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There are so many reminders, why don't you comment? Haha) First the protagonist! God of Ending's online cosplay has a split personality that scares Qiye. One of the "two personalities" is funny and the other is dark-faced and gloomy but arrogant. Both characters are delicious! Here in the plot, the most important person in the fanfic is of course our General Zhao! In short, although General Zhao died, the protagonist left and gave his soul to Qiye! So it's pretty good! So far, I feel like it's a good write-up without any flaws! The update is so refreshing that you can get into the trap! Damn it, where's the book?

Hahahahahaha! I get it, I get it! This is the true road to becoming an immortal! The eternal Gu Spring Autumn Cicada, the God of Drama Theater, hahaha and the excitement of [Endless Life]! Immortality! Immortality! And magical powers! This is the real gathering of three flowers! ! ! That's the only way! Only then can we see the real Nantianmen and the real Bai Yujing! Chengxian knows that I have understood, and none of you can stop me! ! ! Hahahahahaha! I have become the Taoist Master, I have become the Taoist Master! ......... Hahahahahahaha, woo woo woo woo! Have I been cheated? Everyone is trying to trick me? I wasn't cheated on... I wasn't cheated on! No one can fool me! I have seen through Zuo Wangdao's lies! I have already seen through the big lie told by Tianlong! And you viewers, you monsters! Don't think that you can control me easily, let alone take advantage of me to take advantage of my immortality! No one can deceive me, no one can deceive me! Don't let anyone try to deceive me! ! ! ! ! ! Hahahahahahahahaha! Wuwuwuwuwuwu, what is true? What is fake! An... I can't tell... An! I can't tell the difference! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! !

This fanfic is very interesting. It perfectly combines "I Killed Gods in a Mental Hospital" and "The End of Ten Days" together, especially since the protagonist is a god at the beginning. Although there are few chapters, it is very interesting. The protagonist travels through the God-Slaying World and becomes Patient No. 7 Of Lin Qiye Gods Mental Hospital. Although there is no system, he has other plug-ins, such as the memories at the end of the tenth day.

It's really good to watch. Compared with Zhan Shen, this one has a bit of a regretful meaning. It integrates the ending and is not so sad. When I watched Zhan Shen, I was very enthusiastic but more helpless. Everyone has flesh and blood but they can't be retained. I just started watching Zhan Shen.

I finally found a Zhanshen fanfic that I like. The plot is not written in the style of a primary school student, and the speed of the plot is also very good. It has its own changes based on the original work. In one word: cool! ! ! (I am not a shill!!!!)

It's so beautiful, I can't stop looking at it. Although it is a fanfic, it is not as well written as the author of the original work, but I really recommend it to all friends who watch Toka and Zhanshen, highly recommend it! ! ! (´｡✪ω✪｡｀) Come on, work hard and update! ٩(๑^O^๑)۶ The author is good, let's not imitate others' 29, let's imitate 49 (^0^)/ (skin it, no malice)

The plot is okay, the events that I couldn't accept at the beginning are rounded out later, and the protagonist is quite funny and fun at times. But when I read the original novel, I personally didn't like the CP [grievance] of Lin Qiye and Jia Lan. I preferred their teammate friendship, so I quit when I saw that the original CP was still there. In fact, I was quite reluctant to part with it. After all, the plot was quite entertaining at times, but I couldn't help it. I really couldn't stand this couple, so I had no choice but to say goodbye to this book. Then I wish the book will get better and better and the readers will get more and more! [Sending Hearts]

So cool! Five chapters were published in one day. It was the first time I encountered such a hard-working author. The content is also very interesting. The protagonist is simply the trinity of theft, conspiracy, and joy, a god with strong human nature.

To be honest, the writing style is quite good. I could have given it 5 stars originally, but for Zhao Kongcheng... The original work gave me a feeling of passion + regret, but here it gave me a feeling of discomfort + chest tightness. As a derivative novel, from the moment "Su Yun" appears, the story line will definitely change, more or less. "Su Yun" doesn't need to think too much about plot issues, as long as the changes are not too big, and I believe that the author definitely has the writing style and strength to write the story of Zhao Kongcheng's survival well. This is my personal thought and I look forward to the author's subsequent stories [Love]

It's good-looking, and it blends well with the world of God-Slayer. The protagonist doesn't steal Qiye's spotlight, and Qiye also trusts her second brother. A group of people work hard to survive. It highlights the protagonist and also sets off Qiye. The group portrait is simply too vital. Perfect [adoration] [adoration] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [love] [love] [love] [seeking attention] [seeking attention] [seeking attention] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post]

It really feels like it. The author considered whether the protagonist might change the direction of the plot after time travel. What's more, the author is still a student, so I personally think it's very interesting. (The book review is not good, please feel free to complain)

I love reading it. Please update it soon. The protagonist has a distinct character, there is a main plot and foreshadowing, and the split personality point is also very interesting. Although I have a feeling that I can't tell the difference after reading it, it is this feeling, so the more I watch it, the more interesting it is. There are one or two small parts in the early stage where the image of the protagonist's first personality and second personality is a bit confusing, but small flaws are acceptable. The further it goes, the better it gets. The combination of Ten Days End and God-Zhancing is surprisingly good. Look, the last time I thought this kind of linkage was very good, it was the combination of dragons and warhammers. The setting of the protagonist also looks very cool, such as the God of the End. Although there are not many chapters, it can be seen from these chapters that the author has a relatively large structure for the origin of the protagonist. It is not the kind of deus ex machina in some novels. The protagonist is a god when he comes, and then slaps him in the face everywhere. It's great. I hope the author can continue writing. Come on.

