At the Beginning, You Gain the Status of an Immortal. the More Mysterious You Are, the More Powerful You Are.

It feels like the protagonist is like a savior brought in from this world The description of this mysterious point is so interesting. If there is no need for mystery, then don't show yourself to others, and don't save so many people; If the killing point is set, the protagonist only needs to kill the demons. Whether or not people are related to the protagonist has nothing to do with it. In the end, all the people will be fed to the gods as rations to achieve the goal of being the strongest. Based on the above, the protagonist should be the savior, the last glimmer of light, brought in by the last effort of this world. The arrival of the protagonist is a self-rescue for the world

The plot is good and the writing is also very good. This is the treasure novel I discovered today😊 The protagonist is very invincible, with handsome appearance and immortal attributes. In the first few dozen chapters, there are only a few people who can take his casual blow. The most important thing is that the protagonist has been working hard to become stronger and has good intentions. Weirdness is rampant, ordinary people are consumables, and the appearance of the protagonist is like hope in this world like a monster farm. [Please update] Unexpectedly, he became an immortal and had a second attribute, but it turned out to be someone else's dream. When the dream is shattered, you will die. If you escape, you will start to develop from a paramecium... I really didn't expect this development.

Personally, I feel that it is not immortal enough. In this kind of desperate world, it is best for the protagonist to be more compassionate and save all the people from fire and water. It will feel more like a serious immortal.

He looks like an immortal but not an immortal, just a Taoist with powerful magic power.

There are reasons for the five-star rating. First, the writing style and magical powers are both exciting. Second, he feels a bit like Lan Ke Qiyuan, but it is more exciting than Lan Ke Qiyuan, and lacks a little fairy spirit. However, the latest 70 chapters are generally acceptable. It is a novel worth reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The writing is quite good, except for the middle part which is a bit inhumane, it is great, and it also abandons the time-traveled body and returns to the original body. I have read this, and most novels do not have this operation. Like it 👍🏻

Objectively speaking, the plot setting is okay, but the set mysterious value turns all the characters on the scene into tools to obtain the mysterious value. Is an immortal still an immortal without the immortality? I can still read it. The writing is smooth and not brainless. I'll give it an 8 points.

Although the ending of the Tianwu City chapter is a bit sloppy and the protagonist improves too quickly, it does not affect the fact that it is a very enjoyable invincible novel. Also, although the protagonist is a time traveler and has no sense of belonging to this world, he does regard human life as trivial. The psychological thoughts of the protagonist portrayed by the author are very different from the real "immortal".

It's okay, but it's hard to imagine that the protagonist has already fought gods and demons in his first small realm. These two things cannot be fought by human martial arts until the end, and they are of no use to people in the later stages. I wonder if the protagonist will study martial arts later? If I write a follow-up review, will my reading time be updated? Give it a try [Thinking]

I thought it was a heavenly fairy who would save the world, but it turned out to be a human fairy. I can only say that it was a little different from what I expected, but overall it was still very good, just a little short.

There is currently no female protagonist. The writing is very good and the logic is clear. It is very good.

An alternative weird and invincible novel should have a score of around 8, but 7.5 Is lower. Here are some summaries: 1. The protagonist's system is a system of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. 2.5 Enlightenment. 3. The protagonist is a little embarrassed when he is not forced to pretend. 4. The protagonist plays the human world but does not kill decisively. 5. Making so many dumplings is already the limit.

I have read 14 chapters. Overall, it is really good. It has some shortcomings and is acceptable. I hope that the author will not change and continue to maintain this style, so that it can become a good book. Give it a score of 8-8.5, But no, give it a full score so that more people can see it.

This subject is quite rare. You position the protagonist as a fairy, but it lacks a kind of divinity. It feels a bit awkward to read, but overall it is good.

There are still some thoughts on the part of the author. Many people say that this thing is not pleasant at all, but I think it's okay. You are already invincible after all. I think it's good to be involved in the stories of some minor characters. And I think the character of the protagonist is still okay, and everything he does has certain motivations and reasons.

Why is the rating so low? This is the best article I have read in the past year! I just like this kind of story where the protagonist is kind but not brainless.

It's so awesome. I haven't read such a good article in a long time. I'm really impressed by Tomato. I just ask you not to stop updating [Like] [OK]

Very good. The content is novel and not cliche. It is a rare tomato novel. Recommended by old bookworms.

I feel that the creativity is very good (≧∇≦*). The protagonist Xing Ye has fully demonstrated a person's selfish psychology. Up to now, he has an outsider's mentality. Come on! Let's take a look at the protagonist's subsequent experiences

Tian'an, Tian'an ~ Yi has fallen into the Nine Crows, and heaven and man are pure and peaceful (Li Bai in "Gu Lang Yue Xing"). The name has a noble meaning, and it also echoes the poems of the poets and immortals. It is really a good name with an air of immortality. The subject matter is novel. After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel very good about it. Five stars first.

I decided to watch it after reading a lot of good and bad reviews. It's still very good. Although I can't understand the ending, the beginning is quite interesting. It's a bit cool but not too exaggerated. It's a weird system-based fairy tale.

The plot is clear and the writing is good, surpassing 90% of novels.

It's awesome, it's so imaginative! You've never seen a setting like this before, it's so exciting. Worth reading

In fact, the concept is okay, but the novel is not that exciting to write. 😂I feel like the writing style limits the performance of the novel [laughing and crying].

Desire and karma in this world are so deep. If there is karma fire, a little karma fire can burn the entire world.

It's finished. It's rare to find such an interesting novel on Tomato. Although I have never written a book, I understand how difficult it is to write a book, even a logically self-consistent book. Thank you to the author for weaving such a fantastic world, it is very interesting.

Five-star good article, but the early stage is a bit long. It will be fun to read it if you get through the early stage. This is also the reason why some people have low ratings. But it will be fun to read the middle stage. The writing is good

Nice idea! I really like it. Keep up the good work, author! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

After looking at this protagonist, I think that after the protagonist becomes a real immortal, he can develop a system of cultivating immortals, and then get some auras to directly change the weird world into a world of cultivating immortals [laughter]

The writing is pretty good. Why is it only rated at seven or so? There's nothing too bad about it. I've read more than fifty chapters and it's too short. I'll save it for later. It's useless. I just think it's okay, but it's not particularly engaging, so I can save it.