Xianzhou Cangcheng from the Return of the Traveling Star

Hunting, yellow skin, the god of revenge, right [laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Very good (Pinduoduo will write this if I write too many reviews [face covering]) The characters are well-shaped, the plot has ups and downs, and shows Xianzhou's shrewd and united spirit of moving forward. The only hope now is to have more. Totally not enough. [Angry][angry][angry]

This is my first time reading about Cangcheng. I hope to continue writing! [Adoration]

The plot research on Beng Tie is very complete, so there is no book-eating behavior. Although I can't understand the anthropomorphic description of the Star God (if I think about it), I can understand it if it is written like this for the sake of the continuity and entertainment of the plot, because the advantages of the plot written by the anthropomorphic description do outweigh the disadvantages. Although the description of the characters is a bit cliched, the stable description and reasonable motivation actually make this book stable, and there is no particularly poisonous/very difficult to understand plot. This is linked to the author's writing style. I praise this aspect. Regarding the distribution of the main plot and daily descriptions, I feel that the distribution is very good, because I basically read this book in two days, and I can feel that the author feels better about daily descriptions (personal feelings). Although there is no basis, I do have a better impression of the candy chapters. Of course, I did not say that the combat parts are bad. Maybe it is just because I don't understand the world view of Warhammer, so I can't get these plots. Summary: This is a very good Iron Fall fanfic. It is recommended for those who are familiar with the plot of Iron Fall. It would be better if it has elements such as Warhammer and Star Wars. Disadvantages: faster, not enough to watch gkdgkd

Five stars to start with, I have to say that this book is for the appetite. I particularly like Fairy Boat. The author also uses Warhammer technology to increase his strength, so it's not too good. In terms of writing, the author is mainly good at war. It may be a little lacking in daily life, but it is much better than the pile of articles on Tomato now. As for any blocking points, they may be a little minor, but there are no problems. The author also listens to readers and will correct them. It can be said that if there are any problems in this book, it can definitely be considered to be of relatively good quality.

It's great to read, please don't stop asking for more, why does the guy who got a thousand cuts have such a low score? Only 6.2?

When will you contact other fairy boats?

Please, let me read one more chapter, just one, I can do anything

Try not to sew too much. I ate too much and couldn't hold it down. Also, don't you think there's a problem with the technology tree? Where did the old antique machine gun come from to fight the mecha! Most of the Yunqi are destiny walkers. They can use their destiny abilities, but they vary in strength and weakness.

Ah, no, why was it suddenly taken off the shelves? I'm still hoarding books.

It's a really good book. This is the best Bengtie fanfic I have ever read. The main character is super awesome. There is no unnecessary description and the writing is superb. I want to bring peace of mind to the people around me. I will feel sorry for anyone who misses this book. I know it's super pretty. You will regret it if you miss it [Sending Hearts]

Good

The setting is very interesting, and I'm looking forward to the plot after returning to the Alliance. Unfortunately, I know the Warhammer-related jokes, and I can't understand some parts and can't get them.

Well written and to our liking [smile] The author won't see it

He looked getting redder and redder.

It's so flammable, I feel like my whole body is about to burn! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry][angry] The author's description of the battle is very detailed, come on. [Laugh]

As a 40k and Iron Breaker player, the writing is very good.

Xingtie big stage, you come if you are loyal, not loyal? Inquisition Interstellar sends loyalty! ! ! What a loyal five-star review.

Isn't it 6 o'clock?

When will you return to the league [eating melon]

The author's novel is good, but some of the Warhammer-related things in it are a bit inconsistent with the Warhammer setting, but it is also a good one among my current novels with Warhammer elements. Come on, author.

It smells like yellow leather.

I'm on fire, and the fairy boat is flying across the sea of ​​stars! ! ! It's very exciting. I really laughed when I saw Yelang. As a result, the next battle will be against the Fengrao people. It's ups and downs. It's exciting.

Say something about winning the Easter match

It looks good, but it was suddenly taken off the shelves. Very nice, clear thinking. Different from other types of books

It's a pity that it was removed from the shelves.

It's okay, but I want to see a situation where the First Legion has no secrets [grievance]

I probably won't be able to win the playoffs, so let's wait and see and cherish it.

If it looks good enough, the author will give me more updates [Blow a kiss]

Looking forward to returning to the main team✪ω✪