What Should I Do If the System Turns into White Noise After Time Travel?

The writing skills are profound, and the plot is also very novel. I feel that the author is an old author. No matter what the description is, it is very accurate. However, I always feel that too many emotional scenes slow down the progress of the plot. Moreover, the protagonist's way of not only responding but not wanting to live up to others makes him feel like a scumbag. It is better to have an avatar and leave the real person to accompany Hong'er forever. Five stars are considered an encouragement to the author. I gave the praise early. I thought I would be able to make a decision about the relationship between the two of them as soon as the first volume was over. But in the end, they were still entangled, and I even gave the peach branch to my junior sister. I thought I could just avoid it? This will only make people sick. What the saint said at the beginning is so right. Not only can you not save Nan Hongzhi, but you can't even firm up your feelings for her. I also thought about marrying Hong'er through an incarnation. The main body insists on resurrecting Nan Hongzhi. Now I think the protagonist wants her to die completely. Junior brothers and sisters are trying to hurt you, so you run away to stay with your little lover. I even think I can write another book "Rebirth of Nan Hongzhi, Killing the Hypocritical Scumbag". I am Nan Hongji. In my previous life, I died for a scumbag who pretended to save me. After my death, my residual soul was attached to the peach branch. Originally, I was lucky to be with my lover, but I didn't expect that the scumbag turned around and fell in love with another woman. They even fell in love with me in front of my peach branch, and finally gave my peach branch to my junior sister in order to avoid my influence. However, my junior brothers and sisters who have deep affection for me always think about the scumbag. Are the previous oaths of each other fake? Is it possible that even the small wish of taking a peach branch to the endless sea can't be realized? ! I collapsed, but in my despair, the power of the damaged spiritual weapon brought me back to death. In this life, I must take back everything I have and kill that hypocritical scumbag!

A first-class book with good writing style. I was put off by the title. I was attracted after reading one or two chapters. It is a very novel subject matter and the characters are well created. It's hard to calm down, so let's just think that I want it again and again, and I'm complaining about Nan Hongzhi. She died because of the protagonist, and she was a childhood sweetheart. Logically speaking, it is not an exaggeration for the protagonist to die because of this. Someone died because of you! The protagonist is not aboriginal. Since the author has previously set up the character of an "ordinary time traveler" for the protagonist, why is this so unusual? How long did it take for Southern Red Branch to die? Do you really not have nightmares when you are with Hong'er? Do you really not miss your old friend? For the first few years after I broke up with my first love, I thought I would never fall in love again in this life. Good guy, you have laid so much groundwork before you, so you just let go of Nan, right? I didn't like Hong'er's setting from the beginning. The male protagonist was too indecisive in his relationship. I couldn't stand him as a hypocritical turtle🐢. He Hong'er kept cutting, and the reasoning was still chaotic. I really enjoyed scolding Fenghuang'er for that part, and scolded her hard, but the main character was as if he was dead, and his reaction was brushed off. Too poisonous, this is not what ordinary people think. The protagonist is not ruthless enough to be an immortal, nor does he meet the standard of ordinary people's love. It's too fragmented in character. Alas, in fact, the writing quality is still good, but I can't help it, I can't convince myself, and the male protagonist's behavior really makes me uncomfortable. It was really sad to see him smiling on Yuping Mountain. I felt bad for Hongzhi, so embarrassing. I ran away and said goodbye.

The character creation is very good, and the supporting characters are very well-developed. After searching for so many books, I finally found this one that suits my preferences. Damn it, I misread it, everyone was avoiding lightning, it smelled like a literary youth, I was confused when I read it, the characters in the book were all very pretentious in their speech, it felt like The Riddler, and the role of the protagonist plummeted towards the end, and there was no interaction between the male and female protagonists.

It's super good-looking. It doesn't feel like a tomato anymore. It has a clear context and even involves a little bit of philosophical speculation. The world view here is complete and completely self-explanatory. The plot also shows that cultivating immortals is not about killing and killing, but about the understanding of human nature.

Read a few chapters. It feels like a typical waste book, but the storyline attracted me. I feel that this book is quite good and the characters are well portrayed. The protagonist's IQ is online, and the author's writing style is good. I hope he can maintain this writing state. It's a good book and worth appreciating.

