okay, completely finished. I really found this book very complicated. Many people died along the way, and some were resurrected in the end. However, Miss Bai stayed beside her parents' graves forever. Nie Yan atones for his sins at the cost of death. He is really a very righteous and righteous person, strict with himself and others. Ying Fuxin was firmly chosen only twice in his life, once by his master, and secondly by Nie Yan's unwavering love, but even love could not erase the sins Ying Fuxin had committed, so he, who was just, finally died with him. Most of the people in this book are trapped in the past, they are trapped by their own past, some take one wrong step, and some keep it until the clouds open and finally see the moon. They draw the ground as a prison, and put a layer of heavy unspeakable shackles on themselves. Empress Shangshan is trapped in her own past, Yuanyuan is trapped in the Zhenhua Sect tragedy, Ying Fuxin is trapped in many years of his past, and Nie Yan is trapped in the beauty of the past. Everyone draws the earth as a cage. Some have come out, some have spent their whole lives atonement for their sins, and some have died to apologize. I can't think of a better ending for them, because no matter how they go, this is their destined destiny. Finally a little lucky "Some people can't accept the lingering hatred in this life, let alone turn around from the sea of suffering." "Fortunately, someone was willing to accompany me at the last moment and understood Lan Yin." Lan Yin and Xu Guo are an unavoidable disaster. There are many ifs, but those ifs are just ifs. "In this world, only gentleness and kindness can turn the ice in your heart." Even egoistic people will tremble when they encounter a pure and true kindness. The boat has passed the Ten Thousand Mountains

It's quite interesting to watch, mainly because there are many important points in their dialogue, but Lin Qingzhou doesn't pay attention to it every time, which slows down the progress of finding the truth. I feel a little aggrieved [face covering] ¯_༼ ಥ ‿ ಥ ༽_/¯

It's really beautiful! ! ! It's different from those male videos that systematically open cheat codes! ! ! Lin Qingzhou and Mu Zhongshan themselves are very good and gentle people. Unlike ordinary male protagonists who cultivate immortals, they will not talk about supporting justice all day long. The story begins with Qingzhou warming up Mu Zhongshan in the dungeon. The two people who were only close to each other because of the mission gradually came to like and rely on each other. Mu Zhongshan is not a sinful devil. He respects his teacher and saves Miss Bai, but he silently carries the dirty water for many years... The article is very smooth, and the number of chapters is just right not to be too procrastinating or too rushed! ! ! It's very immersive, and I can clearly feel why I fell in love with the other person, which is great! ! I like it so much! It's so cool to watch it! I also really like the story between Senior Brother and Ying Fuxin. You and I are both sinful people. I will kill you with my own hands and die with you. The eldest brother has always been gentle and patient, and he did not do anything excessive after expressing his feelings to Ying Fuxin. Ying Fuxin also likes the eldest brother, but he has suffered a blood feud. If he wants to take revenge, he must sacrifice his feelings for the eldest brother. But the extra is sweet! Neither of them encountered those sinful things, and they responded to this relationship cleanly and enthusiastically! ! ! The portrayal of other characters is also super good. There is no such person who clings to demons. Everyone is sensible and upright. Although most of them have wronged Mu Zhongshan before, after learning the truth, they did not continue to struggle for the so-called face of the sect, but were willing to apologize sincerely. My favorites are Rong Sifan and the girls in the workshop. They are enthusiastic, simple, but brave enough to protect Lin Qingzhou. Everyone is a good baby! ! ! I also like Miss Bai. She is really brave and kind. In another corner of time and space, she will not have to encounter those bad things. She will sit around with her family and drink hot tea [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] This is the third novel I have read by the author. The author is really great. Every novel is well written. I really like them all! The first one is about the prince and the secret guard, the second one is about the rebirth of the general, and the third one is this one. I really like it! ! ! Come on, author! I'm going to see the sentry and the guide [shy] I really like this setting!

