After Passing Through the Book, She Married a Good-For-Nothing Man

After reading more than 50 chapters, I can't stand it anymore, so let's write a book review. Personally, I think the author's writing style is quite good, but there are still many problems with the plot. (I want to give the author some subjective suggestions based on my feelings, not to troll anyone) The author's advantage is that he writes very well and sweetly about the daily life and love interactions between the protagonists, and the emotions are relatively delicate and will not make people feel that love is abrupt. But it's clear that the author is not good at handling conflicts, especially big conflicts. Wei Zelin didn't care about Shi Yuan in the early stage. As a selfish person, I can understand that he used and hurt Shi Yuan. However, the problem is that these conflicts that almost threatened my life were easily forgiven and resolved by Shi Yuan on the grounds of his "love brain". This feeling of picking it up high and putting it down gently made me feel uncomfortable until chapter 50. You must know that Lin not only almost killed Shi Yuan, but also almost killed Xiao Rong. Shi Yuan was able to forgive him right away. It gave me an OOC feeling. I had the feeling right now that it was not that Shi Yuan wanted to forgive but that the author wanted to forgive. If you really don't want the protagonist to have misunderstandings or quarrels, it is recommended not to create such a big conflict. Having said so much, I still have a good impression of the author. I think this article is really well written. The interactions between Shi Helin and Shi Helin are always very sweet and very enjoyable. (I can't stand it, but I'm tired of reading too much in one day. Maybe I'll come back and finish it in a few days.) I give it 4 points. I hope the author can continue to work hard~ PS: There were no misunderstandings or quarrels throughout the whole process. If you like this cookie, don't worry~

The dog-blood is good-looking and a bit of a no-brainer, but he keeps helping the original protagonist because he actually wants to change his own destiny, so some people think he is more like a holy mother. Finally, please don't leave comments because what some people say really affects reading. I am a person who has fought against drugs [send heartfelt] [send heartfelt]

I first read another book written by the author (it is still being serialized and very interesting. I saw the last chapter and ran out of books to read). Then I came to read this one. Before reading it, I read the comment section before reading it. When I saw it, I felt that the emotional line was a little bit off. But this is the author's first book and it is very good. There are many merits in the book. The original book is quite special. The emotional scenes in the second book were handled better, and the progress was huge [blowing kiss]. The plot arrangement of this book is quite reasonable, the introduction/connection is also very good, and the author is quite talented. I hope you will write more articles, I really like reading them.

I've only read Chapter 19 and can't help but comment. Well written, there is a vicious spider (attack) that is building its web little by little and eating its prey little by little. It is an innocent and upward sheep (sufferer). His casual yet strategizing attitude and his calm eyes hinted that he was determined to win. Weaving a web little by little will destroy each other or save us from breaking out of cocoons and becoming butterflies. I love writing like this. I hope I can write emotional scenes more slowly in the future, there is no need to be sweet so fast. Sheep (Shou) appears to be weak but has strong mobility. He also has upright views and grew up in a normal and friendly family. Anticipating the prey behind him, he becomes a hunter and shoots at Gong, hitting him right in the heart. Gong thought that this relationship was a failure and that he had to kneel down and surrender. Unexpectedly, it was a brand new beginning in his life. Try to see whether it is the hunter or the prey that is tied up in the net in the end. Or should we say that in the face of love, there is no predatory relationship at all, only mutual protection. [Love][love] The rest will be okay, sweet text. [Love]

Great author! I came here from Wanwan, and I came here for the writing style and wonderful plot. Although there are a lot of bookworms in this book, I think it is because it is over and there is no way to catch the bugs. The flaws are not concealed. Brother Lin's character is super emotional, highly sensitive and good at observation. The most important thing is that he is a love brain. Everything comes first with Yuanyuan's feelings. Yuanyuan is sincere, warm, tolerant and kind. The two really complement each other. Da Da, I don't worry about you being proud by giving five stars, because from this book to Wan Wan, I can see that I have really made great progress. I hope Da Da can create more excellent works. It is really not easy to meet an author you like. There are only two works in the works column and it is not enough to read. I won't say anything else. Thank you! Come on!

