Immortals Starting from Tianlong

Except like a little teddy, electric motor, I'm wrong

Five-star praise, if you can cheat anyone, you will be the best [Chigua][Chigua]

It's a great book. Not to mention, the fact that each heroine has her own role is worthy of five stars. Unlike other heavens with many heroines, they either die without taking them away or stay in a small world like pets. There are really too few like this who work together with those around them to become stronger.

Say you don't listen, listen but don't understand, understand but don't do it, do it but do it wrong, do it but don't admit it, admit it but don't change it, change it but don't accept it, and don't accept it but don't say anything, then what should I do? Difficult? Then don't do it (update soon)

Now I see Hui Tianlong, it's okay to be immortal and transfer to the heavens. This way, there will be no time to kill women and live forever alone. There is no problem for Tianlong to take in women. Even Zhong Ling and Duan Yu, I don't think there is anything. The beginning of the Tang Dynasty was pretty good. Being an emperor felt aggrieved. I didn't understand how I could be forced to take in people. I added mung beans to a pot of porridge and added something I didn't like. I asked if it was uncomfortable. Immortals have transferred to the heavens, and immortals and martial arts can communicate with each other. From the beginning of becoming an immortal, you need to know what it is and why it is, and get in touch with the principles of Dharma. In the end, I feel that the exercises are really useless, unless I want to follow other people's paths and encircle myself. In this situation where all the worlds are running around, comprehending the Dharma principles is just smooth sailing. Just be careful not to overturn and "pass away".

Well written. However, Mei Lan, Zhu Ju and A'Zhu are compared. It's better to ask A'Zhu. . .

I've been caught in the rain, I can't let you continue to hold an umbrella ☔ [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

How did it change from Zhu Xian to Immortal Sword?

This is good, but there are some other disadvantages, that is, you are immortal and the people around you cannot live forever. This is a big shortcoming. You have to do at least one thing? For example, if you take the essence of your immortality, you can only let your daughter live forever with you. As long as she eats your essence and lives forever, do you think it will be much better this way? It's great to be able to live together with Tang Seng, live forever together, and see the prosperous world. It's great to write about Tang Seng like this. Otherwise, it would be very difficult for you to be a lonely Tang Seng or let them practice martial arts to live in this world. It also depends on talent, and it also depends on talent. After all, Wang Yuyan, for example, may have such a talent. But I forgot what Kaneki did. Anyway, he didn't have any classes, so he couldn't have such a talent, so it's impossible to say that. Even if you have a few more female protagonists in the family, the talent may not be enough for them. Unless they practice since childhood, or you get some immortal fate or elixir, otherwise, you and the others will not be able to follow your footsteps, so this is a big shortcoming. The lifespan Tang Monk gave them does not match your lifespan, which is a big shortcoming, so we Can you find out a little bit more from the inside, such as the immortal, and give it to, for example, the kind that can lend life span? For example, the immortal has a long life, and you leave him a little bit of your essence. He can also live as long as you, but it can delay aging and extend the life. Open up the situation a bit. What do you say about this book? Still the shortcomings are a bit big. The shortcoming is that it is just that you live forever, but it is difficult for the people around you to live forever. If you can change this problem, this book will be very beautiful, I tell you. For example, if we cultivate immortality, we can waste time. It can take a long time, such as a hundred years, a hundred years, ten years, twenty years. Is it okay if this is a thousand years? If you keep grinding and grinding, won't you reach a high level? What to become an immortal? Don't say that Dacheng has entered. There is no problem with the late emperor's gold. But you have to be able to endure it. It is impossible to imagine that everyone around you will die and you will be the only one left, so this is not advisable. How is it different from those longevity novels? If we want to write a different longevity novel, we must stand out. The protagonist and his confidante heroines can live forever with him. We still can't get that kind of system of many children and many blessings. Without that kind of system, the alternative immortality created must be outstanding to attract many people to see it. If it is not outstanding, many people will write the same thing, and it will be really embarrassing to look at it.

It feels good, I stayed up late to read the latest chapter. At present, the plot is progressing relatively quickly, but I feel that it is not very useful to go to the world of Double Dragon. I can go directly to Xia Ke Xing in one step. After that, go to Fengyun. After that, I will go to Legend of Sword and Fairy, or Journey to the West and the list of gods, and go directly to beat Hongjun to death [laughter]

Everyone has their own preferences for cabbage and radish. Many people think that not accepting Zhong Ling is giving away a daughter. Maybe these people are loyal fans of Zhong Ling! After all, this is a comprehensive novel, and it would be good to include a few famous women in each world. If you like to collect everything, I suggest you read a book where the main character writes a diary, which contains everything. Whether they are wives or something else, as long as they are a little bit famous, they will be accepted. Originally, the author wrote four updates every day and it was quite appropriate. I think it should be given 5 stars. The 1 star is less because I took Azi and Li Qinglu with me when I went to Fengyun. In the early stage, when you are building up your strength, I feel you should bring along a more progressive woman. Also, everyone should be less aggressive. If you don't like it, you can leave. There is no need to give a negative review just because something doesn't match your preferences. After all, there are very few authors who update four times a day.