This is a story about saving and uncovering the truth. The situation in which the Demon King is surrounded by enemies makes this story not lighthearted and funny. The overall tone is somewhat depressing. The characters are very three-dimensional. The process of uncovering the truth is not too smooth. The villain is very controversial. The final ending is very good, which is a surprising and reasonable twist. The author's writing style in describing the scenery is really good, adding a lot of new vocabulary with beautiful artistic conception. The relationship between the two protagonists in the early stage of the story is very atmospheric. The Demon King is world-weary and loves to tease people, while Xiaozhou has a very upright outlook on things and is a warm little sun.

A very touching article. Because of the Chunhua Sect incident, Zhongshan was disheartened and wanted to die. He was misunderstood by the world but still insisted on his true intention. The appearance of Qingzhou tore a gap in the heart of Zhongshan who had never seen the light of day, redeemed Zhongshan and gave him the motivation to live. Each character has its own characteristics. The author not only writes well but also frames the world very well. Thumbs up! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] (ps: I feel like my book reviews are so stiff [laughing and crying])

It's so good. Oh my god, Tomato has such a good book. It's heart-wrenching to read. Each character's personality is very distinct. I really hate the character Ying Fuxin, but after seeing what happened to him, I can't help but feel sorry for him. Alas, the extra episode is so good that it makes up for all the regrets. [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] Recommended to watch

I have found many similar novels to read, and this one is considered one of the best. . The interaction between Mu Zhongshan and Lin Qingzhou was really interesting and nothing awkward. The boat has passed the Ten Thousand Mountains, and when we return, we can see that spring is blooming. The non-protagonist characters also have full personalities and are not stereotyped. Even Ying Fu, who is regarded as the villain, has an unspeakable secret. . The plot is also full of twists and turns, and all the foreshadowing can be recycled. The writing is good, and some of the provocative parts don't feel gross, but feel like you're just going with the flow. The last thing I want to say is, it is true that good people are rewarded and those who do bad things must bear the consequences.

[Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] It looks great, I love Nie Yan's character, and the name Mu Zhongshan is really a demon! ! ! Qingzhou is like a ray of light, illuminating the world of Mu Zhongshan. It's really beautiful [crying]

My wife's writing style is so strong! The narrative language is so poetic~ (The author always tricks people into killing them☄ฺ(◣д◢)☄ฺ The characters of Mu Chongshan, Lin Qingzhou, Bai Nianfeng, and Wen Qin are all very touching, especially Mu Chongshan. Every character written by the author is my favorite character (the other one is Yan Heqing). Mu Chongshan is forbearing, but full of tenderness. In the beginning, the blood-stained, disfigured and dejected man in the Wuwu dungeon, who was shouted at by thousands of people, was finally saved by Qingzhou. From then on, he no longer sought death, but fell in love with Qingzhou. Fate is funny, and their love went through ups and downs. In terms of plot setting, this is the first time I have seen such a novel structure, which integrates the modern star field of cultivation into one, and the jade slip is the medium to communicate between the three. The setting of Mu Zhongshan's "gatekeeper" is very clever. Many plots echo each other, and you can see the feelings of different people from different perspectives. The author uses large ink to write about the experiences of Mu Zhongshan and Lan Xujun. The two overlap and explain the truth about the annihilation of the family. There are blank spaces and suspense, which is very interesting. The death of Miss Nian Feng is really unforgettable for me. She was really a good girl, gentle and strong. I still remember that Dang Qingzhou said that girls love beauty and made a wooden board for her to write on, for fear of wearing out her fingertips. Both of them were very gentle. ๐·°(৹˃̵˂̵৹)°·๐ They miss each other and wait to meet again. It would be great if one day they could meet each other in modern times and become friends again against the background of a perfect family and a happy life. Lan Xujun, Lan Yinxuguo, he deserves this title. He was born in darkness, but died in a gentle embrace. This is a great forgiveness for him. What I hate is his character and behavior, so I didn't watch the extra episode. However, if he had never made any mistakes from the beginning, paid attention to his sister, and was not so selfish, then the next thing should not happen. Killing for life, even those who love him, will not let him continue to do evil. Some people cannot accept the lingering hatred in this life, let alone turn around from the sea of suffering. Fortunately, someone was willing to accompany him at the last moment and understood Lan Yin. As the above sentence says. The boat has passed the Ten Thousand Mountains, When I meet you, I never say that spring is about to end. They have gone through all kinds of hardships and found the love of their lives, and they hope it will last forever in the modern era! 2024.12.18

It's very good-looking. It's different from traditional time-travel novels. It has its own core, and I also like the character of the protagonist. This is true love. It's not only good for each other, but also for strangers, and the torture part is not just for the sake of torture. It's very just right. But I'm still a little curious about how Liu Yue is doing? The protagonist told him that he had spiritual roots that could be cultivated, so did he stay in that sect later?

