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The author writes well, but there are too many typos (revised very actively), too many descriptions, and too detailed (it always feels like writing an article to make up the word count [face covering]). After all, isn't reading BA articles just about posting posts and daily life? With the occasional knives, the author feels that he has put the cart before the horse, and everything else is fine (after all, I am embarrassed to say more about a 6,000-word page) What), secondly, didn't the author write an extra chapter? I feel that I can add the extra chapter to the main text in the future (the picture is fresh, and I always feel that the author has buried a hole), or make a sequel to the extra chapter, but I hope it will be divided into chapters (after all, 25,000 words per page is a bit too exaggerated, can't I make a few more to make money [laughing]) Anyway, keep it up [please update] [please update] Also, why is it that no one reads such a beautiful article?

Perfect fight scene! Smooth plot! In Tomato, it is even better than some fanfics with a score of 9.0 Or above. It is really high-quality. Apart from the slow pace, there are basically no problems. However, the update will not be available until the author finishes the exam, but this article is already very mature [laughter] There are too few people [crying] Why is no one reading this novel that has such high value?

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It's good to read. I finally read a BA novel that is separated from the main line. The previous BA novels have always been connected to the main line. It feels like the plot is the same and not interesting. This book is separated from the main line and is very well written.

When will the teacher show up? And who is this single heroine? 1V1 Lily? Overall, this fanfic is one of the highest quality I've ever read. The author's writing is also very good, not perfunctory, and the plot is good. It's worth recommending. It could just use less modifiers, which would make it more comfortable to read. Great support from the author, I hope you won't stop updating Also, is the author's update schedule stable and stable, once a day, or does he update an article every once in a while? And what is the mystery of the protagonist? And will it cooperate with black servers?

Hey, doctor. My first place was snatched away, and it's all your fault, author [crying]

The writing details and foreshadowing are very good. I haven't seen such a good second creation of Blue Files in a long time.

What kind of large amount of food is this? One chapter is 5,000 words. The writing is very good and of high quality.

It's very well written, why are there so few people?

Love it. Come on

Xingxi, I tasted it, it was very good [laughing evilly] [praise]

The daily life of the Countermeasures Committee in Abydos, the protagonist is also very strong

Awesome (enter at least five words)

Well written blue file

Since the protagonist is from SRT, even though he traveled through time, he also changed schools. But I still hope to see the srt school motto. [Laughing]

The previous description of the environment and appearance is a bit too much. But I feel very comfortable with the overall style

Don't stop, it's very beautiful [sending heart]

After watching too many harems, I feel like something is wrong when I watch homosexuals.

Yi Ling Umbrella Yi seems to be slipping away from the wine spirit period

When I read it, I felt like I was reading a well-written essay.

How does it feel that the author is writing [smile]

It's pretty good, the characters are well drawn, the personality is very interesting, the background is very attractive to me, and the writing is really good, better than many articles I've read. It's just that there are a lot of useless details and psychological descriptions in the front, which makes it difficult not to doubt that it's in the water, and it affects the viewing experience. Also... I've read Chapter 14 and I still haven't seen Ayane. What's going on? (If there is an explanation later, just pretend I didn't say it) The writing behind it is very good

It's really high quality

I like it, very cute protagonist

Good-looking, watch more, love to watch

There aren't many books this good anymore.

I don't know, it asked me to comment

It's okay, there aren't too many pain points.

It's a rare good book. It may be a bit long-winded in the early stages, but it starts to feel fun in the later stages and I can't find anything to complain about. Trust me, I don't push shit.

Your novel is well written, and you are a good citizen. 👍