Um. Good-looking and sweet. As I get older, I like to eat sweet food. At first, what Wei Zelin did was a bit off-putting to the readers, but it was okay. He said it was a "little lesson" for his wife, but everything was under his control and controllable. Gong's character was originally a cold-hearted person. From the beginning, he was an avenger who had no emotions. He needed to grow up slowly emotionally, but it didn't take long because our excellent little Taiyang Yuanyuan was so well-behaved and so rare [shy]

It's not a cool novel in the traditional sense. I personally think that the characters of the male protagonists are quite realistic. Gong is very scheming because of his childhood upbringing. It's not surprising that Shou was included in the plot early in the story. Shou's experience and performance before he traveled through time can also be seen as ordinary people. He didn't become something cool just because of a time travel. The male protagonist of the article has an over-the-top IQ and explosive force. From a God's perspective, readers may think that the attack in this book is not very good after reading too many articles about the difference between attack and shou from beginning to end. They even used shou in the early stage. However, I personally think this is logical and humane. In short, it is not bad and it is very realistic.

Generally speaking, it's not bad. In the early stage, Gong was a bit vicious, but in the later stage, he was very fond of Shou. Shou is a little bit more love-minded. I originally thought there would be a crematorium for chasing wives, but in the end, Shou ended up with Gong in such a smooth way? This makes me a little frustrated. There are fragments of the original work in the early stage, which are really well written. I love reading them. The author's writing style is very good [Blowing Kiss]. However, there are a few holes left unfilled in the later stage, such as You Gui and Lu Bu Zao. Why did You Gui panic and ask Shi Yuan to pick him up from get off work? In fact, I hope that You can be beautiful alone and enjoy his own life, rather than having to balance it. I really like You Gui, and what happened to Shen Feng in the end. It seems that the second male lead in the original novel has not appeared in the scene, but was only mentioned a little bit. I thought he would appear in the later stage. In short, I feel that there are a lot of things that are not fully written. Maybe it is too short. The author is too impatient, I hope he can make a supplement [crazy] I want to see Baby Yougui, and the happy life behind Shi Yuan and Wei Zelin, but the ending is a bit rushed [Sending my heart] The life of the protagonist in the later period is really sweet, and the author's emotional description is very delicate. I really can't bear to leave this story [crying] Author, you must write a supplement! ! !

This book was randomly pushed to me after I finished listening to it. I haven't read it yet after hearing the introduction of Wei Zexuan's release from prison. The more I listened, the more I reflected on myself. The author writes so well. I really like Shi Yuan. He is kind and not stupid. He is diligent and progressive, youthful and energetic, and works hard for the future and survival. Acting, studying, researching, and working part-time. The more I read this novel, the more I reflect on myself. I lie down and read the novel every day. I am a dead house who is not motivated or working hard and is confused about the future but does not take action. I feel the motivation, the hope, the vitality, and I decide not to degenerate or consume myself! ! Do your best tomorrow! ! [Laughing and crying] For Wei Zelin, his love is really loving, a long-lasting love, which can be felt in breakfast and care every day. Maybe everyone thinks that he took advantage of Shou in the early stage, but in the early stage, he only had a good impression of Shou. In order to get revenge, he has endured decades of humiliation and burden. It is impossible to give up after having a good impression of someone. That is really ridiculous. Later, he regretted and risked the consequences of being exposed and wanted to save Shou. Fortunately, he was saved by Director Ren, and he realized that Shou is the most important thing. He treats Shou very well, respects Shou, and loves her for a long time. He does not reveal the bottom of her porridge, rice, and room. He is not like those crazy male protagonists who are always jealous and force love. Yuanyuan has his own job, friends, and circle. When he comes home, he loves her. He really loves love, such a sweet love, it is real love. The author writes so well. If I read it in a hurry like I usually do, I might not realize it, but I listen to the book, and while listening, I feel Yuanyuan's energy and Zelin's love! I couldn't help but comment because I was afraid of forgetting, hahaha

I saw that the author's new book was very good, so I picked it up and read the previous one. The character introduction in the first chapter can actually be broken into several short paragraphs. It is good to use the expression method of the original novel at the end of the article. If it is displayed together, everyone will not be able to see the relationship between the characters, and it will cause confusion. The protagonist is subject to these two learning experiences. I don't know if the author is trying to create a more academic image of him, but overall it does not play any role. The connections and celebrities he knows are only briefly introduced, and they do not play a particularly important role in the follow-up. Generally speaking, the article simply revolves around the relationship between the two of them. The characterization is not particularly clear. Except for the two protagonists, only You Gei in the original book is more vivid, and the other characters are relatively flat. But the author's new book is very good and has made great progress. Anyone who is interested can check it out!

