Transmigrate Into a Book: Raising a Dark Empress from the Start

The plot, character descriptions and settings are all good, but there is not a single female lead in the 110,000-word eunuch protagonist.

Writing is not easy. I originally thought I could see a story where the male protagonist is responsible with his mind and the female protagonist is responsible for her strength. I watched the sinister male protagonist bring out the darkened empress step by step and enjoy her life behind the scenes. But in the end, it still fell into the cliche. The man became super strong and then started to lead the heroine to fly. The future empress is just a follower...

The writing is very good, but don't be like another book I read. That book is now discontinued. Well... How should I put it? It was very good at the beginning, but then the battle power collapsed directly, and the plot became inexplicable. If you say it's about adding emotional scenes to the protagonist, then the description is similar to fighting. If you say it's about fighting, then there are a lot of emotional scenes. What he was given was some inexplicable and inexplicable things that had nothing to do with the protagonist and would not be beneficial even if he did them. I am really looking forward to the future of this book and hope it will be a big hit🔥

I feel pretty good. I hope the author can write more delicately about emotions and add some psychological descriptions of the heroine to increase the rationality of emotional development. The subject matter is very good. If it can be written well, the rating should be good.

Little Heizi, are you leaking chicken feet? You are so shameful to my brother.

Come on, it's not bad

I'd rather see it

It's pretty good. Although the general template has some shadows from many novels, it can basically clarify the ideas. Because of the right hand, the occasional favorability seems to be passable.

Does it look good? Love it. Love it.

Not bad, good potential