After the Elder Brother Was Reborn, the Younger Brother Chased His Wife Crazily

Probably some complaints: Controllers and protagonists should pay attention to lightning protection Probably because Shou can never win against Gong. He is obviously the God of Wisdom, but in the end, he can't beat Gong in chess. Shou is still stronger with strong attacks. Torturing Shou's body, torturing Shou's heart, Gong is the biological son of Heaven, and Shou is one of the three thousand gods. The script of Heaven's Way is to let Shou and Gong serve as a stepping stone to ascend. Shou has a narrow escape from death and a glimmer of hope. This glimmer of hope is when Gong falls in love with Shou and is willing to give Shou the opportunity to ascend and bear the pain of the demonic oath for Shou. Eliminating some problems, the emotional line is really good, and the world view is also very novel.

It's my second time reading it. The writing is good and the world view is actually quite big. At first, I liked the two protagonists' characters the most. The two strong characters are really delicious. The two sword spirits are also very cute. Later, I fell in love with the characters of the two masters. They say that time will dilute everything, but after so many years In the past, after the high wall built between the two because of their tough words was overthrown by some things, the strong love between the two parties will still be seen. Outsiders say that this is a relationship that was exploited from the beginning. Even if this is true, the two of them are willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer. It is really a very tearful plot.

It's so sad, and a little heart-wrenching to watch, but I still like it, it's so good to watch! It's well written, the sense of immersion is so strong [I almost cried], I cried when I watched it [crying], now Duan is still focusing on the great road, let's say that Jin is disheartened now, just wait for Duan to pursue his wife [laughs] [eat melon] It's hard to reconcile [laughs], chasing my wife feels lonely ("▔□▔), our Yan Yan is the most injured, Duan Mou, it would be better to have a mouth, but I can't describe the feeling, but it's better to say it. In my last life, I gave up on Yan Yan and acted in a drama for Yan Yan, but I didn't know that it was the last straw that broke Yan Yan's life. I cried to death (′へ`, ), I have chased someone in this life, and I want to make him give up for the sake of good words. What are you doing? [Smile] I was about to get the citizenship, but suddenly I said that I am not a match. This is not a joke, it just looks good [laughs], although I know it, but it is very worrying. I have ascended to the upper world, and I am suppressed again ᵟຶᴖ ᵟຶ, the ending is good, but I still feel that Yanyan is a little more hurt. To be honest, is this a sadistic article? This is completely torturing me.

I've read it before, but I didn't expect to see this one again here. I really like it. Although everyone said that Gong is not worthy of it, I don't have much impression, because Gong's character is probably emotionally slow, and he is a step slow in these things, but he will also be able to understand his heart later on. Let me tell you a few pairs of CPs in it. Let's not talk about the protagonists for now. Everyone knows that the first pair is their master's pair. I really like it, but there are very few abusers. I finally understand why Gong doesn't know his own feelings [laughing] And those two swords, my mother, I'm really frustrated with this. I didn't even want the master for the sake of my wife. There is also the later system and host, which directly performs forced love. As expected, evil people will naturally have evil consequences. It's also about Shou's friend and his natal sword. This one is also good-looking. I thought it was a woman, but in the end, when I cultivated into a human form, I found that the daughter-in-law I longed for was a man, and she even had sex with him. There are also a few couples of CPs in the extra episode. I'm already planning to watch them after finishing the second page~Always Follow My Wife [Shy]

I think the writing is pretty good, and it's not particularly sadistic. Could it be that I've read too many sadistic articles and now I'm indifferent to this kind of sutra? ? ? ? I really don't feel particularly sadistic. Really, it's just that his sadism doesn't feel like it's forced, because this is the author's setting for this series. It doesn't matter who the protagonist is, it's just set like this. Everyone looks like this, so the overall rhythm is still online, and the emotional line is written It's pretty good, the writing style is also good, the deputy CP is also very easy to beat, and the holes that need to be filled have been filled in, so I feel that the rating of this article should not be this, it is really good-looking, I see many people talking about sadomasochism, emmm, I personally think it is pretty good You guys can give it a try. Although it seems that my viewing time is a bit short, I have both a mobile phone and a watch. I read this article carefully for about six hours, and it is still quite meaningful.