I think the author's writing is very good and the plot is actually very logical. But, except that some words will be more or less. So it will cause some confusion for everyone. It may be about the dialect of the author's own hometown, but it is indeed very well written. The protagonist Gong and the protagonist Shou like each other because they have been in love for a long time, take care of each other, and trust each other. These are the reasons for falling in love with each other. I think it is very good. I particularly like this author. The plot including the supporting characters is also very interesting. The emotional issues are also written very seriously. The main part is particularly touching. The supporting character Shou does not necessarily have to like the supporting character Gong, although they are in the book. They are decent characters, but they are people with their own emotions, and everyone's choices are based on their own reasons. They have all learned to love themselves first, and then love others. They are born for themselves. The author writes it very well. I like it very much. The author must work hard, and don't give the author bad reviews. The author also works hard. It's not easy. The book is free and there is no charge. It's not easy to earn some royalties. Anyway, I really like this book. Come on, author. Good work! I hope you can bring us more and better works, and your writing is also very good!

This book is really well written. Hmm, I haven't finished it yet, so let's review it first. I will put this book at the top of my list of books on scheming. Hahahahaha, it's so funny. The author's writing is very delicate, and this book is quite special. Many small details are very delicate and unique, and the ideas are also very special. There is also a narration in the book "Thorn". It is not easy to write well, in Tomato, and it is very delicate, but I feel that the story is too short. I feel that it could be very long, but everyone seems to like it to be short and concise. I didn't watch much of it after that, I just watched it vaguely, and I was still thinking, well, how will the second male lead be tortured by evil people? Hehehe, because I prefer to watch group portraits, and then I also want to watch Rose's emotional scenes hahaha.

It's very good to watch. I felt a little disappointed when I finished it and wanted to watch the extras. After thinking about it, I felt that the ending was just right. The only shortcoming is that it is short, but the advantage is that the characters are well-developed. The author's second book is also very good, but it's a pity that it's not finished yet. It's also a sweet little novel that makes people feel warm after reading it. However, it also has a high IQ, but it makes me think that I am not smart enough. All in all, I would like to thank you for letting us read it. Thank you for allowing me to read such a beautiful little sweet article. I am very happy.

There are many more interesting things about this novel than other novels I usually read. The plot is also recommended. I finished it some time ago. Today I read other books and found that the author of this novel is also recommended. Anyway, it is very interesting [shy][shy][shy]

The text of this book is very smooth overall, and the early character descriptions are also more delicate. The conflict between the novel and reality is well described, and the character's personality is quite distinct. The character image of the protagonist Shou is also in line with the personality before the time travel. However, in the later period, the description of the protagonist Shou becomes more and more feminine, which is a bit lowered. But overall it's a good meal.

The author writes very well. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid. It is rich in emotion and real. Please keep updating. I will always support it [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates]

So far so good, big cheers to the author! I like the characters very much. This is the first time I see the protagonist in a novel seriously preparing for the teaching qualification exam [face covering].

It's very interesting, but the sub-CP has no ending. It may be a good ending. It's good not to have so many unpleasant things. At the same time, I wish Yuanyuan and Linlin more and more happiness in the different world [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

It's quite good. I still like this novel better. Some people may think the above description is not masculine, but people are also multi-faceted. Anyway, this book is really not that good, and occasionally it is a little imperfect, but I can accept it. It's just that there are too many comments in this section. I also like to read comments, and I feel uncomfortable reading them.