The writing style is serious and true, but the plot has an indescribable feeling of unsatisfaction. The writing/playing method does not reach the level of five stars in my mind (very beautiful). However, in terms of the use of imagination and traditional elements, the narrative method, the integration of different elements, and the serious attitude during creation, this book is worthy of a five-star rating on this platform.

No matter what, this must be an excellent story. More than 1,000 chapters have not been watered down at all, and the overall context is clear. The author said that there are three kinds of suffering in the world: good people become possessed by demons, saints are selfish, and Nanzhou cultivates Taoism. Reading it chapter by chapter, it was indeed too painful. From the beginning to the end, it was narrated slowly, and I got to know each of the characters, including Tang Zhen, Yao Hong'er, and Yao Anrao from the beginning. Then we met Jiang Yu, Li Yi, Wu Manmanman, Xiao Tongtong, Wei Tianqi, Yao Wangshu, Yao Anshu, and Lu Zangfeng. From the younger generation to the saints and demons. From Beiyang City to Yuping Mountain to Nanzhou and then to the endless sea of ​​Zhongzhou. From a city lord's mansion to the fourteen places behind. It is worth reading this.

It's good to read. There was a comment in Duan's review before that said, "Life often hates water flowing eastward." It's a clever description when you think about it carefully. How can I say this article? After reading it, I will feel a little silly and have a sense of distortion. The writing style seems to have been written by Jiangnan. I can't stand this type of writing after the Chinese New Year. If you like this style, you can give it a try.

I think the author's writing style is really good, so good that it is a rare and rare writing style. At least I haven't seen such high-level writing style in Tomato (Xianxia Wen) recently. The author's ideas are also relatively new. Mainly because I've watched the protagonist's growth path a lot, and I haven't seen much about the protagonist's journey through the world after he was abolished from the beginning. But, but, although the emotional entanglement is very classic, and it would be very real if written based on the author's own experience, it is really sad to watch. How to say it? If Hong'er is not called Hong'er, just call her Qing'er, Lu'er, Lan'er and Zi'er. Even if she looks like a fairy or ordinary, maybe I will think that the author still hasn't escaped the traditional writing method and always loves to add fragrance to the male protagonist's red sleeves, but it won't be such a heartache. But her name is Hong'er, and the green plum is called Nan Hongzhi. I don't know if you have seen stolen pens. In the sea of ​​​​sand, between Li Cu and Zhang Qiling, Li Cu has never been one of the options, or this may be a bit absolute, but if most people have to choose, they will choose Zhang Qiling without hesitation. I think the same is true for Hong'er and Nan Hongzhi. The author has created a perfect Nan Hongzhi, who is gentle and sensible, has good talents, good looks, and is good at everything. She has a deep relationship with the protagonist's childhood sweetheart. We see the world from the perspective of the protagonist, so we should have the same emotion as the protagonist. So I can't accept that after Nan Hongzhi died, the male protagonist drags his feelings for her to deal with Hong'er. If time can erase all pain, but how long did he leave? The world of immortality has passed by in a blink of an eye for a hundred years, and he hasn't even had 10 years. I can't accept that his emotional sustenance is so fast. The author describes the emotional entanglement of the three people very well. It is so good that Wennan Hongzhi never said a word or had any scene. Just a piece of dead wood could make me complain about the injustice for her. Especially when the fourth junior sister appeared, that part of the language was portrayed. Her original path was forced to watch him having sex with other women. Even though the male protagonist didn't take the initiative, he didn't refuse, right? Maybe I haven't experienced enough and haven't experienced the entanglement between Bai Yueguang and Cinnabar Moles. I just think that the author's emotional line between the male protagonist and Hong'er is both a highlight and a failure. I personally think Hong'er is a love brain, and neither Tang Zhen nor Tang Gouan is worthy of her (only in terms of pure feelings). I also feel that the protagonist is very unbearable and does not take the initiative or refuse. The Tang Zhen I felt from the article should not be like this. Admittedly, I have to sigh again that the author's writing style is really good. Even though there is such a big point that I can't accept, I still couldn't help but read almost 100 chapters. But I really can't understand why the protagonist's emotional line must be such a entanglement? Why do two very good girls have to hang out with the protagonist? Why do we have to describe such emotional experiences to set off the protagonist's growth through experience? Just like why the little dragon girl in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" had to experience being bullied by Yin Zhiping. I haven't understood it since I was a child. This may be art, but I really don't have such a vision. Maybe life can't always be perfect, maybe this kind of novel is trying to describe the changes in the world, or maybe it's the law that things should develop. But to put it bluntly, I read this novel and it made me scheming. I was saying hello to the Lord of Hell in advance. I feel like it doesn't deserve five stars, so I'd better change it to four stars. The protagonist really wants both.

