Urban Cultivation: as Soon as He Returned, He Broke into the Bedroom of the School Beauty

I used to watch Urban Cultivation because it was novel, but now... 1. The logic of the text is not good. The key to cultivating immortals is good talent (that is, a good brain), otherwise you will not be able to cultivate. The basic background of cultivating immortals is the same as talent and spiritual roots. If a person can return to the earth from the world of cultivating immortals, even if he does not bring strength, then his spiritual consciousness will be extra strong, and he will be able to master a few things, because it is his own, and it is like a university... To be honest, it can be done in one day by self-study. It is too simple for a monk... 2. If the one who comes back with strength is the Nascent Soul, then he will not encounter the so-called pretending to be slapped in the face. Not to mention that those who can cultivate as immortals are the darlings of Heaven, and they will have some instinct to drive away good luck and avoid disaster. As long as it is not too excessive, Heaven will basically ignore it. Because I am a Nascent Soul and if something disgusting happens to me, my consciousness will be destroyed... 3 For a monk, it is impossible not to think about a breakthrough after getting a taste of strength (this is my personal opinion. Some people may think that the strength is enough, and it is possible to unify by themselves, but I feel that even after a long time after the unification, they will get tired and afraid of death, thinking about practicing and immortality). They will definitely think about becoming stronger and breaking through the world wall. The obstacles are gone, and there is a universe supporting a cultivator. It is very satisfying for me. When the time comes, Heavenly Dao will also help you. As long as you break through Heavenly Dao, you will also get some benefits (I am not sure about the benefits here, but most immortality novels have this setting. As long as someone breaks through, the world will rise a little, which is equivalent to mutual help between cultivators and Heavenly Dao).

Yes, although there are many old clichés and plots, it is much better than other stories of cultivating immortals to the Nascent Soul, refining the void, and returning the Immortal Emperor to the earth. At least the protagonist is not stupid [laughing and crying]. Saving people in the Nascent Soul stage does not mean slowly taking a car to the place and then saving them [face covering]

I have always liked the type of urban immortality. Although some of the plots are clichéd and common, urban immortality can only be written this way, and the author also used some jokes. Overall, there is nothing too uncomfortable. It is that some plot situations are critical and the protagonist appears too late, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to watch🤤

It's a good novel, and I personally think it's quite enjoyable. The protagonist does not kill mindlessly, but has emotional changes. And he didn't hide it from his parents, and even helped them cultivate immortality together. Also, you can hurry up and accept the heroine. You can have a single heroine or multiple heroines. If you like it, it looks good. Work harder to update, author, come on!

Yes, it's okay to go to college, but you have to be somewhat famous and don't cause trouble just by being an individual.

This novel may be blamed on the fact that the author is a newcomer. Some of the descriptions are not very good, and there are some poisonous points, but it is acceptable. The plot is quite coherent and not brainless. Many of the plots even look good. Compared with other novels of the same type, the protagonist is decisive in killing. He will kill the whole family at a single move without moving. It's already good for new authors.

How to say, in the early stage it is invincible, and the main plot temporarily revolves around the protagonist's recovery of spiritual consciousness. This is a long story. He has not yet broken through to become a god. The map is still traditional, and there should be many places. The world of earthly immortal cultivation is called Yujie. At present, Jin Danhe has appeared, and the protagonist Yuanying is in the late stage. In another hundred or two hundred chapters, there will probably be a lot of Yuanying. Personally, I feel the same as the one I watched a long time ago, "The Master of the School Beauty's Personal Friend". You only flirted with it but didn't eat it. [Shocked]. It took more than 500 chapters to only eat one. As for other decisive killings, it should be the normal operation of the protagonist.

The plot is okay, I hope I won't write it slowly without interruption, and I don't want to fool around with it.

I've read two hundred chapters, and it's not bad. There's no plot to pretend to be a slap in the face, and the realms are also divided in a traditional way.

Well written and very logical!

Overall, there are no big problems, and the writing is quite fluent, but the number of words is a little short.

It's good-looking, not too poisonous, and your brain won't be poisoned to the point where it suddenly goes online. You can read it in Shuhuang

Now that I'm a Nascent Soul, I still need to go to college.

Cool article, looks good so far

Yes, please work hard to update! Come on, keep at it, don't finish it so quickly, it's still around 1,500 anyway, come on, the author is great

Can Qin Ziyao be given more scenes? Hope it's accepted

Not bad, a little different from others

Update as hard as you can, it's really beautiful and worth reading, the content is not verbose

I don't know why the rating is so low. I think it is a top-notch work in the urban immortality category. It comes with its own cultivation at the beginning, and you don't have to pretend if you have brains. The warriors are not all mentally retarded. The plot is also quite good.

It looks good but the data is a bit poor and the author doesn't update it frequently. .

Not bad, [like] I think

Too many, I'm afraid the author will make you proud

Beautiful, novel story

Mandarin Rain? . My child

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking and not aggrieved

Very good, you can take a look

I can't be the only one who has eaten it

It's okay. It's said to be a new author and the writing is pretty good.

It's okay. It's pretty.