It is a book that is very miserable but has a gentle heart. The inner score is about 8.9, Which is slightly lower. The characters are vividly created, and it is not all black and white and there is an absolute villain. It is just that people are born with greed and partiality, coupled with some bad luck and low self-moral standards, it creates an irreparable tragedy. Everyone has their shining point, and death makes people want to sigh. Qingzhou's retention of Chongshan and Chongshan's respect for Qingzhou are moving. However, the mountain that has been despised by the whole world for several years is too heavy. A blood feud has been imposed on him, and he is blamed one after another without restraint. Therefore, the desire and regret of the person who made the mistake made people grit their teeth even more. The gentle putting down of the heavy mountain and even the final attempt to live towards death seemed helpless and powerless. The coincidence of the truth seems a bit ridiculous against the backdrop of enough pain to make people seek death and survival. Otherwise, I think this book can get a score of 9.5 Or above.

Whether I read it from the profound and sophisticated writing style, or from the ups and downs and completeness of the plot, characters and stories, this makes me praise the author from the bottom of my heart. Really... It has been a long time since I have read a book that is difficult to understand but I don't know where to start. Although I don't know why not many people read this kind of treasure book, but I must give it five stars! When I saw the double death ending of the deputy CPs Ying Fuxin and Nie Yan, I almost cried, but the double death is also a HE ending. Almost every character in the whole text has a harmonious ending. The emotional development of the story of the protagonists Lin Qingzhou and Mu Chongshan made me feel that it was realistically depicted. The story of love is not like other books that have all kinds of inexplicable love and confusing plots. This big book is very comfortable to read. It is obviously about love, but there are all kinds of things in the world. Newbies, remember to stick to the 20th chapter. You will open up new emotions in reading novels. Also, I am not asking for help! I only speak for immortal products! I want a second brush, I want a second brush! ! ! ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

The author is very good at writing, with a strong sense of immersion. There are many changes in the plot. The overall situation is not relaxing. There are some funny things, and there is also mutual love. Abuse is also indispensable. Most of the plots in the middle are very uncomfortable to watch. If you can't read this kind of attack, you have been wronged by the world. Except for the article about almost everyone betraying their relatives, really don't read it. It's so uncomfortable. Of course, it is still very interesting after the uncomfortable period. The author allows the protagonist to let go of the suffering he has endured, but readers who have read it may not be able to let go. Some of the tragic parts really made me feel uncomfortable for most of the day. Of course, the writing is beautiful, the writing is good, the characters are three-dimensional, and both of them are super handsome.

Really nice to look at. It felt very relaxed in the beginning, but gradually I realized the shackles Mu Zhongshan was carrying and his sense of wandering. He wanted to die, but fortunately Qingzhou rescued him. When faced with the choice, they both recognized each other without hesitation. Their story is like this sentence, "Perhaps love and piety have the same purpose. Someone snaps their fingers on your heart, and then all the desolate no-man's land, roses bloom in the wilderness of rebirth." I know that their story is not over yet, so I hope they will continue to write their stories in their world, and I hope they can truly feel each other's fiery heart.