After watching it, I think it's good. It's more suitable for book-loving friends to watch.

Clumsy in structure and skilled in writing. The most delicate fairy tale novels have no ancient passion or mortal calculations, only a touch of sadness, like the unforgettable red high-heeled shoes left on the shoe rack after losing her.

Beyond the framework of online novels seeking immortality, this work has touched on the theme of discussing human affairs in serious literature. No matter how much I say, it is like a human-machine commentary. I only hope to make it more popular.

It's pretty good, not a cool article. There is a system but it is blocked, and it is a bit abusive. The author wants to write about a person who can cheat, but is suddenly hit by the truth, and then starts a growth experience of the protagonist on his own.

It's great. Not to mention the writing style, the plot arrangement alone is quite wonderful. Most novice writers like to abuse the author's power. The characters they write are not "people" with their own lives. But it is just a "character", or "tool", which is the projection of the author's delusion. I like the harem, so I wrote it like this; I like counterattack, so I wrote it like this. Has anyone actually considered the role? One thing has always been emphasized in script editing: the author should be the teller of the story, not the creator. In other words, the author only needs to describe a wonderful story, instead of being the God in the story. God can fabricate a person who does not exist at all out of thin air, so he is dispensable to the character. What would the story be like if this person who should not exist at all is the real protagonist? The meta elements of this book are very exciting. In fact, when I was writing the book, I also considered trying a similar theme. It's a bit difficult to control. After all, novels are different from games. Games can use pictures to highlight tension and explain relationships that do not need words to describe. Sometimes appreciating meta is like looking at a flower in the mist. It does not look like a flower from a distance, but is looming up close. As long as the flower does not speak, no one will know that it is a flower demon. The cleverness of this book lies in the fact that the author has some ingenious little designs at the beginning. He tells a story in a high-dimensional tone in the writing and in what the author has to say. The author of this book is also a vest created by the author to serve the meta. The interesting point is here. Most of the conventional meta elements are low-dimensional but high-dimensional, such as Monika, Miyuki, Ashe, Evil Inscription, Stars and the recently popular Meta. The meta element of this book is that the author takes the initiative to reveal his identity - "a novice writer who has changed his style" - the high dimension takes the initiative to get close to the low dimension. Yes, the plots in the play are all designed by me. Tang Zhen, you can't fight fate, what skills do you practice, who do you fall in love with, and other people Whatever happens to you is "my" choice, not yours. The one who really helps you is me who is acting as the narrator, the narrator of this story. Of course, I am also "me", just like the doppelganger of the seven prison boxes. I am both the author of the bad jokes and the reader who empathizes with the character. Who am I? An excellent book must have a natural stance and central idea that the author wants to express. I am looking forward to what the author will express after he writes himself into the meta. The above is my guess. I don't know if my guess is correct. I'm sorry if I over-interpreted it. All in all, I support the author. This is the first great work I have read on Tomato.

The writing is good and well written. The reason for giving 4 stars is that I am currently too ambiguous with Hong'er and I don't want to see Nan Hongzhi being greened. If Hong'er takes over, it would really be too much. The current plot always feels like the wife is currently guilty. I will change the score after watching the plot development.