It's really good to watch, and every character in it is heart-wrenching. I really feel for "Yan" and "Duan". The two babies are so miserable [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying], and they have been forced to separate. In the early stage, I really felt sorry for Baby Yan, and later on when I watched it, both of them felt sorry for each other. They are both good children. They are not wrong, and they have devoted a lot to each other [crying]. I don't know why when I watched it, I felt that the presence of "Breaking" was getting lower and lower, hahahahaha. Moreover, all the beatings "Duan" received were in vain, either when he was being beaten or on the way to being beaten, hahahaha, that little mouth was so loud that it really touched people's hearts, hahahahaha. Believe me, although it seems that I feel sorry for them, it is not that kind of abuse. They are sweet, because the relationship between the two of them has never been messed up by a third party, and they have never really given up on each other. Their relationship can withstand the test [laughs] [heartfelt].

It's good to watch, but it's a bit sadistic at the beginning. At first I thought the senior brother was being abused, but in the end the junior brother was also miserable. The master group is good, even Master Qingxu I started to feel a little ruthless towards his Taoist companions, and the little sword spirits are so cute! Still a novel worth reading

It's particularly beautiful, with a pair of masters, a pair of gods and brothers, a father and a god, and many deputy CPs, and they are all together. It was a bit tearful in the early stage, but it was very sweet in the later stage. It can be regarded as the end of all hardships!

After reading it, I like the Master the most. He has a cruel and inhumane father, an indifferent and eccentric mother, a broken and tenacious man. He has parents but has no father or mother. He has encountered many betrayals in his life. He only dares to sleep lightly, and is even afraid in front of the one he loves. Unlike others, he is loved by his elders since he was born. He relies on his split spiritual roots to support his gradually falling into loneliness. He worked hard to find a master, raise disciples, and teach his younger brothers and sisters. Fortunately, he died in the end. He should not have ended up like in his previous life, because he was the monk who looked down on "committing suicide" the most, but he committed suicide. Fortunately, he could be reborn. The cost was to be a time traveler. He brought the system to this world, and then targeted them. Every obstacle was a disaster, so heartache.

The world view is so complete...! The author has guest appearances in almost every book. Before Duan Jin (hiss, this CP name...) Ascended to the God Realm, these two were either injured or on the way to being injured, okay. Very sweet!

Thousand words of venting complaints are all personal feelings. If you have different opinions, you can communicate rationally. Ee The low-flow version: it looks good in the early stage, but ugly in the later stage. I wanted to write too much but didn't write it well. I can't stand it. The deputy CP is repetitive and boring. There are more than 30 chapters left to read, and I can't stand it at the end. I won't give a bad review, after all, it's free. But the following are basically complaints, purely because I am tired of watching them. The early stage is very good, and Xiao Yan Jin is very cute! I also like Qingxu very much! The plot is sweet, cruel, and very heartwarming (I like the scene with the lanterns, Xiao Yanjin) Later on, I felt like there was a bit too much to write, and I really thought it would be enough to see the end of it. Seeing all kinds of gods and rules makes me tired. My current progress is that neither of the two protagonists can beat them (the monsters are still 🉑), and they are kept in a straight line by the two father gods and two god brothers. Although I respect my elders, it makes me a little angry (maybe because I just want to read cool stories...). I think it's because these four awesome characters are not that convincing. Yan Jin, the God of Wisdom, said "You can't beat Eros in chess"? , I don't know if I've played it before, I can't stand it anymore, anyway, Yan Jin said he can't play it, so what is the role of this God of Wisdom...? 1 Also gets beaten all day long. Since he ascended, he only gets beaten. Furthermore, I can't understand where the affection between these gods comes from, and I don't see any earth-shattering father-son/brother relationship between them. They just get together to say that they have a good relationship. I think the best emotional scene, or the one that impressed me the most, is the cb pair of Qingxu and Yan Jin... The grabbing of the trouser legs is so touching. This is the real "father and son", okay... I hope Tiandao will stop being a father, okay? The later stages of the calamity period before ascension were also a bit chaotic and cumbersome, with this clone and that clone dying before they even got established. There is still a feeling that the story is exciting but not completely satisfying. Although the result is the same as becoming a god, can Yan Jin try to cure it with his love brain... I didn't think the part 1 was touching, but I felt it was far from sacrificing godhood (the only thing that can explain it is fate). It was the same old routine of not opening his mouth to explain. I just got angry when I watched them sadistically. Yan Jin's character after he became a god is also a bit uncomfortable to see (are all your gods really becoming indifferent?) He neither has the youthful spirit of the calamity, nor the strategizing that a god of wisdom who has lived for so long should have. All day long, he is afraid of brother god and god father... Or two words, "anger" ... And it feels like the 1's in the deputy CP all have the same character, is it the author's xp? I personally don't like this kind of 1... I feel angry when I see it. Maybe I want to write the kind of "I only care about you, everyone else is fine④", ​​but I don't feel that I love more than not cutting 0 and talking more to 0. Although I love the character of others in contrast 1, as a CP, I personally think it is not enough. Maybe it's because I have a preference for this kind of 1 vs. 0, But I still talk little (even feel a little cold?) And am inexplicably jealous, giving 0 a cold look and being incompetent... (Ling Wei was okay in the early stage, but he also joined the army in the later stage) I was really tired after reading it... I thought I was almost done with it, but I was really tired and wanted to write too much. The world view seemed very big but I didn't find it novel, I just felt a bit rustic. When I was reading it, I just thought, "Here we go again?"... It's all about romance. God doesn't have the majesty that God should have. He can neither let people feel his divine temperament, nor is he qualified for love. Heaven said nothing, just blindly indifferent. The reading time is short because of the semicolon, I almost didn't jump Yan Jin's character in the later period really made me despair, and he lost all his youthful spirit. You have to say that he is a god who has lived for a long time, so he is not young, but he does not have that kind of calm charm... Since he has lived for so long, why is he still afraid of his father and brother? Although it is normal to have people who are more powerful than the protagonist in novels, the space occupied is too large... And the bunch of gods in the later period really made me feel baffled. They felt familiar and unfamiliar, jumping back and forth between indifference and joyful family affection. To say that they are very strong is just a narration. I can't see any intelligence or divine characteristics in their language. Instead, I have an inexplicable feeling (especially the attack team, who are inexplicably jealous) about their relationship with gods because the narrator says they are gods. Even the characters of the three pairs of secondary CPs in the later period (the father team, the god brother team, and the protagonist team) are a bit repetitive. I feel like they are looking at the same pair of CPs, with only slight changes in speaking style, and the character of Gong is completely the same. I personally think that the best characters in the whole story are Yan Jin and Master in the early stage. They are very human and full of characters. The pair of deputy CPs in the Master group unexpectedly became the most delicious in my personal eyes... Maybe it's because they didn't survive to the later stage and the character design of the attack has not been homogenized. The sadomasochism of this couple is well-founded... I am most attracted to this couple.