After reading more than fifty chapters, I feel like there is an invisible knife hidden in this funny and light-hearted article. It doesn't hurt very much, but it can't hide the slight sadness. It's a bit uncomfortable and the attack is miserable. The article focuses on the description of sugar, but if you don't play jokes and the language is not humorous, it would be an abusive article if you look at it from another perspective. Of course, it looks good and is worth entering! I almost want to give up, but I'm still following the author's new novel "Mo Zun". Hahaha, back to the topic. I've read more than a hundred chapters of this article. Shou is indeed very simple, but it's different from the simple and kind-heartedness in the early stage. Later on, I became a little wiser, especially the sachet. The master stumbled and said when he was unconscious. Sachet, Sachet, but I still can't get enough attention. I attacked the Virgin, and I felt so aggrieved when I was wrongly accused and didn't clear myself. Then the rest of the plot kept dragging on without making any progress. Whenever something happened, I was delayed by some things. I probably also understood the subsequent plot development and ending. It was relatively routine, and it was as I guessed. But I may still insist on it. The author is very talented, and the emotional line and character creation are generally very satisfactory to me. It would be a pity to abandon it. I will look at it again and wait and see.

The writing is undoubtedly good, and Mu Zhongshan's character also pokes fun at me, but the plot is too frustrating, and the protagonist is passively beaten all the time. Qingzhou's brain circuitry and unnatural operations in the later stage are very annoying. No matter how stupid Baitian has gone through so many things, he shouldn't still be so stupid from the beginning to the end, right? [Cover face][cover face] In addition, the villain's aura was too high, and he was almost killed. There are so many extra chapters, but the author's own son hasn't run away. [Laughs][laughs]

Super unique ❤️The writing is also very good [laughs] Although it is based on time travel and comes to the world of cultivating immortals, it does not spend many, many chapters to describe in detail the improvement of cultivation through continuous cultivation and upgrading like other novels about cultivating immortals. Instead, it spends more time starting from The protagonist cuts in to describe the experiences and emotions of more ordinary characters. Every Yixie who has appeared has his own story, his own ending, and no pitfalls. This is a novel that I have not skipped a chapter. It is a unique theme that I have seen so far.

Really really really really beautiful At first I thought it was just an ordinary cookie But now I've read almost 40 chapters It feels like the author really poured his feelings into it It's just that the two male protagonists are two very, very good people. Even if he wants to die, he will still want to save some people who have nothing to do with him Even if he wholeheartedly wants to return to his original world, he will show a very, very worried look when he sees another person suffering pain that should not be suffered. These are the two most beautiful people in this world. The meeting between the two of them is the most beautiful thing in the world He shouldn't die like this, even if he wanted to die He shouldn't just grind himself out in the small world like this, he should feel his own happiness Don't really love me too much

It's quite good to watch. My wife's writing is very good. I just read the introduction and was interested so I clicked in to read it. After reading a few pictures, I felt that it was well written and continued reading. The relationship between the two protagonists and the creation of each character are very well written. The plot is also very exciting, right at the beginning. When I was young, I thought that Shou would be a growing type and would become more and more powerful. I didn't expect that if something happened, I would have to wait for the attack to come to my rescue. This was a bit disappointing. (But I also like Shou's character very much! He's very kind and sincere, and sometimes it's very heart-wrenching.) Overall, it's pretty good to watch, and the extras are also very sweet.

The overall plot is quite smooth, but the details are not well handled, so I deducted one point. In terms of details, one is to set up a joke-telling function for the protagonist, but the whole story seems to only tell the number of times that two hands can be broken, and then when I start to check the truth later, I just finished talking about how to overcome the tribulation, and the next second I forgot that I was going to overcome the tribulation. I just finished speaking one second, and I felt something was wrong, and then I forgot about it the next second. Others are quite satisfactory, some parts feel like torture for the sake of torture, but overall it's okay and acceptable. Recommend a look

