Both the male and female protagonists have their mouths, there is no misunderstanding, there is an ambiguous pull, they go both ways, it's very sweet! The first time you write a long novel, you may not have a good grasp of the rhythm in the early stages, but you will get better and better later on!
"Hey! Ning Zhihe! Ning Zhihe! Get out of here quickly! Get out of here quickly!!!"
Ning Zhihe was placing a POSS on a big rock when he heard someone shouting his name loudly. He looked around in confusion. Are there any fans of his in this useless place? Illegitimate meal? Get out of here? Why are you leaving here? He hasn't finished filming yet.
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"Thank you, can I borrow your phone?"
"Then there's nothing we can do. I don't have a signal either."
"Uh... Okay, is this your home? The scenery is quite nice."
"Well, it's really good."
"Thank you for what I just said."
"You're welcome."
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"Where are you going?"
"Foraging."
"Uh... Be careful when it gets dark."
"Yeah, okay."
"Want to accompany you?"
"No, you're not familiar with the road, and I only have an umbrella."
"Uh... Ok, thank you."
"You're welcome."
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"First grade of junior high school, long time no see."
Reader comments
The past is blown by the wind, but the present is worth cherishing.
Don't worry about the future, just seize the day.
No regrets.
Everything that happens is good for me. (Kind of like Chicken Soup for the Soul?!)
The plot is good, logical, well-structured, not brainless, and the short story is completed.
Since we fell in love but were separated due to long distance, the male protagonist is handsome and well-educated. He takes good care of the female protagonist and dotes on him. Unfortunately, the female protagonist broke up with him in the United States... After the breakup, she met Ning who also liked her, so it was natural to fall in love and get married... If she had not met Ning, would the female protagonist forgive the male protagonist? So now that you have chosen to break up, no one will always stand there waiting for you... Love is not a child's play, let alone emotional!
The past is blown by the wind, but the present is worth cherishing. Don't worry about the future, just seize the day. No regrets. Everything that happens is good for me. (Kind of like Chicken Soup for the Soul?!) The plot is good, logical, well-structured, not brainless, and the short story is completed.
Since we fell in love but were separated due to long distance, the male protagonist is handsome and well-educated. He takes good care of the female protagonist and dotes on him. Unfortunately, the female protagonist broke up with him in the United States... After the breakup, she met Ning who also liked her, so it was natural to fall in love and get married... If she had not met Ning, would the female protagonist forgive the male protagonist? So now that you have chosen to break up, no one will always stand there waiting for you... Love is not a child's play, let alone emotional!