It's a very interesting story, with pretty good group portraits, but it's not an excellent and enjoyable article, with few exciting points and a very slow pace. This suggestion will make you feel more comfortable after reading this book. There are many ways to write group portraits. The author's writing style places emphasis on the protagonist and focuses on the group of characters. The protagonist's role is too small in the novel. Sometimes it feels like Xiaohong is the protagonist. If the group portrait is too long, it can really shape the image of each character, but if the protagonist has no sense of presence, it will make people look scattered. Personally, I prefer to advance the plot with the protagonist as the main line, and write the images of the group portraits in the process. The author's writing skills are online. I feel that the author is relaxed and freehand when writing. I guess that the author wrote this book mainly out of interest and because he wanted to tell a good story. The articles written with this kind of mentality are generally excellent and not utilitarian, so they are good stories. Writing that is just a matter of excitement can easily end up unfinished. I hope that this book will become popular and give the author some other motivation to continue to finish the good book. The author still loves to moan without any illness, and is very literary. This kind of writing style is very good, but it is very wordy and the main line is unclear. The protagonist is still a coward after all this time. His reputation sounds great on the outside, but in fact, the protagonist can do nothing but run away when something happens. The author used too many external rumors to raise readers' expectations for the protagonist, but the protagonist's actual performance was disappointing. Aside from the main character, this is a good novel

The female videos wearing Xiu Xian articles reminded me of the days when I watched Zhu Xian. The emotion made me feel sick to my stomach. If you can't hold it any longer, readers who can accept this, or are accustomed to the description of female videos, can just close their eyes and read it.

Occasional Book Review Issue 16: Fairy Grass Evaluation: There is no doubt that the fairy grass in tomatoes, the author's writing style is pretty good. This book made me feel very comfortable reading it, and it belongs to the novel of cultivating immortality and conspiracy. The look and feel is very strong, which shows that the author has put a lot of effort into it. At the end of each chapter, the author has something to say and comments, so don't miss it. Needless to say, this kind of protagonist has to start all over again after losing all his cultivation due to something, and there are various plans and battles of wits in the middle. It is easy to get fairy grass. The third gentleman who walked out of the restricted area in another book also belongs to the same type. It's very enjoyable to read. This book belongs to the level of seedling fairy grass and is worth reading. If the follow-up is not good, you can leave a message and I will come back to re-read and correct the review. Dear readers, please supervise. Come on, author, you write well!

A very amazing novel. Before I clicked on it and when I read the first three chapters, I almost thought it was another routine novel, but the plot development was completely different from what I imagined. When I read the introduction, I thought it was a revenge story. When I read the first chapter, I thought his junior brothers and sisters were going to ridicule him. When I read the first three chapters, I thought it was a good-for-nothing rise story. The results were beyond my expectations every time. The writing style is amazing, and the protagonist's mentality is also very comfortable. The girls in it don't all revolve around the protagonist, and the protagonist is not the kind of scumbag who doesn't refuse anyone who comes. It's hard to say the specific content, but just look! Don't worry about the rating, if this book doesn't collapse in the future, it will be stable at above 9 points!

There is a feeling of reading novels written by women. It has two main characteristics. One is that it is illogical, and the other is that it is literary and youthful, especially in the middle period. The advantage is that the writing is delicate and the supporting characters are well done. When I read around Chapter 390, I could tell that it was written in a female channel, and it felt like it was too much and not enough. If you have read both male and female novels, it is recommended to read them. Otherwise, be cautious. After reading this, it will be like eating vermicelli with one end in your stomach and the other in the bowl.

Not much to say, it looks good, I love watching it, keep watching it It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

It's a rare piece of writing that might have a down-to-earth feel. Nowadays, many articles are in a hurry, one hot spot follows another, or they try their best to be funny and ugly, just like shouting "I'm funny, I'm happy" on the street. It's better to write better stories with peace of mind. This article is a gold dig in history.

The pursuit of the protagonist's innocence can be polished. This is a real group portrait, and it is relatively slow-burning. I don't think it should be viewed as a traditional online novel, at least in terms of writing style, it is not a traditional online novel, and the "supporting characters" are really well-shaped. But the emotional line may be more controversial, as gods and ghosts sometimes exist. But for me, it's still acceptable to see such flaws in group images of this quality👌🏻 Looking forward to the completion of the world view and the unfolding after the chaos in Kyushu (In addition, be sure to read what the author has to say. Basically, he will add some worldview or character creation. This kind of storyteller has no taste😋)

It's a type I've never seen before. The writing is very good and there are few flaws. I can't stand it anymore. If it keeps happening again, it's not suitable for me.

