Transmigrated into a Novel and Married the Good-for-Nothing Third Male Lead

After reading more than 50 chapters, I can't stand it anymore, so let's write a book review. Personally, I think the author's writing style is quite good, but there are still many problems with the plot. (I want to give the author some subjective suggestions based on my feelings, not to troll anyone) The author's advantage is that he writes very well and sweetly about the daily life and love interactions between the protagonists, and the emotions are relatively delicate and will not make people feel that love is abrupt. But it's clear that the author is not good at handling conflicts, especially big conflicts. Wei Zelin didn't care about Shi Yuan in the early stage. As a selfish person, I can understand that he used and hurt Shi Yuan. However, the problem is that these conflicts that almost threatened my life were easily forgiven and resolved by Shi Yuan on the grounds of his "love brain". This feeling of picking it up high and putting it down gently made me feel uncomfortable until chapter 50. You must know that Lin not only almost killed Shi Yuan, but also almost killed Xiao Rong. Shi Yuan was able to forgive him right away. It gave me an OOC feeling. I had the feeling right now that it was not that Shi Yuan wanted to forgive but that the author wanted to forgive. If you really don't want the protagonist to have misunderstandings or quarrels, it is recommended not to create such a big conflict. Having said so much, I still have a good impression of the author. I think this article is really well written. The interactions between Shi Helin and Shi Helin are always very sweet and very enjoyable. (I can't stand it, but I'm tired of reading too much in one day. Maybe I'll come back and finish it in a few days.) I give it 4 points. I hope the author can continue to work hard~ PS: There were no misunderstandings or quarrels throughout the whole process. If you like this cookie, don't worry~

The dog-blood is good-looking and a bit of a no-brainer, but he keeps helping the original protagonist because he actually wants to change his own destiny, so some people think he is more like a holy mother. Finally, please don't leave comments because what some people say really affects reading. I am a person who has fought against drugs [send heartfelt] [send heartfelt]

I first read another book written by the author (it is still being serialized and very interesting. I saw the last chapter and ran out of books to read). Then I came to read this one. Before reading it, I read the comment section before reading it. When I saw it, I felt that the emotional line was a little bit off. But this is the author's first book and it is very good. There are many merits in the book. The original book is quite special. The emotional scenes in the second book were handled better, and the progress was huge 😘. The plot arrangement of this book is quite reasonable, the introduction/connection is also very good, and the author is quite talented. I hope you will write more articles, I really like reading them.

I've only read Chapter 19 and can't help but comment. Well written, there is a vicious spider (attack) that is building its web little by little and eating its prey little by little. It is an innocent and upward sheep (sufferer). His casual yet strategizing attitude and his calm eyes hinted that he was determined to win. Weaving a web little by little will destroy each other or save us from breaking out of cocoons and becoming butterflies. I love writing like this. I hope I can write emotional scenes more slowly in the future, there is no need to be sweet so fast. Sheep (Shou) appears to be weak but has strong mobility. He also has upright views and grew up in a normal and friendly family. Anticipating the prey behind him, he becomes a hunter and shoots at Gong, hitting him right in the heart. Gong thought that this relationship was a failure and that he had to kneel down and surrender. Unexpectedly, it was a brand new beginning in his life. Try to see whether it is the hunter or the prey that is tied up in the net in the end. Or should we say that in the face of love, there is no predatory relationship at all, only mutual protection. ❤️❤️ The rest will be okay, sweet text. ❤️

Great author! I came here from Wanwan, and I came here for the writing style and wonderful plot. Although there are a lot of bookworms in this book, I think it is because it is over and there is no way to catch the bugs. The flaws are not concealed. Brother Lin's character is super emotional, highly sensitive and good at observation. The most important thing is that he is a love brain. Everything comes first with Yuanyuan's feelings. Yuanyuan is sincere, warm, tolerant and kind. The two really complement each other. Da Da, I don't worry about you being proud by giving five stars, because from this book to Wan Wan, I can see that I have really made great progress. I hope Da Da can create more excellent works. It is really not easy to meet an author you like. There are only two works in the works column and it is not enough to read. I won't say anything else. Thank you! Come on!

