Demon Slayer: the Bard's New Journey

As a new author, it should be pretty good, but I don't know why I always feel bored while reading it. I basically just glance at it at the end. Let me first talk about my feelings about watching it. In the first chapter, too much ink was used to describe Wendy's appearance. Some people may say that the writing is good, but the real shaping is that it is impressive and vivid in just a few sentences. It took too much ink to describe, but it was a bit long-winded and literary. I was still reading carefully when I first started describing it, but the following paragraphs were just like that. I picked it up and read it, and then later, I don't deny that gentleness is Wendy's background, but it is also mixed with enthusiasm and cheerfulness. In the article and other people's descriptions, what I feel is basically the depiction of gentleness, which is a bit one-sided. Some more playful modalities can be added to make people feel closer. There is basically no big problem with the emotional description of the characters. There are also some minor errors, so I won't point them out one by one, and they won't affect the viewing experience so much. I hope the author can do better, come on [love]

Ah, you must check out Wendy's Kitchen. It's really nice. Basically I haven't discovered ooc yet The author is also very cute, and everything he writes is so cute. I stopped talking when I saw my aunt laughing, hahaha There is also a little knife hidden in it. It's delicious. I love it and eat it_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_ The author is so good. A lovely person writes lovely articles.

Nice! Wendy's character is very restored and the plot is very heartwarming [Love]

Real! ! ! Very gentle and warm writing style! ! Chengcheng embodies Wendy's gentle divinity towards people when she was the wind god Barbatos! ! ! Recommend! !

The writing is very good. The author has written out the tenderness of Wendy. The Wendy in this wooden book has a very divine feeling, almost like an angel. Personally, I feel that there are too many metaphors and it is a bit boring, but the metaphors are very good, super gentle, good book [Blow kiss]

It's really super super super super super beautiful! ! ! ! ! If you like Wendy, you must try it. Every sentence in it can be used to write an essay [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Such a heart-warming fan... I have only read about 20 chapters, and I can't wait to come here to give you a high score. The language is very plain, but it still feels like the wind is blowing gently. You are worthy of Lord Barbatos, the God of Wind... The God of Wind protects you... [I'm about to cry]

Divinity, it is true divinity, MiHoYo, you should learn from others, the gentle Wind God Wendy, very warm, very beautiful, and the interaction with the Demon Slayer Squad is also very harmonious, there is no OOC (the wind said it). Finally, I hope the Wind God protects you.

It's so beautiful that I can't get enough of it (´◊ω◊｀) and the emoticons the teacher used when writing are also very cute (⑅˃◡˂⑅) The cute description also makes my heart melt (◍ ´꒳` ◍)

Like it very much! I finished reading it in one go. The image of Wendy is the same as mine, and so is everyone else's!

Nice! Wendy really feels like a real person when she gets along with everyone in the Demon Slayer Squad! Wendy is like a little sun! Healed everyone! The part about the Lantern Festival made my body warm when I saw it! It's so warm! It's like everyone in the Demon Slayer Corps has always been a part of Teyvat! Super cozy! I cried again when Paimon asked whether we would be separated... But we couldn't be separated! We made an appointment to go to the end of the story together! I cried again when I read the Wendy chapter... What a great knife...

Really good, very good, very good looking! I really want to check out Wendy's Kitchen. The teacher's writing is very good, and there is also a pun in it! Wendy was written in a very gentle and lovely way! Wendy's Kitchen thinks it's very beautiful and recommends everyone in Teyvat to come and see it! ! !

It's really good-looking, the whole character is not OOC at all, the personality is very consistent, and the plot is very natural, highly recommended [like]

Good٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑) Wow, it's really beautiful (★≧▽^))★☆ It really has a leisurely and elegant feeling꒰՞> · <𓈒՞꒱ The wind is sunny, there are no ghosts, everyone is aliveȏ.̮ȏଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭* It's really cute to add an emoticon after every sentence ( ⩌ - ⩌ )(∩ᵒ̴̶̷̤⌔ᵒ̴̶̷̤∩)

I felt warm after watching the plot <(￣v￣)>

I always feel that Wendy is a little less lively and cheerful. Well... I'll give it four stars.

Nice. Wendy can add some modal particles at the end of her sentence. For example, "It's a pity to fall asleep" can be changed to "It's a pity to fall asleep." It feels more like

It feels like it has been purified... What the hell... It turns out that fellow fans can be so comfortable and clear...

Damn, I don't have any OOC at all! It feels like a stream of consciousness. The author's writing style is very good! !

This book is really gentle, and Wendy is also very gentle. The style of this book is very fresh, and it is a good book. 😊

Take a good look at the warmth

This really made me make up for all my regrets.

It's very gentle and gentle, but it's not Wendy, it's OOC, but it's very gentle, so I didn't give it a low score, but the character image is wrong, so I deducted one star. Wendy has a smooth tone but is not frivolous. She has an out-of-the-box personality and is easily carried away by the wind. She likes to sing poems to people. She can't live without wine and likes to drink all the time. When people ask him if he is a god, he will joke and deny it, or admit it directly and others will think he is joking.

Very beautiful, the writing is very delicate

Wendy is really gentle

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking

The author writes very gently

Awesome Klass Author

The wind is free and carries hope

Who knows? ! ! ! ! The duo of Yiyong and Wendy cooking is so cute! ! ! ! ! !