After Becoming a Taoist Couple with My Senior Sister, My Master Changed.

Now that I have been struggling for so many years, why do I look like a teenager when I travel to another world, not like an adult at all? At the very least, the protagonist doesn't know how to observe words and emotions.

The logic is more reasonable than ordinary cool novels, and there are more details. However, there are too many details, and some details are missing [laughing and crying]. Also, there are too many female protagonists... The heroine will easily become a passerby later on. The author needs to consider this. Overall, this book is in line with my appetite.

It's quite interesting. Finally, he is no longer a giving (dog-licking) protagonist. As for what many people say about never saving the senior sister, come on, neither the protagonist nor his master knew that something happened to the senior sister. At least it would be reasonable for the master to investigate after he has not come back for a while.

You can come and see Overall, it's very good. The Shura Field is very interesting and very sweet. But what is Xu Hanyi's character design at the beginning? I haven't established it yet. Is he a cold master? I blushed and my heart beat as soon as I received the apprenticeship. I started to conquer it by myself. Don't tell me that I was conquered directly because I felt familiar with the master in the previous life, which made me almost want to give up the book when I read the first and middle chapters. Fortunately, I persisted and it was quite interesting later on. The characteristics of each heroine are also distinct and unique. It is Qiu who fell in love with the protagonist without having any unforgettable experience. How could I miss it? The heroine's plot at the beginning was not well written and left no impression, but later on, she gave Qiu a separate small stove and arranged a few sweet scenes alone, so it didn't matter. Anyway, it was just fun. Furthermore, the male protagonist is always a legal person. He does it once at night, and when he wakes up, he does it again. When he has nothing to do, he does it at least twice at once. It's so outrageous. Hahaha. The main plot of this book is also vague, and it was rushed in the end. A lot of it was just to serve the plot. I always thought that after transcending the tribulation, I would be the emperor. I didn't expect that there would be so many realms later, and it was also written in one stroke. I feel that a lot of things were not mentioned. I feel like I can't always pick the right ones, hahaha. It's actually quite beautiful. Come and take a look.

Super super pretty. I like it very much, come on, come on! The rest of the story is generally boring, as the male protagonist dies and is resurrected. There are too many plot lines involved.

Update quickly, author, please don't be ignorant and make me anxious. I will kneel down and beg you.

It's unexpectedly good-looking, although it's not too invincible, but the plot is there (it's just a bit straightforward), so it's pretty good anyway 🙂 There is one thing I want to say: "Author, where is the height? Where is the male protagonist?"

The master in the Mahayana period was defeated by the protagonist in the Qi refining period [smile]

Is that you the prison cat head? Open a trumpet account again?

It's quite sweet, but if I don't save my senior sister for a long time, it's a bit poisonous.

It's so good that it can't be described in words. What's more, I think the most important thing is that the author finished it. This is rare in Pomodoro, because the longer you write on Pomodoro, you won't push it. The data is not very good, and there are really very few people who can persist in finishing it.

The emotional scenes between the protagonist and the heroine are very good, and the sweetness is beyond the mark. In recent chapters, the master's capture has been very decisive and embarrassing.

Is it because the word count is short or something, but I don't think it has any serious points. The author also pays close attention to the opinions of the audience and interacts frequently in the comment area. Isn't this score a bit low [face covering] Also, why does the senior sister have to think of being touched when being arrested by a bunch of people? Have you watched too many movies or too many novels like this? That's all that's left in your mind, right? [What] The chapters in the middle where the protagonist is resurrected are a bit messy. I personally think it's because the author is not very experienced, but it's not a big problem. After reading this, I hope that there will be less friction between the protagonist and the beauties in establishing their relationship, or that it would be good to have more friction after the relationship is established (personal opinion)

I personally think it suits my taste. Don't pay too much attention to other people's suggestions. Write according to your own ideas. Only those who feel bad will give suggestions. Those who feel good will not say anything. First of all, the subject matter you write is to attract relevant and interested people. Don't change it easily.

When can I, Da Qin, return? It's really awkward to watch later, it's a lot of cuts and confusion, the heroines are too strong, and the protagonist is always caught in the middle and it's uncomfortable to watch.

If you want to see master versus apprentice, do it quickly, do it quickly

Dear author, we are very much looking forward to your latest work. If there are any new chapters or content updates, please share them with us as soon as possible. Your creation is our greatest expectation. [Sinister smile]

The male protagonist's love life is quite colorful [shy] I look forward to the master's expression when he knows that he is the third one, and there is also a plot where the master knows that the master has stolen his home.

The author's writing style is very good. The key is to listen to advice and interact with readers. Each heroine also has carefully selected beautiful pictures, which are very consistent with the heroine [love] [love] [love] [blowing kiss] [admiration] [admiration]

Can Lin Wanxi's mother be resurrected later? Author, that part is so uncomfortable that it's okay to reappear it as a soul.

Prison cat, I don't like it, you can't treat me like this [crying] [crying] [crying], more extras, I will squeeze you hard [angry], don't use too much, can you write a little bit about your daily life in the future, I beg you, I have never begged anyone in my life, for the sake of my power generation, please give me more [please update] [crying]

I just read Chapter 21. The writing is good and there are no bad points. If you find any bad points later, I will come back and deduct stars.

[Laughing and crying][laughing and crying], it's quite fresh, the system ran away

Hey? Master: Don't be shy! Protagonist: Why am I just shivering?

I support the author. I have just read Chapter 60 and I feel that it is generally quite good [thoughts] Give Master more plot, Old Cat, I will give you this novel to raise the banner [top post]

It's beautiful and interesting. It's different from traditional fantasy novels. This book is more of an emotional drama. For a change, it would be nice not to watch the fighting and killing. Compared with the traditional article about meeting one woman and accepting another, this novel fully describes the emotions between each woman and the male protagonist. It is the male protagonist who really put in a lot of effort to achieve harmony in the harem.

I have read thirty chapters, and the novel is an incomparably enjoyable novel, a little bit funny. You can read it with confidence for now [face covering] [OK] After reading 200 chapters, the author's emotional description of the heroine is very good. She has relationships with so many heroines. The heroine is so sensible and heart-warming. I felt guilty even if I put myself in. It's a good book.

It's plain and pretty.

Turns out he's a soft-boiler, hehe

Overall, it looks pretty good.