Nice! Highly recommend [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] The plot develops smoothly, and the emotional line of the two protagonists is particularly well written. In addition to the protagonist's pairing, I also particularly like the CP of the master and his uncle. The score of 9.2 Is really too low and not worthy of this article. I hope more people can read this article [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] Master and uncle reconciled in the later period. It is very good to drink. After 2 times, it still feels very good. I must highly recommend it [Bird Food Divine Work] [Bird Food Divine Work] [Bird Food Divine Work]

Fried Chicken is so good. I watched it in one go. It's so crazy. And you need to use your brain to watch this. [Read it carefully] I thought it was B when I saw it at the end. I didn't expect it to be reversed and reversed again. I have to explore it by myself [laughing] There are quite a few CPs, but the mouth is like a decoration [staring] and everyone feels dumb [hit hard]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It's feeling so great moments of pleasures feeling so happy, I feel so good when it's over. I stayed up all night and continued watching it when I woke up. As I continued to watch it, I felt like my whole life would be over [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

From the world of immortality to the world of gods. From the beginning, the two had nothing to do with each other, but later they became involved with each other. This is the so-called fate, right? At the beginning, Yan Jin made me feel that his mentality was very bad. He destroyed his godhood and was willing to be an ordinary person. He was afraid to avoid being broken. Later, I recovered my memory after the surgery. What was very contrasting was that a man of few words could be so pestering. Yan Jin was in pain because of his inner demons, and Duan Wan was in pain because of his inner conflicts. This was undoubtedly torture for both of them, but they were both strong. Duan Wan also learned a lot to be considerate of Yan Jin. At this time, Yan Jin's words and deeds became more lively. Later, the two became Taoist couples and became happier and happier. Yan Jin was completely alive. He was no longer the sensible and heart-wrenching person he once was. But things always don't go as expected. During the hundreds of years when Duan Wei and Yan Jin were separated, Duan Wei didn't know how painful it was. He was wandering between the pain of memory, the pain of demon vows in his heart, and the pain of longing. When Yan Jin left the demon world, he told Chang Qi that Yan Jin would never come back. That kind of loneliness and despair really made people feel heartbroken. Fortunately, both of them ascended in the end, and there was a good ending. Qingxu and Lingwei, Canaan and Eros, Nothingness and Heaven, Luobing and Changqi... Everyone lived happily in their own worlds with their partners. After all the hardships, they finally achieved the results they wanted. The author's writing style is also very good, the language is very coherent and smooth, and there are many complex characters. It made me understand many words. He used the simplest words to write the words that moved me the most. The vicious tongue of Duan Wan can be expressed in only ten words. It is really amazing. In short, this book is very thoughtful in terms of world view and character setting. The plot is also very good. I personally think the level of sweetness is sour and sweet. I recommend everyone to read it~

