Pirate*******

The author's condition, he was fine in the afternoon [laughing evilly]

The writing is okay, but if it were written with other content, I guess the rating could be higher. Pirates is too easy to write. Judging from this pace, it will be over in less than 200 chapters. It would be okay if the author made it Honkai or Honkai.

The battle is fun and the wave will not change as long as you don't enter the palace and don't change your style.

The author makes a suggestion: Don't kill civilians every time you rob, and let them serve as guides and keep 10% of the profits. Kill the kings and nobles, and recruit scientists to improve technology. The civilians will remember that there will be more helpers in the subsequent conquest of the world, and strong men with a higher bottom line will also join. They can unite most of the strong men with high morals. After all, they have incredible emotional abilities. They will definitely conquer the universe and the multiverse. The novel will not be harmonious because of random killings (emphasis added) [laughter]

It's okay, the plot is a bit fast

This is what pirates are like This is a Pirates fan who has watched the anime

Why is it gone? Did the author write something that he shouldn't have written?

The writing was so direct. The first few words "licking the dog" made me laugh to death.

The writing is good, but if I only wrote about pirates, I probably wouldn't be able to write two hundred pages.

So far it's okay, but will the protagonist's skills be too few? In a fight, the Hammer of Destruction will come back and forth, and he can learn a little more.

It's okay to write a cool article. In the lower part, I write a Trump, a man with swords and guns, and a fire-eating phantom beast [eating melon]. I think the author can also let the protagonist develop some ordinary moves, not necessarily the skills of the hero himself. A few suggestions.

Compared to other Pirates fics, this one is very different and not as cookie-cutter as others.

It is the best book I have ever read in One Piece. The focus is not brainless and realistic. The combat power is gradually increased by oneself. The protagonist has principles and bottom lines and a clear brain circuit. He is decisive and decisive in killing. He also has his own justice. It is a rare good book in One Piece. The writing is also great.

The writing is very good, but there are some shortcomings. How can I put it? Come on, I also plan to write a pirate novel. It should not be as cruel as you. Momonosuke is definitely the one who can defeat Luffy. . .

It looks cool, but why not accept Zoro Sanji?

It's good and interesting. If you don't add an original adventure, you might be able to finish the book in just a few chapters, right? It would also be a good idea to travel through the multiverse, please consider it.

Come on author, it's great

Pure and refreshing writing without grinding

Okay, this is a pirate

Why is such a beautiful novel not rated?

This pirate is very pure, he doesn't deserve it

Real pirates, but every time they fight, it's life and death [pinch]

I looked at the computer that I just turned off and it was silent for a while. I looked at the computer that I had just turned off and was silent for a while. Oh my god, I'm back to League of Legends again.

So far, this pirate novel has merged with the image in my mind, which is pretty good.

The style is very good, but I feel that the protagonist has no adventure at all. The next book can write about the protagonist having something to do with wind and natural fruits.

It was fun to write

These recent fight scenes are really cool.

Nunu and Willump... Are old acquaintances.

Go ahead, this duel competition is so detailed, it makes my blood boil.

Most of the praise is original, pirate style