I saw Chapter 63 and finally understood why there were not many people. The male protagonist is too emotional, to the point where sensibility is far greater than rationality. The description of emotions in the indecisive plot is too real. It corresponds to the reality of most people and it is easy to understand the male protagonist. Of course, I am not saying that it is messy if it is not cleaned up. It is the kind of feeling that most people will not accept. This plot is a bit uncomfortable. And after seeing this, I don't doubt the author's writing style, and it will definitely pave the way for a good result. To be honest, I felt very sad when I saw this. Personally, I feel that as long as it is a problem, it should be solved quickly, but I am not the male protagonist. I have not experienced his things, and I don't have a sentimental character. The author writes the male protagonist very well and is completely a living person. Great support, author [salute] This is just a part of the exclamation, should it look good or not [eating melon]

It's wonderful. This book should be rated nine points or higher. It's a pity that the pearl is covered in dust and the rating is stuck at the beginning of eight characters. The story structure is complete, the characters are delicately drawn, and every foreshadowing is tied up just right. The author said at the end of the chapter that it is even more novel and unique, with endless ingenuity. It is obviously a rare masterpiece, but it failed to get a score that matches its strength. I sincerely recommend it to all book friends.

I was attracted by the first few chapters. The first 5 chapters have the flavor of a masterpiece on the Internet, like Beyond Time, No Money to Cultivation, etc. It will definitely attract many people. The setting and plot are also excellent. But after reading more than a dozen pictures, I realized that the plot between the two women was difficult to handle. In fact, this novel is mostly enjoyable, but the difficulty lies in the emotional disputes. How to deal with Hong'er and Yao Arao is very difficult. The author knows what this is about and what he is writing about (emotional disputes). Compared with novels written by men, it is difficult to deal with emotions, so 90% of the novels are single and formulaic, because the modern world view does not match the world of the novel. The author insists on this, and it can be said that this is a rare emotional drama. How does Tang Zhen, who depicts the beauty of human life, deal with Hong'er's feelings? The author's failure to make the novel formulaic is the poisonous point of the novel. Relatively speaking, this could have easily become a masterpiece, but the author has his own Tang Zhen in his heart, which makes people feel a little emotional. Overall, this is not a novel that is consistently enjoyable throughout, but it is also worth seeing how the complex emotional relationships of the characters in this novel are handled (maybe the author is practicing how to write emotional scenes, or maybe he is taking it too seriously). The non-joyful part in the introduction refers to the unhappy emotional scenes, but the other plots are still quite enjoyable. I originally commented early because the novel had a 9.1 Rating, and I felt it shouldn't have declined. But after one volume, it was changed to a group portrait. Rather than a group portrait, it is more appropriately called a female video. This is not to say that the male and female videos are very divided and combined, but the writing power is not strong enough, and the poisonous points are still very big. The subjective evaluation is that the flaws are not concealed. Why is it said that the writing power is not enough? Many emotions are inappropriately carried out, not that it is impossible but that it is very abrupt (just like Ergen's "I Want to Seal the Sky" showed insufficient writing power when confirming the heroine, and "Sequence Zero" Shan Qingyi was abrupt when it first came out) As many reviewers said, it is most likely that the author disguised herself as a man and came to Tomato to practice writing. The later chapters are female channels and group portraits, which makes sense why the previous chapters were written in this way. Insufficient writing power and failure to repair poisonous spots will also slowly affect it. I hope that the author's writing will get better and better. Of course, people who like it will think that the flaws are not covered up and ignore the bad points. The benevolent sees the benevolence and the wise see the wisdom.

Madam, madam, madam, great looking! ! ! ! The plot is very deep, the characters are very detailed, and the world view is very grand. Highly recommended! (Ps. The system won the Easter match🤓) I stayed up until 4 o'clock, but it's 8 o'clock tomorrow morning [almost crying][crying][crying][crying]

This book must be read in one sitting. You can't dwell on it, you have to follow his plot completely. Once there is a break, even if I watch it again one day, I feel like a child trying to show off. This book should be very lethal to certain groups and is more suitable for junior high school students to read. Or during the chuunibyou period.

It's very amazing. I didn't read it several times because of the name, but after reading it, I found it absolutely wonderful. The dragon stranded on the beach and finally entered the sea, still in the wind and cloud. The plot echoes back and forth, the content is complete, and there are always twists and turns that bring about the story. Very much looking forward to further developments.