It's so beautiful and very humorous [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] It's too short and not enough to read [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] [anger] (Give me 10 chapters a day!)

It's very interesting, but since it can't overlap too much with the original work, I might as well consider removing the emotional lines between Qiye and Qingyu. To be honest, I don't really like the emotional lines between the main characters in the original work, but Chubby is better [Chigua]

(Don't worry about reading time, I have the habit of skipping chapters) It's quite good. The protagonist becomes a god who has traveled through time and has the power of another world. I look forward to the author's subsequent creations. To give a brief introduction, the protagonist has dual personalities, the "eldest brother" and the protagonist himself. The protagonist's personality is a bit silly. Getting along with Lin Qiye is quite pleasant and he has a lot of fun. The "eldest brother" is more serious, similar to the feeling of an ancient emperor. The power possessed by the protagonist comes from another novel, "The End of Ten Days", too. A very good Infinite Flow novel, it can be said to be a masterpiece, ahem, this is precisely because the protagonist's power comes from another system, so people who have not read "The End of Ten Days" may be a little confused after reading it. Anyway, I read it quite well, and I always can't understand the role of abilities. Although the author has introduced it, I am still confused. To sum up, the novel is worth reading, but it is best to put it on the bookshelf for a while, otherwise it will be really short. I also look forward to the author's future creations.

The author is talented, knowledgeable, talented, and full of knowledge. His writing is so exquisite and wonderful [laughing evilly]! [Adoration]! (Let me say something dirty: wc, so awesome!) [Blow a kiss]

The early plot is more entertaining, the kind that just makes you happy After the battle between gods, the story of this book is sublimated through the description of the eldest brother. The dual personality that he pretended to be before, the so-called big brother personality actually exists, and as a time traveler, Su Yun knows the plots of Ten Days End and God Killing, so he should naturally become the one who breaks the situation with the determined ending. If it can come back, it means that the work is really quite good. I give it a five-star [sending heart]

It's quite good-looking, better than another Dragon Clan fanfic, God-Slaying (although I've read both). The narrative is more reasonable and smooth, the story progression is not too fast, and the writing is also very good. It would be nice to have more updates.

It looks good, I love watching it, please update more and let me show off more [face covering]

It is a very good book. The elements of Zhanshen and Toka are well integrated. What is the protagonist like? Is it true that the protagonist's own soul and the soul of the elder brother are merged together? I won't guess. I don't want to waste brain cells. People who are interested can go through the circle on their own. There are many masters there. Then I will talk about my personal suggestions. When you read this book, especially if you see that the protagonist may really be one and have two souls. When the individual soul of the protagonist and the soul of the elder brother exist, you can listen to "Two" While watching "Face", I personally think it is quite immersive.

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It's super, super good-looking, the characters are well-drawn, and the protagonist's acting skills are quite strong. The author loves you so much (*/∇＼*) Hurry up and update faster. Because I love you, I want to update you like a donkey in the production team, no, faster than a donkey in the production team ψ(｀∇´)ψ Great support from the author (ง•̀_•́)ง

It is worth reading. This is one of the best Zhanshen fanfics I have ever read. It combines Toka and Zhanshen. The writing is excellent and very easy to make people laugh. However, there are too few updates every day. You can keep it up [Note][OK][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] I very much hope that the author will not finish the work.

So far this book is very good. Although there are some poisonous points, they are innocuous. Moreover, the author of this book's imagination is still good and can connect Zhanshen and Toka. However, I personally prefer to connect Zhanshen and Drama God together. This is more to my taste.

It's very nice [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart], but why was it removed from the shelves? Can I add it back? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I just like watching this kind of light-hearted comedy, I hope there are no knives

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Great author, you are the best one among all the God-Slaying fanfics I have read. Please don't stop updating it, ah! ! ! ! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Admiration][Admiration][Laugh]

The writing is very good, and the protagonist can design his own background in this way. Originally, the second brother and the third brother participated in the game in the Land of Ending. Isn't the Land of Ending just for creating gods? Later, the second brother succeeded in winning but the third brother died. The eldest brother is more inclined to the divinity of the God of Ending, and the second brother is more inclined to the original one.

The author's writing is very interesting. This is not a brainless cool article. Big brother and second brother almost burned my CPU. I didn't expect to read a fanfic and I need to use my brain [face covering]. It's really interesting. The protagonist is a god of fun. [Like] In the end, the battle between Canglan God was endless, but it was too burning and then a separation. Ahhhh, it was really fun to read. The author, keep up the good work. It's really not easy to add so many chapters. [Sending my heart]