HP, the Whole School Is Complaining About the Potions Professor's CP

So far, it's pretty good. I really like this kind of warm emotional scene. I just don't know how the heroine will develop the emotional scene after Goblet of Fire returns to France. And will they dance together at the ball? Hehehehe, think about the atmosphere when the voice-controlled heroine was dancing under the mistletoe and the teacher talked into her ear [Adoration][Adoration] I have followed 150+ chapters, and the writing is quite good, but I feel that the heroine has always been shoehorned into the plot. From the beginning, why was an acting potions professor entrusted by the principal to train the students in defense against the dark arts, and also went to the UK to participate in the Goblet of Fire? Doesn't the French magic school have a dedicated teacher for the defense against the dark arts? Need training from a Potions Master who is not even a formal teacher? Then the heroine insists on participating in various plots that happened in the Goblet of Fire, saying that it is because she can help ban the potion materials, but the heroine accepts the entrustment and bans it. As a result, she participates in every link. A foreign acting potions professor who is not from the school has more say than the principal; there is also a meeting of the Order of the Phoenix, and what is the meaning of Dumbledore asking the heroine to attend? The first time I went there, I could barely find a reason, but every time there was a meeting, the hostess stood in a neutral position and she still went there again and again? To put it bluntly, it has nothing to do with the heroine, and then the heroine takes the initiative to investigate various things. It has been written for so long, and it feels like the heroine was forced into a novel, which is uncoordinated and unreasonable. Then this book is about teaching CP. Except for the beginning of the Goblet of Fire, there are some hints of love. Up to now, there is no love line at all in the 150+ chapters. They are all about the heroine going to muddy waters that have nothing to do with her (the main plot). The heroine is neither a time traveler nor knows the plot, nor does she know the plot because of the British magical world. What happened affects their family's business in France and other European countries, and it's because I got involved out of nowhere. It's understandable that you have an emotional connection and fall in love with Sri Lanka, and you do it for Sri Lanka. But now the heroine doesn't have an anchor, and she gets involved out of nowhere, which makes no sense.

I have read many, many Snape fanfics, and to be honest, this is a rare one that is not OOC! Going both ways, the heroine has a strong core and loves life. She belongs to the type of person who "is good if she has it, and is blessed if she doesn't have it." Severus didn't start out cold like other stories and then suddenly pay attention to the heroine (to be honest, compared with this article and other articles that pretend to be "not OOC" but are actually selling sheep over dogs, this is really a rare masterpiece). Ps: Don't step down and raise the level. Comrades who don't believe it can go to the old Ford and have a look. It's already a common phenomenon; only Xiaohongshu is okay, but it's not much better... Moreover, the heroine did not attack Severus intentionally, it was a completely accidental encounter. Attract each other, appreciate each other, and truly develop a lasting love. The key is that the plot doesn't drag on, and I'm pretty good at reading the text. This makes me want to keep reading. Fine chaff is hard to find these days...

I just like this kind of level. Every time I see students like that in the classroom, I feel very embarrassed.

Good-looking, five-star review. The heroine is an adult. In the early stage, she was a temporary potions professor at Beauxbatons. She was a master of herbalism and published several books. Later, she was a defense against the dark arts professor at Hogwarts. She is a very powerful person. In addition, the heroine was trained according to the heirs of a large family. She is also very strong in magic. I feel that she is a good match for Mu Qiang's professor. The emotional line between the heroine and Severus is not abrupt at all, and even feels a bit slow, but both of them are stupid, so that's fine, it's best to let the ambiguous period go. Author, please keep updating. Don't stop updating. It's almost over, so keep at it.

The original intention of writing this book was because I randomly opened the movie Half-Blood Prince while eating one day. It was not satisfactory after deleting a lot of the plot, so I opened the original book again. Starting from the Triwizard Cup, the unwillingness and regret in my heart became more and more out of control, but I also admired JKR immensely, so I came up with the idea of ​​​​giving all regrets a chance to redeem themselves. Referring to the original work while writing makes me feel even more shallow. All in all, Rowling is really awesome and I yearn for it. I also hope that my poor work can make up for the regrets and unwillingness of my childhood with everyone.

It was tied, it was Sri Lanka who took the initiative. Their relationship is very healthy, not the kind of redemption relationship where the heroine uses love as a psychiatrist. Before being tempted, the male protagonist reconciled with all his past and his family of origin after being nudged by the female protagonist. I read a book review before and said that the heroine was forced into the plot, so I was almost dismissed. But after watching it, I felt that it made sense for the heroine to stay at Hogwarts, and it didn't feel like it was shoehorned into the plot. Ps. The heroine didn't stay because of the hero. She's very good if she's not in love.

