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It's a purely entertaining article, but I don't know if there will be any real evil spirits coming later. So far, it fits the theme of comedy, and it also tells you to believe in science. Apart from the fact that the peach wood sword will not break, there is nothing beyond common sense. It's pretty good in Tomato, it's funny, and it's watchable. But there are too many pornographic jokes, and I don't know if it will be reviewed and sanctioned [face covering]

In a way, I like to read it. Although tomatoes with this theme are all over the street, this one provides more fun. The writing is immature, the character creation is not three-dimensional, the priorities are unclear, and the outline is almost invisible. The advantages are that it is fun and refreshing. The protagonist has some offensive power when he scolds people, but there is still room for improvement. Although the plot line is not divided into major and minor, but as a new casual novel with a system, it is eye-catching and has some potential. It should be worth 9.1 Points on Tomatoes. Good luck to the author. Let's bring some brains to the supporting characters in the article, not too much, just look like a normal-thinking person. Sometimes you can't tell the tone of the protagonist and the supporting characters without looking at their names. It feels like there are so many people on the scene and no one can leave too much impression. After all, it is good to focus on fun in the early stage. After all, it can increase the retention rate. In the later stage, after the fun is finished, I hope the author can use his smart brain to come up with something new and refreshing. Don't make the content directly fantasy or mythical like most, which is not advisable.

Very funny hahaha, highly recommended, just don't watch it at work, otherwise you will be caught fishing

I want to know how old the author is? Is this experience and experience not that of ordinary people?

Come on! When you write 150,000 words, kick me in the ass and give you five stars. I'm afraid I'll forget [almost crying] [like]

I go, it's hilarious and absolutely gold. [Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing] These are a bunch of abstract jokes, and I highly recommend everyone to read them.

The moment of explosion of three views

Come on, it looks great [blowing kiss]

I've read 50 episodes and not even a day has passed. Ke Xue Novels

It's very beautiful. The author has a very rich knowledge reserve, and the characters are well created and have vivid personalities. When I see it, I [roll my eyes] Why is this blocked?

Good-looking, but a little lacking

Learned a lot from it.

Very funny, worth watching for a long time

It's very funny. I suggest you don't hide in bed and watch it in the middle of the night, otherwise you will laugh like maggots.

It's not a bad novel, but it's a novel you can only read when you're in a book shortage.

I have to say it's very interesting and I really like it.

After reading Chapter 52, I feel that it's okay so far, and I have basic common sense. It's just that the privacy is a little bit bad. The live broadcast is turned on at all times, and some places prefer to turn it off. Others are pretty good, and the plot is interesting, funny, and the weird plot is well written. Five points down rating

Very good very good

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Simply, really good

Nice fun article

Not bad, but it's a pity that I was locked up in a small dark room.

This car is too fast. The author seems to understand this aspect very well.

Want to see the battle between Chinese and Japanese Feng Shui masters in Zhengzhou

I looked at the likes that others gave to my comments, and suddenly I realized what the hell is going on [Thinking]

Not bad, not bad. It's pretty good-looking. Come on.

I give you five stars. Good Tomato novels are so hard to find.

The content is really spicy, it opened my eyes! [Laughing and crying][OK]

No more, haha, good book

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