Um. Good-looking and sweet. As I get older, I like to eat sweet food. At first, what Wei Zelin did was a bit off-putting to the readers, but it was okay. He said it was a "little lesson" for his wife, but everything was under his control and controllable. Gong's character was originally a cold-hearted person. From the beginning, he was an avenger who had no emotions. He needed to grow up slowly emotionally, but it didn't take long because our excellent little Taiyang Yuanyuan was so well-behaved and so rare 😳

It's not a cool novel in the traditional sense. I personally think that the characters of the male protagonists are quite realistic. Gong is very scheming because of his childhood upbringing. It's not surprising that Shou was included in the plot early in the story. Shou's experience and performance before he traveled through time can also be seen as ordinary people. He didn't become something cool just because of a time travel. The male protagonist of the article has an over-the-top IQ and explosive force. From a God's perspective, readers may think that the attack in this book is not very good after reading too many articles about the difference between attack and shou from beginning to end. They even used shou in the early stage. However, I personally think this is logical and humane. In short, it is not bad and it is very realistic.

Generally speaking, it's not bad. In the early stage, Gong was a bit vicious, but in the later stage, he was very fond of Shou. Shou is a little bit more love-minded. I originally thought there would be a crematorium for chasing wives, but in the end, Shou ended up with Gong in such a smooth way? This makes me a little frustrated. There are fragments of the original work in the early stage, which are really well written. I love reading them. The author's writing style is very good 😘. However, there are a few holes left unfilled in the later stage, such as You Gui and Lu Bu Zao. Why did You Gui panic and ask Shi Yuan to pick him up from get off work? In fact, I hope that You can be beautiful alone and enjoy his own life, rather than having to balance it. I really like You Gui, and what happened to Shen Feng in the end. It seems that the second male lead in the original novel has not appeared in the scene, but was only mentioned a little bit. I thought he would appear in the later stage. In short, I feel that there are a lot of things that are not fully written. Maybe it is too short. The author is too impatient, I hope he can make a supplement 😫 I want to see Baby Yougui, and the happy life behind Shi Yuan and Wei Zelin, but the ending is a bit rushed [Sending my heart] The life of the protagonist in the later period is really sweet, and the author's emotional description is very delicate. I really can't bear to leave this story 😢 Author, you must write a supplement!!!

This book was randomly pushed to me after I finished listening to it. I haven't read it yet after hearing the introduction of Wei Zexuan's release from prison. The more I listened, the more I reflected on myself. The author writes so well. I really like Shi Yuan. He is kind and not stupid. He is diligent and progressive, youthful and energetic, and works hard for the future and survival. Acting, studying, researching, and working part-time. The more I read this novel, the more I reflect on myself. I lie down and read the novel every day. I am a dead house who is not motivated or working hard and is confused about the future but does not take action. I feel the motivation, the hope, the vitality, and I decide not to degenerate or consume myself!! Do your best tomorrow!! 😂 For Wei Zelin, his love is really loving, a long-lasting love, which can be felt in breakfast and care every day. Maybe everyone thinks that he took advantage of Shou in the early stage, but in the early stage, he only had a good impression of Shou. In order to get revenge, he has endured decades of humiliation and burden. It is impossible to give up after having a good impression of someone. That is really ridiculous. Later, he regretted and risked the consequences of being exposed and wanted to save Shou. Fortunately, he was saved by Director Ren, and he realized that Shou is the most important thing. He treats Shou very well, respects Shou, and loves her for a long time. He does not reveal the bottom of her porridge, rice, and room. He is not like those crazy male protagonists who are always jealous and force love. Yuanyuan has his own job, friends, and circle. When he comes home, he loves her. He really loves love, such a sweet love, it is real love. The author writes so well. If I read it in a hurry like I usually do, I might not realize it, but I listen to the book, and while listening, I feel Yuanyuan's energy and Zelin's love! I couldn't help but comment because I was afraid of forgetting, hahaha

I saw that the author's new book was very good, so I picked it up and read the previous one. The character introduction in the first chapter can actually be broken into several short paragraphs. It is good to use the expression method of the original novel at the end of the article. If it is displayed together, everyone will not be able to see the relationship between the characters, and it will cause confusion. The protagonist is subject to these two learning experiences. I don't know if the author is trying to create a more academic image of him, but overall it does not play any role. The connections and celebrities he knows are only briefly introduced, and they do not play a particularly important role in the follow-up. Generally speaking, the article simply revolves around the relationship between the two of them. The characterization is not particularly clear. Except for the two protagonists, only You Gei in the original book is more vivid, and the other characters are relatively flat. But the author's new book is very good and has made great progress. Anyone who is interested can check it out!