Gods are made by mortals, but they are afraid that their hearts are not firm. The soul-stirring love and hatred are vividly explained in this article. Highly recommended by bookworms of fifteen years! Don't miss it if you pass by! You won't lose money by investing in the shares, you are guaranteed to be satisfied! The following contains spoilers! Watch with caution! First, the plot has ups and downs and twists and turns. The bright line revolves around the two protagonists, Lin Mu, from meeting in the dungeon to communicating with each other, to seeking the truth and finally revealing the past. It is reasonable and logical. The unfolding relationship between the characters is clear and clear. The contradictions and development of the characters are advanced step by step, from the mist that descends into another world to the final two people returning to reality alone. The ending is happy for the whole family. It is worth reading! The hidden thread is the foreshadowing of the massacre of Chunhua Sect many years ago. Behind the close relationship between master and junior brother, senior brother and junior brother, lies little-known love and hatred. In the end, the real murderer was brought to justice, and the past reappeared, leaving only a scene of mourning. Secondly, the main and supporting characters have full plots and three-dimensional characters. The protagonist Lin Qingzhou travels through another world, returns to modern times to complete system tasks, and comes into contact with Yuanyuan Jun Mu Zhongshan... There is nothing to say, it is considered a normal love. (Everyone understands this evaluation) The boat has passed the Ten Thousand Mountains~ The supporting characters are deeply portrayed, such as the complex personality of Ying Xin, who is like a person who knows whether he is warm or cold when drinking water; such as Nie Yan's fairness and justice, acting according to the way in his heart, good will not make up for evil, and merit will not make up for the fault; such as Wen Qin's struggle and repairing the situation. Of course, there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. It all depends on the character's character creation and the reader's own understanding. I still have to read the novel before commenting on whether it is good or bad. I hate my teachers and friends through life and death, and I love meeting them again in another world. Third, the writing is fluent and eloquent. It tells the story of the world of immortality. In fact, the protagonist completes his mission in the world of cultivation and returns to the modern plot. Don't ignore good deeds because they are small, and don't do them because they are small. The logic is closed and the writing is rigorous. Of course, the logic of writing still depends on the individual, so I won't go into details on this aspect. I saw him building a Zhulou, I saw him entertaining guests, I saw his tower collapse. Trouble begins at the beginning, and Furui never pretends to be a false person. Finally, give the author a shout out! Thanks for the great story! See you in the next story!

Time travel, system tasks (not many), good writing, and relatively fast pace. He has a golden finger to make him immortal, and he is also relatively strong! I was a bit weak when I was told a joke by Goldfinger, and [covering my face] [covering my face] made me feel a bit stupid. I accidentally sold myself and still counted money! Gong is more doting. In order to be loved, he decided to live instead of seeking death. When they were together, they slowly discovered the truth about the family's destruction. It's also good that the extra chapter gave the deputy CP a good ending!

This book is really good. Everyone has a story and their own difficulties. Sometimes when I read it, I shouldn't feel sorry for anyone. I really cried when I read the story of the villain. Fortunately, someone died with him. At least there was someone who loved him and affirmed him, especially since he obviously wanted to save his master, but accidentally injured him, thus making the same mistake again and again. It seems that everyone is wrong and right... I hate this kind of writing the most (and I love it at the same time), it has too much staying power...Ψ(●°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ ཅ °̥̥̥̥̥̥̥●)Ψ, The man who loves the villain is too upright (I thought he would secretly hide him and then tell everyone that he is dead). He will live up to everyone and not let him down. If he is guilty, he will make it public and then bear it with him (óò｡). Haohao and their extras are sweet. I didn't intend to enter today. But I really enjoyed this one. It's super exciting. Baozi who loves to read articles must come out and check it out.

Families! It's really good-looking. I really like the relationship between the light boat and the heavy mountain. It's very gentle and tender. It's the feeling that my heart and eyes are full of you. The dialogue between the two people is also quite funny, but some parts are very uncomfortable to watch😖. It feels like they are flirting one second and suddenly stabbing you the next second. It belongs to redemption. The arrival of Qingzhou redeemed Zhongshan, and in this strange world, Zhongshan has really been with Qingzhou, doting on him very much, and teasing him from time to time. The daily relationship is indeed very warm, but there is a sour feeling. I haven't finished watching it yet, but it's basically like this [Blow kiss]