The Family Knife in the book made me cry several times, it was so touching. Also, the emotional line Zundu in the early stage is very irritating! ! ! Overall great! (Don't look at my reading time, I read the comments from other places) [Love]

How to put it, I think this is a great collection of thieves. You would never expect it. Although it is all about two male protagonists, it includes the relationship between brothers, master and master, sword spirit and sword spirit. I can't find words to describe it. There are pure sweet couples, sadomasochistic couples, and forced love. Each plot is interesting, and it is also a story about rebirth and double BF of the system. Although the system is in the hands of a villain, it feels like a big collection. I haven't seen it in foreign countries for a long time. I have read this kind of novel in Persimmon. You may not feel anything at first, but when the plot unfolds, you will find that it is really good. The author's emotional line is very delicate, the pull between the CP is very good, and the early stage is just right. It is so sad that it makes you cry, and it is so funny that it can make you laugh like maggots. I logged in just to give this book a good review. I have never logged in to comment before, which is enough to show its place in my heart. I won't say any more nonsense. It is so beautiful, so beautiful, so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! There are also several pairs of sweet sub-CPs that all revolve around the main CP's plot line. They are not half-hearted. Personally, I think the two sword spirits are pure sweetness and the two masters are forced to love each other. The main CP is a bit abusive. I only saw half of it, and I haven't watched the other half, but I can't help but comment. They are so talented. After a few days, I finally finished reading it. I didn't expect that there will be a master and a disciple in the back, and there is also a pseudo-bone. Although the plot is not too much, it is overall very good. I still have to follow other books.

I really like this book. There are many CPs and every pairing is very interesting and beautiful. The author's writing is very delicate. Although it is a sadistic text, there are funny elements interspersed in it to liven up the originally dull atmosphere, but it is not inconsistent at all. It can be said that I cry and laugh at the same time. Hahaha, every character is vividly portrayed. The three-dimensional animation, the world of cultivating immortals is unrestrained and wanton, I like it very much. In the parallel world, everyone will always be happy 🥰 My CPs will be happy and perfectly happy [eat melon] (but can the author open a book about Qingxu and Lingwei, I haven't seen enough of them [shy])

The eldest brother is a love brain, but he protects his shortcomings. Qingxu is really a scumbag. Although he was later cleared up, he is still a bit scumbag, but it is undeniable that he is a good master and is really good to the eldest brother. He likes the lovely people of the Gu family the most, and the interaction between the two sword spirits is also very interesting. The writing style of this novel is still a bit sadistic, but the funny parts and the sadistic parts are handled very harmoniously by the author, so it is acceptable, and there are many foreshadowings. Although there are some inconsistencies in the plot (perhaps the author forgot about it after writing it), but the overall impact is not big. Someone in the comments section said that the author uploaded the entire book at the same time. The extra chapter inserted at the beginning seems to have messed up the chapters, but I don't know if the author can adjust it.

I really like the emotional line between Master Qingxu and Sword Master Lingwei [Sending Hearts] [Admiration]

The writing is really good. I couldn't help but stay up late to finish it. The characters' emotions are very well portrayed in this book. Some of the interactions between Sword and Spirit really poked me and made me laugh. The emotional descriptions between the various deputy CPs in the book are also very delicate. The plot progresses link by link, and the logic is clear and clear. The author is really good at writing [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

It looks good, but it feels so cruel and heartbreaking😣😭 I'm really not suitable for reading sadomasochism, it feels so uncomfortable, but the writing, plot, and characterization are all very good. It makes me feel like I can't get enough of it, but it also feels sour and uncomfortable. It feels so depressing. I like every couple in it. I know that their parting is for a better encounter next time, but I just feel sour and I feel sorry for them. The story is over, but their story is not over

After reading it, it is a book that I will not read again after reading it once. Chatterbox has posted very few reviews on this book, because if his temperament is like this, his behavior is not wrong. I respect it but don't understand it. Also, I'm not in control, I just don't understand why all the pain and suffering slices in this article are so miserable. In addition, even if they are together in the later stage, Gong still can't talk, and he is jealous to do something big and special (but this is the Qingshui literary district, I prefer the small daily life where Gong talks and communicates with Shou). I prefer to watch the daily extras than the sadomasochistic part. I like the master pair the most, and the characters are more complete.