The plot of the whole book is compact, and the plot part of the original text goes by relatively quickly, and the life part of the protagonists at the end accounts for the majority. Their lives are written in a way that is not unbearable. It can be regarded as one link after another, allowing the attacker and the receiver to understand each other better. (It just feels like it's all about who gets into trouble [face covering] to advance the plot). It's a bit like a cool novel, because all the problems will be solved, but the plot is not just for the sake of being happy. After suffering through it, everyone gradually broke away from the track of the original plot and had their own lives. Everyone lived according to their own ideas and lived their own way. Later, after the plot of the original book was over, they were no longer affected by the plot. There is no forced heart-throb plot (this is my favorite part). Afterwards, I feel a bit like being favored by the group. It is mainly because of the kindness of the protagonist that attracts others to get close to him rather than having feelings for him. The protagonist, Gong Shou, has very good feelings and has a mouth. The protagonist Shou is sometimes a little dull but not stupid or holy (just sometimes his reactions are a bit silly and a bit sudden and uncharacteristic). (He, but it's still okay), the protagonist is scheming and scheming, not a good person, nor is it necessary to be with him from the beginning. Both of them have their own plans, not just influenced by hormones (but I don't quite understand the progress of their relationship, that is, why do they suddenly have deep feelings for each other [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]). Attacking and receiving will not give up their own principles for anyone i. Even though both Shou and Gong have their own strengths, I feel like Shou has always been like an ordinary person (it's quite real, there aren't a lot of hangups, it's very close to Shou's personality before he came over. I feel like Shou's biggest hangup is Gong [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]), and he relies a little on Gong. But he is indeed capable; when it comes to attacking, he is a bit crazy (I like it) (but both of them are relatively law-abiding, except for some things that are not the same as reality [face covering], such as holding guns), both of them can give each other a sense of security. Hmm... In other aspects, the logic in some places is a bit strange and unreasonable, and it is still a bit different from the real world (such as holding guns, mercenaries, etc.). However, overall, I quite like this book, because the two protagonists have relatively positive views, the plot is not the same, and the author's writing style is also good. Recommend!

The book written by the author is really beautiful! Love it! ! Highly recommended! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

This book is almost interesting in terms of emotional lines and character arcs, but it seems to be the author's first one. I read the other one first, and that one was very well written, so I have high expectations for this one, but maybe it's because of the first book, there are still some imperfections. In short, this is a sweet article. It is very sweet, but it is not a refreshing article. It cannot be read as a refreshing article. By the way, don't read the comment section! Don't read the paragraph review! Don't read the paragraph review! Because it's not a very enjoyable article. There are a lot of depressing words in the paragraphs that can easily affect reading.

It's very good-looking, but it ends so quickly. I didn't watch enough. It was a little depressing in the early stage, but after Brother Lin was tempted, it was sweet. I didn't understand Fan You's last operation, and I didn't write the ending. I don't know if the author forgot or I didn't see it. The protagonists Shou and Gong in the original world should have been completely separated. Shou felt like he was with Mu Mu, right?

It's okay, but compared to the other book, there is a gap in length and detail. The writing is good, and the logic is fluent. However, the character design may not be in line with the public's preferences. I can clearly understand the Madonna with a love brain (the real Madonna, the kind who only embarrasses myself), and the real villain with a love brain. The portrayal is relatively good, and the supporting characters are not perfect (almost all of them are villains). If you don't mind, you can give it a try.

It's not bad. I read it with great enthusiasm at the beginning, but in the last dozen or so chapters, I gradually lost interest in reading it. I finished the book by listening to the book later. In the later stage, it was relatively warm, as the two of them were in love with each other, there was no misunderstanding, and they expressed their affection straightforwardly.

It's good to watch ^ω^, the overall direction feels more warm and daily, and a little funny. The content in the front part is quite novel, and the back part is so cute [adoration][adoration][adoration]. The writing style is also quite good, it's worth reading.

Very beautiful! The logic of the whole book is very reasonable. The characters written by the author are flesh and blood and have their own thoughts. The author is great! I will follow you forever. I have read both books you wrote. The author is faster and faster. I love you like a mouse loves rice~~

Oh my God, it's so sweet💥I really like it so much👵🏻After seeing it, it's a very smooth and smooth daily life. It's so easy to eat and watch while eating. [Blow a kiss] [Shy] I really like Yuanyuan and Wei Zelin. It's better for the couple to be together peacefully than anything else [Love]

It's so awesome, the hero's husband is the perfect partner, full of security. I recommend it as a real sweet pet. After a few chapters, everything is sweet. A few chapters ago, there was no emotion for the time being, just because, it's a very ordinary expression.

It's super interesting, but it's a bit short. I haven't seen enough yet. I still want to see Yu Gui truly redeemed and have friends, a lover, and a home of her own. And the protagonist returns to the original world, beats the scum in the face, and takes back everything that belongs to him.