Very nice to look at. A love that flows slowly without any deliberateness. The two of them chatted with each other and expressed their feelings to each other as they slowly came into contact. The pull between adults. The relationship between Si Jiao and Lily is handled better. It will not be pure love. It is a heartbeat of youth and the companionship of close friends. It will not be simply attributed to love. The heroine is not just a love brain, she also has her own responsibilities, with a bit of Slytherin characteristics, but she will also step into this chess game for the people she wants to protect. Not only lovers, but also elders whom I respect, colleagues who accompany me, and lovely students. You must write it down!

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, everyone comes to read it, the writing is superb, there are really very few Sri Lankan fans who are interested in me, and there are very few OOC, but the updates are too slow, why can't the author write ten chapters a day [crying] [crying]

I feel it's okay. The long paragraphs at the beginning were a little uncomfortable, but I changed them later and it doesn't look so tiring. I can't tell much from more than 30 chapters. I don't know if the original plot will be kept in the future. I hope there will be more daily life or other plots.

Who knows that my wife who scored 9 in IELTS and has read the original version of Harry Potter is writing a sweet essay for us. Although it is a long and drawn-out essay, it is really beautiful! Highly recommended, there are plots and extras, madam, you are my sweetheart❤️

Baby, you are sincere, brave and kind, and I know your sensitivity and fragility. You are cute and have a good personality. Sensitivity is a gift. It is never a shortcoming, it is a unique inner strength. You are a good baby, the most worthy and best baby in the world. It's okay. You have met me now. You no longer have to pretend to be strong by yourself. I really like your eyes. They are big and bright. Smile more in the future. By the way, do you still have it in your draft box?

It's super good-looking, double-strength, and one of the best among HP Tomato fanfics. The character design is good, more in line with the original work, and the stance is objective. The emotional line is natural, warm and loving. It's a HP fanfic worth reading.

It felt very natural and not too abrupt. The white moonlight of Si Jiao was gone, but another beam of light pulled him out of the darkness [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's super good-looking, with unique characters and novel angles. I especially like the heroine's character. She is my ideal Professor Seydoux! ! ! Strong recommendation [like] [like] [like]

Like it very much! The few female protagonists I have seen do not just say that they are smart and thoughtful, but actually portray the image. Who can refuse the gentle Annabell? XP is a kind of ecstasy for people with a gentle personality (a little naughty)

The setting is very novel. I have always liked the diverse plot of the three schools in Goblet of Fire. I am also very happy to see the expanded details. The language style is not childish. It is my favorite type! The author worked hard on the coding! Hope to see the masterpiece completed! Come on👏! [Blowing kiss]

Currently I give it five stars, it's the kind of sweetness that flows like water! Amway enters the trap

It's very interesting. The author's writing style is very good. The article is easy to read and the concept is very clever. I like the heroine's character very much. I'm looking forward to the following chapters. Please keep updating. Serialization is my only highlight. The author must work hard to update it. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Snape: A dark, damp and clingy puppy. Mu Qiang longs to be treated with gentleness, tolerance and equality. Annabell: A bright, smart and rational ragdoll cat. Voice control, insensitivity, wisdom and talent. The direction of the fan story is basically not too outrageous, so everyone knows the outcome, but the process is different. Different heroines will bring different highlights to the story. I like Annabel very much. I feel like she is a delicate cat whose fur is groomed neatly every day. She meows very cutely when she is quiet, and she also moves neatly to look good when necessary.

Very, very good. I see that the character of Severus in HP is the most consistent with the original work, and the writing is very detailed. I especially like the various interactions between the heroine and Severus. The author also writes very well, with delicate writing and complete plot content. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Very beautiful [admiration]

It's not time travel, it's not rebirth, it's not redemption. Her world is not black and white, and she also agrees that there is also gray in this society. He has his own views and attitudes towards magic and life. It's not too flattering, it comes more from my own personal abilities. Keep up the good work

It's good-looking and very real. The heroine is very capable, but not a gold-finger type. The author's writing style is very good and the whole article looks very comfortable. Keep up the good work, the author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's nice to look at and no OOC. The heroine didn't go after the professor from the beginning. But slowly through contact, the two people got closer and closer. What you wrote is very fascinating!

It's a pretty good novel, the heroine is very charming, and none of the original characters are OOC.

So pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Oh, hold on, ah, ah, ah, I still want to see, I want to see, please. I love you more [blowing kiss]

It's really super invincible and beautiful. The author must stick to it [flying kiss][flying kiss][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's a very interesting angle. The heroine is smart and wise, and she doesn't know how to read a lot of the original work. It feels logical and there are no sudden cheats.

I really like this book [Adoration]. It's very interesting. The heroine is the heir to the Seydoux family. She is immune to the curse and the chosen one. Professor Pesce, who teaches Defense Against Dark Arts, is simply not very suitable.

This is one of the best Sri Lankan texts I have ever read! ! ! The writing is very detailed and the writing style is good. Why doesn't the author update it? I used to follow it every day.

Wow, it's really good, but why can't it be updated to 1 million words for no reason? Really, the emotional lines written in big letters by the author are very natural, and I don't think the characters are OOC.