Overall article: Fantasy, Yuan Dan, Rebirth, Past and Present Life, Reunion after Broken Mirror HE Protagonist: Senior brother Shou, who is heartbroken and reborn; Junior brother Gong, who is cold-hearted and cold-hearted, is green tea. Words ember·break without thinking 🏷️ *0: Calm and composed, calm and confident, talented and intelligent, gentle and calm, Qionglin Yushu, decisive in killing. Appearance: Tall and straight, green bamboo under the moon, gentle and handsome, with great temperament, orchid and jade tree, elegant and graceful. Skills: ice sword, chess, calligraphy and painting, music practice, kendo, magic circle, beast control, wisdom, judgment ＊1: Cold and solitary, cold-hearted, vindictive, vinegary, green tea, worth every penny, double standards, paranoid and stubborn, not acting according to common sense Appearance: Unrivaled in splendor, unrivaled in beauty, stunningly handsome Skills: Changqi Sword, Sword Cultivation, Cooking, Void ＊Highlights: *Slots:

Although the introduction is a sadistic article, I found it to be very warm when I read it. It has been a long time since I have seen a normal master who loves his disciples (but Duanwei's temperament is indeed... No meal is in vain) and the Gu family's care for the younger ones. I have always been warmed by the warmth. I give the author a big thumbs up 👍🏻

Really, super good-looking [KISS][KISS] Whether it's Yan Jin or Duan Wan, it makes people feel super distressed. Both people are risking their lives for each other, just like "I push you away with you but I still stay" and "I thought I could retreat" in "Backlight" , repeatedly proved how wrong this love is." "Open your eyes, open the window, and you will find that you are the light." "Backlight" is really suitable for this book. The author knows how to abuse readers, attract them, and then kill them [Punch out] [Punch out]

It's really good to watch. It has the feeling of slowing down and gradually immersing yourself in the plot. The emotions are written unforgettable, and the knife is inserted into the heart. However, there are also many humorous plots. You can still smile bitterly in the glass shards. The chase after the first scene is really like a fool. My wife is very cute, and many of the things she does are unexpected. I will always lament that he is a genius. Yan Yan and Duan Yi have really been entangled for thousands of lives and finally their lovers finally got married. However, this journey is really difficult. I wish the newlyweds 99

It's really beautiful, with detailed characterization and rich emotions. Personally, I still like the Gu family, Guiyuan sect and other sects together. I really like the feeling of group portraits, just like a family. Especially when several sect leaders (palace lords) go to the streets together, it feels really human and rich. In general, there are some sad and sweet ones, so I highly recommend watching it, 99 for a young couple [Blowing Kisses][Blowing Kisses] I watched it on Wukong at first, but after watching it I realized it was on Tomato [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I'd better post my comments here [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

I've read so many articles about cultivating immortals, and this is the only one I haven't skipped a chapter in. It's so interesting, it's both happy and sour, it's absolutely amazing.

I can't describe it, it's really amazing. Whether it's the master's generation or that group of teenagers, the portrayal is very touching. The author's writing style is not generally good. The words Master said to Yan Jin because Yan Jin liked Duanwei, and the inexplicable appearance of the Penglai Palace Master were very, very shocking. When the Palace Master did not come out, I thought Yan Jin might remain depressed until he finally died, but the Palace Master appeared. This character's appearance is undoubtedly inexplicable. He made Yan Jin laugh, vented his anger for Yan Jin, and let him come out. Everything here was for no reason. It was only when the palace master died that he realized that he was Yan Jin himself, and he was Yan Jin's kind thoughts. I dripped from the sky, and I was sublimated. It turned out that I pulled myself [crying] When Yan Jin was about to die, his fellow disciples and uncles, including people who were more or less related to him, were all trying to save him. Because it bought him time to live, he saw through the calamity and survived [crying] This writing is really good. I marked one place after another, more than a hundred marks. As for the emotional line, it is really not a mindless abuse. In the end, everything has a beginning and an end, and it also makes people get to know the character of Duanwei again. Love is undoubtedly great. In fact, I haven't read a New Year's book for a long time, and I don't even like reading a New Year's book, but I have actually finished reading this book. I can only say that good writing can make people let go of all mysophobia. The worldview and values ​​​​in this book are so well written. After reading the author, I found that I had read his other master-disciple article on Shudan before, but because it was abandoned at the end of the year🌚The above is only my personal opinion