Well, great book! The protagonist is resolute and decisive, not sloppy at all, but a bit cold-blooded and indifferent to the heroine being caught.

A very good novel with rich imagination and reasonable settings. The more outstanding ones are Tianlong World, Journey to the West World, and Fengshen World. The prehistoric world even more clearly explains the relationships and conflicts between Hongjun, Sanqing, Nuwa and other mythological characters, which is very good. Personally, I think the shortcomings are mainly 1. The ending is not perfect, and there should be another 15 chapters to follow. Many wives have not yet attained enlightenment, the ancient world has not yet been dealt with, and the Gods of Journey to the West Hongjun and the Two Saints of the West have not yet robbed it. 2. There are too few descriptions of education, training, and dual cultivation, which are unattractive [laughing]. This book is a very good work written by Wu Zongxiu Xian, and it is worth recommending. Personal rating 9.5.

Based on this calculation of cultivating immortals, the author can connect all Jin Yong's works. After the end of The Deer and the Cauldron, you can change planes with your wife and children. After all, Tianlong, Shooting Condor, Divine Condor, Yitian, and The Deer Cauldron can all be connected together. After all, they are connected according to the timeline.

Bahuang Liuhe's Sovereign Kung Fu has already involved changes in the genes of the physical body. If the protagonist can deduce it to the point of becoming the ultimate creature, then this martial arts will be very awesome. Not only can it be reborn with blood, but it can also collect the genes of all living things on the earth, so that it can be ever-changing. One person is the gene pool of the earth! [Think]

The author has been working very hard to build his own system. It cannot be said to be perfect, but at least he has his own ideas. He does not stick to the rules and reads it according to the text! Keep up the good work!

Have you been attacked? I feel okay. I have no feelings for Mu Wanqing I only love my fairy sister

So far, there are no bad points, and the writing is quite good.

Not bad, but does the author not understand the difference between niece and granddaughter? Li Qiushui called Wang Yuyan his niece, so how should Wang Yuyan's uncle call her?

4 Points for the plot. The content is not particularly poisonous. The writing is okay, with some details and a sense of agility. Unlike some novels, the entire novel is about what the protagonist thinks, sees, and does. 1 Point for update speed

Multiple heroines, a lot. The main line of action after time travel is to change the world line, but the author's narrative ability is not enough, and it is quite boring to watch, not as good as daily life with the heroine. The training in martial arts in the early stage is quite satisfactory. Nothing particularly outstanding, I haven't seen it since. The author basically accepted all the heroines he wanted to accept in the comment section, but some were a bit difficult to accept. This is where a lot of two-star reviews come from. It's like a chocolate-flavored nine-turn colon. If it's not confiscated, you won't want to read it. [Laughs] After I closed it, it was another description.

The book is okay overall, but the author may have made a mistake. Qin Hongmian and Ruan Xingzhu are senior sisters, right? They live in Xiaojing Lake. Qin Hongmian is the mother of senior sister A'Zhu, and Ruan Xingzhu is Mu Wanqing's mother.

There aren't many people writing about Infinite World right now, because the setting can easily conflict, and each world basically selects a group of readers, so fewer and fewer people will read it later. The author's ability to write about martial arts, animation, Marvel, and Xianxia is quite impressive.

I'll give it a five-point rating. Every story is remarkable, but I feel that sometimes too much is given to the female characters. Just know the outcome. As a book reader, I just skip the chapters when I hear the description of the daughter. This does not affect my listening. The story of Fengshen is quite well written. I prefer this kind of Fengshen.

The third chapter is a bit poisonous, and the fourth chapter is poisonous.

I can't be poisoned by myself. I can't walk when I'm a dog licker and I can't walk when I see a woman. I survived Chapter 4, but I didn't expect to die from the poison in Chapter 63.

You can see that the 5 pictures are all innate Shennong Holy Body

Generally speaking, it is okay, but the title of Immortal is not suitable. After reading the title, I found that it was almost useless to practice dance and gradually became stronger. After watching Tianlong, I found that Tianlong ended in less than 100 palms without much change in the plot. It is a casual exercise for girls. After watching Jin Yong's martial arts series, I found that Tianlong jumped to the world and went to the dungeon. Maybe fewer people will watch it because of this

The author's writing style and cultural background are very strong. The only thing that is not perfect is that the prehistoric chapter is a bit watery, and the ending seems a bit hasty, but it is reasonable, and overall it is a good work. So let's give it five stars.

The plot is not bad, at least you can reach the pinnacle of power in a world quickly without being frustrated. However, it is a bit undecisive to accept girls. Either keep rejecting or be more decisive, but you can accept this.