I really like to watch smart people falling in love. There is no intrigue, no intrigues, no misunderstandings and suspicions, but only full trust and love for each other. The light boat is like the morning sun, the light that blooms is gentle and powerful, melting the long-frozen heart of the heavy mountain, while the heavy mountain is the gentle sunset glow, which is pulled by the light boat when it is about to fall into the abyss, so that it can spread the dazzling brilliance over the entire sky, gently caressing the clouds, like caring for the person you cherish. While reading, I kept thinking about the poem "The light boat has passed the Ten Thousand Mountains", thinking about Li Bai's debauchery when he wrote it, and thinking about his joy and wantonness after clearing his grievances and unloading his burden. It was like seeing the two protagonists overcoming difficulties and obstacles to find out the truth, their courage to leave regardless of each other, and their sincere hearts that were willing to give it a try. I rarely write book reviews, but this book really appealed to my taste - the small characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and the lines of the be are also explained very clearly (of course, the overall point is he, ah, ah, tonics, I was persuaded to quit when I saw this, don't let it go), everyone did their own thing well, the foreshadowing was also very clear, and there are so many sweet spots. I really like the shaping and interaction of the two protagonists! No! Often! Push! Recommend! Read them all to me!

The writing is very good. There are a lot of funny elements at the beginning. Although it is a bit sparse in the middle, it is still very interesting. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was a light and funny article, so I came in, but in fact, it felt quite deep while following it. But overall it is well written, but there are some cases where men use women's words, and there are extra chapters. Although this is about BL, it is a female channel after all, so it is not good to use the word "Kan Guan Master" But maybe everyone has not realized this before, and I have only recently realized that it is not good to use female words for men and male words for women. But this is just my suggestion. I have no intention to target this book or attack the author. The writing is still very interesting. The author's character creation is very three-dimensional. Some villains are really loved and hated. There are some objective descriptions, such as the encounter after rebirth. Of course, it is much better than what I wrote. This is just my suggestion. Ahhhhhhhhh I realized after reading it, because it is my favorite BL guy. After reading your book before, I still hate the lack of books. I came across this on the recommendation page. I stayed up late last night and read it. It was so good. The book is funny and profound. At that time, Li Changtian, the feelings of family and country, I was very shocked when I read it, and there were various twists. The one with Bian Chonghua was also very good.

At first, their images were really vivid in my eyes! It feels like I'm not reading a novel but something real. Although it's fictional, I don't know why I feel like this, hahaha Later, I saw a lot of people who didn't understand Ying Fuxin and a lot of people who scolded him. Alas, I never felt that way. Everyone's story lines are complete and interlocking, and the good and evil of human nature are reflected very well! It's really beautiful! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]

It's really good-looking. There are a lot of foreshadowings in it, as well as some time-travelers. These things are also discussed very well. But there is a little bit of shou, which may not be very powerful for cultivating immortals. To put it simply, the shou may be a bit weak. If it is a shou If you are a conscientious student, please read carefully, but every character in the book is full of emotional content. All in all, people cannot be perfect, so don't talk about the people in the book without seeing the events in the book, as well as Mu Chongshan and Lin Qingzhou99, Qingzhou has already passed the Ten Thousand Chong Mountains!

The front part is still very interesting, the author's writing is on point, and the character descriptions are spot on. (The following is a personal opinion, everyone has his or her own opinion) However, the subsequent description of Ying Fuxin is too heavy-handed. I don't know if the author wants to portray him as a very three-dimensional image that reflects the complexity of human nature, but when he recalled his sister who was starved to death, I feel like it's pretty much reflected in the story, but if I have to emphasize the description later, it feels like the main character is taking over the main role. The protagonist is really made to look like a passerby. I don't like this kind of thing. I feel that the ending and extras for the protagonist and the two are a bit hasty and casual. In the end, the book is still very interesting. [Sending Hearts]

It's quite good. After reading it, I felt that the characters in it are quite diverse. There are no absolute good people, but there should be no absolute bad people either. What can I say about Fu Xin? I quite like him. After all, if I had experienced his life, I might have done better than him. There is one thing that makes me feel a little uncomfortable. I feel that Zhou's hearing is not very good, and I don't know whether to call him crazy or something else. But I quite like him. Just for what he said to Miss Bai, I quite like him. There was one plot point that was a bit uncomfortable, where I felt my scaphoid nerve was strong. But everything else is pretty good, pretty nice [blowing kiss]