Spring Things **********

It's really sweet. Brothers, if you like sweet comics, you can still read it. If you're looking for character restoration, I don't recommend it. I don't think Yukinoshita will fall like this. Such Yukinoshita is not Yukinoshita.

The psychological description is very delicate and has the style of the original work. I feel that I have regained the joy of watching it before. I hope the author can insist on updating three chapters [Shy] every day, and the Tuanzi Party will win! !

It's beautiful, it's so enjoyable. Now I'm afraid that the author will be arrested by Shen He [crying]

Come on, I really like the plot and rhythm, and the writing is also on point, don't give up, come on!

The sugar content is a bit too high. It can be lowered appropriately. I feel like I will have a baby in two chapters [face covering]. It can be slowed down a little. It can make the life of the protagonist and heroine a little more plain, a little more relaxed in daily life and slow down the pace. This is very good. Of course, this is my personal opinion. You have your own style. It's actually great how you write it now, come on! !

Only my personal opinion

As a newcomer, the writing is already very good. Come on [blowing kiss] It's very cute and sweet. The only problem is that there is no foreshadowing of Yukino's relationship. If you ignore it for a while, it will be very interesting [Sending Hearts]

Come on, the plot is very good, but Yukino's feelings for the protagonist are a bit abrupt, and I feel attracted to her out of nowhere.